Hello, returning m4m.
sorry for my shitty English ;-;
[General]
* wrong bg pls fix thx* Adding custom combo color would be nice
* use this
http://puu.sh/tsDMo/bc35216328.jpg as bg? rearranged to 1366*768
[Extra]
* maybe custom diff name?
* 00:22:967 - since this is a strong sound, how about ending spinner earlier ( 00:22:134 - or 00:22:800 - ) and putting a note here?
maybe sth like this?
http://puu.sh/tsBmh/627578d9bc.jpg* 00:25:800 (1) - 00:31:134 (1) - unnecessary NC
* 00:41:300 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
imo this kind of stream should change their flow/spacing at strong & noticable beat so that it's easily guessable when the note is placed at.
but you're doing it at 00:41:634 (1) - weak beat but keeping them at strong beats 00:41:466 (6) - 00:41:800 (3) -
(my suggestion) first, NC 00:41:466 (6) - 00:41:800 (3) - these then remove NC at 00:41:634 (1) -
then change the stream's direction/spacing at strong beats 00:41:467 - 00:41:800 - 00:42:134 -
maybe sth like this :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gIQYRNWDlew&feature=youtu.bethe main point is to curve at 00:41:467 - and 00:41:800 -
* 02:23:967 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 04:49:300 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ same as above
* 00:42:134 (7) - maybe NC?
* 01:04:300 (3) - this is placed on a weak beat but having large spacing compared to 01:04:467 (4) - , while 01:04:467 (4) - is placed on a strong beat but having small spacing, therefore feels a bit awkward to play.
also 01:03:967 (2) - because of this slider, the strong beat at 01:04:134 - here is not clickable.
so how about having a circle 01:03:967 - here and slider 01:04:134 - here to make the strong beat clickable 01:04:134 -
http://puu.sh/tsCl7/27cddae8b9.jpgand stacking the circle on the slider?
http://puu.sh/tsCnA/d7f581c6ae.jpg* 01:09:300 (1,1) - unnecessary NC imo
* 01:13:300 (1,1) - 02:51:967 (1,1) - 02:55:967 (1,1) - ^
* 01:21:967 (1) - since there are 3 strong beats at 01:21:967 - 01:22:050 - 01:22:134 - , this 1/8 buzz slider doesn't represent this sound very well imo.
so how about this
http://puu.sh/tsCCM/f14405bd1d.jpgor this?
http://puu.sh/tsCEf/aa8d43feff.jpgor maybe even triple should work well also
http://puu.sh/tsCFB/6c84049f1d.jpg* 01:37:300 (2) - 01:37:634 (3) - ctrl+g or ctrl+j? since you have opposite going flow slider at 01:34:634 (2,3) -
maybe sth like this
http://puu.sh/tsCOM/5a4ce89806.jpg* 01:44:467 (1,1,1,1,1) - why nc spam here? imo they're unnecessary since there is no difference of rhythm with other streams.
* 03:27:134 (1,1,1,1,1) - 04:09:883 (1,1,1,1) - ^
* 02:13:800 (1) - remove NC?
* 04:33:800 (1) - 04:39:134 (1) - ^
* 03:16:634 (7) - just my suggestion, how about ctrl+h,g then moving like this?
http://puu.sh/tsDdB/38c37e771f.jpgcuz 03:16:467 (6,7,1) - this flow is kinda uncomfortable to hit cuz of its wide angle especially right after back & forth flow 03:16:300 (5,6,7) - .
* 03:55:467 (2,3,1) - could be confusing, imo moving 03:54:134 (1,2,3) - or 03:56:467 (1) - would be better.
http://puu.sh/tsDrv/d13495d441.jpg* 04:35:134 (4) - imo making this into 2 circles would fit better with the melody.
That's all. sorry for very subjective mods, I hope this could help you much.
Very nice map, Good luck!