Numbers 596108 wrote:

Notes :

00:05:723 (5) - Fixed~
01:22:544 (397) -

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 6 -> OK
Circle Size - 5 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max[/color]
Overall Difficulty - 4 -> OK


Background -

Remove the Video in your difficulty?

Total Result
Song favorite degree : 8 / 10
Note Pattern : 68 / 70
Other wrong : 9 / 10
Timing wrong : 10 / 10

Score : 95 / 100

1. A spinner at the end of the song would fit this song perfectly. The spinner should start here: //01:26:187// and end here: //01:29:401// (Place a "whistle" at the end of the spinner)
2. I'd say Tick Rate: 2. It fits this song imo.
3. [Normal] doesn't seems easy enough to be the easier diff in this mapset IMO. Due to the slider speed and constant use of 1/2 I'd say that an easier diff is needed.
4. The jump between [Normal] and [Hard] is a bit wide, not too bad tho. Take this as a suggestion to improve the spread of the map: You should map a diff between [Normal] and [Hard] (Something of 3.8~4 stars) then re-name [Hard] to [Insane].
5. Remove the Lead In, it's not necessary. (This includes [Taiko])

1. HP Drain Rate needs to be decreased 1 or 2 ticks. (I would reduce OD 1 tick too)
2. 00:10:972 (2,3,4) - If you wish to keep this diff as the easier on in the mapset, I think you'll need to re-arrange this pattern. It seems too hard in compare with all the other patterns here. Here's a suggestion of something more acceptable.
3. 00:39:901 (3) - This repeating slider might be a bit confusing for rookies imo. A simple slider would be way better.
4. 00:55:115 (1,2,3) - Are the whistles on the slider bodies of (1) and (3) intentional? It doesn't good imo.

1. Not too sure about the first Kiai, I would remove it and let the last kiai.
2. HP Drain -1 ? (Not sure if it's necessary to reduce OD 1 tick too)
3. Perhaps a custom BG here? (Catch me in IRC if you need help with this)

1. All those 1/4 & jumps this looks more like an "easy" [Insane] imo. (If you decide to not map the other diff, leave this as [Hard].
2. 00:16:330 (3) - I strongly suggest to unstack this. I keep missing it because that stack is following another rhythm while (3) is following the vocals so nobody would expect a third circle in that stack.
3. 00:28:973 (5) - I would place this somewhere else, it's a bit hard to see atm. (Hitbursts are covering it)
4. 00:41:401 (7) - Expected a NC here + a Jump like the previous patterns
5. 00:52:330 (3) - Is jump is a bit excessive and it makes the next spacing a bit confusing, use a NC here to avoid this problem. (same here: 01:06:044 (2) - )
6. 01:01:115 (8,9,10,11) - This stream is getting covered by the previous hitbursts, move this some grids up please. Perhaps, something like this

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. A spinner at the end of the song would fit this song perfectly. The spinner should start here: //01:26:187// and end here: //01:29:401// (Place a "whistle" at the end of the spinner) OK fixed
2. I'd say Tick Rate: 2. It fits this song imo. Tick rate: 2
3. [Normal] doesn't seems easy enough to be the easier diff in this mapset IMO. Due to the slider speed and constant use of 1/2 I'd say that an easier diff is needed. [Normal]diffs pattern changed ;_;
4. The jump between [Normal] and [Hard] is a bit wide, not too bad tho. Take this as a suggestion to improve the spread of the map: You should map a diff between [Normal] and [Hard] (Something of 3.8~4 stars) then re-name [Hard] to [Insane]. OK. re-name [Hard] to [Insane], and I get a guest making [Hard](3.8~4stars)
5. Remove the Lead In, it's not necessary. (This includes [Taiko]) Fixed

[Normal]

1. HP Drain Rate needs to be decreased 1 or 2 ticks. (I would reduce OD 1 tick too) HP-1,OD-1
2. 00:10:972 (2,3,4) - If you wish to keep this diff as the easier on in the mapset, I think you'll need to re-arrange this pattern. It seems too hard in compare with all the other patterns here. Here's a suggestion of something more acceptable. fixed
3. 00:39:901 (3) - This repeating slider might be a bit confusing for rookies imo. A simple slider would be way better. fixed
4. 00:55:115 (1,2,3) - Are the whistles on the slider bodies of (1) and (3) intentional? It doesn't good imo. fixed

[Kana's Taiko Oni]

1. Not too sure about the first Kiai, I would remove it and let the last kiai. first kiai deleted
2. HP Drain -1 ? (Not sure if it's necessary to reduce OD 1 tick too) HP-1
3. Perhaps a custom BG here? (Catch me in IRC if you need help with this) OK

[Hard]

1. All those 1/4 & jumps this looks more like an "easy" [Insane] imo. (If you decide to not map the other diff, leave this as [Hard]. re-name [Hard] to [Insane], and I get a guest making [Hard](3.8~4stars)
2. 00:16:330 (3) - I strongly suggest to unstack this. I keep missing it because that stack is following another rhythm while (3) is following the vocals so nobody would expect a third circle in that stack. fixed
3. 00:28:973 (5) - I would place this somewhere else, it's a bit hard to see atm. (Hitbursts are covering it) fixed
4. 00:41:401 (7) - Expected a NC here + a Jump like the previous patterns
5. 00:52:330 (3) - Is jump is a bit excessive and it makes the next spacing a bit confusing, use a NC here to avoid this problem. (same here: 01:06:044 (2) - ) fixed
6. 01:01:115 (8,9,10,11) - This stream is getting covered by the previous hitbursts, move this some grids up please. Perhaps, something like this

fixed

The mapset is quite nice but I wish you mapped the other diffs, the song is quite short so It wouldn't take much time. (or get a guest to map it for you)
(If you decide to map the other diffs, call me back and I'll re-check this) When it finished guest making [Hard], I will call you :3

wmfchris wrote:

modding request

[Kana's Taiko]
00:06:044 - k?
00:09:687 - d?
00:12:580 - dd?
00:18:044 - k d ddk d k
00:19:330 - ddkkk K/k kdd d
00:36:044 - d
00:37:115 - ^
00:41:615 - [1/2] k d d d [To emphazize the higher tone]
00:54:044 - k k
00:57:473 - k d

More 5-plets can be used instead of triplets streams? :3
8/10


anyway star~

wmfchris wrote:

modding request　　thanks >.<

[Insane]
00:05:830 (4,5,6) - try remove whistle on (4), whistle on (5,6)? fixed
00:21:687 (1~5) - quite confusing? hmm.. no change ;_;
01:17:830 (7) - make this more quiet? (e.g. 60%) fixed
01:29:401 (s) - ^ ^

nice hitsound~


oh I only have to mod taiko /owo\ lol

anyway star~

wmfchris wrote:

modding request

[Kana's Taiko]
00:06:044 - k? Fixed
00:09:687 - d? Fixed
00:12:580 - dd? No here~
00:18:044 - k d ddk d k Fixed
00:19:330 - ddkkk K/k kdd d Fixed
00:36:044 - d Fixed
00:37:115 - ^ Fixed
00:41:615 - [1/2] k d d d [To emphazize the higher tone] Fixed
00:54:044 - k k No here~
00:57:473 - k d ^

1. Re-checking~ (Glad to see new diffs)
2. Is it possible to get 2 new BGs for the new diffs?
3. Use '(TV Size)' instead of '(Short Ver.)' - Make sure you read this before changing the title.
4. Was this: "juliae" intentional? I did some re-search and found many places using "juliae" capitalized ("Juliae").
5. Taiko: Clean~

1. 00:03:258 - If it's possible start the diff here to match the other diffs. (Adding a circle here should be enough)
2. Sometime the current AR seems a bit high, I suggest to reduce it 1 tick.
3. If it's possible make 'Kiai' match the other standard diffs please. (That includes that kiai fountain at the end :3)
4. Tick Rate: 0.5 is too low, apply '2' like all the other diffs please.
5. 01:26:187 (1) - Reduce volume a bit for this spinner-end (60% or so)

1. 00:21:044 - This break is kinda short and not too necessary, I suggest to remove it.(The HP Drain is low enough so there's no problem)
2. 01:02:830 (2) - This would sound better if you place it 1/2 earlier.
3. 01:15:687 (2) - Is this slider in the slider-body intentional? Doesn't fit much this song imo.
4. 01:19:115 (2) - Hmm slider-speed change, better place a NC here.

1. 00:13:544 (1,2) - Hmm this pattern doesn't sound bad but I think It could follow the rhythm a bit more closely, Perhaps something like this?
2. 00:17:401 (7) - The music change is quite noticeable, try a NC here.
3. 00:53:401 (4) - Is that whistle in the slider-body intentional? As I said on [Normal] doesn't fit the song imo.
4. 00:58:544 (2) - Not a big fan of this anti-jump, would you use distance snap please? (If you wish to keep it (which will make me sad) you will need to add a NC)
5. 01:25:973 (X) - I think that a circle should be placed here... I don't know if it was deleted by mistake or probably you didn't add it. However, you should add it otherwise there's "something" missing here.

1. 00:06:258 (7) - Same thoughts about the whistle in the slider-body
2. 01:17:723 - Increase volume for this section to 70%~ sounds too low imo.
3. 00:17:401 (5) - Some of those 1/4 streams are kinda forcing the difficulty since there's no 1/4 rhythm on some of those spots. However, this one is a great spot to use one of those streams 'cause there is 1/4 rhythm here.
4. 00:51:687 (2,1) - The NC to re-mark the jump is not correctly placed, this, is how it should be placed.
5. 00:54:580 (4,5,6,7,8) - This stream feels too forced, you should remove it.
6. 01:05:401 (1,2) - Same as before about the jumps. NC + Jumps properly placed <-

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Re-checking~ (Glad to see new diffs)
2. Is it possible to get 2 new BGs for the new diffs? All diffs BG different used
3. Use '(TV Size)' instead of '(Short Ver.)' - Make sure you read this before changing the title.
4. Was this: "juliae" intentional? I did some re-search and found many places using "juliae" capitalized ("Juliae"). ok. "Primula Juliae (TV Size)" renamed
5. Taiko: Clean~

[rEdo's Easy]

1. 00:03:258 - If it's possible start the diff here to match the other diffs. (Adding a circle here should be enough) fixed
2. Sometime the current AR seems a bit high, I suggest to reduce it 1 tick. fixed
3. If it's possible make 'Kiai' match the other standard diffs please. (That includes that kiai fountain at the end :3) fixed
4. Tick Rate: 0.5 is too low, apply '2' like all the other diffs please.fixed
5. 01:26:187 (1) - Reduce volume a bit for this spinner-end (60% or so)

fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:21:044 - This break is kinda short and not too necessary, I suggest to remove it.(The HP Drain is low enough so there's no problem) removed
2. 01:02:830 (2) - This would sound better if you place it 1/2 earlier. fixed
3. 01:15:687 (2) - Is this slider in the slider-body intentional? Doesn't fit much this song imo. fixed
4. 01:19:115 (2) - Hmm slider-speed change, better place a NC here. fixed

[S o r d a's Hard]

1. 00:13:544 (1,2) - Hmm this pattern doesn't sound bad but I think It could follow the rhythm a bit more closely, Perhaps something like this?
2. 00:17:401 (7) - The music change is quite noticeable, try a NC here.
3. 00:53:401 (4) - Is that whistle in the slider-body intentional? As I said on [Normal] doesn't fit the song imo.
4. 00:58:544 (2) - Not a big fan of this anti-jump, would you use distance snap please? (If you wish to keep it (which will make me sad) you will need to add a NC)
5. 01:25:973 (X) - I think that a circle should be placed here... I don't know if it was deleted by mistake or probably you didn't add it. However, you should add it otherwise there's "something" missing here. all fixed~

[Insane]

1. 00:06:258 (7) - Same thoughts about the whistle in the slider-body fixed
2. 01:17:723 - Increase volume for this section to 70%~ sounds too low imo. ok. volume 70% :3
3. 00:17:401 (5) - Some of those 1/4 streams are kinda forcing the difficulty since there's no 1/4 rhythm on some of those spots. However, this one is a great spot to use one of those streams 'cause there is 1/4 rhythm here. change to stream ._.
4. 00:51:687 (2,1) - The NC to re-mark the jump is not correctly placed, this, is how it should be placed. fixed
5. 00:54:580 (4,5,6,7,8) - This stream feels too forced, you should remove it. 00:54:473 (4) - add note and 00:54:687 (5) - 1/2 slider added >.<
6. 01:05:401 (1,2) - Same as before about the jumps. NC + Jumps properly placed <- fixed~

Call me back when you're done o/

1. I just noticed that the correct capitalization is "juliae" SORRY ;_; please change it back.
2. The Vid offset is not the same in [Normal] fix it please.
3. The New BGs are lovely :3

1. 01:06:687 (3) - Missed a NC after the jump, like the previous patterns.

lepidopodus wrote:

@KanaRin: Again, I'm late, lol

Whatever, there wasn't serious flaws or something. I was ready for some suggestions but it's not worth popping bubble.

whymeman wrote:

I thought the song title was supposed to be Primula Juliae? Just make sure to have that fixed and the map should be ready for ranking.