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-SeRa_old
ありあー
dNextGen
\:D/
Potofu
fight~~

Star!
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>SeRa,dNextGen,SoraMy
thank for star~>w<
KayeSara
頑張ります
あなたの完成を期待します!
yutaso
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>H-Miku,yutaso
thanks star~

6/10 moved pending
ready for mod

Edit:I found a mistake
sorry back to WIP
Norn_NNN
star~ :)
JoJo
SPOILER
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sorda.png",320,240
F,0,48377,49747,0,1
M,1,48377,50432,121,403,153,403
M,0,50432,56598,153,403
M,2,56598,58653,153,403,186,403
F,0,56598,58653,1,0
F,0,81261,82631,0,1
M,1,81261,83316,662,276,482,276
M,0,83316,89482,482,276,453,276
M,2,89482,91538,453,276,409,276
F,0,90167,91538,1,0
F,0,112775,113460,0,1
M,0,112775,124422,223,278,116,278
F,0,124422,124593,1,0.3119825
S,0,124422,124593,1,1.79872
M,0,124422,125792,116,278
F,0,124593,125792,0.3119825,0
S,0,124593,125792,1.79872,2.18784
S,0,157991,,1
F,0,157991,159361,0,1
M,0,157991,168267,224,90,128,89
F,0,166897,168267,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"mizuki.png",320,240
S,0,59338,,1
F,0,59338,60709,0,1
M,1,59338,61394,520,90,489,90
M,0,61394,67559,489,90,465,90
M,2,67559,69615,465,90,425,90
F,0,68245,69615,1,0
S,1,91880,92565,5,1
F,0,91880,93250,0,1
M,0,91880,102499,194,245,114,245
F,0,101129,102499,1,0
F,0,136068,136753,0,1
M,0,136068,147030,208,218,136,218
F,0,146345,147030,1,0
F,0,168267,169638,0,1
M,0,168267,179229,173,385,234,385
F,0,177859,179229,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"yuca.png",320,240
F,0,70300,71670,0,1
M,1,70300,72355,154,217,121,217
M,0,72355,78521,121,217
M,2,78521,80576,121,217,-5,217
F,0,79206,80576,1,0
F,0,102499,103184,0,1
M,0,102499,113460,432,217,561,217
F,0,112090,113460,1,0
F,0,147030,147715,0,1
M,0,147030,157306,415,278,493,278
F,0,157306,157477,1,0.2588449
S,0,157306,157477,1,1.644626
M,0,157306,157991,493,278
F,0,157477,157991,0.2588449,0
S,0,157477,157991,1.644626,1.8192
S,0,179229,,1
F,0,179229,180599,0,1
M,0,179229,192931,468,93,375,93
F,0,191560,192931,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sorda.png",320,240
S,0,113460,113632,1,1.687291
M,0,113460,114145,215,276
F,0,113460,114145,1,0
S,0,113632,114145,1.687291,2.10592
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"mizuki.png",320,240
S,0,168267,,3.41664
F,0,168267,169638,0,0.44704
M,0,168267,179229,23,379,238,379
F,0,169638,177859,0.44704
F,0,177859,179229,0.44704,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"yuca.png",320,240
S,0,179229,,3.49856
F,0,179229,180599,0,0.42656
M,0,179229,192931,535,108,270,106
F,0,191560,192931,0.42656,0

Download: Put into folder root plz~.zip
Download: Hatsune Miku - ARiA (S o r d a) [Collab].osu

Patchouli
IRC SB Helping.

fight~
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>Patchouli
thanks SB help>~</

6/11
Edit:moved Pending Ready for mod
rEdo
[banvi's Normal]
1:11:670 (3) - ...10% volume? are you sure?
1:42:499 (1) - i'm pretty sure this slider wasn't supposed to be like this... set the slider velocity to 1.0x on 102154 timing section.
2:03:052 (3) - pretty much like before. set the slider velocity to 1.0x on 122878 timing section.
unused timing sections:  50602, 58908, 72526, 72698, 73897, 74239, 75952, 76294, 77322, 77665, 80062, 80405, 88881, 113287, 113373, 174005, 174176.

[Jojo's Hard]
0:56:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too vast spacing, in comparison with the rest of the patterns.
1:07:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
1:24:687 (3) - add a finish at its beginning?
1:29:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - once again, too vast.
1:42:499 (7) - this long jump between (7) and that next slider might be kinda confusing for some players... it's not an Insane, it's only a Hard. i'd suggest going with something like this.
1:43:698 (4) - not snapped with previous slider's end
1:50:549 (7,1) - swap new combos?
2:01:168 (7,1) - ^
2:35:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe a bit too vast?
2:58:886 (11,12) - once again, this is kinda too much for a Hard.
3:15:671 (1) - add a finish

[Collab]
1:24:687 (1) - delete new combo
1:58:427 (1) - delete NC
1:59:454 (2) - add NC
2:00:140 (1) - delete NC
2:02:880 (4) - imo this is placed a bit too close to that next slider... i'd suggest moving it somehow, so there's a jump between those two notes.
2:54:947 (1) - delete NC


<3
Topic Starter
S o r d a

rEdo wrote:

[Collab]
1:24:687 (1) - delete new combo
1:58:427 (1) - delete NC
1:59:454 (2) - add NC
2:00:140 (1) - delete NC
2:02:880 (4) - imo this is placed a bit too close to that next slider... i'd suggest moving it somehow, so there's a jump between those two notes.Spacing x2.0 put maybe okey..?
2:54:947 (1) - delete NC
All Fixed

<3
thanks rEdo >~</
eveless
[Collab]
00:59:338 (1) - ここからのhitsound薄いよ、前のようにどうですか
01:26:399 (7) - add a note?
02:02:195 (2) - different spacing
02:02:880 (4) - 02:02:366 (3) - より近すぎ
02:34:566 (6,7,8) - 5の末に置いてください

[Hard]
01:43:698 (4) - not stack well
01:53:632 (1) - whistle at end
01:54:145 (3) - clap at begin
01:55:516 (7) - clap
01:55:687 (8) - clap at begin
01:56:201 (9) - finish
01:56:715 (2) - clap at end
01:58:085 (6) - ^
01:59:455 (1) - clap at middle and end
02:03:565 (6) - whistle at end
02:04:079 (7) - clap
02:04:422 (1) - finish
02:07:162 (1) - ^
02:09:902 (1) - ^
02:35:593 (2) - whistle
02:58:886 (11,12) - sounds bad

[banvi]
01:44:212 (2,1) - 萌えけどだめよ ヾ(*`Д´*)ノ
02:04:079 (4,3,1) - ここも 緑線checkしてヾ(*`Д´*)ノ
Sure
Hi there :D
As per host's request.


[General]
01:42:499 - Start kiai from here. not 01:42:670
02:48:267 - Start kiai from here. not 02:48:439



[Collab]
01:34:278 (1) - Add default finish
01:58:427 (1) - Add default finish instead of clap?
02:19:322 (3) - Add C1 whistle
02:24:632 (2) - Add C1 whistle at end of slider
02:35:765 (2) - Add C1 whistle


[Jojo]
01:42:670 (1) - This spacing too sudden to me
01:50:549 (7) - If you followed vocal, it would be new combo
01:50:720 (1) - then remove new combo
01:53:632 (1) - Add whistle at end of slider
01:58:599 (7) - Add C2 finish at return arrow
02:00:140 (2,5) - Add whistle
02:01:681 (1) - Add whistle at end of slider
02:52:720 (7) - Add whistle
02:53:748 (13) - Add whistle at end of slider
02:59:143 (12) - C2 finish at end of slider
03:03:339 (6) - Add whistle at end of slider
03:04:367 (8) - Add whistle
03:04:538 (9) - Remove whistle
03:04:709 (11) - Add C2 finish
03:05:908 (3,6) - Add whistle
03:14:472 - Add timing point : audio volume 50
03:14:815 (2) - Remove whistle


[banvi]
Please check again your timing points. It is useless some of them. Sorry, I'm lazy to point them out. :o
01:42:499 (1) - slider velocity error
02:03:052 (3) - ^



Good luck~ ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
Topic Starter
S o r d a

goodbye wrote:

[Collab]
00:59:338 (1) - ここからのhitsound薄いよ、前のようにどうですか
01:26:399 (7) - add a note?Fix
02:02:195 (2) - different spacingx2.0 Spacing Fix?
02:02:880 (4) - 02:02:366 (3) - より近すぎ^
02:34:566 (6,7,8) - 5の末に置いてくださいtest play de miruto tabun大丈夫>_< not fix

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there :D hi>w</
As per host's request.


[General]
01:42:499 - Start kiai from here. not 01:42:670
02:48:267 - Start kiai from here. not 02:48:439
changed


[Collab]
01:34:278 (1) - Add default finish
01:58:427 (1) - Add default finish instead of clap?
02:19:322 (3) - Add C1 whistle
02:24:632 (2) - Add C1 whistle at end of slider
02:35:765 (2) - Add C1 whistle
All Fixed


Good luck~ ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
banvi Diff slider velocity error changed
thanks for mod eve and yk >~</
JoJo
>>>rEdo, eveless, ykcarrot
SPOILER

rEdo wrote:

[Jojo's Hard]
0:56:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too vast spacing, in comparison with the rest of the patterns. Negative.
1:07:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^Negative.
1:24:687 (3) - add a finish at its beginning? Negative.
1:29:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - once again, too vast. Negative.
1:42:499 (7) - this long jump between (7) and that next slider might be kinda confusing for some players... it's not an Insane, it's only a Hard. i'd suggest going with something like this. Your idea is pretty good but in my opinion it fits to a hard diff.Quote sombody's words - "It isn't a normal." I don't think it's difficult, really.
1:43:698 (4) - not snapped with previous slider's end Fixed.
1:50:549 (7,1) - swap new combos? Done
2:01:168 (7,1) - ^ Done
2:35:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe a bit too vast? No,sorry..
2:58:886 (11,12) - once again, this is kinda too much for a Hard. X
3:15:671 (1) - add a finish Done

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
01:42:499 - Start kiai from here. not 01:42:670
02:48:267 - Start kiai from here. not 02:48:439
Done

[Jojo]
01:42:670 (1) - This spacing too sudden to me Reduced to 2.0
01:50:549 (7) - If you followed vocal, it would be new combo Done
01:50:720 (1) - then remove new combo Done
01:53:632 (1) - Add whistle at end of slider Done
01:58:599 (7) - Add C2 finish at return arrow Done
02:00:140 (2,5) - Add whistle Done
02:01:681 (1) - Add whistle at end of slider X
02:52:720 (7) - Add whistle X
02:53:748 (13) - Add whistle at end of slider Done
02:59:143 (12) - C2 finish at end of slider Done
03:03:339 (6) - Add whistle at end of slider Done
03:04:367 (8) - Add whistle Done
03:04:538 (9) - Remove whistle X
03:04:709 (11) - Add C2 finish Done
03:05:908 (3,6) - Add whistle Done on 6.Denied on 3.
03:14:472 - Add timing point : audio volume 50 Done
03:14:815 (2) - Remove whistle Done

goodbye wrote:

[Hard]
01:43:698 (4) - not stack well Done
01:53:632 (1) - whistle at end Done
01:54:145 (3) - clap at begin Done
01:55:516 (7) - clap Done
01:55:687 (8) - clap at begin Done
01:56:201 (9) - finish Done
01:56:715 (2) - clap at end Done
01:58:085 (6) - ^ Done
01:59:455 (1) - clap at middle and end Done
02:03:565 (6) - whistle at end Done
02:04:079 (7) - clap Done
02:04:422 (1) - finishDone
02:07:162 (1) - ^Done
02:09:902 (1) - ^Done
02:35:593 (2) - whistleDone
02:58:886 (11,12) - sounds bad 0 0

Really thanks ~ Especially hitsound mod ~ ^o^//

Download: Hatsune Miku - ARiA (S o r d a) [Jojo's Hard].osu
riechan
star( ゚Д゚ノノ゙☆
Diasios
[General]

  • Set the same combo colours on all difficulties.
[Jojo's Hard]

  • • 01:00:537 (3) - 7 squares left (grid level 3)
    • 01:42:499 (7,1) - I don't like this jump, is it really necessary?

Beautiful beatmap, I love it.
Sakura
[Collab]
01:28:968 (9,10,11) - Those are probably the only silent notes in the whole map? may i ask why these 3?
02:03:052 (1,2) - It's really hard to tell these sliders are slower.

[Jojo's Hard]
The diff overall is fine however i think all those jumps are way too big for a hard, and would fit better in an Insane, i'd recommend you either rename the diff to Insane and make it slightly harder, or reduce the jumps to about 3/4 their distance.

Sorry for the delay, lights went out X_X
RhaiizoN
8-)
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>riechan,RhaiizoN
thanks for star~

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • Set the same combo colours on all difficulties.
sorry no changed

Beautiful beatmap, I love it.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Collab]
01:28:968 (9,10,11) - Those are probably the only silent notes in the whole map? may i ask why these 3?okey remove silent
02:03:052 (1,2) - It's really hard to tell these sliders are slower. slider changed Fix
thanks for mod Sakura hana and xxheroxx~>_>
DeadAlready
:3
JoJo
After 2 exams finally have time to fix the diff.Sorry for delay.@_@

>>>xxheroxx, Sakura Hana
SPOILER

xxheroxx wrote:

[Jojo's Hard]

• 01:00:537 (3) - 7 squares left (grid level 3) Sorry.
• 01:42:499 (7,1) - I don't like this jump, is it really necessary? [/color]

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Jojo's Hard]
The diff overall is fine however i think all those jumps are way too big for a hard, and would fit better in an Insane, i'd recommend you either rename the diff to Insane and make it slightly harder, or reduce the jumps to about 3/4 their distance. OK I make it easier.. I guess.. 0.0
Thanks for mod~ >w<//

>>>baka Sorda
SV no changes, but remove some jumps ;_;
By the way , maybe HD+1 in collab =w= (Max score +20%)

Download: Hatsune Miku - ARiA (S o r d a) [Jojo's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>萌五条
arigato !!
>>baka joshua
okey update~

Collab Diff bit change~
valuable_old
:oops:
FutakiKanata
god S o r d a collab www
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>valuable,
thanks for star~
>>Kanata
tigauuu ww
thanks star!
haruurara222
niceBeatMap!! :)
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Air_kannabi
:) I love this song !! oh! nice map!
Topic Starter
S o r d a
thanks everyone :oops:
KSHR
modding ;)
(All suggestion)


banvi's Normal
awesome :oops:


Jojo's Hard
- Slider Tick Rate : 1 better imo
 (b/c Normal & Collab : "1" )
- Grid Level : 3 (at least)
(if this dif's grid level "2", it's hard when modders mod)
- players are confused by 2 repeats sliders.
 (這只是我個人意見, 仮如不必要可以不用改~!)

01:29:825 (2,6) - plz change Normal-costom2 to Normal-costom1


Collab

このdifについては、細かくみようとしすぎたせいか、
やたら長くなってしまいました...すいません...Orz
自分の中で取捨選択ができてない部分があるだろうなぁと思うので
不要と感じた内容に関しては、華麗にスルーしてください!

- 配置
SPOILER

  • Sorda's Part
  1. 01:27:941 (6,7) - 滑らかなな感じにしてみてはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/2Ouf
  2. 02:02:880 (4) - 02:03:565 (2)の終点より、02:03:052 (1)の始点に重ねる方が良いように思いました
  3. 02:03:565 (2) - 始点を中心(x:256 y:192)に置いてみてはどうでしょう。
    もしこれをする場合は、02:03:052 (1)を x:256 y:32に移動させたほうが綺麗になる..かも?
  4. 02:37:820 (1,2) - もし見た目重視であれば、(1)を複製して180゜回転させた配置の方がいいと思います
  5. 02:39:019 (3,4) - ^
  6. 02:42:615 (9) - AIMしにくいかもなので、(9) - x:456 y:184, (10) - x:416 y:264とかどうでしょう
  7. 02:47:582 (10) - 少し角度を変えてみてはどうでしょう こんな感じ→ http://puu.sh/2Ovd
  8. 03:11:389 (1,2) - もし見た目重視であれば、(1)を複製して180゜回転させた配置の方がいいと思います
  9. 03:14:129 (1,2) - ^

  • mizuki's Part
  1. 01:37:703 (5) - 少しカーブをつけてみてはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/2Ouo
  2. 02:19:836 (6,8) - 1grid right (grid level 4)
  3. 02:54:091 (9) - new comboをここに入れて、02:54:947 (1)の方のnew comboを削除
    (最初のサビの区切り方と揃えてます。配置的には02:54:947 (1)はそのままでもいいような... ん...?w)

  • yuca's Part
  1. 01:26:057 (10) - 01:25:372 (7) と重なって見にくいので、重ならない配置に修正してください~
  2. 01:45:924 (4) - 1grid落としたほうがAIMしやすいように思います(個人的な考えかもしれませんが..w)
  3. 02:36:621 (5) - 明らかに前の2つのスライダーと平行ではないので、揃えた方が綺麗だと思います

- ヒットサウンド
SPOILER
Sorda's Part

  • - 00:48:377 (1) - 終点のwhistle削除
    - 00:49:405 (3) - 始点のwhistle削除
    - 00:50:432 (7) - ^
    - 00:51:117 (1) - 終点のwhistle削除
    - 00:51:802 (3) - ^
    - 00:53:858 (1) - ^
    - 00:54:543 (3) - ^
    - 00:55:913 (9) - whistle追加
    - 01:55:601 (T) - これを削除して、01:55:687 (7)の始点と終点にwhistle &終点のclap削除
    - 01:56:201 (T) - 上を変更すると不要になるのでこの緑線を削除
    - 01:57:228 (3) - 終点にwhistle追加
    - 01:58:085 (5) - whistle追加
    - 01:58:427 (6) - 始点にwhistle追加
    - 02:03:052 (1,2) - ^

mizuki's Part

  • - 00:59:424 (x) - volume60%, soft-defaulteの緑線を立てて下さい(以降、これをしたことを前提に提案を箇条書していきます)
    - 01:00:023 (3) - 始点にwhistle追加
    - 01:00:709 (5) - whistle追加
    - 01:01:051 (7) - 始点にwhistle追加
    - 01:01:308 (T) - カスタムの必要がないので削除してください(00:59:424で1つにまとめます)
    - 01:01:565 (9,10) - whistle削除
    - 01:02:079 (1) - soft-custom:1 のfinishを追加(以降デフォルトに戻ります)
    - 01:02:421 (3) - 終点にwhistle追加
    - 01:03:449 (6) - 始点にwhistle追加
    - 01:03:791 (7) - whistle追加
    - 01:04:220 (T) - カスタムの必要がないのでデフォルトに変更
    - 01:04:819 (1) - 始点のfinish削除、終点にwhistle追加
    - 01:06:189 (6) - whistle追加
    - 01:06:532 (8) - ^
    - 01:07:559 (1) - 終点にwhistle追加
    - 01:08:245 (3) - 始点にwhistle追加
    - 01:08:587 (4) - ^
    - 01:08:930 (1,3) - whistle追加
    - 02:54:091 (9,11) - clap削除

yuca's Part

  • - 02:36:450 (4) - whistle追加


fight~ :)
winber1
Collab

00:48:377 - 01:09:615 - In my opinion, there are too many notes here D:. I would like to be able to kind of see a change between this slow and soft beginning and the other sections. I would also lower the volume a little bit more in this section. You can follow or ignore any one or all of these things. They are just suggestions. Everything reads fine and plays pretty well anyways.
some stuff you may consider
00:49:918 (5) -
00:52:316 (4) - delete?
00:55:228 (5,8) - ^
00:58:139 (4) - ^
01:00:709 (5,9) - ^
01:03:450 (6) - remove this and add a note at 01:03:620 (6) - ?
01:06:104 (5,6) - delete these two and add one at 01:06:446 (6) -
01:07:559 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - honestly speaking, I would get rid of these notes and just have 1/1 tick notes. Once you get to 01:09:615 (5) - , it's fine imo.

Doing this sounds better imo, but Idk about all of you guys. Ignore anything if you want.
00:50:432 (7) - remove finish from the end of slider? it sounds weird.
00:58:653 (6) - ^ it sounds weird imo
01:04:134 (9) - ^ idk, it's just me. maybe the finishes are just too loud. maybe if you lowered the volume i might like it better... idk.
01:34:620 (3) - unstack this?
01:41:814 (9) - add one more repeat?
01:42:950 (1) - I would like it much better if this was using the Normal hitfinish hitsound at 80% volume. sounds a lot better imo.
01:52:775 (8) - I would really like it if this was an actual stream rather than this repeat slider :/, but it doesn't matter. It'just my personal prefernce.
02:19:322 (3) - remove whistle and place it on 02:19:408 (4) -

Jojo's Hard

--what the hell happened with the grid level? O_O It's like grid level 0.5... how in the world... asdfvklhz i dont get it.
--Slider tick rate 1?
--It doesn't really look much easier than Collab, but oh well.

--Lower the volume of the beginning section?

00:55:742 (4) - delete note? i don't like it D:
01:42:499 (7) - unstack note?
03:05:908 (3) - add whistle (to continue pattern)

Banvi's normal

Looks fine :3

Awesome map! :3
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>>KSHR,winber1
Collab diff some Fixed~
thanks for mod ;)
Sakura
Rechecking~
[General]
Did this have a video last time i checked? i dont remember it, in either case it's lagging me, consider reducing the resolution (and my Media Player Classic crashes when trying to play the video...), i like the video tho, so i prefer if you downgrade the quality a bit so it stops lagging the game, rather than removing it.

[Collab]
03:09:334 (3,4) - This is kind of a mean move, considering the previous stacks had different timing, maybe you should unstack these.
wring
rankだうおおおおおお
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>>Kitsuneko
thanks for video help>_<

>>wring
ありがとうstar!!

Sakura Hana wrote:

Rechecking~
[General]
Did this have a video last time i checked? i dont remember it, in either case it's lagging me, consider reducing the resolution (and my Media Player Classic crashes when trying to play the video...), i like the video tho, so i prefer if you downgrade the quality a bit so it stops lagging the game, rather than removing it. changed video maybe can play video?

[Collab]
03:09:334 (3,4) - This is kind of a mean move, considering the previous stacks had different timing, maybe you should unstack these.
move note maybe fix
Rigeru_old
:arrow:
Sakura
Renamed Jojo's hard to Insane because those fullscreen (or so) jumps arent really hardish, and more insaneish, the mapset's fine and fun to play as well ^^ so now i declare this Bubbled~

No kudosu~
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>>Rigeru
thanks star~ :)

>>Sakura Hana
really thanks bubble and pinkstar :oops:
Alace
Looks good
ranked
y u c a
おめ(・∀・)
Andrea
Omedetou!~ :3
Colin Hou
祝~~
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>>Alace
thanks for Ranked>A<
>>y u c a osuplayer111,Colin Hou
arigatou~ ;)
Cyril Scarlet
おめっとさーーーーん
banvi
うおーおめっと☆
そーださんも最近ノってるな~(ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Topic Starter
S o r d a
二人ともありがとうー!
JoJo
Oh.. @_@
My late Congraz... >//<

Really sorry for resulting inconvenience..
I can't be online during the exam weeks.. > <

But I'm so glad to see it has been ranked already ! Nice job ! \^o^/
And also thanks to all modders ><
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>>Joshua
no problem~
and thanks>A<
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