KuraiPettan wrote:

General
- Offset : 4820, 4842 is too late :/ nope, this one is fine

Normal
02:07:882 (6) - Extand it by 1/2 to follow the voice. alright
03:13:439 - I think you should add a note here, else the player will tend to click the next slider earlier. added a reverse to that slider, and started it 1/2 earlier
04:05:755 (3) - The end of this slider is not correctly snapped i was pretty sure i've fixed this before >.> done.

Hard
- AR+1 to make the map more readable? nope
02:07:882 (6) - Extand it by 1/2 to follow the voice. yup

Star~ thanks for modding \o/

AndreasHD wrote:

Okay, these are my suggestions :)

[Normal]
03:15:953 (5) - The end of this slider is a little curvature, try to get this smooth. yep, fixed
I really can't fin anything wrong here. Good luck.


[Hard]
Sorry, I can't find anything to pick on at all.. haha ♥


[SB] About the "intothebrighterlight" sprite.
It seems you should use tweening from the section 03:42:619 to 03:47:064 fixed, i suppose
"intothelight" what does this section actually? 03:44:842 to 03:46:508 ..I can't see any fade. alright, deleted it

Star! and good luck with ranking (^_^) thanks \:D/

quintitem wrote:

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Lanttu wrote:

What a pretty song.. ;_; And I love the storyboard<3 ...And lol the storyboard filenames<3 XD yeah, i love that song so badly. heh, i'm glad that you liked the storyboard as well :) and yeah, i'm always naming song/sb files like that rofl

Sliderslide sound reaaaally loud, maybe silence it? Oh, and same with spinners, maybe make them little more quiet, they're really loud compared to everything else.. ;u; alright, taken the default skin ones and decreased their volume by some dBs. :)

Also, last note in both diffs, I think it would be better without, it kind of feels weird to click when there isn't almost any sound at all in the background. (that almost-silent t doesn't count!) b-but i've wanted it to exist like this! ;w; also, i want some players to give attention to the approachcircle, if they'd really like to go for SS.

YEAHH, I really can't find anything wrong, this is beatiful<3 ;u; Have my star~ And of course, no kudosu to this. thanks. :) i'd kudos this post, but if you say no, that's fine. thanks for modding! :D

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hi there, reporting from #modreqs ~

[General]
04:07:408 (4) - I agree with Lanttu about this note, but I guess if you don't want to change it... if people will keep complaining about it, i'll change it into a note + slider pattern. it's better the way it is now imo, though.

[Normal That is Actually an Easy]
02:19:842 (2) - New combo. nope

I kind of got tired at the end so I probably missed something, but whatever. Good overall, have a star. thanks ;)

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

OK.

General
You need to use custom sample 1 to use the silenced sliders. implying that i want to use them
The hitsounds are too loud IMO, if this was my map I wouldn't use volumes above 50%. nah, they're fine
Is the flashing SB in the end really necessary? It doesn't fit to such a slow, soft song IMO. i like it, people like it, so yeah.

Hard
Tiny circles >w< problem, officer?
00:39:008 (6) - this really supposed to end on blue tick? yes it is
02:07:064 (4,5) - change it to this? Is more synched with the song. http://puu.sh/2kxt no it's not
02:11:230 (4) - remove whistle on the sliderbody oh, sure
03:24:286 - add a note here? I feel like clicking something here, kinda. it's just you, it seems.
04:05:755 (5) - add NC it's funny that you didn't mentioned that on [Normal]
That end is kinda... off-timing. I can't check that though, get someone else to check that. i think it's fine...

Normal
Fine, I guess. hm, thanks. thanks for modding, too bad i didn't found your suggestions useful, though ;3;

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Oh well. If you don't use silenced sliders then why is there a silenced sliderslide.wav in the folder? Just saying :< it's not silenced. i just took one from template skin and decreased it's volume by 6 dBs in Audacity. ;)

Hushu wrote:

Normal:
0:37:619 - At 0:19:842 you have stacked it but here you did not. That's quite awkard and I suggest you do that or the other for both. nah, i like it the way it is now
0:39:703 - 1/4 before sounds better? nope
2:06:508 - To samo co o 0:37:619. just like before

Hard:
0:23:730 - Distant snap so that it is in the shadow of (4)? once again, i like it the way it is

Good luck with your beatmap~ : ) Star~ thanks for taking a look at it ;)

1. Add a "sliderscorepoint" to complete the slider-set (Doesn't matter if it's the template one)
2. "star2" is too big, you need to re-size it to 52x50px
3. 04:07:402 (4) - "Whistle" doesn't fit the end of the song IMO. The last part is just a little "sigh", I'd leave the last object w/o any hitsounds. (Actually, I would remove the last object, I think that sounds better if the map ends here: 04:06:272 - )
4. Perhaps, add some cool "lighting" :3?
5. SB: 03:11:512 - 02:53:734 - Make this flashes fade slowly. The current effect seems too fast for the song.

1. 2 unsnapped objects, you will need to snap the objects manually. Re-snap doesn't work
2. 00:39:012 (6) - This slider ends sounds a bit odd, I suggest to follow the piano music instead and make the spinner land here: 00:39:846 -
3. 00:44:846 (X) - There are 2 objects on the same spot. Kill one repeat of the last slider or start the spinner 1/1 later :3
4. 02:07:068 (5) - Same as before, at leat for the easiest diff you should use easy and clear rhythms.
5. 02:07:901 (6) - ^
6. 02:13:800 (1) - This spinner is not snapped. I think you tried to snap it to 1/4, I strongly suggest to snap it to 1/2, that's enough.
7. 03:59:845 (5,6) - Fix this spacing please, It might be a bit confusing for rookies
8. 04:00:401 - There are 2 inherited sections here, remove the unnecessary one please.
9. 04:05:755 (3) - The BPM changed so a NC is quite important, place it please

1. That circle size :3 (It suits the map, don't worry)
2. 4 unsnapped objects, you will need to snap them manually too: 00:44:842 (8,1) - 02:13:730 (9,1) -
3. 03:07:901 (1) - This objects looks so weird, mainly because half of the circle is getting covered by the previous sliders while all the other objects are free of this kind of overlaps. Perhaps move it a bit?
4. 03:55:679 (9) - ^
5. 04:00:401 - There are 2 inherited sections here separated by 1ms, one disables kiai while the other starts it. Remove the unnecessary section to avoid any kind of issues.
6. 04:05:755 (5) - Same as [Normal]

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Add a "sliderscorepoint" to complete the slider-set (Doesn't matter if it's the template one) so, added a template one
2. "star2" is too big, you need to re-size it to 52x50px yup
3. 04:07:402 (4) - "Whistle" doesn't fit the end of the song IMO. The last part is just a little "sigh", I'd leave the last object w/o any hitsounds. (Actually, I would remove the last object, I think that sounds better if the map ends here: 04:06:272) k, fixed. and no, i won't delete it. :p
4. Perhaps, add some cool "lighting" :3? what ?_?
5. SB: 03:11:512 - 02:53:734 - Make this flashes fade slowly. The current effect seems too fast for the song. k, extended them a bit. the intensity is lower now, though

[Normal]

1. 2 unsnapped objects, you will need to snap the objects manually. Re-snap doesn't work
2. 00:39:012 (6) - This slider ends sounds a bit odd, I suggest to follow the piano music instead and make the spinner land here: 00:39:846 nah, i like it the way it is now
3. 00:44:846 (X) - There are 2 objects on the same spot. Kill one repeat of the last slider or start the spinner 1/1 later :3 started 1/2 later
4. 02:07:068 (5) - Same as before, at leat for the easiest diff you should use easy and clear rhythms. i know it's kinda meh, but it was kinda hard to follow anything else than vocals at that point. also, it does fit imo :)
5. 02:07:901 (6) - ^ ^
6. 02:13:800 (1) - This spinner is not snapped. I think you tried to snap it to 1/4, I strongly suggest to snap it to 1/2, that's enough. fixed
7. 03:59:845 (5,6) - Fix this spacing please, It might be a bit confusing for rookies ...huh?
8. 04:00:401 - There are 2 inherited sections here, remove the unnecessary one please. actually, i've meant to add a kiai fountain at this point
9. 04:05:755 (3) - The BPM changed so a NC is quite important, place it please yup

[Hard]

1. That circle size :3 (It suits the map, don't worry) <3
2. 4 unsnapped objects, you will need to snap them manually too: 00:44:842 (8,1), 02:13:730 (9,1) fixed
3. 03:07:901 (1) - This objects looks so weird, mainly because half of the circle is getting covered by the previous sliders while all the other objects are free of this kind of overlaps. Perhaps move it a bit? nah, i like it the way it is
4. 03:55:679 (9) - ^ ^
5. 04:00:401 - There are 2 inherited sections here separated by 1ms, one disables kiai while the other starts it. Remove the unnecessary section to avoid any kind of issues. it's like that on purpose. it's supposed to disable kiai at the correct time, so there's a kiai fountain, like i've mentioned before :)
6. 04:05:755 (5) - Same as [Normal] yup

Well, I don't see major problems with the mapset. Good job! thanks! :)

Alace wrote:

Back to the works in progress area
don`t ask me to revive too many maps at the same time plz XD

1. I would suggest use a silent slider because this song is really soft,so I feel little noisy,well,it's depend on you!

1. All looks clear!

1. 00:45:123 (x) - Probably remove Finish on this spinner?Finish is too noisy for this!I think a whistle is more appropriate!
2. 01:06:790 (3) - I'm unsure with this,but this reverse is covered by (2)- hitburst,I know it's not totally covered,just avoid this condition in "Normal diff".
   
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3. 02:04:290 (2) - This stack might make confused to newbie(You don't have a easy diff so I assume newbie will play this diff.)!Actually 1.5 beat stack might make confused.
4. 02:14:012 (x) - Same as 00:45:123.
5. 02:49:290 (4) - It's doesn't fit the music that you put a note here.Why you didn't make it like previous you do?Move this to 02:49:012 - ,probably unstack it if you do it.
6. 03:29:429 (x) - This break time was a bit long,it was near 15 second.I prefer reduce the break.You probably make a spinner here: 03:44:846 - ?
7. 04:07:402 (2) - Probably remove this timing section and this note?because the "s" sound is a tad soft(near unheard)so I strongly suggest you remove this.04:06:272 - end at here is fine for me.

1. Circle size 6 looks weird!Probably make it to 5?

1. All looks clear!

1. Tick rate : 1?
2. 00:45:123 (1) - Probably remove Finish on this spinner?Finish is too noisy for this!I think a whistle is more appropriate!
3. 01:14:568 (5) - Some suggestion about map layout:Probably symmetrical with (4)- it looks better if you do that.You maybe meed to adjust the spacing after change.
4. 01:33:734 (1) - I think a finish doesn't fit it at all,think about use a whistle instead of it.
5. 01:49:290 (5) - hmm,Did you forget to add a new combo here? o.o The combo length of this combo is longer than others,also I think you should add a new combo here that follow what you do in previous combo.
6. 02:43:457 (5) - Same as 01:14:568 -
7. 03:29:568 (x) - This break time was a bit long,it was near 15 second.I prefer reduce the break.Since you were make a hard diff,so you can shorten the break time!
   04:07:402 (2) - Probably remove this timing section and this note?because the "s" sound is a tad soft(near unheard)so I strongly suggest you remove this.04:06:272 - end at here is fine for me.

SPOILER

304,120,21234,2,0,B|256:80|191:96,2,120,2|0|2

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indyinyou wrote:

[Hard]
01:24:846 : whistle better then fin ?
01:34:290 : add whistle
01:38:734 : ^
01:43:179 : ^
01:49:846 : ^
01:51:234 : remove this note ? or silder at 01:50:401 + 1 re
thanks a lot for trying, but i didn't used anything. maybe next time. :)

kanpakyin wrote:

1. I would suggest use a silent slider because this song is really soft,so I feel little noisy,well,it's depend on you! [color=red]i can't find a decent one, so i've went with this one :( also, tried the hitsound you've gave me in the description. i didn't liked it though, sorry :P

[Normal]

Beatmap design and suggestion
(These are suggestion only,you don't need to follow them if you disagree.)

1. 00:45:123 (x) - Probably remove Finish on this spinner?Finish is too noisy for this!I think a whistle is more appropriate! yup :)
2. 01:06:790 (3) - I'm unsure with this,but this reverse is covered by (2)- hitburst,I know it's not totally covered,just avoid this condition in "Normal diff". no one wasn't ever complaining about it, so i guess it's fine :)
3. 02:04:290 (2) - This stack might make confused to newbie(You don't have a easy diff so I assume newbie will play this diff.)!Actually 1.5 beat stack might make confused. i thought so too, changed
4. 02:14:012 (x) - Same as 00:45:123. yup
5. 02:49:290 (4) - It's doesn't fit the music that you put a note here.Why you didn't make it like previous you do?Move this to 02:49:012 - ,probably unstack it if you do it. yeah, moved, but didnt unstacked, i guess it's fine like this
6. 03:29:429 (x) - This break time was a bit long,it was near 15 second.I prefer reduce the break.You probably make a spinner here: 03:44:846 - ? nah, it's fine like that :)
7. 04:07:402 (2) - Probably remove this timing section and this note?because the "s" sound is a tad soft(near unheard)so I strongly suggest you remove this.04:06:272 - end at here is fine for me. i want to leave this note, people should rely on approach circles more, i've even choose a good color so it's perfectly visible with that black fade ;___;

[Hard]

Difficulty Setting
(These are suggestion only,you don't need to follow them if you disagree.)

1. Circle size 6 looks weird!Probably make it to 5? no

Beatmap design and suggestion
(These are suggestion only,you don't need to follow them if you disagree.)

1. Tick rate : 1? no
2. 00:45:123 (1) - Probably remove Finish on this spinner?Finish is too noisy for this!I think a whistle is more appropriate! yeah, totally :)
3. 01:14:568 (5) - Some suggestion about map layout:Probably symmetrical with (4)- it looks better if you do that.You maybe meed to adjust the spacing after change. nah, i think it's good like this
4. 01:33:734 (1) - I think a finish doesn't fit it at all,think about use a whistle instead of it. its purpose is to give the accent to the start of the song, so it's fine i guess
5. 01:49:290 (5) - hmm,Did you forget to add a new combo here? o.o The combo length of this combo is longer than others,also I think you should add a new combo here that follow what you do in previous combo. no, it's fine
6. 02:43:457 (5) - Same as 01:14:568 same as 01:14:568
7. 03:29:568 (x) - This break time was a bit long,it was near 15 second.I prefer reduce the break.Since you were make a hard diff,so you can shorten the break time! it's fine for me.
   04:07:402 (2) - Probably remove this timing section and this note?because the "s" sound is a tad soft(near unheard)so I strongly suggest you remove this.04:06:272 - end at here is fine for me. once again, i want to leave this note ;___;

That's it!Good luck. thanks a bunch. :)

Hellzero wrote:

Normal
00:21:234 (6) - i think this look better yup
03:15:957 (5) - move little down? imo look nicer ^^ yup
thanks. :)

• • 01:06:512 (3) - Flip this slider vertically
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:35:401 (3) - ^

• • Slider Tick Rate: 1

xxheroxx wrote:

[Normal]

• • 01:06:512 (3) - Flip this slider vertically yup, good idea :3
  • 02:35:401 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

• • Slider Tick Rate: 1 no

Also, replace the soft-sliderslide in your folder with this one: http://puu.sh/4LxA AWESOME. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH ♥


Beautiful song and nice map, good job~ thanks a bunch for surprise mod, for that hitsound especially :3