Ami Tokito - Sentimental Generation (TV size)

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Topic Starter
zz-e
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 December 2016 at 18:24:58

Artist: Ami Tokito
Title: Sentimental Generation (TV size)
Source: School Rumble 2
Tags: zz-e Dark Kuroha School Rumble opening TV size
BPM: 142
Filesize: 7957kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dark Kuroha's Hyper (4.51 stars, 363 notes)
  2. Insane (4.04 stars, 426 notes)
  3. Tim's Version (3.13 stars, 240 notes)


Download: Ami Tokito - Sentimental Generation (TV size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map!

Hard by me done  
Insane by me done 
Hyper by Dark Kuroha done 



Edit:
The Tim's Version is finished!
The timing should be better now, thank to Dark Kuroha.
Hyper guest difficulty by Dark Kuroha added.
Added Tags.
Minor adjustments
Topic Starter
zz-e
I just played it with a friend (40k rank) and he said the patterns are pretty cool but the timing is off, so if someone can help me with that - much appreciated!
Dark Kuroha
BPM should be 142 / 71 (Choose one), and the offset (for me) is suitable for 600 8-)

Edit: Seems 600 is better, because i dont want to T R I G G E R other people's OCD disease xD
Dark Kuroha
Also.... The title should be Sentimental Generation (TV Size)
Topic Starter
zz-e

Dark Kuroha wrote:

Also.... The title should be Sentimental Generation (TV Size)
Changed the title and added your difficulty. Will change offset sometime later.


Dark Kuroha's Hyper;
00:12:431 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I find this part rather confusing in terms of speed, but it might be just because I have trouble adjusting.
00:17:501 (1,2,3) - Please make the sliders either both overlapping or neither (my preference would be neither).
00:30:600 (6,7,1) - Adjust slider 7 one full block larger (5 horizontal, 3 vertical) like slider 6. That way they are more geometrical beautifully positioned. Optional: move slider 1 so that it touches slider 7.
00:42:219 (2) - Don't you think the second circle should be in either in line with (4,6) or spaced out correctly against (1) ?
01:21:832 (2) - The stream would be more fluent if the second circle is posiitioned slightly higher. (I like this streamy part btw)


Overall, I really liked your difficulty :)

Edit: Clarification
Second Edit: BPM note
Third Edit: BPM -> Offset
Dark Kuroha

zz-e wrote:

Dark Kuroha wrote:

Also.... The title should be Sentimental Generation (TV Size)
Changed the title and added your difficulty. Will change offset sometime later.


Dark Kuroha's Hyper;
00:12:431 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I find this part rather confusing in terms of speed, but it might be just because I have trouble adjusting.
00:17:501 (1,2,3) - Please make the sliders either both overlapping or neither (my preference would be neither).
00:30:600 (6,7,1) - Adjust slider 7 one full block larger (5 horizontal, 3 vertical) like slider 6. That way they are more geometrical beautifully positioned. Optional: move slider 1 so that it touches slider 7.
00:42:219 (2) - Don't you think the second circle should be in either in line with (4,6) or spaced out correctly against (1) ?
01:21:832 (2) - The stream would be more fluent if the second circle is posiitioned slightly higher. (I like this streamy part btw)


Overall, I really liked your difficulty :)

Edit: Clarification
Second Edit: BPM note
Third Edit: BPM -> Offset
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Edit Log: 1.01

00:12:431 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I find this part rather confusing in terms of speed, but it might be just because I have trouble adjusting.
Well, listen to the beat carefully. In drums, it often called syncopation. Nothing wrongs (for me lol)

00:17:501 (1,2,3) - Please make the sliders either both overlapping or neither (my preference would be neither).
yeah i find this is disgusting (i kinda hate it too well) im planning to change it later

00:30:600 (6,7,1) - Adjust slider 7 one full block larger (5 horizontal, 3 vertical) like slider 6. That way they are more geometrical beautifully positioned.
i dont get it, i'd rather you send me the edited .osz to me...

00:42:219 (2) - Don't you think the second circle should be in either in line with (4,6) or spaced out correctly against (1) ?
Yeah, you can find something like this in this beatmap on the ending of Guest Diff Colab and i think its normal :/

01:21:832 (2) - The stream would be more fluent if the second circle is posiitioned slightly higher. (I like this streamy part btw)
Well take it higher then. I think random positioning is more harder, and we know asian ppl are CRAZY. they can almost play any beatmap w/ their pentab xD
Topic Starter
zz-e
I left the syncopation part the same (even though I don't hear it in the song) and the ugly slider. But I made some changes with the other points. The offset is changed for my beatmaps.


Dark Kuroha wrote:

00:30:600 (6,7,1) - Adjust slider 7 one full block larger (5 horizontal, 3 vertical) like slider 6. That way they are more geometrical beautifully positioned.
i dont get it, i'd rather you send me the edited .osz to me...
This is what I meant: https://gyazo.com/d58570b7bfd2e17c0df0be9762773a39. You can see it in the updated .osz too.

Dark Kuroha wrote:

00:42:219 (2) - Don't you think the second circle should be in either in line with (4,6) or spaced out correctly against (1) ?
Yeah, you can find something like this in this beatmap on the ending of Guest Diff Colab and i think its normal :/
Nah the spacing between 2 and 3 is too large. If you want to increase the spacing during the sequence, like the map you linked did, that's fine. But you're asking the player to make a small jump, than a very large, and than back to a normal jump.. I shifted the whole sequence 3-6 a bit to the right in the updated file. Now the second circle is in between circle 3 and 4, but the change in distance remains present. Take a look at it!

Dark Kuroha wrote:

01:21:832 (2) - The stream would be more fluent if the second circle is posiitioned slightly higher. (I like this streamy part btw)
Well take it higher then. I think random positioning is more harder, and we know asian ppl are CRAZY. they can almost play any beatmap w/ their pentab xD
Yeah asian people or not. Changed it.
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