it's preference, you can either use Meramiop or 凋叶棕 (=Diao ye zong)
circle or vocalist are both acceptable here according to current metadata rc
circle or vocalist are both acceptable here according to current metadata rc
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Diao ye zong feat. Meramipop - The Anonymous
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also,
Artist: 凋叶棕 feat. めらみぽっぷ or RD-Sounds feat. めらみぽっぷ
https://twitter.com/rdwithleaf/status/9 ... 2339969025
I recommend to use 凋叶棕 feat. めらみぽっぷ. Because it is more captures the essence of the game and the direction of the author.
Artist: 凋叶棕 feat. めらみぽっぷ or RD-Sounds feat. めらみぽっぷ
https://twitter.com/rdwithleaf/status/9 ... 2339969025
I recommend to use 凋叶棕 feat. めらみぽっぷ. Because it is more captures the essence of the game and the direction of the author.
Topic Starter
Hi, I will change artist to 凋叶棕 next time i update ^^Lama Poluna wrote:
also,
Artist: 凋叶棕 feat. めらみぽっぷ or RD-Sounds feat. めらみぽっぷ
https://twitter.com/rdwithleaf/status/9 ... 2339969025
I recommend to use 凋叶棕 feat. めらみぽっぷ. Because it is more captures the essence of the game and the direction of the author.
But is it Diao Ye Zong or Diao ye zong or RD-Sounds in romanized artist?
Topic Starter
i might change the artist back to merami since i prefer so
ok, keeping the artist name like lfj's https://osu.ppy.sh/s/628765
gotta avoid every dq, gals ( :
Lasse wrote:
kin
01:08:011 (3) - what is this even mapping everything is on white tick after it
1/4 later is the hit hat, the blue tick here is mapped on the kick
thanks for mod owoIceKalt wrote:
o/
[Neraidaphobia]
- 00:51:573 (4,6) - that overlap choice is kinda random to me - maybe make it the same as 00:52:395 (7,8) - so it looks like this: https://puu.sh/y5aRM/4037c698e1.png it basically was a perfect stack, but I had to change it in order to make it rankable
- 01:19:004 (1) - white anchors wtflovely ~
recheck
:thinking:
05:03:883 - inconsistent timing line settings
kin
01:09:234 (4,1) - this seems unreasonably harsh movement wise for a rather slow part, spacing together with breaking movement so much on sliderbody is ??
asaiga
01:43:035 (4) - wouldnt it make more sense to start stream from here if you wanted to follow the high pitched thing
kiai is way nicer than before now
04:33:789 (3) - add some curve to this to make it look more fitting with your other shapes here?, same for 04:34:097 (1,3) - that part just looks a bit out of place with other visuals. maybe something likehttps://i.imgur.com/8ZGlHgo.jpg which basically plays the same as what you have right now
yea
:thinking:
05:03:883 - inconsistent timing line settings
kin
01:09:234 (4,1) - this seems unreasonably harsh movement wise for a rather slow part, spacing together with breaking movement so much on sliderbody is ??
asaiga
01:43:035 (4) - wouldnt it make more sense to start stream from here if you wanted to follow the high pitched thing
kiai is way nicer than before now
04:33:789 (3) - add some curve to this to make it look more fitting with your other shapes here?, same for 04:34:097 (1,3) - that part just looks a bit out of place with other visuals. maybe something likehttps://i.imgur.com/8ZGlHgo.jpg which basically plays the same as what you have right now
yea
Topic Starter
Lasse wrote:
recheck
:thinking: removed unused files
05:03:883 - inconsistent timing line settings fixed
kin
01:09:234 (4,1) - this seems unreasonably harsh movement wise for a rather slow part, spacing together with breaking movement so much on sliderbody is ?? fixed spacing&angle
asaiga
01:43:035 (4) - wouldnt it make more sense to start stream from here if you wanted to follow the high pitched thing
kiai is way nicer than before now ok, made 2 circles
04:33:789 (3) - add some curve to this to make it look more fitting with your other shapes here?, same for 04:34:097 (1,3) - that part just looks a bit out of place with other visuals. maybe something likehttps://i.imgur.com/8ZGlHgo.jpg which basically plays the same as what you have right now adjusted shapes
yea agree
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[Asaiga]
[karen]
- 01:38:926 (1) - This slider is completely meh and disconnected from the subsequent two. 01:39:748 (2,3) - These two other than look better by their own, have this sweet overlap connect, I suggest trying something with the initial link to connect it with the two by some form of overlapping or blanketing. The current shape doesn't seem appealing to me because it has crude lines, nothing to come in handy for blanketing other objects around it. https://i.imgur.com/s2LWoV1.jpg generally bending something inwards the slider feels good 01:40:570 (3) - or you can just make a curve like this one on the final part of it, not both the start and the end if its not symmetrical.
- 01:42:419 (1,2,3) - This really calls for a triangle since (2) was rotated about 110 degrees (which reminds of 120). Now the map just has 3 chaotically placed sliders without any similar rotation symmetry or angle. Other than aesthetics, the sliders lead to objects further in timeline in different kind of ways. So idk just make a 120 degree rotation triangle classic pattern I suppose?
- 04:27:213 (4,6) - Making them parallel or inversed should look much better. https://i.imgur.com/RJrmfFw.jpg can't you just rotate the big slider by 5 degrees and make the other slider parallel to it which will also lead better to 04:27:419 (5) - .
- 04:52:898 (1,2,3) - Having them in some different shape, triangles perhaps, will leave a much better taste since this is a different layer in a different part. Never in the map have there been such cute guitar hits, therefore I suggest to emphasize them with shape, they are nothing liek the vocals in the kiais. Perhaps something like this? https://i.imgur.com/LfS2Ry2.jpg
[karen]
- 03:23:309 (4,5,6,7,1) - This just doesn't seem to fit. 03:23:515 (6) - Doesn't sound distinct at all and this is a large leap from the previous 2stack. 03:25:261 (4,1) - Here you don't emphasize based on the snare, and also both cases don't really call for a stream jump at all, it is a peaceful section. 03:26:700 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - soon after you don't use it all, which is the correct choice OwO.
- 03:28:446 (2) - By making this into a 1/4 slider you will give larger emphasis to the 5stack, and have the pattern a bit easier which should fit the overall tone of the section, it is not intense nearly as the kiai parts. 03:28:549 - Doesn't sound audible too.
- 03:42:419 (3,1) - This is way too unusual and not really fitting. Much better alternative would be to jump to 03:42:625 (2) - which is a white tick and also a loud guitar, it's much more rhythmically plausible to jump on that then on the unexpected raise of pitch on the guitar.
- 00:48:994 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Think the section is overall too peaceful for that, you can tone it down a bit my making 00:49:303 (1) - be spaced from 00:49:200 (3) - like (3) from (1) https://i.imgur.com/KGKLqqe.jpg.
- 01:14:679 (5) - Noticeable piano pitch intensity raises here rather than where you NCed. I suggest increasing the spacing starting from here instead, it is also more rhythmically correct since it's on a white tick, main beat in the song.
Topic Starter
MaridiuS wrote:
[Asaiga]
- 01:38:926 (1) - This slider is completely meh and disconnected from the subsequent two. 01:39:748 (2,3) - These two other than look better by their own, have this sweet overlap connect, I suggest trying something with the initial link to connect it with the two by some form of overlapping or blanketing. The current shape doesn't seem appealing to me because it has crude lines, nothing to come in handy for blanketing other objects around it. https://i.imgur.com/s2LWoV1.jpg generally bending something inwards the slider feels good 01:40:570 (3) - or you can just make a curve like this one on the final part of it, not both the start and the end if its not symmetrical. I would bend slider(1) inwards but it wouldn't play that well. Because distance 1,2 would be too close compare to 2,3. Unless you want me to remake these sliders. Beside, the flow is good, it builds up vertically then jump to 2
- 01:42:419 (1,2,3) - This really calls for a triangle since (2) was rotated about 110 degrees (which reminds of 120) i dont think i used rotation tool, how do you know?. Now the map just has 3 chaotically placed sliders without any similar rotation symmetry or angle. Other than aesthetics, the sliders lead to objects further in timeline in different kind of ways. So idk just make a 120 degree rotation triangle classic pattern I suppose? made them look neater but not 120 degree like you said cuz it would make the flow bad
- 04:27:213 (4,6) - Making them parallel or inversed should look much better. https://i.imgur.com/RJrmfFw.jpg can't you just rotate the big slider by 5 degrees and make the other slider parallel to it which will also lead better to 04:27:419 (5) - . they are now parallel but unlike suggestion a bit. I understand why you think 4,5 in the picture would connect better, but that's for general bpm. Have a look at this https://puu.sh/yEHF7/f5695591bb.jpg with my right-bend slider it would go well to the next slider, as for your suggestion, people might go further to the left which cause a sliderbreak. I'm not a physicist but tell me if i'm wrong
- 04:52:898 (1,2,3) - Having them in some different shape, triangles perhaps, will leave a much better taste since this is a different layer in a different part. Never in the map have there been such cute guitar hits, therefore I suggest to emphasize them with shape, they are nothing liek the vocals in the kiais. Perhaps something like this? https://i.imgur.com/LfS2Ry2.jpg fixed this part's pattern
We also had an irc talk about aesthetics some patterns were fixed, some were deemed irrelevant to fix meaning in the current map some concepts can't be applied, but I believe Asaiga will keep those things in mind for future mapping. Also I modded this half-asleep so when rechecking I will maybe point out bigger stuff too if I spot something. thank you thank you! you are so considerate
:thinking:
fixed all, also adjusted the flow of 03:43:446 (1,2,3,4) - this stream hope it's ok
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thanks for mod!MaridiuS wrote:
[kin]
- 00:48:994 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Think the section is overall too peaceful for that, you can tone it down a bit my making 00:49:303 (1) - be spaced from 00:49:200 (3) - like (3) from (1) https://i.imgur.com/KGKLqqe.jpg. it actually make less sense to start the spaced stream here 00:49:405 (2) - instead of here 00:49:303 (1) - . I will reduce the spacing between those a bit 00:49:303 (1,2,3) - ; but not gonna change 00:49:200 (3,1) -
- 01:14:679 (5) - Noticeable piano pitch intensity raises here rather than where you NCed. I suggest increasing the spacing starting from here instead, it is also more rhythmically correct since it's on a white tick, main beat in the song. without talking about pitch, you can clearly hear those piano note 01:14:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are different from those 01:14:885 (1,2,1) - . 01:14:679 (5) - is sure higher pitched, but not so different from 01:14:268 (1,2,3,4) - . However, you can clearly hear 01:14:885 (1,2,1) - is at least 1 octave lower than the other.
Oh well, checked some hitsounds irc and stuff. Sorry for shredding the bubble lasse, thanks for informing me how the procedure goes in detail.
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