NM as requested
[General]
Reconsider HP in all diffs, seems a bit low, my suggestion is HP+1 on all diffs
[Cup!!]
00:04:469 (1) - Feels a bit strange here, make this slider end at 00:05:219, or add a note at 00:05:344.
00:06:469 - 00:23:469 The density of notes is a bit too high for a Cup diff, you may consider remove some notes for several short breaks, such as 00:08:219 (5), 00:10:219 (5) and so on.
2nd kiai part same, reduce the density of notes a bit
[Salad!!]
00:04:469 (1) - Dash seems a bit larger than other dashes, reduce a bit?
00:05:344 (5) - ^
00:15:969 (2) - a bit far from the previous note, move to x:264
00:17:969 (2) - copy&paste
00:41:469 (1) - hmm actually I think removing this note will make the rhythm better
00:43:469 (1) - same on this, if you agree, I guess you can combine patterns like 00:33:344 (4,1) into 1 slider.
01:09:969 (4,5,1) - 2 dashes appear here, and I strongly suggest you cut down one of them into a walk.
01:14:969 (3,4) - I can understand your idea but the ds gets ambiguous here and hard to say it's a walk or a dash, my suggestion is to move 01:15:219 (4) to the same position as 01:14:719 (2).
[Platter!!]
00:03:969 (3,4) - Nearly edge dash here, considering the next jump is hyper jump, I'll say you should reduce ds a bit.
00:05:969 (3,4) - same here
00:38:969 (3,4) - very easy to miss here, a sudden jump, you may just make them closer and easier to catch. Something like 00:36:969 (3,4).
00:43:969 (4,5) - same reason as the 1st suggestion
00:57:344 (5,6,7,1) - Imo the hypers look a bit weird for a platter diff, you may cut the ds down or consider another pattern.
01:11:719 (2,3) - can be catched without pressing dash, add some ds
[Rain!!]
00:25:344 (5) - x:160 to improve the flow
00:26:344 (5) - x:352
01:04:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ds get larger gradually?
[Overdose!!]
00:07:719 (3) - x:48 to curve the stream
00:09:719 (3) - x:472
00:11:094 (4) - x:176 curve in another direction
00:12:219 (5) - x:312
00:15:719 (3) - x:48 again
00:17:719 (3) - ^ seems that there're still some similar flows in the later kiai parts, not going to mention them all.
00:22:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - tbh I think this is a little hard, especially 00:23:344 (8,1) since it just ends long continuous jumps. At least 00:23:344 (8,1) needs to be reduced.
That's all from me, good luck~
[General]
Reconsider HP in all diffs, seems a bit low, my suggestion is HP+1 on all diffs
[Cup!!]
00:04:469 (1) - Feels a bit strange here, make this slider end at 00:05:219, or add a note at 00:05:344.
00:06:469 - 00:23:469 The density of notes is a bit too high for a Cup diff, you may consider remove some notes for several short breaks, such as 00:08:219 (5), 00:10:219 (5) and so on.
2nd kiai part same, reduce the density of notes a bit
[Salad!!]
00:04:469 (1) - Dash seems a bit larger than other dashes, reduce a bit?
00:05:344 (5) - ^
00:15:969 (2) - a bit far from the previous note, move to x:264
00:17:969 (2) - copy&paste
00:41:469 (1) - hmm actually I think removing this note will make the rhythm better
00:43:469 (1) - same on this, if you agree, I guess you can combine patterns like 00:33:344 (4,1) into 1 slider.
01:09:969 (4,5,1) - 2 dashes appear here, and I strongly suggest you cut down one of them into a walk.
01:14:969 (3,4) - I can understand your idea but the ds gets ambiguous here and hard to say it's a walk or a dash, my suggestion is to move 01:15:219 (4) to the same position as 01:14:719 (2).
[Platter!!]
00:03:969 (3,4) - Nearly edge dash here, considering the next jump is hyper jump, I'll say you should reduce ds a bit.
00:05:969 (3,4) - same here
00:38:969 (3,4) - very easy to miss here, a sudden jump, you may just make them closer and easier to catch. Something like 00:36:969 (3,4).
00:43:969 (4,5) - same reason as the 1st suggestion
00:57:344 (5,6,7,1) - Imo the hypers look a bit weird for a platter diff, you may cut the ds down or consider another pattern.
01:11:719 (2,3) - can be catched without pressing dash, add some ds
[Rain!!]
00:25:344 (5) - x:160 to improve the flow
00:26:344 (5) - x:352
01:04:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ds get larger gradually?
[Overdose!!]
00:07:719 (3) - x:48 to curve the stream
00:09:719 (3) - x:472
00:11:094 (4) - x:176 curve in another direction
00:12:219 (5) - x:312
00:15:719 (3) - x:48 again
00:17:719 (3) - ^ seems that there're still some similar flows in the later kiai parts, not going to mention them all.
00:22:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - tbh I think this is a little hard, especially 00:23:344 (8,1) since it just ends long continuous jumps. At least 00:23:344 (8,1) needs to be reduced.
That's all from me, good luck~