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Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-Bu - Best FriendS -TV Size-

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zhuxiaoyan
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Osuology
[Insane!]
00:07:722 (1,2) - OK so I think you should move this closer to the previous slider, since the rhythm is kinda hard to hear, it would be better to show that quietness by making spacing less between the 1 and the previous slider.

00:40:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Rhythm is very dense and filled with mostly hitcircles. This doesn't really fit in the section, provided this is an energy breakdown and shouldn't be building up energy like this pattern does.

00:44:624 (5,6) - Kinda the same as above, but I think these don't really deserve to be here as hit circles, rather make the 4 a long slider stretching to 6.

00:45:268 (10) - Overmapped to be honest, I don't think there is a note here. And I think having a slider from the 9 to the next 1 would be most beneficial for this section.

01:20:146 (5) - Probably would feel better if you slowly took down volume throughout the slider.

[Yuzuriha insane]
00:20:330 (1,3) - Why overlap these? Doesn't really fit this section I think, aesthetics don't overlap here.

Pretty good other than that

[Hard! <insert lenny face>]
01:01:925 (2) - Distance between previous and next objects is off by about 0.12x which I think is a pretty noticeable change.


Normal had nothing so

Good luck with this map!
Shiirn
tiny irc mod that doesnt cover anything but insane and a few nitpicks cuz this is a wip map



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15:29 Shiirn: 00:00:821 (5) - replace with note at start and ending, the triple has a strong enough noise on the start to where a sliderstart doesn't do it justice
15:30 Frostwich: what diff
15:30 *Shiirn is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1149140 Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-Bu - Best FriendS -TV Size- [Insane!]]
15:30 Shiirn: only doing insane
15:30 Frostwich: ok
15:30 Frostwich: sure
15:30 Shiirn: 00:04:133 (1,2) - here you just end things off but 00:07:078 (1,1) - is super emphasize
15:30 Shiirn: do lesser emphasis for the first 1,2
15:30 Shiirn: 00:07:722 (1) - r5emove nce
15:31 Shiirn: 00:35:054 (1,2) - swap nc
15:32 Frostwich: k
15:32 Shiirn: 00:39:103 (5) - put closer to 00:38:366 (3) -
15:32 Shiirn: maybe make 00:39:471 (1) - blanket it
15:32 Shiirn: but right now u gave up rotational flow
15:32 Shiirn: it jerks up and down
15:33 Frostwich: i think that 00:39:103 (5) - is fine where it is
15:37 Shiirn: whatever
15:37 Shiirn: not gonna bother arguing
15:38 Shiirn: 01:25:023 (1,1) - ew
15:38 Shiirn: 01:25:023 (1) - remove this
15:38 Shiirn: 01:25:667 - put a note here
15:38 Shiirn: start spinner after it
15:38 Shiirn: ez
Topic Starter
zhuxiaoyan

Osuology wrote:

[Insane!]
00:07:722 (1,2) - OK so I think you should move this closer to the previous slider, since the rhythm is kinda hard to hear, it would be better to show that quietness by making spacing less between the 1 and the previous slider. i based this map off of high spaced 3/4 sliders to circle

00:40:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Rhythm is very dense and filled with mostly hitcircles. This doesn't really fit in the section, provided this is an energy breakdown and shouldn't be building up energy like this pattern does. the 1234 used to emphasize vocals in that section and since 00:41:679 (1) - is a new instrument used just hitcircles to emphasize the instruments added in

00:44:624 (5,6) - Kinda the same as above, but I think these don't really deserve to be here as hit circles, rather make the 4 a long slider stretching to 6. emphasis on that instrument used by using hitcricles

00:45:268 (10) - Overmapped to be honest, I don't think there is a note here. And I think having a slider from the 9 to the next 1 would be most beneficial for this section. yes there is a note here and section is hitcircle heavy to build intensity to the jumps

01:20:146 (5) - Probably would feel better if you slowly took down volume throughout the slider. okey dokey

[Yuzuriha insane]
00:20:330 (1,3) - Why overlap these? Doesn't really fit this section I think, aesthetics don't overlap here.

Pretty good other than that

[Hard! <insert lenny face>]
01:01:925 (2) - Distance between previous and next objects is off by about 0.12x which I think is a pretty noticeable change. its the stack thats why


Normal had nothing so

Good luck with this map!
Karen
Insane!
  1. 00:30:820 (2,3) - here's a different part with vocals so i think you should make something different with 00:30:452 (7,1) -
  2. 01:03:949 - add circle, like 01:06:894 (2) - this for consistency
  3. 01:20:146 (5) - a long kickslider is pretty boring, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6895573
  4. 01:25:713 - make this clickable
  5. i don't know how to mod :c
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