1. Death (6,79 stars, 1741 notes)

Flyline wrote:

Hi!

Even though I'm not a top mapper, but something I can say

MOD

02:02:961 (1) - Spiner end nah, it ends later
02:03:354 (2) - need 1 note better to leave empty for emphasis on 02:03:197 (1) -
02:31:469 (7,8) - Not really sure about this spacing ye, wasn't intended to be this big anyway lol
05:15:448 (7,8,9) - Try to do something like I wanna keep the gap, but you made me notice I missed a note!

Toshino Kyoko wrote:

Hi Hi ! M4M :3

Life Deathxd

- 00:18:590 (1,2,3) - I found those sliders weird, butr I'm actually okay with them cause they represent a change in the music, maybe make them less sharp ? but I like them :V
- 00:20:474 (2,3,4,5) - I think you should stack them to indicate it's a 1/4 slider stream, they can be read as kick sliders imo nah it's fine, haven't seen anyone misread that
- 01:10:422 (1,3) - Maybe try to not overlap those to make it looks better looks fine as it is
- 01:32:412 - 01:37:438 - Those sounds here are very noticable, I know you don't prioritize the drum but I think you souldn't ignore them ignoring them puts more emphasis on the dominant sound
- 02:08:224 (1,2) - Maybe stack them because with the NC and the same spacing as the other circle, it can be read a a 1/2 gap 02:03:197 (1,2) - already "warns" about that
- 02:22:987 (6,7,8,9,1) - I don't here a particular sound that justify the shape of that stream (I may be deaf) probably not that easy to hear but it's there
- 02:51:260 (2,3,4) - This stack is gonna be read as a triple because of the intensity of the music, maybe make them like that there are like no triples in the entire map, so the player won't misread this
- 03:23:616 (7) - NC here ye
- 03:48:747 (1) - weird slider shape, no really reason to change slider shape here imo never liked it anyway
- 04:51:260 (2,3,4,5,1) - Weird stream, does fit the song here though, maybe put them a little closer so it doesn't suprise the player that much nerfed it a tiny bit

And that's it ! Just do the hitsounds (I know, it's boring and everything), it was not a big mod and I tried to respect as much as possible what you're trying to express. I tried hitsounding and failed
Anyway, I hope this was usefull, Good Luck with mapping and have a Nice Day ! :3 Thanks, you too!

brdzxh wrote:

HELLO

00:19:846 (1,2,1) - spacing not necessary
00:20:160 (1) - looks kinda awkward
00:20:474 (2,3,4,5) - mby change direction horizontally
00:22:045 (5) - nc
00:22:987 (2) - different slidershape because different sound?
00:23:302 (1,2,3,4) - mby face inwards
00:23:930 (5) - shape looks awkward so the transition to 00:24:244 (1) - doesnt look as good
00:26:757 (1,2,3,4) - straight line mby
00:27:071 (5) - nc
00:29:898 (5,6) - change directio mby= :-)
00:30:841 (7) - nc
00:32:097 (5) - nc?
00:38:694 (5) - nc
00:38:694 (5,6) - less spacing
00:49:218 and 00:49:532 should be clickable; mby slow sliders or low volume idk
00:50:003 (2,3,4,5,1) - gradually increasing spacing?
00:59:584 (1) - nc
01:02:097 (4,1,2) - stone hard
01:07:909 (1,2,3,4) - some sort of star pattern could be nice here since sounds are kinda differnet meanwhile patterns are similar
01:10:108 (6,7) - ctrl+g individually
01:11:993 (3,4) - mby not repeat because change in the music
not gonna point out more in sections like these because you can see for yourself :d
01:27:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - felt kinda awkward to play
01:28:799 - should be clickable
01:29:427 - ^
and some more in the same part
01:35:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - :weary: :fist:
01:39:637 (1,2,3,4) - spacing :rage: neckbreak heaven FeelsGoodMan
02:13:563 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i see where ur coming from but mby gradually increasing jumps in this whole section can help to improve emphasis
02:21:731 (13,14) - nc first note note and mby put them closer
02:33:040 (1,2) - ok this time :9
02:35:867 (5) - mby nc
02:37:752 (5) - nc
02:51:260 (2,3) - not sure if I would have stacked them
02:53:145 (5) - ctrl+g
02:53:302 (6) - ctrl+g and mby make it point more towards 02:53:459 (1) -
02:55:658 (4) - mby put singles here :thinking:
03:03:904 (6) - this seems a bit out of place
03:04:453 (13,14) - same as before :thunknig:
03:05:553 (6,7,8) - this angle feels weird to play
03:09:794 (7) - nc - mby put more ncs in this section because there are big changes in the music and you might want to put more emphasis on them
03:44:663 (5,6) - :thinkignasjhduigri:
03:52:202 (1,2) - i think you should ctrl+g these individually because they were kinda awkard to paly IDK and the rest of these
03:55:029 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing mby?
04:02:254 (1,2) - this is good shit SIGN ME THE FUCK UP
04:07:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i guess this is fine or is it :thoning;
04:08:851 (1) - mby make similar to 04:09:480 (4) -
04:15:134 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing? pOgcghamp
04:28:014 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i dont think this is good shti for EPIC part
04:51:260 (2,3,4,5) - ok, but maybe spiral is better
05:05:082 (13,14) - hehe
05:07:909 (7) - im think NC
05:10:422 (7) - ^ and further into the section
05:16:390 (2,3,4,5) - bigger spacing is possible because sound is dank
05:46:548 (1) - out of grid FeelsRageMan

i got you some stuff to look at))))))))

Yoshino-- wrote:

brdzxh wrote:

HELLO

00:19:846 (1,2,1) - spacing not necessary
00:20:160 (1) - looks kinda awkward
00:20:474 (2,3,4,5) - mby change direction horizontally
00:22:045 (5) - nc
00:22:987 (2) - different slidershape because different sound?
00:23:302 (1,2,3,4) - mby face inwards
00:23:930 (5) - shape looks awkward so the transition to 00:24:244 (1) - doesnt look as good
00:26:757 (1,2,3,4) - straight line mby
00:27:071 (5) - nc
00:29:898 (5,6) - change directio mby= :-)
00:30:841 (7) - nc
00:32:097 (5) - nc?
00:38:694 (5) - nc
00:38:694 (5,6) - less spacing
00:49:218 and 00:49:532 should be clickable; mby slow sliders or low volume idk
00:50:003 (2,3,4,5,1) - gradually increasing spacing?
00:59:584 (1) - nc
01:02:097 (4,1,2) - stone hard
01:07:909 (1,2,3,4) - some sort of star pattern could be nice here since sounds are kinda differnet meanwhile patterns are similar
01:10:108 (6,7) - ctrl+g individually
01:11:993 (3,4) - mby not repeat because change in the music
not gonna point out more in sections like these because you can see for yourself :d
01:27:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - felt kinda awkward to play
01:28:799 - should be clickable
01:29:427 - ^
and some more in the same part
01:35:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - :weary: :fist:
01:39:637 (1,2,3,4) - spacing :rage: neckbreak heaven FeelsGoodMan
02:13:563 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i see where ur coming from but mby gradually increasing jumps in this whole section can help to improve emphasis
02:21:731 (13,14) - nc first note note and mby put them closer
02:33:040 (1,2) - ok this time :9
02:35:867 (5) - mby nc
02:37:752 (5) - nc
02:51:260 (2,3) - not sure if I would have stacked them
02:53:145 (5) - ctrl+g
02:53:302 (6) - ctrl+g and mby make it point more towards 02:53:459 (1) -
02:55:658 (4) - mby put singles here :thinking:
03:03:904 (6) - this seems a bit out of place
03:04:453 (13,14) - same as before :thunknig:
03:05:553 (6,7,8) - this angle feels weird to play
03:09:794 (7) - nc - mby put more ncs in this section because there are big changes in the music and you might want to put more emphasis on them
03:44:663 (5,6) - :thinkignasjhduigri:
03:52:202 (1,2) - i think you should ctrl+g these individually because they were kinda awkard to paly IDK and the rest of these
03:55:029 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing mby?
04:02:254 (1,2) - this is good shit SIGN ME THE FUCK UP
04:07:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i guess this is fine or is it :thoning;
04:08:851 (1) - mby make similar to 04:09:480 (4) -
04:15:134 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing? pOgcghamp
04:28:014 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i dont think this is good shti for EPIC part
04:51:260 (2,3,4,5) - ok, but maybe spiral is better
05:05:082 (13,14) - hehe
05:07:909 (7) - im think NC
05:10:422 (7) - ^ and further into the section
05:16:390 (2,3,4,5) - bigger spacing is possible because sound is dank
05:46:548 (1) - out of grid FeelsRageMan

i got you some stuff to look at))))))))

fixed all

brdzxh wrote:

HELLO

00:19:846 (1,2,1) - spacing not necessary emphasis
00:20:160 (1) - looks kinda awkward subjective
00:20:474 (2,3,4,5) - mby change direction horizontally no
00:22:045 (5) - nc no
00:22:987 (2) - different slidershape because different sound? im not very creative
00:23:302 (1,2,3,4) - mby face inwards good idea but I like this more
00:27:071 (5) - nc no
00:32:097 (5) - nc? no
00:38:694 (5) - nc no
00:38:694 (5,6) - less spacing plays fine
00:49:218 and 00:49:532 should be clickable; mby slow sliders or low volume idk I like it better empty
00:50:003 (2,3,4,5,1) - gradually increasing spacing? looks messy
01:07:909 (1,2,3,4) - some sort of star pattern could be nice here since sounds are kinda differnet meanwhile patterns are similar song is repetitive here and so is the pattern
01:10:108 (6,7) - ctrl+g individually kills spacing
01:11:993 (3,4) - mby not repeat because change in the music it's the same sound as 01:11:679 (1,2) -
not gonna point out more in sections like these because you can see for yourself :d
01:27:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - felt kinda awkward to play plays fine to me
01:28:799 - should be clickable did something
01:29:427 - ^ this is better to leave empty though, since it puts emphasis on 01:29:270 (3) -
and some more in the same part ^
01:39:637 (1,2,3,4) - spacing :rage: neckbreak heaven FeelsGoodMan it's 1/3, plays fine
02:21:731 (13,14) - nc first note note and mby put them closer no
02:51:260 (2,3) - not sure if I would have stacked them explained in previous mod
02:53:145 (5) - ctrl+g no
02:53:302 (6) - ctrl+g and mby make it point more towards 02:53:459 (1) - no
03:04:453 (13,14) - same as before :thunknig: still no
03:55:029 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing mby? no
04:15:134 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing? pOgcghamp no
04:28:014 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i dont think this is good shti for EPIC part cant really do much here
04:51:260 (2,3,4,5) - ok, but maybe spiral is better no
05:07:909 (7) - im think NC no
05:10:422 (7) - ^ and further into the section no
05:16:390 (2,3,4,5) - bigger spacing is possible because sound is dank same as before
05:46:548 (1) - out of grid FeelsRageMan but not out of playfield xd

i got you some stuff to look at))))))))

Skeep wrote:

very extensive and in depth mod that will make you reflect on your life decisions

00:44:977 (2,3,4) - change to this roflmao