KuraiPettan wrote:

General
- Enable the countdown ?

Easy
- It's weird that the HP drain is higher than the approach rate, Low the HP drain by 1 tick and increase the AR by tick would be better imo. (And i AR 3 will make the map more readable.)
00:24:483 (4) - This circle is a bit too close from the previous slider
01:28:483 (3) - This circle is a bit hidded by (2) and by the sliderfollowcircle, so you should move it
01:56:983 (1) - Remove whistle, Having 2 whistle consecutively like that sounds kinda ugly
02:00:983 (1) - For this whistle too

Normal
Fine.

Hard
00:12:483 (1) - A bit close from (5), Move 1 grid up and 1 grid right
00:50:983 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - For all of this kind of pattern, it should have a note 1/4 earlier from the first circle (Ex : Here it should have a note at 00:50:858.) But I guess it's fine, streams with 4 notes are not very cool :/ So add a note 1/4 earlier of all this kind of pattern if you think it's nice.

I guess it's all :3
Star~

y u c a wrote:

hi :3

Easy

00:14:983 (4) - new combo
01:24:983 (5) - ^
01:26:483 (1) - remove new combo
01:29:483 (5) - new combo



Normal

00:32:983 (7) - new combo
00:33:483 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:983 (1)~01:00:483 (6),01:37:483 (1)~end- same rhythm pattern are not fun for play


Hard


00:26:983 (1)~00:40:483 (4) - same rhythm pattern are not fun for play
00:46:983 (4) - new combo
00:51:233 (3) - add whistle
00:51:733 (3) - ^
00:52:233 (3) - ^
00:52:733 (3) - ^
00:55:233 (3) - ^
00:55:733 (3) - ^
00:56:233 (3) - ^
00:56:733 (3) - ^
00:59:233 (3) - ^
00:59:733 (3) - ^
01:00:233 (3) - ^
01:00:733 (3) - ^
(you can use same pattern at other place)
01:12:983 (1)~01:20:483 (4) - same rhythm pattern are not fun for play
01:20:983 (5) - new combo
01:23:983 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:983 (3) - new combo

good luck

Lanttu wrote:

[Easy]
00:10:983 (3) - New combo?
00:18:983 (5) - ^
00:29:483 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for an easiest diff... ;u;
00:49:483 (1) - ^
01:24:983 (5) - Maybe new combo?
01:37:483 (1) - Too soon after spinner again.
01:53:483 (1) - ^

Other than that, looked good. Starred~ o/

Behonkiss wrote:

Overall, it might help to add some claps, unless you avoided them on purpose.

Normal:
- 00:13:983 (2,3,4): 3 and 4 would be good spots for claps, and there are other 3-circle stacked notes that the same would apply to.
- 00:48:733: Maybe add a circle with a new combo here (And make the one after it a normal circle instead of another new combo), since the melody picks up at this spot.
- 00:56:983 (1): Add a finish, maybe?

No problems with Easy & Hard. Nice job.

Resize your BG to 1024 x 768 :<

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Your BG is 4 pixels too wide, I don't care but someone else might =P
-- Claps?

Easy:

01:53:483 (1,2) - Use a slider here imo, the note can be hard to hit straight after a spinner. Or delete and put a note at 01:53:983

Normal:

Claps at the start of the map but no where else? Maybe use claps in other places or just remove the claps at the start? Other than that it's fine.

Hard:

-- Slider tick rate 2.

01:37:483 (1) - Put this in the center? Rearrange the notes after if you do this.
01:49:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you make some kind of pattern here? The notes seem randomly placed.

The map could have done with a custom claps and some different pattern variations imo xD

Star, good luck.

fartownik wrote:

General:

- Combo colors look like a morning poop D:


[Hard]

00:12:483 (1,3) - Swap new combos.
00:15:983 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:51:483 (1,1,1) - ^
00:55:483 (1,1,1) - ^
00:59:483 (1,1,1) - ^
01:01:983 (1) - ^
01:39:483 (1,1,1) - ^
01:43:483 (1,1,1) - ^
01:55:483 (1,1,1) - ^
01:59:483 (1,1,1) - ^

[Normal]

Overdone of new combos, especially in the beggining.


[Easy]

Same thing with combos.

Seriously, nothing more than new combos, because there isn't anything more. The map is just FINE.
But 'fine' doesn't mean 'fun', the map is just... boring. Playing exactly same pattern for like 8 times is not very interesting. Also the hitsound variety is not wide.

Giorgos wrote:

Hello,sorry for late modding.

General:
In your tags what does 'itg' mean?

Easy:
01:22:983 - put this slider a bit left and up,because it's not symmetrical with the previous slider.
01:53:483 - that's a bad idea to put a circle right after the spinner,because for new players this could be hard. So,just move this circle in: - 01:53:983. And one more advice for future - in easy difficulty always try to place circles and sliders in center right after spinners,because it's much easier for new players to play if all notes after spinners are close to center.
Nice difficulty,pretty easy - just 1 thing - try to make a better shape for sliders,because most of them are not symmetrical and that's why they don't look good :/ Take a look at this topic to learn how to make nice sliders - viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Normal:
Very low difference in Slider Velocity between 'Easy' and 'Normal' difficulty. It's bad..increase your Slider Velocity and put at least 1,3! And don't forget that after you change Slider Velocity,some of your sliders may become shorter..so,recheck all sliders then.
Approach Rate 6 is pretty big for 'Normal' difficulty,so I'd put 5.

Hard:
As I said before,it's better to increase your Slider Velocity here too. Put 1,6 or 1,5. And don't forget to recheck all sliders then.
Put Overall Difficulty 6?
With such Distance Spacing this difficulty doesn't look good,because all notes are too close to each other :/ Use 1,1 or 1,2 Distance Spacing - it looks much better then. And you don't use here all beats,so when I play it,it seems to me that it's 'Normal+' difficulty. Put more beats - make it harder.

Well,that's all! Star

RandomJibberish wrote:

bloop bloop bloop

General
Tick 2 on all diffs
I'd probably set the preview point to just before the first chorus rather than the second, since then you still hear most of the song if it comes up on the main menu jukebox when you open osu!.

That's all. Call me back when this is done

EDIT: TURNITAWN

James2250 wrote:

-The timing seems odd at times, some parts sound late and some parts sound fine to me. I asked bliss for a quick double check and in the end we agreed try 989 (+6) Don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections
-Nazi: Your background is currently 1028x768 (The maximum allowed is 1024x768) I know there really isn't a big difference but I would just fix this for the sake of it being correct and it should only take 5 seconds
-Wikipedia and the other map ranked from this game calls it "In the Groove" You might want to look into how to capatilize the source quickly again just to make sure

Easy:
01:26:983 (1) - remove new combo to follow your previous patterns

Normal:
00:30:983 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:983 (3,1) - switch new combo (again follows the patterns up until now)

Hard:
You could change stuff like 00:50:983 (5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) around so they aren't always in a straight line just to keep it interesting
00:26:983 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is becoming pretty repetitive, it shouldn't need to be repeated 7+ times in a row. Try and think of some more creative pattern ideas
00:50:983 (5) - new combo to match the other stacks?
00:54:983 (5) - ^
00:58:983 (6) - ^ (same for the rest later on in the map)
01:23:983 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:983 (8) - new combo

In general everything flows pretty well. The main concern I have about the mapset at the moment is Hard repeats so many patterns over and over again without needing to. For the other difficulties this is fine but for a Hard I think you could think of some new things to do to keep it entertaining

Mogsworth wrote:

Not really seeing problems with the timing now. No other structural issues, either. Ranked.