S o r d a wrote:

thanks reqs

[overall]:

1. add tags Silver Bullet メーカーです

[Easy]:
Fine


[Normal]:

1. 00:45:099 (2) - 1grid up
2. 00:45:474 (3,4,5) - 2grid up
3. 00:59:724 (1) - Spacing

[MiLu's Hard]:

1. 00:32:536 (4,5) - 1grid left
2. 00:33:099 (1) - 1gird left and down
3. 01:01:974 (4) - move 01:01:786 -
4. 01:02:536 (x) - add note

[Suzully's Hard]:

1. 01:23:724 (3) - 見にくい? New combo
2. 01:23:911 (1) - Remove New combo

All diff nice map<3
already star'd T_T

Aleks719 wrote:

Hitsounds mod

Insane
00:09:474 (1) - add whistle to the start

Suzully's Hard
00:34:036 (4) - add whistle
00:34:224 (5) - remove whistle from the start
00:51:286 (2) - add whistle
00:57:286 (2) - ^
01:01:974 (7) - add whistle to the start

MiLu's Hard
00:52:224 (4,6) - try this:

SPOILER

01:26:724 (1) - add finish
01:27:286 (2,3) - add whistles
01:36:849 (3) - remove finish from the end

Normal
00:14:724 (1,2,3) - add whistles to the end
00:59:724 (1) - add whistle
01:01:224 (4) - add whistle to the start
01:17:724 (1) - add whistle
01:19:224 (5) - add whistle to the start

Easy
00:14:724 (1,2) - add whistles to the end
01:10:974 (4,1) - 3 finishes sounds bad. Remove finishes from slider, add whistles.
01:17:724 (1) - add whistle
01:22:974 (4,1) - as before

~Triple star~

Aleks719 wrote:

Suzully's Hard
00:34:036 (4) - add whistle nah
00:34:224 (5) - remove whistle from the start nah
00:51:286 (2) - add whistle added at (3)
00:57:286 (2) - ^ ^
01:01:974 (7) - add whistle to the start done~ also added at (3)

Kitsuneko wrote:

yay! yay!

KanaRin wrote:

Combination somebody! yey yey! www


~ KD star ~

Minty Gum wrote:

It seems like a good map so far, but here's a tiny bit of modding for Milu's Hard:
Spinner at 1:00L00 - Move it back a space
Green circles at 1:10:00 - I think when they say, "yay, yay," a finish would sound better but that's just my opinion. Also goes for 1:23:00.

Haha sorry i couldn't help a ton ^^ It just seems pretty good already and doesn't seem to have a lot of mistakes at all. Hope this gets ranked!

Lilac wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
This is more of an Insane. Rename it as such.

00:29:255 (6,7,8) - The beat placement and spacing of those three are very odd to play. I suggest changing it to a more readable pattern. Changed pattern~
00:30:849 (3,1) - I always think that this part here is a jump. Either put a note 1/2 in between them or remove the new combo. Put a note.

I'm not sure f there's actually anything else... I might have a look later.

Lilac wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
This is more of an Insane. Rename it as such.Done.

00:29:255 (6,7,8) - The beat placement and spacing of those three are very odd to play. I suggest changing it to a more readable pattern.
00:30:849 (3,1) - I always think that this part here is a jump. Either put a note 1/2 in between them or remove the new combo.

I'm not sure f there's actually anything else... I might have a look later.

• • 01:02:724 (1) - This spinner is too long imo; end it at 01:05:724 (white tick) then add some circles/sliders

• • 00:19:224 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 00:22:224 (1) - ^
  • 00:23:724 (4) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:25:224 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:02:724 (1) - This spinner is too long imo; end it at 01:05:724 (white tick) then add some circles/sliders

• • 00:03:849 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:00:661 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:10:974 (1) - ^
  • 01:17:911 (1) - ^
  • 01:43:411 (1) - ^ (also I suggest you don't stack this circle with (2))
  • 01:45:661 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:45:849 (x) - ^

• • 00:12:849 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 (or 1/8) later. Add a circle here.
  • 00:11:911 (2) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:12:474 (3) - ^
  • 00:43:036 (10) - ^
  • 00:43:224 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:49:786 (1) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

[Easy]

• • 01:02:724 (1) - This spinner is too long imo; end it at 01:05:724 (white tick) then add some circles/sliders

[Normal]

• • 00:19:224 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 00:22:224 (1) - ^
  • 00:23:724 (4) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:25:224 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:02:724 (1) - This spinner is too long imo; end it at 01:05:724 (white tick) then add some circles/sliders

[MiLu]

• • 00:03:849 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:00:661 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:10:974 (1) - ^
  • 01:17:911 (1) - ^
  • 01:43:411 (1) - ^ (also I suggest you don't stack this circle with (2))
  • 01:45:661 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:45:849 (x) - ^

Nice map~

xxheroxx wrote:

[Suzully]

• • 00:12:849 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 (or 1/8) later. Add a circle here. Fixed.
  • 00:11:911 (2) - Add "New Combo" Nah.
  • 00:12:474 (3) - ^ Added.
  • 00:43:036 (10) - ^ Fixed.
  • 00:43:224 (1) - Remove "New Combo" ^
  • 01:49:786 (1) - ^ ^

1. 01:31:224 (2) - I feel here add clap and remove clap of 01:31:974 (3) sounds better, snice the downbeat in background is 01:31:224 and 01:31:786

1. 01:31:224 (4) - Add clap here, remove clap of 01:31:599 (4) and 01:32:349 (6)

1. 00:06:474 (6) - Remove clap, add clap to 7, you misplace it?

Breeze wrote:

hi there

[Easy]

1. 01:31:224 (2) - I feel here add clap and remove clap of 01:31:974 (3) sounds better, snice the downbeat in background is 01:31:224 and 01:31:786 Done

[Normal]

1. 01:31:224 (4) - Add clap here, remove clap of 01:31:599 (4) and 01:32:349 (6) Done

[Milu]

1. 00:06:474 (6) - Remove clap, add clap to 7, you misplace it? Done

Rest are fine, Easy and Normal are a bit boring, I think you can try some more interesting notes putting methon in Esier diff. later on
Let me know when you have reply, in-game or forum PM are both fine sorry,This is my mapstyle T-T

Breeze wrote:

Fixed a tiny issue in source
OK, fine enough for a bubble now
Good luck!
my message is too short

Raging Bull wrote:

orz. Slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable. Please change it ._.Done.

Edit: I'll probably give this a better mod later.

General
Perhaps add msy3a to tags? That was Suzully's last known name.no

Easy:
Seems okay

Normal:
Alright too.

Milu:
00:08:724 (7) - Perhaps you can remove this slider and use a pattern similar to 00:05:724 (3,4,5,6) ? I think it will play better than having a kick slider.Done
Perhaps you can remove the break and map like the other diffs? Up to you since it's a guest difficulty.
01:08:724 (1) - Unsnapped slider endDone

01:11:724 (x) - Add a note here? I think it sounds pretty nice if you add a note to the downbeat.Done
01:16:974 (x) - Add a beat here? It sounds pretty empty. No
01:26:724 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you map to the vocals here instead of the music. Why? Because you were mapping to the vocals to the whole time, then you changed to the music, then you changed to vocals again at 01:28:599 (1,2,3). I think mapping the vocals here would be much smoother.no

Suzully:
00:09:849 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency with 00:06:474 (10,11)
00:10:224 (9) - NC here instead.
00:33:474 (3) - Perhaps an arc here would be better?
01:37:974 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency with the beginning?
01:41:349 (x) - Perhaps add a note here? It seems empty since you did this in the beginning and the pattern right before this.

Insane:
01:27:474 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not sure why you NC'd so much here.No
01:27:474 (1) - Remove NC?^
01:28:599 (1) - ^^
01:28:974 (1) - ^^
01:29:349 (1) - ^^

Raging Bull wrote:

General
Perhaps add msy3a to tags? That was Suzully's last known name. lol

Suzully:
00:09:849 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency with 00:06:474 (10,11)
00:10:224 (9) - NC here instead.
00:33:474 (3) - Perhaps an arc here would be better?
01:37:974 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency with the beginning?
01:41:349 (x) - Perhaps add a note here? It seems empty since you did this in the beginning and the pattern right before this.
All fixed.

Breeze wrote:

My fault, didn't noticed that the 0.5 slider tick rate
OK, then
Rebubbled

Sakura Hana wrote:

[MiLu]
01:26:724 (1,2,3,4) -A 3/2 rythm is hard to follow if the instrument it's following its not prominent enough, i'd suggest you switch to a 1/1 pattern here.

Fix and i'll rank.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Alright, let's go!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Omedeto ~ Hinacle~