Helvetia (DJ Sa9 + Hommarju) feat. CAMRY - Cagayake!GIRLS · forum

ztrot

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ztrot 2011-05-13T14:48:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 27, 2011 at 11:40:21 PM

Artist: Helvetia (DJ Sa9 + Hommarju) feat. CAMRY
Title: Cagayake!GIRLS
Source: K-ON!
Tags: Remix rave k-on Odaril Exit Trance
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4640kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4.9 stars, 357 notes)
Normal (3.73 stars, 183 notes)
Odaril's Easy (2.37 stars, 123 notes)

Download: Helvetia (DJ Sa9 + Hommarju) feat. CAMRY - Cagayake!GIRLS
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Whee another map exit trance again.

Last edited by ztrot 2011-05-28T04:40:17+00:00, edited 17 times in total.

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2011-05-13T15:55:31+00:00

weee , first

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2011-05-13T20:48:03+00:00

hayaku rankshiyo

dkun

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dkun 2011-05-16T14:04:09+00:00

cagayakeeeeee

will mod ltr

Charles445

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Charles445 2011-05-18T04:38:41+00:00

what

Shiro

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Shiro 2011-05-22T21:23:15+00:00

easy easy

Download: Helvetia (DJ Sa9 + Hommarju) feat. CAMRY - Cagayake!GIRLS (ztrot) [Odaril's Easy].osu

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2011-05-23T16:25:36+00:00

hitsounded by request ;p

done insane diff with customs for you so far, need to kno if you like the sound before hitsounding the other (or hitsound them 2 yourself

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http://puu.sh/2bRT

Sekai

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Sekai 2011-05-24T21:22:40+00:00

Rey Fullbuster

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Rey Fullbuster 2011-05-25T10:16:41+00:00

is this soundtrack of k-on?

GladiOol

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GladiOol 2011-05-26T17:55:12+00:00

(?) = suggestion.

[General]

Offset 275.

[Insane]

Tick Rate 2 please~

00:21:608 (10) - Add New Combo (?)
00:22:941 (1) - Remove New Combo (?)
00:43:274 (9) - Add New Combo.
00:44:108 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:45:941 (11) - Add New Combo.
00:46:608 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:12:274 (6) - Add New Combo.
01:51:941 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:52:441 (5) - Add New Combo.
01:56:108 (7) - Add a Reverse Arrow please~ Looks sexy :3

[Normal]

00:21:104 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:21:937 (7) - Add New Combo.
00:22:270 (2) - Looks a bit.. messy~ maybe make it more symmetrical (?)
00:34:104 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:34:937 (2) - Add New Combo.
01:33:604 (5) - ^
01:34:937 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this a blue tick slider with reverse arrow (?) and then add an 1/2 note behind it, maybe like this(?)

[Odaril's Easy]

No sexy hitsounds? ): It would be better if this diff. had them too~
I'm not really fond of those 'random' spacing decreasements like 00:26:937 (1). The spacing is closer if you compare to the beginning part. It feels kinda random.

Starred~

Rukario

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Rukario 2011-05-26T18:24:37+00:00

General:
- Not sure on this but maybe K-On in source and Exit Trance in the tags?
- Tick Rate 2 on all diffs?

Odaril's Easy:
Spacing Increase in the end surprised me a bit but I guess it's okay.
Kinda sad that Odaril didn't use the custom's much.

Normal:
01:40:775 (5,6) - Wanna stack (6) correct maybe?
01:46:941 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H, just so you don't overlap ugly with thhe beat before.
01:51:441 (5,6) - stacking?

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2011-05-26T21:09:04+00:00

if your gonna use rave as a tag, might as well add Hardcore, since thats its real genre

Odaril's Easy
ok first off this is glitched up madly, in play the sliders only show slidertick rate 1, while you have used slidertick rate 2, this makes it so ingame you cannot see half of the sliderticks even though you get score for them, see pics

editor

SPOILER

ingame

SPOILER

not happy over this at all and i advise tickrate 1 due to it

00:40:274 - why the spacing change from here on a easy?
00:45:941 (2,3,4) - this spacing is a nono for an easy, its very hard to understand it, and that is never good for a easy diff, make this readable i advise
00:49:608 (3) - this should start on the red tick before tbh, since the note after follows the vocals it feels odd this one not following the vocals
01:55:108 (5) - plays odd atm move to 01:55:274 and it flows to the vocals much better

Normal
00:23:274 - add a note here, you will notice it makes it flow better because the note after also follows the vocals
00:35:941 - i would advise a note here for the same reason ;p
00:49:274 (1) - flows better if you end it on the vocal at 00:50:774
01:18:774 (2,3,4,5) - this confused me, because i was expecting the same timing as the pattern before (the pattern looks almost identical) maybe make this 4 unstacked notes?

Insane
pretty much perfect

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funfun maps xD

ztrot

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ztrot 2011-05-27T07:03:25+00:00

fixed all but for the bigger changes on easy

Shiro

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Shiro 2011-05-27T10:01:09+00:00

jericho2442 wrote:
Odaril's Easy
ok first off this is glitched up madly, in play the sliders only show slidertick rate 1, while you have used slidertick rate 2, this makes it so ingame you cannot see half of the sliderticks even though you get score for them, see pics

editor
SPOILER

ingame
SPOILER

not happy over this at all and i advise tickrate 1 due to it ztrot set it to 1

00:40:274 - why the spacing change from here on a easy? As said before, it's because the song becomes slower. That's why I used a slider first, so that the player would realize the sliders - thus the spacing - were slower.
00:45:941 (2,3,4) - this spacing is a nono for an easy, its very hard to understand it, and that is never good for a easy diff, make this readable i advise never thought it would be so hard to read o.o I'll change it
00:49:608 (3) - this should start on the red tick before tbh, since the note after follows the vocals it feels odd this one not following the vocals sounds weird but okay
01:55:108 (5) - plays odd atm move to 01:55:274 and it flows to the vocals much better you're right, fixed

For the two others: I'll remove the speed changes ;_;

Download: Helvetia (DJ Sa9 + Hommarju) feat. CAMRY - Cagayake!GIRLS (ztrot) [Odaril's Easy].osu

Cat

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Cat 2011-05-27T10:15:10+00:00

*ω*

woodrockman

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woodrockman 2011-05-27T14:43:05+00:00

I want to create a taiko map!~ can you put it? XD

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2011-05-27T18:52:50+00:00

Odaril's Easy: (you said I can be nazi, so going to overdo it a bit for this diff)
Why does this diff not have the countdown timer?
00:05:608 (1,2) - make the curves the same?
00:28:275 (3) - make this note overlap with 1 to make it look a little better (even better if you can make 1,3 and 2,4 parallel)
00:34:941 (1,2) - make 2 perfectly loop around 1

SPOILER

00:41:941 (4) - I guess I don't like these partial overlap, so I would make this not overlap the ending of 2

Normal:
01:15:608 (2) - align with 1? (it looked a little strange while playing)
01:25:608 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - please use more than 1 shape here, I found this a little boring

Insane:
00:14:608 (6,7) - make these notes not overlap, it doesn't look that great
00:21:274 (8) - new combo like in normal? (also helps denote the change in patterns)
01:12:274 (1) - new combo to denote the pattern and that line of music?
I am a little worried about the section with very few notes since auto shows that you an lose almost half of your health during a perfect play in that section.

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Nice map overall. I guess I can bubble this after doing whatever fixes you want to do. For now, star.

Shiro

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Shiro 2011-05-27T19:05:39+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
Odaril's Easy: (you said I can be nazi, so going to overdo it a bit for this diff) y so nazi =p
Why does this diff not have the countdown timer? I asked ztrot to remove it. He said I could and would remove on the others as well, but he didn't. =( I hate countdowns
00:05:608 (1,2) - make the curves the same? done
00:28:275 (3) - make this note overlap with 1 to make it look a little better (even better if you can make 1,3 and 2,4 parallel) done both
00:34:941 (1,2) - make 2 perfectly loop around 1okay
00:41:941 (4) - I guess I don't like these partial overlap, so I would make this not overlap the ending of 2 fixed

u so nazi
thanks for the mod =p

Download: Helvetia (DJ Sa9 + Hommarju) feat. CAMRY - Cagayake!GIRLS (ztrot) [Odaril's Easy].osu

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2011-05-27T19:22:20+00:00

After fixing 01:47:608 (2) on easy, bubbled.

James2250

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James2250 2011-05-28T03:51:01+00:00

1.4 MB background , don't really like backgrounds that go over 1MB as they take up to much filespace and there isn't really a big difference to me. Convert to JPEG?

Odaril's Easy:
00:39:941 (4,1,2) - intended spacing? Anyway should be equal for stuff like this especially for an Easy
00:45:274 (3,1,2) - ^

Normal:
00:06:774 (2) - fits more if extended 1/2 in my opinion but not a big deal
00:12:108 (3) - ^
01:37:441 (2) - ^ (same for the rest like this)

Call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank

You can keep your background like that if you really want to, at least the total filesize isn't too big. Everything else looks good

Ranked~

IkkiMinami

IkkiMinami 2011-05-28T11:12:21+00:00

Good luck