WJSN (Cosmic Girls) - BeBe

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Nuolong
make sure u put betastar in tags
i think l o l
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Nuolong wrote:

make sure u put betastar in tags
i think l o l
o rite i forgot i am bs xd
[ M I N A K O ]

Nuolong wrote:

brb my sexy ass diff is coming
yes ma boy
Nuolong
omg hoi rose!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i rly need help picking a bias now it used 2 be jenny but now it's all of dem
Aeril
[Fenix3999]
  1. too many things to say really uhh
  2. aesthetics arent really developed that much like 00:13:395 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:23:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - placing seems very random/only flow
  3. 01:04:207 (4,1,4,1,1) - you resolved multiple times here in the top right corner, very boring, would be better to have it end elsewhere.
  4. 00:44:520 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda just a circle, no real interconnections between the circles
  5. 02:06:082 (1,1,1,1,1) - nc spam for no real reason
  6. 02:12:457 (2,1) - big spaces between beats, skipping a big white beat 02:12:832 - here.
  7. 02:24:832 - same here as well
  8. 00:14:707 (1) - this should probably be a slider as they hum a note here.
  9. 00:19:395 (4) - you end on a big beat on this slider which should probably be clickable as its the end of an old phrase and start of a new vocal phrase.
  10. noticed throughout the map you dont really like putting things in the middle which can be seen if you press ctrl a and see the evident difference in density.


  1. 01:06:457 (1,1) - dont do double ncs like this for no real reason, theyre of the same vocal phrase so remove the second nc imo
  2. 01:14:895 (4,1) - both of these should be sliders as you completely leave the held note open and skip the beats inbetween.
  3. 01:17:895 (3,1) - 02:14:895 (4,1) - 02:17:895 (3,1) - same here as well
  4. 00:01:395 (1,1,1) - 00:04:395 (1) - 00:05:520 (1) - 00:07:395 (1,1,1) - 00:10:395 (1,1,1) - 01:26:614 (1,1,1) - 01:28:114 (1,1,1) - why are all of these ncs ;-;
  5. 01:32:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - why are you even using such HUGE spacing in the normal part of the song instead of the chorus?
  6. 01:49:020 (1,1) - since these are all of the same rhythm imo you should remove these ncs and add one 01:48:645 (4) - here.
  7. 02:00:270 (2,3,1) - extremely awkward jump here also the last one is the most emphasized note and you use the least spacing there.
  8. theres a bunch more places in the map where the same problems occur that i listed before.
JayJay-San
Hey! This is Jay from the modding queue!

Congratz on getting accepted :)

Now lets get to this mod!

00:13:207 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This honestly looks really unorganized, fix this.
00:31:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again unorganized looking, messy look, move the 7 to the left a bit but still keep that stack with the (1) slider
00:36:082 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Movement of this seems a bit off, move the (2,3,4) up a bit.
00:40:020 (1,2) - I would definitely stack these
00:41:332 (1,2) - These too, because earlier you stacked them because the singer is saying bebe so it would make more sense to stack them here as well
00:45:645 (6) - Just make this a circle, no need for a slider here. This also helps with the transition to the next note, if it were a circle.
00:48:457 (1) - Personally I would stack this with the 5 because it is definitely easier to read considering the spacing and the ending note. So do that...
00:57:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Minimize the spacing a bit. Not too much just make the seven a tinsie bit closer.
01:14:520 (2) - There are multiple notes that stack this... why? too much stacking just looks messy.
01:33:832 (1,2,3,4) - This has the same timing as the other section but this is way more spaced out, there isn't a change in the beat...
01:37:395 (1) - Move the one closer to the two
02:37:395 (1,1,1,1) - This isn't a mod I just really liked what you did with this part, it fits the song really well :D
03:15:082 (1) - That slow slider <3

Overall Rating: This map was very very good, I will definitely give this another playthrough! Work on the spacing and jumps and you have yourself a ranked map!
-AsrieLx-
Heyo. Fenix Diff seems A Okay! :)
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-AsrieLx- wrote:

Heyo. Fenix Diff seems A Okay! :)
thanks for having a look, but uhh that diff still needs a bit more polishing before i can approve to continue with it (thats why there is fenix diff mod spam :p)
timemon
[Fenix3999's Extra]
00:13:395 (3,6) - Be a little careful when you place your objects, this one overlaps which is bad. Try to hover all of your jumps like this http://i.imgur.com/w3bax4b.png . You see the 6 is really out of place. You can try this for example you can fix like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8440685. Simply by selecting the left side of that pattern, Copy Paste it, rotate it 180 degrees then stack the 8 under 3. you get a much better looking pattern while you only have to map half of the circles! and Why am I spending on much time writing on this jump but this applies to other stuff too

00:16:207 (2,8) - same issue it's overlap and doesn't look good when you select all the objects make them look cleaner by spreading them out a bit.

00:23:707 (3,4) - should stack under 00:22:770 (3,4) - because the overlap looks bad.

00:37:582 (6,7) - This breaks the flow, and it is quite hard for player to properly acc a 3/4 gap as it's not normal 1/2, 1/1 gaps. Try this http://i.imgur.com/4qUk9Wj.png
00:39:082 (5,6) - same

01:14:707 (3) - overlap
01:19:020 (3,6) -
^ You get the idea, you should fix these overlaps and stuff as they make your map looks less polished.

02:22:020 (5) - Obligatory Blanket Mod

02:54:270 (7) - IMO when the map stops, the final object should a circle not a sliderend because circle can give a much better feedback than sliderend.
Simply change this slider to 2 circles and the 2nd circle stacked under 02:54:832 (1) - to help the player not to mistake it for another 1/2 jump but a 1/1 gap.

Sorry if I sound really weird here I'm a bit confused.

I assume diffs that do not have a player name after them are made by the creator? Sexy Nuolong Time and [ M I N A K O ]'s Insane look solid
Nuolong

-AsrieLx- wrote:

Heyo. Fenix Diff seems A Okay! :)
박쥐네요?
[Nemesis]
Mod from my queue.

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goddamn it kpop again

so first of all: I hate jumpy maps and I hate kpop, so you don't necessarily need to follow my advice (also with this priority you can just go for loved since the map lacks full spread)

why no korean bois on the bg lol

00:00:832 (1,1,1,1) - I suggest you fix stacking on these, it's off by like 1-2 pixels on every object (applies to this and many more)
00:06:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why is it spaced so densely, you have a 1/2 beat window before that so you might as well move it further away
00:06:739 (8,1) - inconsistent spacing
00:08:895 (2,3) - just copypaste this lol
00:12:832 - at this point the song became like 10x worse to listen to, sorry it's not my style :(
00:13:957 (6) - move it up a little, stacks by like 1 pixel with 00:13:395 (3) -
01:14:332 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get this, these circles look just randomly placed without reason
01:55:957 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove all these NCs except for the first one

can't find anything else besides those fundamental flaws with stacking and jumps without a reason, good luck I guess
Nuolong

[Nemesis] wrote:

so first of all: I hate jumpy maps and I hate kpop, so you don't necessarily need to follow my advice (also with this priority you can just go for loved since the map lacks full spread)

why no korean bois on the bg lol
Ye this is gunna be for loved
And o shi great idea ... . .. hei sidetail I wanna change my bg to my BeBe @@@1!!1!1!11!122!1#!21!1!!1!
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Nuolong wrote:

[Nemesis] wrote:

so first of all: I hate jumpy maps and I hate kpop, so you don't necessarily need to follow my advice (also with this priority you can just go for loved since the map lacks full spread)

why no korean bois on the bg lol
Ye this is gunna be for loved
And o shi great idea ... . .. hei sidetail I wanna change my bg to my BeBe @@@1!!1!1!11!122!1#!21!1!!1!
probs no bois cuz girl group song, but k changed for nuolong's diff xd

[Nemesis] wrote:

goddamn it kpop again

[Nemesis] wrote:

I hate jumpy maps and I hate kpop
haha sam etbh

regardless, thanks for mods!
Xelite
Thanks, i'm still new in mapping so that's amazing experience for me. Fixed almost all, also soon i'll remap few places.
Nuolong

Fenix3999 wrote:

Thanks, i'm still new in mapping so that's amazing experience for me. Fixed almost all, also soon i'll remap few places.
Good luck on your journey of mapping (ㆁωㆁ*)
Neptunee
owo
[ M I N A K O ]
Nolan I love you

From T0P
Nuolong

[ M I N A K O ] wrote:

Nolan I love you

From T0P
dies
Sihra
I love this map :):):):):):):)
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Apllon wrote:

I love this map :):):):):):):)
Thanks for playing and for supporting~





also 700th post /shrug
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