Ok the hp on this I think is too much. For a song that goes up to almost 4 mins is a lot and for more unexperienced players, this can be quite hard. I suggest making the HP somewhere between 7-7.5 and the OD around 7.
00:21:268 (21268|2,21362|0,21456|1) - why not make this into a staircase? Like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7666713 ?
00:50:518 (50518|1,50706|2,50893|1,51081|2,51268|3) - we can change this up, how about
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7724209 ?
00:58:956 (58956|1) - move to column 1
01:00:081 (60081|3,60456|3) - hmm i don't agree with these two notes, I feel as theres not enough emphasize on the song to put two notes there compared to something like 01:01:581 (61581|0,61581|2) - this. I suggest removing them
I think they go well with the accented vocals plus they match the earlier pattern.- also here 01:01:581 I think there should 3 notes(hands) here so add one on c2. doing so will be easier for players to differentiate impacted notes compared to some of the doubles you have in your song.
-switch 01:06:831 (66831|0) - this to column 4 and 01:06:737 (66737|3) - this to column 1. I think this can make it easier for players playing onto 01:07:018 (67018|2) - which is on c3
-just a suggestion, what if you put an SV here? I think it would be cool and a subtle good use of it as it emphasize the sound played (I have no idea what to call it lol) and if you're considering put it to .75 I think. If you've done that, make sure you put another one on 01:13:206 on 1.0 so the part after doesn't slow down as well
Will think about the SV for higher diffs01:14:331 - 01:19:581 this part is super weird to play. I can't even explain really as it's going to be super long of me explaining but if you want, catch me in game cause theres a lot of things that could be improved as I think the LNs are off.
Ima try to hit you up01:19:393 since you are doing a stream, why didn't start off here? it can be clearly heard that a note could be heard here
01:22:721 (82721|3,83096|3,83471|3,83846|3) - these LNs I feel are off as well. talk to me in game about them cause its harder for me to explain in a mod
havent touched them after some BN advice01:36:456 you can put a note here and 01:36:831 here
01:48:081 - 01:49:581 uh im not sure what your really doing here but it doesn't really follow the song.
01:58:768 put a note here (I think column would do best here)
having patterns go from singles to doubles doesn't fit this difficulty level, even for making layering more clear01:58:862 (118862|3) - I suggest moving this to column 1 if you use suggestion above.
02:13:768 (133768|1,133956|1,134143|1) - using stacks like these aren't really appropriate. I would suggest to change them. only use stacks when its a sound that being repeated for a certain amount of times, which in this case it's not doing that
02:16:393 (136393|3) - recommend changing this to column 3
02:13:581 - 02:35:331 throughout this whole part, i just disagree with the stacks you have in this area. it just doesn't feel right or play right as it doesn't reflect any use of repetition of the same sound. i would definitely reconsider changing this area.
02:35:893 (155893|1) - this LN should lead up to 02:36:456
02:36:081 (156081|0) - and this LN should't start 02:36:081 but should start at 02:36:456 and end at 02:37:393. if fixing this, change arrangement of notes so they don't mixed up with the LNs
Its a single sound, changing it up anyway02:43:581 (163581|1) - this should stop at 02:46:393
02:47:752 (167752|2) - this should start at 02:47:706
<--- i just want to point these out. I know was criticizing your stacks, but these 02:47:752 (167752|2,168081|2,168456|2,168831|2,169206|1) - are a good use of them. I suggest though that 02:49:206 (169206|1) - this should also go in the third column and 02:49:581 (169581|2) - should go in the 4th
as the sound "fades out", so do the sliders02:54:081 - 02:54:831 why no LN(s) here? you could definitely add some. it feels weird when this part is using a large part of LNs and randomly cuts off like that
brainfart03:04:956 (184956|1,184956|2) - I don't agree with this double you got. I'd recommend moving this to column 1
03:19:018 (199018|1,199393|0) - again with these stacks, moving them to another column is my suggestion
03:19:581 (199581|3,199581|2,200331|3,200706|2,201081|2,201831|3,202206|2,202581|2,203331|3,203706|2) - why only have these LNs on column 3 and 4? why not have a balance with column 1-2?
Why balance? It loses the feeling if I just make it like everything else03:32:143 there could be a LN here up to 03:32:331 so I recommend moving 03:31:768 (211768|2) - to column 1 so you can place a LN in column 3
I didnt want to flood a 2,7* diff too bad. Plenty of spots where they would go in as well.03:46:206 (226206|2,226393|3) - this should be one whole LN, there's no change at all so they shouldn't be separated.
pitch