Osu FLagstar wrote:

Hello, M4M from #modreqs

[Easy]

00:29:318 (4,1) - I found the short break inbetween those two notes rather odd. Due to the vocals and how they don't elongate as they did before I decided a space would be good in order for new players to recover and refresh before continuing.

01:20:549 (1) - This note might be a little bit close to the spinner end, new players could find it hard to position themselves so quickly. Alright I removed the note beforehand and left the slider intact, thanks for suggestion (:

[Normal]

00:15:472 (1,2) - This rhythm pattern doesn't follow the song imo. Alright, I kept it as a 1/1 slider

00:37:626 (1) - Maybe do a blanket with this slider. It would look too sloppy at the end and I wasn't aiming for a blanket here

00:39:472 (3,4) - Blankets aren't perfect. They're symmetrical for me?

00:45:934 (2) - Rhythm doesn't follow the song. Changed it to 1/1

00:53:780 (3) - Place this slider on the red tick before. Oops mb, thanks for finding this

01:01:164 (2) - See above. ^

01:02:549 (4) - Shorten this slider to the white tick before. It's following the guitar riff which ends on the red tick.

01:04:395 (2) - Consider placing this note on the next red tick. Would ruin consistency if I did, no change.

[Hard]

00:09:934 (3,4) - Might be a little bit too spaced for this diff. It's stacked and 1/1 I think it's fine.

00:19:164 (1,2,3) - Why is this not equally spaced? It is for me?

00:20:088 (3,4,5) - This could be equallly spaced as well.I like the variation and emphasis on the guitar placed, since they're sliders too it's not difficult for players to understand what is happening.

00:36:241 (6,7,1) - See above. ^^

00:41:780 (2) - The middle of this slider doesn't follow any rhythm. Changed to 1/1

NeBuSC2 wrote:

Overall just some small things, mapset looks fine even the end of mp3 is kinda weird and I think you should map whole song. Good luck!
ps. AiMod show some problem with Kiai, but I don't think it's something important so...

NeBuSC2 wrote:

hey, from m4m:

Easy

00:09:934 (4) - I think NC, there's like new sound or something at this moment. (I feel like its going deeper) I don't think it's enough to put a NC on, plus it will only be a short combo and break consistency.
00:11:780 (1) - Then here I would remove NC ^
00:15:472 (1) - Make this one similar look to 00:17:318 (2) - (just add some cool shape like you did here) meh I just moved it down a bit idk lol
00:16:857 (2) - Would add a circle here. ok
00:21:011 (3) - Add circle instead of long slider here and add normal 1/2 slider here 00:21:472 (4) - (00:21:472 (4) - you miss sound here) nah the curve is trying to play with the fact more things are playing in the foreground of the song
00:26:549 (1) - This one is kinda ugly, add point upwards between red point and end point. changed a bit thanks
00:29:780 (5) - You miss one here again in my opinion (this space is just meh) nothing to warrant a note there imo
00:33:011 (3,1) - Blanket here can be slightly improved (just shift this point, since in my opinion is slightly visible while playing) yep got it thanks (:
00:35:780 (3,1) - Overlap. doesn't show up in play for me
btw. seems like here is slightly bad distance snap between 00:15:011 (4,1) - idk think I got it lol

Normal

Same with NC's at start, but it's up to you.
00:33:472 (5,1) - Blanket here is actually ugly :p oops lmao
00:35:318 (2) - Add small sharp at the middle of this one. what's a small sharp lmao? XD
00:49:395 (2) - He should be distance snapped more to the right [?] I moved it a little bit lol

Hard

00:16:395 (2) - Isn't perfectly at the middle if it's a problem for you xd doesn't bother me too much bcs you don't notice in play unless ur monitor is ocd asf
00:18:241 (4) - Overlap this at the end of 00:16:395 (2) - i don't see any difference it would make :s
00:29:088 (6) - Meh, circle and short slider (white to red tick) current works better with the vocal line
00:30:011 (9) - Add circle. not much to warrant a circle it's like a transition
00:37:164 (7) - You should fill this space on both sides of this circle (this empty part just killing the flow of map) ^ , it showing emphasis on how the vocals sound.
00:43:164 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved. it's an awkward blanket but I tried
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Hobbes2 wrote:

Hey!

[Easy]

00:21:011 (3,1) - Fix the stack by ctrl+rightarrow on 1 that made it worse?

00:33:934 (1,3) - Aren't perfectly parallel, I suggest making them so I moved slider 3 up if that's what you meant

00:42:703 (2) - The change in spacing is really really small but its a bit noticeable visually, just for aesthetics I suggest moving this to x:446 y:191 fixed thanks

01:18:241 (1,1) - Hm, Easies require at least 4 beats of recovery after the spinner. Since the BPM is low you could get away with about 3 probably but definitely not 2. It means 1/4 beats I think, plenty of recovery time here

Really well made! thanks ^^

[Normal]

00:19:164 (1) - Not a fan, there's a spike in intensity in the music on 00:20:088 - so leaving it as part of a big reverse slider doesnt really fit added 1/2 parts to reflect the music thanks

01:00:934 (2,3) - fix DS done

01:14:549 (1,2) - I don't really like how this looks because they're almost touching, and you haven't really done anything like it earlier in the map so it looks out of place. I spaced it

01:18:241 (1,1,2) - Normals require at least 2 beats of recovery after the spinner, this MIGHT be okay due to the lower BPM but hopefully a BN could clarify that when they check. read above from easy

[Hard]

00:43:857 (5) - Super specific, but if you move this to x66 y138 the blanket's a bit better. co-ords were fine but I moved x:69

01:08:088 (4,1) - Would look nicer if you moved 1 a bit away from 4 so these aren't as close. okay I moved it a bit further

01:12:472 (6,1) - blanket! tweaked slightly

Well, that was a pitiful mod. This set is definitely ready for BNs as is, I do think you could do more with the song with harder difficulties, but as is it's certainly very close to being rank ready if not already at that point. /me can't map hard diffs orz

Good luck, if you aren't satisfied with my mod feel free to ask for another on another mapset sometime.

thanks for your mod !

Hm, Easies require at least 4 beats of recovery after the spinner. Since the BPM is low you could get away with about 3 probably but definitely not 2. It means 1/4 beats I think, plenty of recovery time here

Hobbes2 wrote:

Hm, Easies require at least 4 beats of recovery after the spinner. Since the BPM is low you could get away with about 3 probably but definitely not 2. It means 1/4 beats I think, plenty of recovery time here

No, it means full 1/1 beats. Ask a BN if you wanna be sure