M4M o/
Trigger-Happy00:01:412 (1,2,3) - I feel like equal spacing between their sliderheads and the circle should be equal, I recommend something like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8623967 (besides, now the hitobjects seem more distinguishable and a bit easier to read)
00:04:924 (1) - ctrl+g or 00:05:363 (2) - ctrl+g
00:10:777 (1,2) - I feel like there could be a bit more corelation between these, how about you soften the curve of 00:11:216 (2) - a little bit?
00:12:680 (3,1) - increase the spacing by a tiny amount, feels a little off compared to all other patterns like this one
00:20:290 - holy hell 20s of spinners
00:41:802 (4) - NC for readability. Also because it's a downbeat.
00:58:777 (5) - ^
01:11:802 (1,2,3,4,5) - bend the shape a little more, it starts feeling like an ordinary angle while it shouldn't
01:25:265 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - while this IS a cool shape, I'm pretty sure it will be really offthrowing for a first time player, especially since it's a pattern that hasn't been used anywhere else in the map before. I suggest staying with the japanese "Ku" shape for streams and expanding on that idea instead of throwing in a new one without a reason
01:27:021 (1) - while it's a cool shape, I don't think it needs to be repeated twice, maybe come up with something similar, but not identical?
01:30:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - again for the sake of readability I suggest you use a NC on 01:30:680 (6) - since everyone (including me) is gonna assume that it's a straight line, just like the stream itself, while it isn't.
01:31:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:40:485 (4) - put it on 01:40:631 (5) - 's tail for consistency with 01:39:899 (1,2) -
01:43:997 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - it's fine here since it's a kiai time and a new idea is introduced, I suggest you stack (01:43:119 (6,5) - though
02:21:460 (1) - cool slider
02:47:070 (2) - get more creative with this one though, try to associate it with 02:46:631 (1) - a little more, just like you did with 02:45:460 (1,2) -
02:57:168 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - tbh I think you can delete all these NCs and leave only 02:57:168 (1) - and 02:58:338 (1) -
03:17:655 (5) - ehmmm, not sure about this. Why don't you just use a stream here instead?
03:26:289 (7) - end of the slider looks a bit lacking, try to expand the curve a little bit
03:27:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a lil overdone compared to all the other streams you've done before, are you sure this spacing is appropriate there? I feel like there's no distinguishable change in music to do such a change in spacings
03:35:948 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this one has basically the same intensity yet lower spacing
03:45:168 - silence the end
kewl map
