1. Advanced (2.94 stars, 57 notes)
2. Another (5.33 stars, 149 notes)
3. Death (6.48 stars, 149 notes)
4. Easy (1.64 stars, 39 notes)
5. Extra (5.74 stars, 149 notes)
6. Extreme (6.36 stars, 145 notes)
7. Hard (3.65 stars, 90 notes)
8. Insane (5.17 stars, 149 notes)
9. Light Insane (4.88 stars, 129 notes)
10. Normal (2.33 stars, 51 notes)

Erza wrote:

XD.. uh well i think the first redline is wrong offset, try this 536

Fixed

1. 00:02:281 - Preview point is unsnapped
2. 00:04:354 (2,3,1,5,6,1) - These bad boys feel really out of place, they're 275 bpm triples in the calm part of the song, i would make them reverse sliders instead because this is a pain to play if you take the map as a whole
3. 00:12:754 - Add a circle here and start the spinner on the next blue tick
4. 00:19:428 (8,1,2) - This is a really awkward angle considering the spacing difference, this needs to be a lot sharper. I also don't really understand why the spacing difference, 00:18:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can understand the crescendo here to avoid catching the player off guard but 00:19:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this has the same intensity in the song and you went with a crescendo pattern here too which doesn't really makes sense to me
5. 00:23:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is looking cool but tbh it doesn't play well, using the exact same motion when you decrease the spacing isn't really intuitive, if you actually play it you can feel it gets kinda awkward starting from 00:24:116 (6) - . I mean it's hittable but there are more interesting patterns that you could do in the same spirit
6. 00:27:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is pretty savage but it's really hard to hit compared to the jumps honestly

LeeSinOrAfk wrote:

Hey, coming from my queue


I believe that this map is unrankable because of the drain time, it needs to be above 30 seconds and it's not, there is pretty much 20 seconds of playtime. The spinner at 00:12:754 (1) - is 3 measures too long and it should stop at 00:13:626 - instead because that's where the music stops. The spinner 00:29:116 (1) - here is really unnecessary too i can feel you placed it only for the drain time, also it would end on 00:30:210 - instead

With how I had it set up when you modded the drain time was actually over 30s, but the website doesn't show spinner time. Anyways, I edited the mp3 to fit the spinners and add some length.

And here's some additional comments about the top diff

1. 00:02:281 - Preview point is unsnapped
   
   Fixed
   
2. 00:04:354 (2,3,1,5,6,1) - These bad boys feel really out of place, they're 275 bpm triples in the calm part of the song, i would make them reverse sliders instead because this is a pain to play if you take the map as a whole
   
   I left it for now, but will consider it if more people complain.
   
3. 00:12:754 - Add a circle here and start the spinner on the next blue tick
   
   Fixed on all diffs
   
4. 00:19:428 (8,1,2) - This is a really awkward angle considering the spacing difference, this needs to be a lot sharper. I also don't really understand why the spacing difference, 00:18:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can understand the crescendo here to avoid catching the player off guard but 00:19:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this has the same intensity in the song and you went with a crescendo pattern here too which doesn't really makes sense to me
   
   I was trying to make it two separate combos because of the big white tick, but the music doesn't justify the random DS drop. Got rid of the DS dropped, nerfed the earlier jumps, and made the angle change a lot sharper.
   
5. 00:23:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is looking cool but tbh it doesn't play well, using the exact same motion when you decrease the spacing isn't really intuitive, if you actually play it you can feel it gets kinda awkward starting from 00:24:116 (6) - . I mean it's hittable but there are more interesting patterns that you could do in the same spirit
   
   https://osu.ppy.sh/b/104229
   
6. 00:27:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is pretty savage but it's really hard to hit compared to the jumps honestly

Keeping the increasing DS, but added 4 more notes to the stream in the mp3 and made it more gradual.