1. Hard (4,76 stars, 390 notes)
2. Insane (4,94 stars, 531 notes)
3. Normal (3,18 stars, 244 notes)

KillerRind wrote:

Red = Fix this!
Blue = Suggestion~
Green = Design.

[Overall]
- There are unused .png files and a unused .osb file. Remove them or make an SB.

[Easy]
XX:XX:XXX - Use Distance-Snap 1,1 or 1,2 and resspace everything, it looks better.
00:15:555 (5) - New Combo
00:31:801 (4) - ^
00:38:473 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid left
00:43:114 (1,2,3) - Move to x:392 , y:328
00:48:046 (5) - New Combo
01:34:461 (6) - ^
01:39:102 (6) - ^
... and more.
This diff needs a lot of work to look good.
I stopped modding at like 50% because it was getting boring.

[Hard]
00:09:463 (5) - New Combo
00:10:527 (10,11) - Move to x:64 y:200
00:19:230 (7) - New Combo
00:23:291 (8) - ^
00:27:933 (5) - ^
00:33:735 (8) - ^
00:52:107 (8) - ^
00:56:072 (5) - ^
01:08:933 (9) - ^
02:07:241 - Add break
02:11:593 (8) - New Combo
02:35:380 - Uhm... Map this part?
You should really try to make the map look better.
The notes are set kinda good but nobody wants to play a map that looks like crap.
Also the problems i posted are not all problems.

[Insane]
XX:XX:XXX - Isn't [Hardcore] exaclty the same? You should delete one of these diffs.
I wont look through this diff, because it has the same problems like easy and hard.
Try to use more New Combos and make it look better.


No Star so far.
Ask me for a remod if you think youre map is good enough for ranking.

SiU_LeAf wrote:

mod from Wmf's queue

Delete .osb and full upload
too much kiai time?

[Easy]
00:16:426 (4) - up 1 grid
00:18:746 (2,3) - spacing
01:28:659 (1,1) - too hard as a Easy

[Hard]
01:02:841 (8) - stack at ending of slider?
02:36:831 (1) - imo better not to hide this behind slider...

[Insane]
00:13:235 (6,7,8) - put them in an equilateral triangle?
00:16:426 (1,2,3,4) - make them in the same direction?
00:23:871 (4,5,6) - up + left 1 grid, fix the spacing for (7,8,9) as well
00:55:588 (5) - left 1 grid?
01:39:973 (5) - put this at ending of (4)?
01:55:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to read them
02:03:760 (4) - put this above (3)?
02:51:112 (2,4) - rotate to make them symmetrical?

winber1 wrote:

General

--There is a huge difficulty gap between hard and Easy difficulties...

Insane

--I would lower the volume to 80% or less or something.. 100% is too loud imo (this is for all diffs too)

00:16:425 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move this all of these notes back 1/3 tick. Then, add a note at 00:17:586.
00:37:216 (5) - delete note.
00:43:501 (5,6) - spacing..
00:43:501 (5) - i would move this note 1/3 tick forward and fix spacing.
00:43:694 (6) - end slider at 00:43:888, and then add a note at 00:43:985
00:48:819 (1,2,3) - this needs to be something like this (you need to start the repeat sliders on the white ticks):
01:08:159 (1) - unrankable spinner. Auto must be able to score a bonus of 2000 points for a slider to be ranked nowadays.
01:22:084 (1) - ^
01:31:366 (1) - ^
01:32:720 (x) - add note
01:33:881 (x) - ^
01:59:892 (1) - from i would probably use soft hitsound, or greatly decrease the volume until the break, because the music has just gotten softer and faded away a bit.
02:17:105 (1,2,3,4) - try something like this?:
02:27:741 (1) - get softer here.
02:31:609 (1) - spinner is too short.
02:51:797 (3) - down 1 grid
02:55:970 (1) - i would silence everything except the beginning of this note. the slider ticks and the last note sound very weird when you compare it to the music.

Hard

--This isn't that much easier than Insane...

00:03:662 (1,1,1,2) - Why did you map this? I would delete these notes and start the same place as insane.
00:09:173 (4,1) - i would rather you space this out correctly.
00:10:624 (7) - i didn't expect that there would be a 2nd repeat on this.
00:24:452 (4) - i would unstack and space out better.
00:34:992 (5) - spacing.
00:37:022 - These small breaks are a little too short. The warning arrows appear when you are still playing notes.
01:12:607 (1) - start this spinner a little earlier.
01:21:987 (1) - ^
01:37:265 (5,1) - spacing
01:42:487 (5,6,7,8) - i don't like this stacking
02:01:923 (7,1) - not sure if you should use this huge jump.. you never make a jump like this anyways in the map.
02:31:222 (6) - unstack
02:31:609 (1) - too short
02:46:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - where'd all the finishes go? i thot those finishes sounded pretty nice in insane.
02:55:361 (1) - this slider doesn't even start or end at the same time as insane
02:55:361 (1) - same hitsound thing as in insane

Easy

00:22:228 (7) - add note
00:37:022 - delete these small breaks
00:50:657 (x) - add note
00:55:588 (x) - ^
01:19:231 (1) - start spinner on the white tick.
01:32:140 (1) - this note comes a little too soon after a spinner for an easy diff imo.
01:55:348 (1) - From my friend, who sux at osu, he says he hates these types of stacked notes, cuz he sux at reading notes and can't tell how to play them lol. So you may consider staying away from these types of stacked notes in an easy diff.
02:09:272 (1) - seems to come a little early.
02:55:970 (1) - end the slider at the same time as insane and use the same hitsound thing?

I think this still needs a little more work, but..
I hope this helps :3

Equivalent wrote:

Equivalent mods:

General:
Remove anger fist in tag as it already the artist name. And maybe speed as it doesn't related close enough with the song
Reduce hitsound volume to 70%

Easy:
AR+1, AR 2 is too slow k
00:55:878 ( 3,4,1,2) Quite hard to follow for easy diff I don't think so
01:40:263 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) ^ ^^

Hard:
02:55:361 (1) Maybe 0.5x inherited time here. It is fine inherited time and unherited time overlapped on each others no
02:55:970 till 02:56:579 You can wiggle up the slider abit accordance to the music. Just make sure it fit the rhythm no

Insane:
01:02:937 till 01:03:904 remove the break. You can do this by deleting the first break time in .osu file k
02:55:970 some slowdown here would be cool no

This song hurt my ears much