1. 2018Remap (6.6 stars, 988 notes)
2. Dance (5.99 stars, 1290 notes)

1. 00:10:217 (2,3) - blanket
2. 00:15:896 (5,1) - ^
3. 00:16:758 (2,3) - don't place 2 close or else player will think 00:16:758 (2) - is a 1/8 slider
4. 00:18:481 (5,2) - stack
5. 00:21:410 (4,5) - blanket
6. 00:21:583 (5) - NC
7. 00:22:961 (8) - ^
8. 00:24:340 (1,3) - overlap lol
9. 00:28:475 (1) - idk if this type of sliders are rankable
10. 00:28:475 (1,3) - overlap
11. 00:30:198 (3,4) - ^
12. 00:34:678 (3,1) - ^
13. 00:45:103 (2) - i think it end in blue line
14. 01:03:822 (3) - NC since SV changed
15. 01:05:837 (4) - ^
16. 01:43:896 (4,5,7) - overlap <_>
17. 02:56:433 (5) - NC
18. 05:17:841 (2) - i suggest you don't place space stream here since this part was clam >_<

[ Jyris ] wrote:

Hello, M4M in #modreqs

Dance

00:14:345 (3,1,2) - This causes anti-flow which is bit unnecessary since this is the beginning/calm part of the song, I would suggest crtl+h 1
00:17:447 (1,2) - Might wanna close the distance with these two
00:31:921 - Up until here, the volume of the timing points you put are a bit too loud and don't complement the music, you have some 30% and 50% that would really work much better if you made them around 10%-25% imo
00:56:795 (5,6) - I would suggest closing the distance for these as well
01:02:255 - the timing poiints here are a bit too loud as well, you can't hear the music that well and it's a bit overbearing, I'd suggest lowering the 65% to around 40%
01:05:165 (1,2,3) - these might sound/play a bit better if you put them on 1/6
01:30:687 (2) - might wanna make the tail of this a bit straighter to look cleaner
01:44:344 (7) - maybe decrease the SV here like you did in the beginning?
02:00:463 (3) - I think this is fine if it just lands on the blue tick/make it repeat once?
02:01:807 (2) - the music still continues on afterwards so it might be a bit better to finish this on the blue tick as well
02:07:628 (2) - same as 02:00:463 (3)
02:35:389 - 90% and 100% are way too loud for this, might wanna make it 50%-60%ish
02:51:284 (4,5) - this doesn't flow well as the previous sliders before, might wanna change it a bit
02:58:672 - same thing with 02:35:389
03:07:515 (2,3) - move the slider up a bit for a better flow
03:12:329 (2,3,4) - Feels like it's not evenly spread apart if that's what you were going for
03:36:172 (2,3) - bit far apart imo
03:40:314 (2,3) - might work better as a slider since there's a stream afterwards
04:10:761 (2,3,4,5,6) - might just be better if they were all spaced out evenly
04:53:858 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - not too sure if you really need these triples, especially the first stack, could work better as a slider
05:04:157 (2,3) - don't see any reason to make this more spaced apart than the other in this combo
05:11:480 (2,3) - i think it would fit the music better if you just repeated one of the sliders and just delete the other imo
05:13:210 (1) - could work better as a repeat slider too since theres still some reverb afterwards
05:25:340 (4,5) - uhh circle after the slider, personally i think it would be fine just as a slider too

Really nice map, there's good flow in this and some anti-flow that really makes it seem like you're "dancing" I'd just recommend turning down the volume on some of the timing points imo because it gets a bit overbearing

[ Drop ] wrote:

m4m xd
Dance

1. 00:10:217 (2,3) - blanket
2. 00:15:896 (5,1) - ^
3. 00:16:758 (2,3) - don't place 2 close or else player will think 00:16:758 (2) - is a 1/8 slider
4. 00:18:481 (5,2) - stack
5. 00:21:410 (4,5) - blanket
6. 00:21:583 (5) - NC
7. 00:22:961 (8) - ^
8. 00:24:340 (1,3) - overlap lol
9. 00:28:475 (1) - idk if this type of sliders are rankable
10. 00:28:475 (1,3) - overlap
11. 00:30:198 (3,4) - ^
12. 00:34:678 (3,1) - ^
13. 00:45:103 (2) - i think it end in blue line
14. 01:03:822 (3) - NC since SV changed
15. 01:05:837 (4) - ^
16. 01:43:896 (4,5,7) - overlap <_>
17. 02:56:433 (5) - NC
18. 05:17:841 (2) - i suggest you don't place space stream here since this part was clam >_<

LeeSinOrAfk wrote:

Hey, M4M as we agreed

Click me

[General]

1. There are 3 objects unsnapped, check aimod 00:45:103 (2) - 00:51:285 (1) - 03:22:403 (5) - fixed
2. 03:22:403 (5) - Kiai is unsnapped here by literally 1ms, move the greenline to the right spot fixed
3. 00:00:737 - 01:02:255 - 02:44:344 - Green and red lines on the same spot must have consistent volume, sample set and kiai according to RC, these don't have the same volume level fixed
4. You can put the OD up to 8.5 considering how the map is hard and to avoid notelock since the bpm is pretty high 7.7 is fine for now

[Dance]

1. 00:14:001 (2) - I would turn this into 2 circles because there are 2 flute beats on both slider start and slider end while 00:14:345 (3) - this is a flute hold and you did it for 00:11:244 (4,5) - 00:11:244 (1) - changed this instead 00:11:244 (4,5) has a trill, while this one doesnt
2. 00:16:758 (2) - Ctrl h ctrl g would play slightly better because the angle would be more straight forward leading from 00:16:069 (1) - fixed
3. 00:17:447 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6703550 would look more structured with the double blanket and it would make the distance 00:17:447 (1,2,3) - here the same meant to do that, fixed
4. 00:21:583 (1) - Stack its end under 00:21:238 (3) - so it blankets with 00:21:410 (4) - fixed
5. 00:22:272 (2,3) - You shouldn't break your slider shape structure here especially considering that it's a slowpart, these are too curved imo, try making a slight curve like you did for 00:19:859 (2) - fixed
6. 00:22:961 (1,4) - This overlap looks kinda messy here because it's different from 00:22:616 (3,2) - and 00:23:650 (3,5) - , this is more my opinion but i don't like overlapping this much during slow parts to have cleaner visuals, try moving 4 to around x:220 y:140 so 2 3 4 form a triangle fixed
7. 00:24:340 (6) - Missing NC here for consistency since you NC'd every 2 white ticks fixed
8. 00:25:718 (1) - ^ fixed
9. 00:26:407 (1) - Remove it here and add it 00:27:097 (3) - instead fixed overlap
10. 00:45:717 (3) - This sounds really off, i'm no timing expert but try offset 45717 for this red line, sounds much better to me but it might need further adjustmentfixed the timing of all
11. 00:48:023 (6,7,8) - Would look cleaner if you made the DS consistent here, 8 looks a bit out of place right now fixed
12. 00:56:708 - There's a really mappable beat here, adding a note would make a triple with 00:56:450 (4,5) - and would make 5 stand out a lot which would make a lot of sense considering it's really loud added
13. 00:57:182 (6) - I'd NC here because it's a really long hold, very special if you take it inside of the song and if you compare it to the intro yes
14. 01:07:404 (4) - NC here for the SV change and consistency with 01:03:822 (1) - fixed
15. 01:15:240 (2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6703922 making something like this would look a lot more structured because you would have the same distance between these 3 and it would be the same distance betwen 01:15:352 (3,7) -fixed
16. 01:16:135 (9) - x:484 y:200 same reasonning as ^ no, as it breaks the spacing of the notes
17. 01:16:359 (10) - x:340 y:236 to have a triangle 01:15:687 (5,6,10) - These are just little nazi things that make a pattern look more structured and then you have 01:16:583 (1) - which breaks the structure and it means that it gives even more emphasis to the strong stop agree
18. 01:20:613 (6,7,8) - Inconsistent DS, doesn't look clean here fixed
    01:25:874 (4) - This is overmapped, turn 01:25:762 (3) - into a 1/4 slider here for the flute instead wanna retain the pattern, doesnt affect gameplay anyways
19. 01:23:299 - Really loud volume in this section i'd suggest decreasing to around 45% because normal sampleset is already louder changed to 50
20. 01:32:702 (5) - Not a fan of the reverse slider, for similar rhythms during slow parts you used circles so it only makes sense to use them here too, also missing NC gonna keep the reverse, fixed NC
21. 01:36:620 (8) - Overmapped, same as before, turn 01:36:508 (7) - into a 1/4 slider instead ^
22. 01:36:732 (1) - Skipping a sound on the blue tick, how about shortening the slider and reverse it instead ^
23. 01:37:180 (3) - ^ It's kiai so having a more dense rhythm feels better I do not understand
24. 01:37:628 (1) - I would move this to x:124 y:52 for the blanket with 01:38:075 (3) - and to avoid the overlap with 01:38:747 (5) - fixed
25. 01:44:120 (5,6,7) - This spacing feels really anti climatic, the pitch of the violin is really high and similar to 01:43:449 (1,2) - so i would increase the spacing, a lot fixed
26. 01:59:344 (9) - x:424 y:216, same as before to follow your visual structure with the rest of the pattern and breaking it with 01:59:568 (1) - i think it is fine as now
27. 02:00:463 (3) - I'm pretty sure this isn't snapped correctly http://puu.sh/sB0M5/6e9dbac339.jpg on 1/8 sounds better to me because you have it snapped on the 1/16 tick right now
28. 02:14:568 (1,2,3) - This looks rather cramped, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6704592 instead to have a pattern of spacing relying on 3, same distance from 1 to 3, 2 to 3 and 3 to 4 separated a bit
29. 02:19:269 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is a burai slider, making it unrankable because the red anchor makes the slider path going completely under the slider start, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6704618 instead for a blanket with 02:19:605 (2) - oops editing error
30. 02:20:613 (3) - Ctrl g here would play much better, 02:20:165 (1,2,3) - this would be more intuitive and straight forward and then the player will abuse slider leniency making the transition to 02:20:837 (4) - really comfortable oops error again, accidentally press chrl g
    02:40:202 (2,3,4,5,6) - Looks kinda messy, doesn't feel like a pattern at all, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6704779 instead makes visual distances more or less equal and makes every note having a structure as a pattern gonna leave it for now, it plays well
31. 02:42:553 (7,8,9) - Not a fan of the rhythm here, you're skipping beats 02:42:889 - 02:43:169 - , you should use http://puu.sh/sB2Ir/329be8acdf.jpg this rhythm instead to catch every sound fixed to shorter slider and triple
32. 03:05:388 (3,4) - The guitar here gets stronger, i would turn these into 2 circles wanna keep it flowing with sliders
33. 03:13:448 (2,3,4) - DS is slightly inconsistent here changed slider ahead instead
34. 03:25:090 (3) - The reverse arrow here is hidden by 03:24:642 (1) - which might be unrankable considering the gap between the two, spread them up a bit to be safe fixed
35. 03:25:538 (4) - Missing NC fixed
36. 03:32:702 (1,3) - Same as before, hidden reverse arrow fixed
37. 03:38:075 (3,4,5,6,1) - I'm 99% sure this is 1/6 not 1/8
38. 03:50:948 (3) - x:248 y:136, makes a triangle 03:50:948 (3,4,5) - and a straight line 03:50:948 (3,5,6) - which looks more structured actually it looks good, but it feels weird to play, so I will leave it like this
39. 04:49:717 (3) - Missing a sound on 04:49:773 - I guess this kiai is already complex enough, it will become messy
40. 04:58:672 - Go back to soft sample set and lower volume here, this is way too loud fixed
41. 05:04:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - Eh this is something you did during slow part, doesn't feel right in an intense part like this, try a to make it a jump like you did for 05:01:806 (6,7,8,9,1) - fixed
42. 05:11:480 (2) - Shorten it to the 1/8 tick and reverse it, missing a sound fixed
43. 05:12:056 (4) - ^fixed
44. 05:27:324 (1) - End it on the red tick at 05:30:797 - instead fixed

Hope this helped, good luck

1. Artist name does not belong in tags (anything that is already in title/artist/source doesn't belong there).
2. Lol apparently you missed the double dots in both artist and title (should be "Rigël Theatre" and "SPÏKA" apparently). That's incredibly minor but still should be changed
3. You could put album name in the tags as well ("Lengsel - Ghosts of Memories -")

1. 00:27:097 (3) - I would make that NC, since that is more consistent with the other NC's in this part
2. 01:08:299 (1) - I like this pattern but it's pretty hard compared to the part right before it, so I suggest changing that
3. 01:39:866 (5) - NC here and 01:40:314 (1) removing NC there makes more sense imo
4. 01:43:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This feels out of place; the entire kiai section is pretty calm actually and then suddenly there's this tough pattern at the end :^)
5. 02:04:941 (7) - NC here (removing 02:06:284 (1), this one doesn't really make sense)
6. 02:12:553 (2,3,4,5) - I think something like you did at 00:50:946 (5,6,7) would fit better with the slow music here
7. 02:44:344 (7) - NC
8. 03:40:538 (4,5,6,7) - This burst and the one shortly after it is pretty sudden even though the music doesn't really emphasize that
9. 03:42:105 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern overlaps with the burst right before it and it makes it slightly awkward to play, I would definitely change that
10. 03:45:687 (5) - Sudden jump feels a bit random
11. 03:50:948 (3,4,5,6,7) - Random difficulty spike (hahahahaha "spike" pun intended do you get it :^)), might wanna nerf that a bit
12. 03:54:642 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds more like a 1/6th rather than a 1/8th one to me (like in 00:50:946 (5,6,7))
13. Remove NC here 04:00:911 (1) and put it here 04:01:358 (4) instead. It is more consistent and fits better to the music imo
14. 04:40:761 - This kiai part has a lot of inconsistent NC's, I suggest redoing those. It's probably the most difficult part of the map so you have to make sure the combos make sense here (inconsistent combos make it hard to read sometimes)