Hi there, me and multiple nominators and QAT have some concerns about your mapset and things that might improve overall quality, including several wrongly snapped notes, inconsistencies and readability/flow suggestions. Please make sure to look at everything below:
Now for some general concerns on difficulties:
[General]
Hope everything is clear enough and if you couldn't understand something, please point out on the thread and we will reply asap.
snapping errors
- These must be 1/6, and they're using 1/4 on almost every difficulty:
On almost every diff: 00:25:326 - 01:19:812 - 01:41:866 - 02:37:001 - 03:02:947 - 03:25:001 - - As for these, they are all 1/6:
FreyBox's Adagio: 00:35:380 (4,5,6) - 01:51:920 (4,5,6) - 03:35:055 (3,4,5) - 02:07:650 (1,2,3) - 02:12:839 (2) - 02:28:407 (3,4) -
Haruto's Adagietto: 00:35:380 (4,5,6) - 01:51:920 (3,4,5) - 03:35:055 (3,4,5) -
eLy's Andante: 02:07:650 (1,2,3) - 01:11:704 (5,6) - (should be like 02:28:245 (2))
Kalirink's Andantino: 01:11:867 (4,5) -
Joey's Moderato: 00:35:380 (4,5,6) - 01:51:920 (4,5,6) - 03:35:055 (4,5,6) - 01:11:866 (1,2) - 02:28:407 (1,2) - 02:12:839 (3) -
Assing's Allegretto: 00:35:380 (4) - 01:51:921 (4) - 03:35:055 (3,4,5) - 02:37:001 (1,2) - (should be like 01:19:813 (1)) 01:41:867 (1,2,3,4) - (should be like 03:25:001 (1,2)) 01:11:867 (1,2) - 02:28:407 (1,2) -
Kibbleru's Allegro: The intro has multiple incorrect snapping, such as: 00:04:407 (2,3,4) - 00:06:028 (5,6,7,8) - 00:11:461 (2,3,4,1) - 00:14:785 (1,2,3) - 00:22:245 (2,3,4) - 00:25:326 (3) -
not in the intro: 00:35:380 (1,2,3) - 01:51:920 (3,4,5) - 03:35:055 (3,4,5) - 01:41:866 (1,2,3,4) -
Flasxis' Vivace: 00:35:380 (3,4,5) - 01:51:921 (3,4,5) - 03:35:055 (3) - 01:11:867 (2,3) - 02:07:731 (1) - 01:41:867 (1,2) and 00:25:326 (1,2) - (should be just like 03:25:001 (1,2))
Now for some general concerns on difficulties:
[General]
- 02:38:298 - Would suggest making the break start consistent for all diffs that have it, since it seems a shame to not do so when you can. If not, at least snap it correctly on Fuccho's diff.
- 03:03:595 (1) - This slider isn't being supported by anything and it's even inconsistent with the first Kiai. It's barely starting on any sound and the only thing emphasizing the strong beat is the slider tick. Would be a lot better if you could do the same thing here as what've done to the first Kiai.
- 03:01:650 (4) - Appears to be missing NC.
- 02:18:678 (1,2) - Swapping NCs here would fit better imo.
- 03:44:298 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Same as Kibb and top diff. Snare(?) sounds aren't emphasised well with full stream, and I prefer previous sections 02:01:002 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1).
- 03:44:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Similar to top diff, the snare (?) sounds aren't really emphasised nicely with a full stream. I liked what was done with the kick sliders in previous sections better 02:01:164 (3,4,1,2,3,4).
- 02:32:785 (3) - 02:33:596 (3) - 02:59:380 (3) - 03:00:191 (3) - Would just remove these since it seems the drums are being prioritised for this section, and there just aren't any for these notes. I do think these are more fun to play if the 1/1 gaps are followed in the music.
- 03:06:028 - Wouldn't suggest missing this vocal beat with the extended slider, since it is pretty significant to me.
- 03:32:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Makes more sense to make the jumps increase with the pitch rather than doing the opposite like you did here.
- 03:19:164 (1,2,3) - Auto-stacking made this look terrible.
- 01:31:326 (4) - Would consider moving this to around (10, 324) so it's similar to 01:23:542 (3), and I think halting to movement here seems a little out of place.
- 00:44:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 02:01:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I do think these would be better if the (snare? whatever you hitsounded the finishes to) would be highlighted better, since a full stream doesn't really represents those sounds very well, especially for 00:44:785 (3). 03:44:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) is slightly better, if only 3 was the actual corner rather than in the middle of the curve.
- 01:18:839 (3) - Appears to be missing a whistle.
- 01:44:137 (1) - Seems like an NC mistake? Single object combo seems out of place here.
- 03:27:109 - Would aim to make this a clickable beat since most of the other synth(?) sounds for similar sections were clickable. I can understand switching it if there was a vocal sound like the slider after this, but there isn't one here so.
Hope everything is clear enough and if you couldn't understand something, please point out on the thread and we will reply asap.