KuraiPettan wrote:

BakaHuang's Normal
- AR +1, it will be more readable I thinkfix
00:10:551 (3) - Add a finis at the beginning of this slider ?fix
00:18:353 (2) - This kind of slider is not appropriate here, you'd better do a 1/2 long slider here.fix
00:24:054 (1) - But this one looks fine
00:27:355 (5) - Isn't this slider a bit close from (4) ? :/ Move it 1 grid down and it will look nicer imo fix
00:35:456 (2,3) - This part don't really fit the vocals, if you want to fit them, do something like http://puu.sh/1W9ofix
00:38:757 (1) - Add a clap at the beginning ? fix
00:51:960 (5) - Add a clap at the beginning ? fix
01:06:963 (3) - Add a clap onto the reverse ?fix
01:38:169 (2) - As 00:18:353 (2), it's not appropriate here :/fix
01:46:571 (1) - Add a clap at the end ?fix
02:14:777 (5) - Same for this one this one?
02:23:779 (5) - As 00:27:355 (5), this slider is too close rom (4) and it looks ugly, move it 1 grid down ?fix
02:24:978 (7) - A finish would be more appropriated here in my opinionfix
02:59:785 (5) - Try to make the end correctly stacked with (2) ?fix
03:02:186 (3) - Add a clap onto the reverse ?fix

Debbiee wrote:

BakaHuang's Normal
00:18:353 (2) - Remove this slider. Add a circle here: 00:18:353 no thanks, but i have changed it in another way
00:18:953 (3) - Then move this slider here: 00:18:653 Extend it here: 00:19:553^
00:24:054 (1) - Remove this slider. Add 2 circles instead: 00:24:054, 00:24:354no thanks

1. Ok first of all, I sort of want to encourage people on using grid level 4. I think it's much cooler imo, because you can be much more precise wihle placing circles and beziering the sliders. So that's an advise, and not actually part of the mod
2. I think that the Soft Hitclap on this song kind of sucks xD I'd at least use the Normal Hitclap - You know, just get it from the template skin and set it as the custom Soft one. But if you like you clap, keep it.

1. Let's say that... There are a lot of spacing issues. I'll mention a few, assuming that you worked with Grid Snap off. If you have Distance Snapping off, please turn it on.
2. 00:29:155 (7) - This isn't correctly snapped (from 6). Please fix it.
3. 00:41:758 (2) - Why is there a sort of jump here? I mean, the distance is much greater than the one you should use. Please fix this too.
4. Meh actually I don't think it's worth mentioning them all, not because I'm lazy but because I don't want to be a Nazi ;_; so:
5. My suggestion: Go through the whole map with Grid Snap and Distance Snap ON (both of them), use Grid Level 4, and try to place everything on the correct Distance from the previous object. You'll learn much more than if I just tell you what to fix

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi~

[General]

1. Ok first of all, I sort of want to encourage people on using grid level 4. I think it's much cooler imo, because you can be much more precise wihle placing circles and beziering the sliders. So that's an advise, and not actually part of the mod well, i used to map with grid 4 but i wanted to try with grid 3 and shift for angles. Mapping with grid 3 took less than mapping with grid 4. I was lazy..i know
2. I think that the Soft Hitclap on this song kind of sucks xD I'd at least use the Normal Hitclap - You know, just get it from the template skin and set it as the custom Soft one. But if you like you clap, keep it. dunno...maybe...i'll think about this

[Easy]

1. Let's say that... There are a lot of spacing issues. I'll mention a few, assuming that you worked with Grid Snap off. If you have Distance Snapping off, please turn it on.
2. 00:29:155 (7) - This isn't correctly snapped (from 6). Please fix it. good
3. 00:41:758 (2) - Why is there a sort of jump here? I mean, the distance is much greater than the one you should use. Please fix this too.
4. Meh actually I don't think it's worth mentioning them all, not because I'm lazy but because I don't want to be a Nazi ;_; so:
5. My suggestion: Go through the whole map with Grid Snap and Distance Snap ON (both of them), use Grid Level 4, and try to place everything on the correct Distance from the previous object. You'll learn much more than if I just tell you what to fix

Well, actually... I can't complain about how you NC'd in general, or about the hitsounds (except for the clap thing mentioned in [General]. The other diffs have basically the same issue mentioned in [Easy], but they are good. So what you have to do is take your time to check the distances, and see how much you can improve on that.
//ok. this will take a long time...
But appart from that, good job. Have my star

xykbear wrote:

M4M.but there all my opinion ,they're may be incorrect.
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[General]
to long blank at last,you'd better cut it. fixed

[Easy]
01:19:265 (3) - so strange with a finish,clap is better deleted that finish.
01:21:666 (3) - ^ same
01:24:366 (3) - ^ same
01:24:966 (1) - finish no.
01:51:972 (1,2,3,4) - this arrange is not a good idea for a new player.fixed
02:02:774 (5) - clap no.will break the pattern

[Expert]
awesome ω thanks :>
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my work: viewtopic.php?t=50867

1. 00:17:453 (1,2,3,4)
2. 00:21:654 (2,3,4,5)
3. 00:24:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
4. etc...

gyt wrote:

Hi!

[Easy]
01:47:171 (1) - too fast after spinner for easy? this is circle is a bit soon. but i consider for bpm 99 is rankable. and also is positioned in the center
02:06:375 (1) - ^ same
02:44:182 (1) - ^ same
00:24:954 (3) - add new combo? fixed!
01:03:362 (3) - ^ fixed!
02:00:974 (3) - ^ fixed!
02:20:177 (3) - ^ fixed!
02:58:585 (3) - ^ fixed!
00:36:657 - I want to click here. Maybe place slider from 00:36:657 to 00:36:957? great! added a slider
02:01:874 (4) - can be difficult to hit. Place 1/2 slider at 02:01:574 [or repeating slider like 01:03:962 (4)]? fixed!
02:13:576 (4,5,6,1) - the only 1/2 pattern in this diff. Can be sudden for novices. Remove 02:14:476 (5)? somehow fixed!


[Expert]
nice! thanks!!!

1. Add "huang99520" into all difficulties as it's her previous ID.

1. All fine to me.

1. 00:18:353 (2) - Clap missed.

1. There is one thing that I wanna point out. The 3rd KIAI time is a a bit different from the other diffs. The correct KIAI time is: 02:44:182-03:03:386

gdeath wrote:

Hey, here's my mod.

[General]:

1. Add "huang99520" into all difficulties as it's her previous ID. added

[Easy]:

1. All fine to me.

[Expert]:

1. There is one thing that I wanna point out. The 3rd KIAI time is a a bit different from the other diffs. The correct KIAI time is: 02:44:182-03:03:386fixed.

Simple/pure mappset, have my star.

narakucrimson wrote:

[General]

1. Ok first of all, I sort of want to encourage people on using grid level 4. I think it's much cooler imo, because you can be much more precise wihle placing circles and beziering the sliders. So that's an advise, and not actually part of the mod

swish wrote:

mod request thanks:3
All Suggestion

SPOILER

[General]

1. delete .osb and fullsubmit fixed
2. Disabled the unused Countdown on [Easy],[Expert] fixed
   
   
   [Easy]
3. HP,AR,OD+1? fixed
   
   
4. 00:09:951 (1) - add circle? fixed
5. 00:39:957 (1) - spacing fixed
6. 00:44:758 (1) - add a finish?no
7. 00:51:360 (3) - add a finish at the beginning? no
8. 00:56:161 (5) - ^ no
9. 01:18:365 (2) - hmm..Please make it to the straight oh thanks
   
   
   
   
10. 01:47:171 (1) - delete note? (because of the near from the spin... to [Easy]) no
11. 02:06:375 (1) - near from the spin.. 000]no[/color]
12. 02:22:578 (1) - add a finish? no
13. 02:44:182 (1) - same as 02:06:375 (1) -no
    
    
    [BakaHuang's Normal]
14. AR-1?
    
    
15. 02:06:975 (2) - spacing
16. 02:41:482 (3) - 1grid up
    
    [Expert]
17. OD-1? fixed
    
    
18. 00:21:654 (1) - 2grid right? fixed
19. 00:22:854 (1) - ^fixed
20. 00:46:259 (x) - add circle ?fixed
21. 01:43:870 (3) - ^ no
22. 01:46:871 (2) - x:256 y:80? fixed
23. 01:51:072 (3) - x:192 y:192 fixed
24. 01:51:372 (4) - x:112 y:113 (grid snap off) fixed
25. 01:51:672 (5) - x: 32 y:192 fixed
26. 02:02:174 (1) - new combo? fixed
27. 02:59:785 (9) - ^fixed

star~

banvi wrote:

hihi
All my suggestion
[Easy]
01:05:162 (3) add clap?
01:43:570 (2) add finish at the end?
02:02:774 (2) add clap?
02:39:381 (4) new combo?
03:00:385 (3) add clap?

[Expart]
00:20:153 (3) change finish? I prefer finish in this...
00:57:961 (1) change finish at the end?
01:17:765 (4) change finish?
01:56:173 (2) ^
02:15:376 (1) add finish at the beginning?
02:53:784 (2) change finish?

nice map (:

1. No Source?

1. 00:44:758(x)-Add a whistle on this spinner?
2. 00:58:561(1.2)-The clap sound on the reverse is extremely weird.Try to remove it or use a whistle to instead of.
3. 01:18:365(2.3)-IMO,These slider is reaaly hard to read for newbie.
4. 01:36:969(6.1)-Swap new combo to consistent the play flow.
5. 01:56:173(1)-This pattern is good.However,If you do that in easy difficulty,It will make confuesd to newbie!
6. 02:14:176(5.6.1)-The only 1/2 notes hit in this easy difficulty?Maybe remove it to consistent this diff.

1. 00:18:953(3.4.1)-hum...Inconsistent spacing here..please close the grid snap then replace these notes.
2. 00:43:858(6)-Little spacing problem...
3. 01:27:817(1)-I don't know if player feel awkward here due to you star from blue tick..
4. 01:32:168(4)-Add a finish here?It might better if you change it.
5. 02:21:078(2.3)-A bit ugly IMO..maybe just make it more curve?
6. 02:55:584(3)-A new combo here to keep the play flow.

• 00:39:357(x)-Add a note here and finish due to here has a accent point.

1. 00:45:058(2.3.4)-A little suggestion here:Maybe stack it then Horizontally with(1)-?
2. 00:57:661(x)-Add a note here to make a 4-plet but you need to consistent the spacing if you do that.
3. 01:27:517(x)-Yeah..map this break please.Just make some dfferent to another diff.
4. 01:54:522(x)-Add a note here to follow the vocal.
5. 02:39:081(5)-Remove this note because here doesn't have any drum sound or vocal you may start the spinner here also.
6. 02:44:182(~)Hey,What I can see in this Kiai part?I just see you do copy and paste It's obvious similar withe the previous part.Please use more creative to think about this part.

kanpakyin wrote:

[BakaHuang's Normal]

1. 00:18:953(3.4.1)-hum...Inconsistent spacing here..please close the grid snap then replace these notes. sorry I don't think there have any snap problems.
2. 00:43:858(6)-Little spacing problem... ^
3. 01:27:817(1)-I don't know if player feel awkward here due to you star from blue tick.. that's ok, it's silder not note.
4. 01:32:168(4)-Add a finish here?It might better if you change it.ok, very nice
5. 02:21:078(2.3)-A bit ugly IMO..maybe just make it more curve? thanks. fixed
6. 02:55:584(3)-A new combo here to keep the play flow.

no thanks
I see many copy and paste here..I'm unhappy:< I'm unhappy too

NoHItter wrote:

General
I suggest you move your preview point to 48284

Easy
00:29:755 (1) - I don't suggest suddenly making it end on a red tick. This may throw off the newer players. Perhaps making it like this? fixed
00:34:556 (1) - I don't suggest making a slider end on a blue (1/4) tick either. Make it end on 00:36:357 and make the next slider into a note at 00:36:957? Like this? fixed
01:28:267 (x) - Map this break? fixed
02:00:974 (1) - Extend this by 1/2. Sound better IMO. i like the way it is.

Expert
00:35:756 (3) - I think it would be better if you remove this and add another repeat to the previous slider. fixed
00:39:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggestion: Map this part to the lyrics instead. fixed
00:41:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above. fixed
01:36:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above. fixed
01:39:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above. fixed
01:41:770 (1,2) - Same as above. fixed
02:30:980 (4,5) - I think it would be better if you remove these and add another repeat to the previous slider. fixed
02:53:183 (8,1,2) - Why the sudden shift of spacing with your triples? Compared to 02:45:983 (1,2,3). fixed

I think Expert needs a bit more mods. i will ask for more mods then

wmfchris wrote:

move the preview time to 50459? Then players can preview the vocals better.

[Expert]
00:53:760 (2) - whistle? it has whistle already
00:54:360 (4) - ^ i like the way it is
00:54:960 (6) - ^ ^
00:55:410 (x) - use a 1/4 slider instead of a single note? thank you. i added a circle there :3
01:30:067 (6) - whistle? i like the way it is
01:43:870 (5) - the vocal probably goes 1/8 eariler, though this note is fine... added a circle there

the pattern just repeats too much... >_< oh

I guess the left is fine...

ziin wrote:

[Expert]
A bit disappointed you didn't map the vocals much. There's some fun sixteenth and thirty-second notes which are entirely possible on 100 BPM on the vocals. yay
02:43:882 (1,2,3) - Why did you compress these triples in the last kiai? remapped. they aren't anymore. but thanks

[Easy]
00:29:755 (1,2) - jumps aren't usually in easy, and it doesn't make sense. mapping error. my bad

pouer wrote:

Nice melody but lyrics sound silly ^^ I wish the time I was a little boy who did not understand english, I was able to appreciate any kind of song no matter whether lyrics are silly or not