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Hello Xeo!
I saw over the last months that you put really a lot of effort into this map.
I wanted to help you a bit out with a little random mod. Let's see if i can give you any helpful suggestion!
General
Artist: Correct
Title: Correct // I guess i can take this as source
Source: -
Tags: I can see that you have guest diffs but you haven't any other mapper in the Tags. If i see correct you should add "Blocko" "Todestrieb" "_underjoy" and "Fullerene-" into the tags.
AiMod: AiMod Error in: Expert. Please check this!
Background: Correct
BPM/Offset: Correct
mp3/Hitsounds: Correct
Other: -
Blocko's Beginner
{Optional} 00:31:026 (31026|0,31026|3) - You could change these into one hand. Either [12] or [34]. Can be easier to hit for beginner, especially with a 1/1 note before this one.00:45:795 (45795|3,45795|0) - This one is okay. 2/1 break before and after.
00:52:257 (52257|1) - Hmm.. couldn't you change this to a single note and start the LN from 00:52:718 - ? It sounds better to the music because here you can here a different sound. The "Wooosh" begins here.
01:14:411 (74411|3) - Split this into two LNs? Let this one end 01:14:872 - and start another one from here. It gives consistency into your pattern, see as reference this one 01:07:026 (67026|0,67488|3) - .
According to how you mapped here in this part, this note here 01:42:334 (102334|3) - is wrongly placed. It should be placed at 01:42:218 - .
03:28:257 (208257|3,208257|0) - If you accepted my suggestion above, these again to one hand.
Cool diff!
Blocko's Easy
00:55:026 (55026|2) - You let this LN in the Beginner end 1/2 beat earlier. Is this here now intentionally?01:18:103 (78103|1,78334|2,78564|0,78795|1) - You could make these 1-3-1-3. The music gives here the perfect moment for a trill.
01:25:488 (85488|0,85718|1,85949|2,86180|3) - And these maybe 4-2-4-2 then.
01:52:141 (112141|2,112257|3) - Till now this is the only one one handed 1/2 pattern you used in the Map. I highly suggest, especially on 260 bpm, to keep 1/2 pattern played with different hands.
02:35:872 (155872|2,156103|2,156334|1) - Just a little suggestion. I can see that you try to bring some variety into the pattern with 1/1 jacks but wouldn't it fit better with 02:36:103 (156103|2,156334|1) - ? Really strong kick sounds.
02:50:757 (170757|1,171103|2) - I suggest to CTRL+G here. 1/2 break releases on 260 bpm with the same hand is dangerous for an Easy.
Remaining looks gud!
Normal
I'm a bit in worry about the spread to the Easy at the beginning. Some pattern look for a Normal pretty hard. I mean it's 260bpm. Let me point out a which "could" need some nerf maybe.This is the first one at 00:21:795 - . Blocko used long notes of 2/1 beat while you go directly into 1/2 notes. My suggestion would be to delete following notes: 00:21:911 (21911|0,22026|3,22257|2,22372|0,22603|1) - . Following only the snare and have at the end a short 1/2 pattern.
00:32:411 (32411|2,32641|2,32872|2) - Maybe it would be possible to remove these "jacks"? CTRL+G 00:32:872 (32872|2,33103|1) - solves this problem. Further in this part you doesn't have these "jacks" either.
02:36:564 (156564|1,156795|1,157026|1) - Maybe get rid of this xP
02:51:334 (171334|1,171564|1,171795|1) - Same here!
Just looks so randomly appearing.
03:19:026 (199026|2,199257|2,199488|2,199718|2) - Moving these jacks to the left hand would make a more comfortable transition for "Normal" difficulty player.
Beep, that's all.
So overall the difficulty looks okay, i'm just a bit in worry about the extremely long 1/2 pattern int he Kiai's. There is like almost never a break. Considering this shall represent the Normal difficulty in the set this might be a bit too much. Maybe it would be possible to nerf it a bit? Some breaks would be already enough. At least 1/1 breaks.
Medium
00:18:103 (18103|2,18218|2,18334|3,18449|1,18564|1,18680|0,18795|3,18911|3,19026|2) - Jacks like these, totally fine. But what i don't like is the next 1/2 note after the jacks. You could make it for player at this level way more comfortable by moving the last note, ergo 00:18:334 (18334|3,18680|0,19026|2) - . to the other hand. Like you did it with the last one here: 00:19:141 (19141|0,19257|0,19372|3) - .I don't know. Maybe it's me but i had at this level really problems with jacks.
00:22:834 (22834|3,23064|1) - CTRL+G and you create really cool jack pattern which fit to the music.
00:30:103 (30103|2,30334|1,30564|3) - 1/4 releases on not even hard makes me sad
Hallo Normal -> Medium spread. Please nerf these to 1/2. Do not go from 2/1 LNs to 1/4 pattern. That's really not okay. Like really.
01:28:257 - Maybe add a note here? Normal uses LN+Single.
Remaining looks ok!
Tode's Hard
Is it me, or are literally all 1/3 triples, like 00:02:488 (2488|1,2564|2,2641|3) - , 00:03:180 (3180|0,3257|1,3334|2) - , 00:04:334 (4334|2,4411|1,4488|0) - etc are wrong snapped.Listening over and over it makes me really sure that all of them are Wrong Snapped.
You will need to fix this.
03:25:488 (205488|0) - Long Note Ending is Wrong Snapped. Please cut it for 1/4 beat.
More i don't have to say. The diff is pretty cool as hard. Most stuff i "could" point out is very subjective, that's why i didn't. It wasn't even much.
Good job!
Xeo VS _UJ Insane
00:22:718 (22718|2,22776|3) - Could CTRL+G here. Better transition to the next pattern and gives a bit variety.01:07:603 (67603|3,67834|3) - If you want to follow strictly PR for the trills, you need to move these to 3. The pitch is different of 01:07:141 (67141|3,67372|3) - .
03:24:276 (204276|1) - Ghost Note. This note isn't mapped to any own sound. Must be removed.
03:28:141 - Why you leave this place here empty? At least a single note could be placed here.
Totally love the concept of single note streams. Long single note streams. Complicated single note streams. No disturbing jumps between. No breaks. It's really really cool!
Expert
00:30:103 - // This voice samples sound like "SV Challenge" lul
00:41:641 - I have the feeling that these 1/6 notes should be 1/4. The exactly same sound you mapped later with 1/4, it's here 00:44:411 - . This ends in a inconsistency.
00:53:988 (53988|0) - Again here. You mapped it at 00:53:988 (53988|0) - with 1/4 and here 1/6. It's really exactly the same sound and you used a different snap. This is what is not okay.
00:59:718 (59718|2,59795|0) - These notes are Wrongly snapped. This should a s 1/4 triple starting from 00:59:757 - .
Okay, after i listen to this part several times i am pretty sure following notes are Ghost Notes: 01:02:122 (62122|3) - , 01:05:814 (65814|0) - , 01:09:507 (69507|1) - , 01:13:199 (73199|3) - . It's pretty audible, even on 50% playback rate.
01:22:257 (82257|3,82334|2,82411|1) - Is there a reason why these are 1/3? There isn't any 1/3 sound. A 1/4 triple from 01:22:257 - would make sense but 1/3.. ?_?
01:29:180 (89180|3,89257|2,89334|1,89411|0,89488|3) - Again. No Matter how often i listen to it i don't see why this should be 1/3.
Enlighten me.
01:44:238 (104238|2,104699|2) - These two are again Ghost Notes.
02:27:795 (147795|0,147872|1,147949|2,148026|1,148103|2,148180|3) - And again. Random 1/3. There isn't any 1/3 sound at all. Enlighten me again!
02:43:084 (163084|1,163314|1,163545|2,163661|1) - Beep. Again Ghost Notes.
03:09:564 (189564|0,189603|1,189641|2,189680|3,189718|0,189757|1) - Uhhh, again these 1/6 for .. i guess the woosh sound you mapped before with 1/4?
Okay, i guess that's all. There's a lot of Ghost Note stuff in this Diff. The Ghost Note stuff apply's also for the higher diffs because i saw these have this mapped too. I also would like to hear something about the 1/3 stuff because i can't hear 1/3 at all haha
Okay, i guess i stop my mod here. The higher diffs get into something i personally don't like but i guess there isn't anything (beside of Ghost Notes! :eyes:) which is against the RC.. i hope. I saw Fullerene's diff which has a lot of weird pattern but i guess i look into it more detailed when the time comes for it.
Hope some of my suggestions help you and i wish you good luck with the map!