Himeringo - Shinitai-chan · forum

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-12-01T00:52:53+00:00

General:
soft-hitfinish.wav is unused.
02:21:872 - is barely audible with 5%, try 10-20-30-40 for the four green lines

Easy:
00:54:145 - 00:57:781 - 01:03:236 - 01:15:963 - 01:47:781 - 02:26:872 - 02:34:145 - clap
03:05:509 - whistle

Normal:
01:02:781 - 03:00:963 - whistle
01:04:600 (2) - 01:19:146 (2) - 02:22:782 (2) - 02:37:328 (2) - I suggest using two circles instead to follow the instrument melody
01:47:781 - clap

Advanced:
01:11:873 (3) - adjust rhythm to follow vocal? you did it everywhere else
02:29:146 (1,2,3,1) - same here, i assume u copy same rhythm pattern from 1st kiai?

03:04:600 (3,5) - vocal is extended here, 1/1 slider suits better imo

Hard:
00:24:827 - 00:28:918 (6) - 00:34:600 - maybe add whistle to keep your hitsounding pattern consistent with previous triplets 00:21:418 (3,4,5) - 00:23:237 (3,4,1) - , tho I would recommend adding another one to blue ticks as well
02:08:691 (2,1) - the distance here is somehow similar to your previous new combos with 1/2 gap 02:07:782 (2,1) - , I suggest putting the last note somewhere around 480, 70 to create a back and forth movement while making the 1/1 gap clearer
02:29:146 (1) - follow vocal like the rest? If you think that would be too many 1/2 sliders try turning 02:28:237 (3,4) - into 1/1+circle cuz vocal isn't that intense there

Insane:
some triplet hs same as hard
00:38:009 (4,1,2,3) - 01:54:373 (4,1,2,3) - hmm personally I would like to see some variation in slider direction here

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Pop is for the unused file, either call me or Hobbes for a rebubbble when my concerns are addressed.

Cheri

1,770 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Cheri 2017-12-01T01:45:23+00:00

Garden wrote:
General:
soft-hitfinish.wav is unused. O forgot to got rid of it after I fixed the hitsounds - gone now
02:21:872 - is barely audible with 5%, try 10-20-30-40 for the four green lines applied to all difficulties except shiratoi's insane - I ended up deleted them since they was unused

Easy:
00:54:145 - 00:57:781 - 01:03:236 - 01:15:963 - 01:47:781 - 02:26:872 - 02:34:145 - clap
03:05:509 - whistle

Normal:
01:02:781 - 03:00:963 - whistle
01:04:600 (2) - 01:19:146 (2) - 02:22:782 (2) - 02:37:328 (2) - I suggest using two circles instead to follow the instrument melody ok
01:47:781 - clap ok

Advanced:
01:11:873 (3) - adjust rhythm to follow vocal? you did it everywhere else
02:29:146 (1,2,3,1) - same here, i assume u copy same rhythm pattern from 1st kiai?
03:04:600 (3,5) - vocal is extended here, 1/1 slider suits better imo

Hard:
00:24:827 - 00:28:918 (6) - 00:34:600 - maybe add whistle to keep your hitsounding pattern consistent with previous triplets 00:21:418 (3,4,5) - 00:23:237 (3,4,1) - , tho I would recommend adding another one to blue ticks as well ok
02:08:691 (2,1) - the distance here is somehow similar to your previous new combos with 1/2 gap 02:07:782 (2,1) - , I suggest putting the last note somewhere around 480, 70 to create a back and forth movement while making the 1/1 gap clearer ok
02:29:146 (1) - follow vocal like the rest? If you think that would be too many 1/2 sliders try turning 02:28:237 (3,4) - into 1/1+circle cuz vocal isn't that intense there I think having 1 more 1/2 isn't gonna hurt so I didn't make the previous pattern a 1/1 slider+circle but did the other change

Insane:
some triplet hs same as hard
00:38:009 (4,1,2,3) - 01:54:373 (4,1,2,3) - hmm personally I would like to see some variation in slider direction here

[]
Pop is for the unused file, either call me or Hobbes for a rebubbble when my concerns are addressed.

I pretty much copy the hitsounds from the hard difficulty so I did every hitsound change on Shira's Insane and Skairul's Easy

- I am going back over them before I get back to ya -

Just waiting for Shiratoi's and Noffy's responses

Last edited by Cheri 2017-12-02T04:36:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,659 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-12-01T01:51:24+00:00

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Garden wrote:
Advanced:
01:11:873 (3) - adjust rhythm to follow vocal? you did it everywhere else whaa I could've sworn I self fixed this an update ago I must've.. forgotten to save before posting the .osu.. oops.. Fixed.
02:29:146 (1,2,3,1) - same here, i assume u copy same rhythm pattern from 1st kiai? I did exactly that but the reason this wasn't changed was because I wasn't sure what to do here at the time. Changed to cute 1/2s~
03:04:600 (3,5) - vocal is extended here, 1/1 slider suits better imo I would rather not change this because it's the one time there are 1/4 vocals soon after eachother, making it sound noticably shorter and 03:04:372 (2,3) - seperate from 03:05:281 (4,5) - . I want to reflect the song's difference here by changing the rhythm a bit so even I do not directly map the 1/4 as it is so audibly obvious. So I feel extending them would take away from this distinction as the rhythm would be too similar to previous ones where the objects are continuous 1/2 apart.

thanks ^^/

osu

osu file format v14

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Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2017-12-02T04:07:58+00:00

@garden: i think its fine since the beats and vocals are being repeated

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-12-02T13:49:12+00:00

rebubbled

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-12-05T08:11:26+00:00

recheck and it looks good to go

Uta

964 posts

Joined December 2016

Uta 2017-12-05T08:51:37+00:00

cool

Cheri

1,770 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Cheri 2017-12-05T11:40:12+00:00

o just seen the announcement

(good thing I left my game on)

Thank you guys <3

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2017-12-05T12:24:12+00:00

gratz!

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-12-05T16:33:21+00:00

Congratulations! <3
Himeringo <3

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,659 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-12-06T00:43:57+00:00

O:!!
Congradulations /w/

Skairul

209 posts

Joined August 2014

Skairul 2017-12-06T09:00:45+00:00

HUZZAH!

Congrats

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2017-12-10T17:32:15+00:00

When using Japanaese honourific titles, it should be in small letters, like -chan -kun -san, rather than in caps

Cheri

1,770 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Cheri 2017-12-10T18:02:38+00:00

neonat wrote:
When using Japanaese honourific titles, it should be in small letters, like -chan -kun -san, rather than in caps

waiting for qat - recheck sources and this was my bad on this......

Fixed the title so chan is all lower case

also I remove 1 of the IA in the tags since I just notice that it was 2

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-12-10T23:02:55+00:00

DQ by request to fix metadata

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-12-11T00:08:45+00:00

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