00:24:431 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really beautiful stream, it will be better if you make it in the same curve as this slider 00:23:470 (1) - and turn it 120 degrees clockwise. It looks like this -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633890Also I want to put note here >_< - 00:24:912
My intention with this was to create a symmetry with 00:25:008 (6,7,1) - which works well with my "style", i do that a lot and i won't add a note because i'm following drums and i'm also pretty sure the violin stops at the end of the burst aswell00:25:777 (4,5) - your placement choice a little bit strange here, not intuitive to play. This -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633922 or this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633932 wil be better imo.
Reworked the pattern my own way, more or less like your second suggestion00:27:123 (3,4,5,6) - too close, imo.
Kinda spread it a bit more when i did ^ but i don't want too much spacing on this to emphasize 00:28:277 (1,2,3,1) - more00:42:893 (3) - make this slider straight? o.o
Yeah, tried something here00:58:277 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like how this stream looks, maybe will be better to make it more curve. Or just put nc here 00:58:662 (1) -
I guess i'll NC then but i don't like how it makes it inconsistent with the rest of the streams just because of patterning, might change back00:59:816 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
^01:05:970 (2,3,4,5) - maybe stream?
I go back to following drums because 01:05:970 (2) - is really loud so it makes more sense to me this way01:23:277 (7) - ctrl+h?
Eh well i tend to go with symmetry a lot it's true but vocals kinda repeat themselves so parallelism works fine here idk, i'll probably do it or add more parallel sliders in the rest of the map01:28:277 (1,2,3,1) - not really comfortable to play, as for me.
? Triangle with consistent DS is probably the most comfortable thing to play01:29:239 (2,1) - make blanket here?
Kinda far away from each other but i did it01:36:835 - I want a note here
Following drums here because the pattern before does it too01:36:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and more curve stream here~
Having it straight contrasts better with 01:37:508 (1) - which is curved + downbeat imo01:40:970 (2) - nc here? o.o (stupid suggestion)
Yeah i would've done it if the previous note didn't need one for consistency but if i did it right now it would be too spammy imo01:46:162 (2) - crtl+j for this and this 01:46:354 (3) - charming sliders.
Both work but i prefer mine idk01:47:893 (5) - I hear slider untill here - 01:48:662.
Yeah but my intention was to give impact to the crash+snare and vocals so using a slider feels more appropriate, also the map is 5 minutes long and has only one break so giving a small pause here is good to let the player reposition their hands or w/e03:17:123 (6) - ^
^01:50:970 (5) - nc?
The beat isn't strong enough to warrant an NC that would break consistency here imo01:52:508 (6,7,1) - make it as one line? (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6634128)
Yeah i had struggle with that part to fix all the overlaps but your suggestion have me an idea so i did something for this pattern01:53:470 (4) - ctrl+j and ctrl+h?
01:53:854 (5) - ctrl+j?
These two got kinda irrelevant now but i don't like the way 4 is harder to hit than the rest, it's kinda awkward but the pattern completely changedIt plays more comfortable, imo -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/663413802:07:893 (4) - ctrl+h?
Ctrl+g'd, a previous mod pointed this out too, whatever02:13:950 (4,5,6,7) - make it as a stream, not a stack?
The stack here gives a lot more impact to 02:14:431 (1) - imo02:20:200 (5,1) - make blanket here.
Did something else02:27:508 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - inaccurate stream, make it more curve. Something like this -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6634192 (oh, it looks like a heart
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Yeah nice, did it with 0.8 ds tho02:29:047 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
NC'd like the other ones02:49:431 (6) - stack this note and the end of this slider 02:48:854 (4) - ?
Slight overlap to make it more comfortable to read03:02:700 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I still don't like your streams.
Well this one goes perfectly with what drums do03:03:854 (2) - crtl+j?
Ctrl+g'd03:04:239 (3,4,5) - make blanket here, please.
Hmm probably linked the wrong objects because i see no blanket opportunity here03:05:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - still don't like your streams.
I think it's better?03:15:200 (1) - make this as a 1/8 slider too? o.o
I guess you meant 1/4 but the 1/4s starts after this note03:16:547 (4) - ctrl+j?
Ctrl+h'd instead, also removed unnecessary overlaps03:20:393 (5,1) - hr players don't like pauses like this.
I don't like hr players :^)03:52:508 (7) - nc?
Yes04:11:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - still don't like your streams.
Uh but this one is the least worse imo D:04:27:893 (4) - I hear slider again.
Same as before04:31:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe will be better to increase spacing here, because vocal's mood is changed.
Buffed it a little and tried to make it look slightly better 05:00:585 (1,2) - make a blanket here, please.
Blanket with 2's sliderend already, but i did something with stacks