-kevincela- wrote:

Try to rename the map " Tornero' ", It should work.

MercurialSpectre wrote:

This is it.-


General: Nice SB There are many errors that appear intentional, if so, no problem, but the point out anyway.


Suggestion

.-kevincela-'s Normal


00.39.844 - (3,4,5) New combo
00.46.390 - (6) ^
01.03.884 - (4) ^
01.08.208 - (7) ^


.-Hard

The Hitclaps sounds like Rap xD
Nothing to do here.


This type of map reminds me of the grace of creating them, playing with the aesthetics and circles.

It gave me great joy mod this map.


Black Star.-


Pd: I make so exceptions with this Beatmap for things like time and Taiko Diff... xD

Good Luck !

BounceBabe wrote:

Update

Remove the full SB from the osu. files :<

And add the .osb file ... also the revised picture

I'll revive this one if i finished my other map's sorry >w<

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Request~

General
0% Volume ist UNRANKABLE, bitte alle 0% volume sections auf mindestens 5% erhöhen.
Schneide die MP3 n bissl kürzer. 15% des songs sind nicht gemapt.
Kiai times müssen resnapped werden my bad

Warum hast du n BG von AIR wenns 0 Verbindung dazu hat? ._. weils einfach passt?


Hard
AR - 1
OD - 1
Die hohen settings passen nicht zu dem song. IMO hört sich gut an, okay..

00:26:754 (3) - der jump passt net IMO. k
00:28:117 (1) - wenne sillent end haben willst isses besser wenne die green line direkt ans ende packst.k
00:46:799 (5) - remove whistle von blue lines - pack die auffe white lines oder red lines. Gilt für alles ähnliche.k
00:51:708 (2) - remove notek
01:19:935 (2,3,4) - spacing bitte gleichmäßig machenk

Normal
Lots of not necessary Green Lines, check and delete them.

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod as requested

[General]
Seeing none?

[Hard]
spinner like Normal diff
00:26:754 (3) - try not silence this when and the spinner k
00:45:026 (7) - volume 70% recommended k
00:51:026 (1) - The note doesnt fit the song, try this -->http://puu.sh/5hBH I'll keep my one
01:00:026 (1) - spacing, move upward a little bit k
02:02:481 (x) - add circle It fits with 3 notes too yea, but personally i like it how it is so no
02:40:663 (5) - move to x=416 y=112
02:40:935 (6) - ^(480,232)
02:41:208 (7) - ^(368,304)
02:41:481 (8) - ^(296,184) and fix the rest spacing
02:43:935 (8) - ^(120,120) fixed the patterns


Pretty good
Good Luck.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Normal
Lots of not necessary Green Lines, check and delete them. All fixed

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Normal]

00:00:299 (1) - This spinner can be start from the long white line before (00:00:026) No
00:27:844 (7) - I do not prefer this to be silence For me it's ok..
00:45:026 (4) - sudden loud sounds strange ^
01:28:390 (4) - not silence Done
02:44:754 (3) - move to x=76 y=76 Done

-kevincela- wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Normal
Lots of not necessary Green Lines, check and delete them. All fixed

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Normal]

00:00:299 (1) - This spinner can be start from the long white line before (00:00:026) No
00:27:844 (7) - I do not prefer this to be silence For me it's ok..
00:45:026 (4) - sudden loud sounds strange ^
01:28:390 (4) - not silence Done
02:44:754 (3) - move to x=76 y=76 Done

Sorry for late response D:

1. verschiedene Background-Colors?

1. 00:27:844 (7) - Volume 5% is too low imo.
2. 01:24:026 (4) - amost unhearable and such a low volume makes no sense here.
3. 01:28:390 (4) - ^
4. 01:48:163 - Inhterited Point makes no sense.
5. 01:49:799 - ^
6. 02:56:344 - ^
7. 03:23:072 - ^

1. 00:30:708 - Dieser Inherited Point ist ziemlich überflüssig.
2. 01:01:117 (3) - Ich würde das Ende nicht silencen. Zerstört irgendwie ein wenig den Rhythmus.
3. 02:31:935 (1,3) - Die Slider sind nicht 100% identisch. Ich würde den ersten markieren und Strg + H + J. (Auch wenn es jetzt extrem pingelig ist)
4. 02:33:572 (4) - 1 grid nach unten
5. 03:01:117 (5,1) - Combo tauschen
6. 03:03:299 (4,1) - ^
7. 03:09:844 (5) - Neue Combo
8. 03:10:935 (1) - Combo löschen
9. 03:12:026 (5) - Neue Combo
10. 03:12:572 (1) - Combo löschen
11. 03:16:117 (1,2) - Combo tauschen
12. 03:23:072 (1) - Auch ein ziemlich überflüssiger Inherited Point. Ich würde die Kiai-Time auf dem davor enden lassen.

DoKoLP wrote:

General

1. verschiedene Background-Colors?

My bad


[Hard]

1. 00:30:708 - Dieser Inherited Point ist ziemlich überflüssig. Fixed
2. 01:01:117 (3) - Ich würde das Ende nicht silencen. Zerstört irgendwie ein wenig den Rhythmus. Ganz im gegenteil, das fördert den rhythmus.
3. 02:31:935 (1,3) - Die Slider sind nicht 100% identisch. Ich würde den ersten markieren und Strg + H + J. (Auch wenn es jetzt extrem pingelig ist) Ich weiß nicht genau wie oft du drübergeschaut hast, aber für mich sieht das in ordnung aus :p
4. 02:33:572 (4) - 1 grid nach unten Von mir aus
5. 03:01:117 (5,1) - Combo tauschen jo
6. 03:03:299 (4,1) - ^ ???
7. 03:09:844 (5) - Neue Combo nope
8. 03:10:935 (1) - Combo löschen nope
9. 03:12:026 (5) - Neue Combo nope
10. 03:12:572 (1) - Combo löschen nope
11. 03:16:117 (1,2) - Combo tauschen nope
12. 03:23:072 (1) - Auch ein ziemlich überflüssiger Inherited Point. Ich würde die Kiai-Time auf dem davor enden lassen.

Nein, da ansonsten der KIAI FONTAIN nicht zum einsatz kommt.

Meist nur ein paar kleine Schönheitsdinge :3
An sich kann ich in der Map nichts wirklich Falsches finden.

OnosakiHito wrote:

Taiko updated~
Map expanded, patterns changed and BG too.
But I dunno if I should keep the name ,,Ono's Taiko". Mabye Taiko Oni. I will think about it.

request from my queue

after you full-submit.I can download it

[normal]
00:04:390 (4) - x325 y 220 if you fix this。fix spacing then
00:21:844 (1) - 1 grid right
00:24:026 (4) - ^and 1 grid down
02:04:390 (1) - finish at the beginning
02:22:935 (4) - move the last white point to x456 y272

[hard]
00:25:663 (1) - clap at the beginning
01:27:299 (3) - remove finish
01:36:299 (3) - out
02:26:481 (1) - ^
btw,3:22.no break time?

1. Tags: Don't see a reason to have BounceBabe in tags.
2. Timing sections: Most of them (including the kiai ones) are coming 3ms too late. You should fix that.
3. Storyboard: Since your SB load is climbing near 5.0x, you could optimize it a bit, by disabling your background (you can do this by using it as a SB element in the background part, it will become black and give 0.0 load) and then just using it (if you need it) again as a SB element. Since the load is below 5.0x, this is not required but it is really recommended.

1. Don't want to nazimod you, but you should try to fix some sliders so they look more pretty, some just looked lazy.

1. Generally when you want to swap to another sound set, do it at the note, not before it. Timing sections such as 00:06:435 come before the note during the slider slide, and this interrupts the sound of the slider sliding. You should fix all those timing sections so they come right when a note occurs, instead of before it.
2. Hitsounds: You chose to use claps on first and 3rd white ticks, but sometimes you used them on 2nd and 4th. I think you shouldn't be doing this because it messes up with the rhythm, but it's not that terrible. Change this if you want only, but I do recommend this.
3. 02:00:026 - Guest diffs are allowed different kiai times if they make sense. I suggest you end your kiai time here because having a kiai over a spinner is awkward, but the biggest reason is that the kiai just stops during a spinner.

1. Tags: Don't see a reason to have BounceBabe in tags. She made the SB
2. Timing sections: Most of them (including the kiai ones) are coming 3ms too late. You should fix that. Fixed
3. Storyboard: Since your SB load is climbing near 5.0x, you could optimize it a bit, by disabling your background (you can do this by using it as a SB element in the background part, it will become black and give 0.0 load) and then just using it (if you need it) again as a SB element. Since the load is below 5.0x, this is not required but it is really recommended.

1. Don't want to nazimod you, but you should try to fix some sliders so they look more pretty, some just looked lazy.

lolcubes wrote:

[Kevincela's Normal]

1. Generally when you want to swap to another sound set, do it at the note, not before it. Timing sections such as 00:06:435 come before the note during the slider slide, and this interrupts the sound of the slider sliding. You should fix all those timing sections so they come right when a note occurs, instead of before it. Done
2. Hitsounds: You chose to use claps on first and 3rd white ticks, but sometimes you used them on 2nd and 4th. I think you shouldn't be doing this because it messes up with the rhythm, but it's not that terrible. Change this if you want only, but I do recommend this. Well,I checked what you said,but I don't think that's a problem. I prefer to leave it as it is
3. 02:00:026 - Guest diffs are allowed different kiai times if they make sense. I suggest you end your kiai time here because having a kiai over a spinner is awkward, but the biggest reason is that the kiai just stops during a spinner. Done

1. 02:25:117 (6) - New combo here, fits the music better and makes the combo shorter.

lolcubes wrote:

[Kevincela's Normal]

1. 02:25:117 (6) - New combo here, fits the music better and makes the combo shorter.

Yeah guess I forgot about that one.