volume mod00:41:417 - 40% is more then enough for this part volume wise, it just feels too loud compared to the song at the current 50%
would also consider muting sliderslides in this part
01:01:069 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 00:40:535 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 04:52:005 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - could play a bit with gradual volume increase/decrease for those, would fit really well
similar to what you did on 01:47:192 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - and others
01:16:631 (10) - wondering why you decided to overmap this, I mean it works
fine but idk
01:28:583 (1) - the other overlapped 1/4 slider => circle patterns seemed fine, but this one just felt really awkward to play and also kinda clumped visually, how about moving things a bit to get the start of the stream stacked on 01:27:781 (4) - ?
01:42:700 - 60% sounds too loud here, even with soft, think 50% works better
02:39:652 (4,5,6,7,8) - when playing through the map, this felt pretty uncomfortable to snap to me, even if it continues the pattern from before, mainly cause of having way slower upwards movement than before + straight line, think going for a curved pattern would end up being nicer to play
http://i.imgur.com/9jfHZkt.jpg03:04:037 (6,7,8,9) - this was just painful to play because of the extreme linear slowdown (plays pretty much like
http://i.imgur.com/NGgz4tU.jpg if you consider how people will play the 1/4s), also 6-7 jump felt unreasonably huge compared to other spacing you used here/on similar things
03:09:973 - I'd put higher volume in the kiai than before cause that seems really fitting with the music here and also makes it feel more intense just like the increased sv. like 55-60% maybe
03:24:492 (6) - doesn't really make sense with what the song does,
http://i.imgur.com/CFIlStA.jpg seems more reasonable to me
03:29:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - just kinda bothers me how you transition from straight line into such a curved stream, it doesn't look very nice to me lol. why not just
http://i.imgur.com/xD548po.jpg03:36:123 (4,5) - this is really spaced too much and felt totally out of place to me as it doesn't make much sense with your other spacing ~2x spacing would fit better
03:51:363 - why is this the same volume as before : ( // would probably alreadfy be fine if you increased kiai volume as suggested before
04:02:433 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - autostacking makes this just look really broken
http://i.imgur.com/TYe5dfE.jpg04:14:144 (1) - how about something like
http://i.imgur.com/KJTtz3j.jpg ?
04:43:021 (3,4,5) - movement here just felt a bit too linear for such a big spacing decrease to be comfortable to play
04:52:968 - why is this 70%, even for soft sampleset this feels way too much with how the song "calms" down so much
something like 60% (or less) here and maybe another decrease on 05:02:914 - would be nice
pretty clean map, let me know when you're done applying things