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Yanaginagi - Haru Modoki (Asterisk DnB Remix)

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Topic Starter
Blan_C
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Anemic Witch
Don't have too much to say, I definitely love flow in Insane diff but its really really easy for 4.5 star.

Also don't forget to cut off mp3 if you're not mapping full song.
Kazuha91
UniBestBlanc making progress huh? :D (recognizing 1/3 parts, gratz!) these last 2 maps have a nice, new, fresh, clean and flowy (what) pattern... you do have potencial; i just wish you actually completed a map XD
either way, put +20ms on the offset of this map :3
Topic Starter
Blan_C

Kazuha91 wrote:

UniBestBlanc making progress huh? :D (recognizing 1/3 parts, gratz!) these last 2 maps have a nice, new, fresh, clean and flowy (what) pattern... you do have potencial; i just wish you actually completed a map XD
either way, put +20ms on the offset of this map :3
Kazuha91,
Thank you for your time. I appreciate your help (offset).I really like this song and i want to finish it, but i am still lacking in expierience. I will do my best to make my map nice and popular :)
Wuab
Might mod Extra later

General
Remove countdowns in all diffs, just my opinion that its not needed.
Add combo colour that complement the backround.


Insane

Timing
The whole map is at 100% volume, in general i would reduce this to 70-80%, you want the hitsounds to complement the song and not overpower it.
^^ in the kiai the volume can be louder as this is the most intense part of the song, the incresed volume would make the kiai more notiable.

Pacement
00:41:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this flow clockwise so it transistion to the stream better
From 00:44:166 (1) - to 01:06:109 (1) - there is an inconsistancy with the mapping
^ 00:45:367 (6) - this is only time in this section that you map to the piano, i would just map that as a slider and circle on the red and white ticks, to passivly map the piano like you have done in the rest of this section
^01:00:281 (8) - this part is hard to fix :C, you mapped the previous piano sound here 00:59:081 (5) - , then you don't map it here 01:00:281 (8) - ,at thered tick, but then you map the rest of the piano sounds in this part, changing 01:00:281 (8) - into a piano sound would be easy but then you do not map to the cymbals in the music which is the start of the build up, the easiest way to fix would be remapping 00:59:081 (5) - to passivly map th piano sound so consistancy is kept.

01:31:823 (4) - don't stack that, doesn't follow proper spacing
01:45:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - you can make this blanket 01:45:537 (7) - and flow better from 01:45:709 (8) -


Sick map man:D
Really well made with very little problems.


Great job :D

pm me if you have any questions.

gl and have fun mapping!
Topic Starter
Blan_C

Master_Chan wrote:

Don't have too much to say, I definitely love flow in Insane diff but its really really easy for 4.5 star.

Also don't forget to cut off mp3 if you're not mapping full song.

Thanks.I will cut it, but later. Maybe.Song is nice so mb ill map it all :v
Cut

Wuab wrote:

Insane

Pacement
00:41:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this flow clockwise so it transistion to the stream better
done

From 00:44:166 (1) - to 01:06:109 (1) - there is an inconsistancy with the mapping
fixed

01:00:281 (8) - this part is hard to fix :C, you mapped the previous piano sound here 00:59:081 (5) - , then you don't map it here 01:00:281 (8) - ,at thered tick, but then you map the rest of the piano sounds in this part, changing 01:00:281 (8) - into a piano sound would be easy but then you do not map to the cymbals in the music which is the start of the build up, the easiest way to fix would be remapping 00:59:081 (5) - to passivly map th piano sound so consistancy is kept.
Yeah, i didnt like these sliders too. I followed ur tip and now its much better, thanks :D

01:31:823 (4) - don't stack that, doesn't follow proper spacing
changed

01:45:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - you can make this blanket 01:45:537 (7) - and flow better from 01:45:709 (8) -
I think its good and i personally like it, sorry :P
Shiyari
NM request from #modreqs

Insane

  1. 00:19:138 (4,1,2) - you should not use the same spacing for 1/1 beat and 1/2 beats, i would increase the spacing between 4 and 1
  2. 00:21:880 (5) - you have a really strong sound on the slider end, i would recommend making a short repeat slider out of it or some thing else
  3. 00:32:509 (3,4,5,6,1) - this flows bad, you have a right, left, right, right motion there it should go left again, not sure how you could change it there, maybe place 00:33:195 (1) - up right instead of down
  4. 00:21:880 (5) - same as above after the stream
  5. 00:24:966 (1) - dont overlap, just move it to the left
  6. 00:43:823 (5) - and again
  7. 00:53:081 (2,3,1) - again same spacing, here 00:54:795 (4,1) - you did it correct
  8. 01:07:480 (1) - i would recommend ending this slider on red tick
  9. 01:09:880 (1,2,3) - and 01:10:566 (1,2,3) - i would put the closer together to make them flow better
  10. 01:35:251 (2,1) - please increase spacing here to make it more readable
  11. 01:46:908 (5,1) - yeah you know
  1. 00:20:166 (5) - nc here
  2. 00:21:538 (1,2,3,4,5) - put nc on 5
  3. 00:32:509 (3,4,5,6) - you can make them 1.1.1.1 or 1.2.1.2 combo here
  4. 00:42:110 (5) - nc
  5. 01:01:309 (5) - nc ,,, you should get what i mean its just repeating from here, so recheck your combos
  6. 01:20:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you should really consider putting some nc in here
you should also check your previewpoint they have to be the same in all diffs

why do you have two timing points(redline) you can just delete the second youre not changing anything there

dont forgett to cut the mp3 if you dont map it fullsize



hope i could help you!
good luck!<33
Topic Starter
Blan_C

Shiyari wrote:

NM request from #modreqs

Insane

  1. 00:19:138 (4,1,2) - you should not use the same spacing for 1/1 beat and 1/2 beats, i would increase the spacing between 4 and 1
    i stacked it for now. i have to think about better placing but for now it will remain stacked
  2. 00:21:880 (5) - you have a really strong sound on the slider end, i would recommend making a short repeat slider out of it or some thing else
    00:21:880 (5) - same as above after the stream
    00:43:823 (5) - and again
    I know there is strong sound but i really hate an idea of turning last slider to circle and adding repear slider. I tried changing it some time ago and i really dont like it.
  3. 00:32:509 (3,4,5,6,1) - this flows bad, you have a right, left, right, right motion there it should go left again, not sure how you could change it there, maybe place 00:33:195 (1) - up right instead of down
    In my opinion its good so now i will leave it as it is. Maybe i will have idea how to place it better later.
  4. 00:24:966 (1) - dont overlap, just move it to the left
    Its good. I mean, not bad. Moving it left is worse idea in my opinion :v I did some changes here
  5. 00:53:081 (2,3,1) - again same spacing, here 00:54:795 (4,1) - you did it correct
    True :v
  6. 01:07:480 (1) - i would recommend ending this slider on red tick
    Nah, its fine
  7. 01:09:880 (1,2,3) - and 01:10:566 (1,2,3) - i would put the closer together to make them flow better
    i remaped this part
  8. 01:35:251 (2,1) - please increase spacing here to make it more readable
    Changed
  1. 00:20:166 (5) - nc here
    No,sorry
  2. 00:21:538 (1,2,3,4,5) - put nc on 5
    No,sorry
  3. 00:32:509 (3,4,5,6) - you can make them 1.1.1.1 or 1.2.1.2 combo here
    I forgot to nc here, but i think 1.2.3.4 is better
  4. 00:42:110 (5) - nc
    No,sorry
  5. 01:01:309 (5) - nc ,,, you should get what i mean its just repeating from here, so recheck your combos
    i set 1-8 combos
  6. 01:20:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you should really consider putting some nc in here
    I put nc only on last slider
you should also check your previewpoint they have to be the same in all diffs
why do you have two timing points(redline) you can just delete the second youre not changing anything there
dont forgett to cut the mp3 if you dont map it fullsize
Almost everyone say that. I have to do it - sorry for my laziness :D


hope i could help you!
good luck!<33

<33333
AtoNiik
From Pending/Help Map.

Even if the Normal is not finished i will mod some errors he got.

00:52:566 : Please Start the slider here, because there a big hole between circle and the spinner.
00:56:338 (1,1,2) : reduce the 3 sliders by two ticks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6959694 u see it sounds better.
01:00:452 : Here change like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6959716 or make slider instead Circles.
01:04:566 : Here move the slider 1 ticks to the right like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6959737

For hard you skip the 40 first second ?

that's all for the moment if you need help you can pm me.
GL and have fun mapping
Topic Starter
Blan_C

AtoNiik wrote:

00:52:566 : Please Start the slider here, because there a big hole between circle and the spinner.
There's a big hole cuz theres no sound. Or i am deaf :v

00:56:338 (1,1,2) : reduce the 3 sliders by two ticks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6959694 u see it sounds better.
Nayy :v

01:00:452 : Here change like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6959716 or make slider instead Circles.
01:04:566 : Here move the slider 1 ticks to the right like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6959737
Yep thats good idea :v

For hard you skip the 40 first second ?
Because its not done, i did it on purpose (☞゚∀゚)☞
Wuab
Extra IRC

19:14 Blan_C: hello
19:14 Blan_C: are you there?
19:14 Wuab: hi
19:15 Blan_C: i dont know wheater i sent you extra diff of my map
19:15 Blan_C: have you played it?
19:15 Wuab: once or twice
19:16 Blan_C: oh, okay. i think its finished and ready for modding :v
19:18 Wuab: fun
19:18 Wuab: your mapping the rest of the mp3?
19:18 Blan_C: oh, you noticed it too
19:19 Blan_C: i will cut the song
19:19 Wuab: ye
19:19 Wuab: great
19:19 Blan_C: but i am too lazy to do it
19:19 Blan_C: xD
19:19 Blan_C: later
19:19 Wuab: make sure re-time it just incase the offset changes
19:19 Wuab: you could ask look for a tech savvy BN
19:19 Wuab: to help yo
19:20 Wuab: or just do it yourselkf
19:20 Blan_C: ill do it
19:21 Wuab: btw this
19:21 Wuab: 66109,342.857142857143,4,3,0,100,1,0
19:21 Wuab: uhh
19:21 Wuab: weird
19:21 Wuab: your second red line is not needed
19:21 Wuab: the bpm is consistant in this song
19:21 Blan_C: oh i know
19:22 Wuab: prolly should remove
19:22 Wuab: also
19:22 Wuab: the reduce hitsounds
19:22 Wuab: to 70% and 85%
19:22 Blan_C: okay~
19:22 Wuab: 70% outside of kiai to match insane
19:24 Wuab: more things
19:24 Wuab: you have a hitsound file in the song folder
19:25 Wuab: soft-hitnormal.wav
19:25 Blan_C: yeah
19:25 Wuab: but you only use drums hitsounds
19:25 Blan_C: i was planning to add some
19:25 Blan_C: but resigned
19:25 Blan_C: ill remove it
19:25 Wuab: ye
19:25 Wuab: also the last 2 timing point are drums custom 1
19:26 Wuab: they can just be drum
19:26 Blan_C: i get it
19:26 Wuab: i might as well posy this as a mod :D
Wuab
BONUS ROUND

Mentai's insane

00:33:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - map that the same as the previous part, idk why you changed rythmn

01:03:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - change direction of flow here, to match the direction of the slider
01:03:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - small thing make the second triangle have consistant change like http://i.imgur.com/R9QFMIc.jpg
01:39:023 (1) - make this the same shape as the next sliders, could form a square pattern


You have a few Spacing stuff to work out, what distance spacing are you using?

Clean as hell nice stuff!
Mentai

Wuab wrote:

BONUS ROUND

Mentai's insane

00:33:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - map that the same as the previous part, idk why you changed rythmn just wanted to not have a lot of monatony, started following the "DnB" aspect of the song. I will keep this complaint in mind though

01:03:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - change direction of flow here, to match the direction of the slider i agree
01:03:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - small thing make the second triangle have consistant change like http://i.imgur.com/R9QFMIc.jpg i messed up the scaling zzzzz
01:39:023 (1) - make this the same shape as the next sliders, could form a square pattern maybe, but the time before this vocal sequence happened, i used a linear slider to show no vocal while the curved sliders were rotating along each other on every white tick. i'll keep it in mind


You have a few Spacing stuff to work out, what distance spacing are you using? kinda hovers around 2.00, based on what i want to emphasize aesthetically and what i want to emphasize via just intensity

Clean as hell nice stuff!

thanks for the mod : )

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 85309
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 2.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Haru Modoki (Asterisk DnB Remix)
TitleUnicode:Haru Modoki (Asterisk DnB Remix)
Artist:Yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:Yanaginagi
Creator:Blan_C
Version:Mentai's Insane
Source:
Tags:oregairu yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru asterisk remix anime
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Mentai

Mentai wrote:

Wuab wrote:

BONUS ROUND

Mentai's insane

00:33:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - map that the same as the previous part, idk why you changed rythmn just wanted to not have a lot of monatony, started following the "DnB" aspect of the song. I will keep this complaint in mind though

01:03:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - change direction of flow here, to match the direction of the slider i agree
01:03:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - small thing make the second triangle have consistant change like http://i.imgur.com/R9QFMIc.jpg i messed up the scaling zzzzz
01:39:023 (1) - make this the same shape as the next sliders, could form a square pattern maybe, but the time before this vocal sequence happened, i used a linear slider to show no vocal while the curved sliders were rotating along each other on every white tick. i'll keep it in mind


You have a few Spacing stuff to work out, what distance spacing are you using? kinda hovers around 2.00, based on what i want to emphasize aesthetically and what i want to emphasize via just intensity

Clean as hell nice stuff!

thanks for the mod : )

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Wuab

Mentai wrote:

Wuab wrote:

BONUS ROUND

Mentai's insane

00:33:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - map that the same as the previous part, idk why you changed rythmn just wanted to not have a lot of monatony, started following the "DnB" aspect of the song. I will keep this complaint in mind though



Clean as hell nice stuff!

thanks for the mod : )
there are better ways to reduce monatony than losing consistency, changing aesthetics and how the slider bodys overlap is way better than changing rhythm, the song has not changed so why has the rhythm, your choice tho
XVoIR
[Metadata]
Z tego co wiem, to w Source nie daje się zromanizowanej nazwy, tak więc użyj やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。
[Extra]
Średnio podoba mi się to, że pierwsze 12 sekund nie jest zmapowane
00:21:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - jakbyś bardziej to zaokrąglił to by się lepiej grało IMO
00:52:583 (1,2,3,4) - Sampleset: Soft i zmniejsz spacing, bo teraz to ma taki sam jak wcześniejsza część, a jest tylko cichszy vocal
00:53:612 (1,2,3) - tu też Sampleset: Soft prócz sliderenda (3)
01:10:583 (1,3) - mógłbyś tutaj zrobić żeby były równe sobie (3 jest troche krzywe)
01:24:983 (4,1) - dźwięku zabrakło między tymi :/
01:36:297 (1) - lekko off blanket
01:46:926 (5,1) - znowu zabrakło dźwięku między tymi
Nie polecam Grid Snapa przy robieniu streamów
[Insane]
00:20:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - uh ten stream jest dosyć brzydki
00:24:983 (1,2) - tutaj nałożyłeś (2) na (1) ale 00:22:583 (2) - jest już inny spacing, trudniejszy :v
00:31:840 (1,2) - troche duży żump
01:46:926 (5) - możesz zrobić żeby ten slider do góry szedł, IMO będzie lepiej
[Easy]
00:41:440 (1,1) - via wiki:

Easy (Difficulty) wrote:

you should allow for as much time as possible for recovery. A good rule of thumb is 3-4 beats after a spinner, but this can vary depending on BPM
a ty tam dałeś zaledwie 1, tak więc no unrankable
Ogólnie to mocno mi się wydaje, że odstępy między sliderami są za szybkie jak na Easy. To bardziej podchodzi pod Normala.
Topic Starter
Blan_C
[Metadata]
Z tego co wiem, to w Source nie daje się zromanizowanej nazwy, tak więc użyj やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 Zmienione
[Extra]
Średnio podoba mi się to, że pierwsze 12 sekund nie jest zmapowane
no sory
00:21:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - jakbyś bardziej to zaokrąglił to by się lepiej grało IMO
No zaokrągliłem i jest lepiej :v
00:52:583 (1,2,3,4) - Sampleset: Soft i zmniejsz spacing, bo teraz to ma taki sam jak wcześniejsza część, a jest tylko cichszy vocal
00:53:612 (1,2,3) - tu też Sampleset: Soft prócz sliderenda (3)
Jusz ;v
01:10:583 (1,3) - mógłbyś tutaj zrobić żeby były równe sobie (3 jest troche krzywe)
To był ten sam slider co w 01:12:297 (5,6) - ale racja, równoległy do tego krótkiego jest lepszy :P
01:36:297 (1) - lekko off blanket
Napawione
01:24:983 (4,1) - dźwięku zabrakło między tymi :/
01:46:926 (5,1) - znowu zabrakło dźwięku między tymi
No własnie wiem, tyle że nic mi nie pasowało z tym zrobić :/ przedłużyć streama i dodać kickslider/triple kiepsko wg mnie, a dodanie kółka miedzy slider a ostatnie kółko to już wgl źle bo dźwięki są mocne a to takie 'pff'
Nie polecam Grid Snapa przy robieniu streamów
[Insane]
00:20:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - uh ten stream jest dosyć brzydki
No serio troche racja xd
00:24:983 (1,2) - tutaj nałożyłeś (2) na (1) ale 00:22:583 (2) - jest już inny spacing, trudniejszy :v
Mówili też inni, więc coś niecoś zmienie
00:31:840 (1,2) - troche duży żump
Osobiście uważam że jest ok, bo przyspiesza piosenka wtedy
01:46:926 (5) - możesz zrobić żeby ten slider do góry szedł, IMO będzie lepiej
Na razie zmienie ale nie wiem co lepsze i czy zachować jego kształt
[Easy]
00:41:440 (1,1) - via wiki:

Easy (Difficulty) wrote:

you should allow for as much time as possible for recovery. A good rule of thumb is 3-4 beats after a spinner, but this can vary depending on BPM
a ty tam dałeś zaledwie 1, tak więc no unrankable
No i lipa, musze teraz wymyślić coś sensownego tam xd
Ogólnie to mocno mi się wydaje, że odstępy między sliderami są za szybkie jak na Easy. To bardziej podchodzi pod Normala.
To był normal tylko jakoś tak mi star rating spadł z 1.52 do 1.49 no i klops. :D
-Atri-
Marking here

Will post when i finished m4m
Peuniak
Modzik na szybko z OPG :D
Mapset solidny, większość raczej styka, mam pewne zastrzeżenia ale traktuj to jak rady, a nie jakieś śmiertelne błędy, wiadodmo.

Insane
00:16:755 - to intro powinno być zdecydowanie zmapowane, dzieje się tu wystarczająco dużo,
00:21:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - nie fituje z resztą streama, krzywizny większości obiektów są łagodne, pozostałbym wierny temu konceptowi i poprawił stream,
00:38:698 (1,2,1,2) - troszkę randomowy placing imo, nic strasznego, ale mogłobyć chyba lepiej + popraw blanket 00:39:383 (2,1) bo jest lekko nierówny,
00:52:240 - w tym miejscu zamiast kółka mógłby być slider 1/2, pasowałby do tego dźwięku pianina, ale sam zdecyduj,
01:16:068 (1,2,3) - odnoszę dziwne wrażenie że sliderend 3 nie jest w prostej linii z resztą,
01:25:155 - tutaj jest bardzo wyraźna trójka 1/4, myślę że raczej nie powinna być tak ignorowana,
01:50:012 - to też mogłoby być zmapowane do końca, szkoda marnować songa jak można fajnie to zmapować...
Extra
Odnośnie intro i outro te same uwagi co w Insane.
01:07:498 (1,1) - za duzy spacing miedzy tymi 1/4 a 1/2 w tym parcie imo,
01:14:355 (1,2,3) - zmieniłbym położenie tych sliderów w taki sposób, aby 1 tworzyła blanket z końcem 2, symetrycznie do blanketa 3 z 2, całkiem spoko wygląda jak dla mnie,
01:25:155 - pominięta trójka 1/4 jak powyżej,
01:36:126 (6) - ctrl + g,

GL :)
-Atri-
m4m

[Mentai's Insane]
  1. 01:35:612 (3,4,5,6) - I would reverse the order here, so it plays properly with the next object
    Well, i run through the entire map, the 1/4 distance problem is better than other diffs, but the rhythm should have more work tbh, some parts' have strangely random rhythm, such as 00:45:555 (1,2,3,4) - 00:47:098 (2,3,4) - 00:49:669 (1,2,3,4) - ,Which i can't understand which instrument you're going to follow, the only part that have better rhythm is the kiai part that follows the vocal pretty well, try to have some stronger sound such as 00:47:269 - 00:34:240 - clickable, otherwise the rhythm will be too random that will hurt the quality, If you want more example, feel free to hit me up on IRC

[Extra]
  1. 00:22:155 - I believe that you're missing a drum here
  2. 01:15:040 - Nice, but you're missing a beat here, try to use this rhythm instead?
  3. 01:19:840 (1) - You used sliders on this part, why stopped here?
  4. 01:22:155 - Again, a missing note here
  5. 01:36:126 (6) - Ctrl+G for consistency
  6. 01:38:697 (1,2) - ^ , I think it goes better with the next object
  7. 01:47:183 - yep, also a missing drum here
    You did the flow and the structure well, but you pushed so hard on geometric structure that makes the 1/4 distance too large and inconsistent, such as 00:23:612 (1,2) - 00:24:983 (1,2) - 00:26:355 (1,2) - , that they're too large that causes some readability issues, You can use Mentai's diff as reference on those 1/4 spacings, the other problem is that Insane is just Extra with lesser jumps and streams, but the rhythm remain unchanged, which makes mapset is kinda plain on those 2 diffs :( , hence that's why i didn't mod Insane because it also have same problems on Extra (The spacing problem also happens on hard, too.) Also, RIP Overall distance

Good luck.
Topic Starter
Blan_C

Peuniak wrote:

Modzik na szybko z OPG :D
Mapset solidny, większość raczej styka, mam pewne zastrzeżenia ale traktuj to jak rady, a nie jakieś śmiertelne błędy, wiadodmo.

Insane
00:16:755 - to intro powinno być zdecydowanie zmapowane, dzieje się tu wystarczająco dużo,
Asserin też tak powiedział, a ja się go słucham XD
00:21:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - nie fituje z resztą streama, krzywizny większości obiektów są łagodne, pozostałbym wierny temu konceptowi i poprawił stream,
Poprawie
00:38:698 (1,2,1,2) - troszkę randomowy placing imo, nic strasznego, ale mogłobyć chyba lepiej + popraw blanket 00:39:383 (2,1) bo jest lekko nierówny,
Gotowe
00:52:240 - w tym miejscu zamiast kółka mógłby być slider 1/2, pasowałby do tego dźwięku pianina, ale sam zdecyduj,
Jest ok
01:16:068 (1,2,3) - odnoszę dziwne wrażenie że sliderend 3 nie jest w prostej linii z resztą,
Gotowe
01:25:155 - tutaj jest bardzo wyraźna trójka 1/4, myślę że raczej nie powinna być tak ignorowana
no mysle wlasnie jak to poprawić i chyba zrobie stacka na poczatku następnego slidera.
01:50:012 - to też mogłoby być zmapowane do końca, szkoda marnować songa jak można fajnie to zmapować...
Outro zostawiam, po to własnie skróciłem piosenkę i sie babrałem na nowo z offsetem :D

Extra
Odnośnie intro i outro te same uwagi co w Insane.
01:07:498 (1,1) - za duzy spacing miedzy tymi 1/4 a 1/2 w tym parcie imo,
Jest git ;c
01:14:355 (1,2,3) - zmieniłbym położenie tych sliderów w taki sposób, aby 1 tworzyła blanket z końcem 2, symetrycznie do blanketa 3 z 2, całkiem spoko wygląda jak dla mnie,
Skróciłem slider i dodałem kółko więc ogarnij czy sie podoba teraz :v
01:25:155 - pominięta trójka 1/4 jak powyżej, ^
01:36:126 (6) - ctrl + g,
kk

GL :)
Topic Starter
Blan_C
[Extra]
  1. 00:22:155 - I believe that you're missing a drum here Yeah fixing now
  2. 01:15:040 - Nice, but you're missing a beat here, try to use this rhythm instead? Changed
  3. 01:19:840 (1) - You used sliders on this part, why stopped here? Becasuse on the sliderends strong beat, after the circle 01:20:012 - i cant hear that here
  4. 01:22:155 - Again, a missing note here Yeah fixing now
  5. 01:36:126 (6) - Ctrl+G for consistency Fixed
  6. 01:38:697 (1,2) - ^ , I think it goes better with the next object No,its good
  7. 01:47:183 - yep, also a missing drum here Yeah fixing now
    You did the flow and the structure well, but you pushed so hard on geometric structure that makes the 1/4 distance too large and inconsistent, such as 00:23:612 (1,2) - 00:24:983 (1,2) - 00:26:355 (1,2) - , that they're too large that causes some readability issues, You can use Mentai's diff as reference on those 1/4 spacings, the other problem is that Insane is just Extra with lesser jumps and streams, but the rhythm remain unchanged, which makes mapset is kinda plain on those 2 diffs :( , hence that's why i didn't mod Insane because it also have same problems on Extra (The spacing problem also happens on hard, too.)
    This is my style and i think its good. I wont change that. Sorry.
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7087764Also, RIP Overall distance
    ???

Good luck.
-Atri-
Oh shit, i forgot to mention that you should add GD'ers (Mentai) to tags
Mentai

KuranteMelodii wrote:

m4m

[Mentai's Insane]
  1. 01:35:612 (3,4,5,6) - I would reverse the order here, so it plays properly with the next object
    I might not reverse it, but do a tilt oof some sort, i will work this out in my hitsounding update
    Well, i run through the entire map, the 1/4 distance problem is better than other diffs, but the rhythm should have more work tbh, some parts' have strangely random rhythm, such as 00:45:555 (1,2,3,4) - 00:47:098 (2,3,4) - 00:49:669 (1,2,3,4) - ,Which i can't understand which instrument you're going to follow, the only part that have better rhythm is the kiai part that follows the vocal pretty well, try to have some stronger sound such as 00:47:269 - 00:34:240 - clickable, otherwise the rhythm will be too random that will hurt the quality, If you want more example, feel free to hit me up on IRC
So when we map DnB songs, you first need to diagnose if the beatmapper is focusing on the DnB aspect or any vocals. Since this is a DnB REMIX, it would only make sense to be strongly following 1/2 here, namely hi-hat (the reason I use S:C1 for most of the map rather than D:C1, like the other diffs), bass drum, and snare. in the kiai, i do this but emphasize vocals as well to distinguish the sections. I will do some hitsounding corrections to make the DnB aspect feel more obvious, while I will be keeping how they are mapped the same

Good luck.
Mentai
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YokesPai
From... Somewhere I came because Shichi informed me

Insane
00:22:155 - There's a drum sound here that isn't mapped
00:38:012 (3,4,5,6) - The circles aren't going in the same circular motion as the slider, yet the other combos before this one does. You should probably just Ctrl+G
00:44:098 - Drum sound here again
00:52:240 (2,1) - You should make it more clear it's a 1/1 beat, either stack or make spacing bigger
01:34:926 (1) - This slider seems out of place, it's the only time something like this shows up, maybe make a curved slider like 01:40:411 (1) -
01:47:183 - Drum sound here again

Hope this helps! :)
Shichi
update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 85326
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22155,44098,84898,84983,85155,107183
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:Haru Modoki (Asterisk DnB Remix)
TitleUnicode:Haru Modoki (Asterisk DnB Remix)
Artist:Yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:Yanaginagi
Creator:Blan_C
Version:Shichi's Extra
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている
Tags:oregairu yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru asterisk remix anime
BeatmapID:1185885
BeatmapSetID:514435

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9.4
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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