2016-09-26 01:15 Sklyfe: Ok
2016-09-26 01:15 Sklyfe: The first thing is that you use a ton of different patterns for parts of the song that are similar
2016-09-26 01:15 Sklyfe: Let me find some examples
2016-09-26 01:16 10110011: I don't know much patterns
2016-09-26 01:16 10110011: This is just my second beatmap
2016-09-26 01:16 Sklyfe: That's fine, I know
2016-09-26 01:16 Sklyfe: but like
2016-09-26 01:16 10110011: Actually deleted my first
2016-09-26 01:17 Sklyfe: At this point in the first chorus, you use this pattern
2016-09-26 01:17 Sklyfe: 00:56:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2016-09-26 01:17 Sklyfe: which is a fine pattern
2016-09-26 01:17 Sklyfe: a little odd, but odd is rankable
2016-09-26 01:17 Sklyfe: But in the second chorus at the same part of the chorus, you use something else
2016-09-26 01:18 10110011: Do they have to be same :0
2016-09-26 01:18 Sklyfe: no, not IDENTICAL
2016-09-26 01:18 Sklyfe: but it makes sense for them to be similar
2016-09-26 01:18 10110011: Yeah not identical
2016-09-26 01:18 Sklyfe: Hold on, there's a neat video describing this
2016-09-26 01:18 10110011: I see...
2016-09-26 01:19 Sklyfe: I'll find it and link it in a sec
2016-09-26 01:20 10110011: Nop
2016-09-26 01:20 10110011: let me stahp you dere
2016-09-26 01:20 10110011: My internet is bad lol
2016-09-26 01:20 Sklyfe: rip
2016-09-26 01:20 Sklyfe: Ok
2016-09-26 01:21 10110011: Ok, I found a way to make the chorus similar
2016-09-26 01:21 10110011: How do you link the timing here in chat>
2016-09-26 01:22 Sklyfe: wat timing
2016-09-26 01:22 Sklyfe: you can copy notes if you didn't know
2016-09-26 01:22 Sklyfe: and they paste as a link to the part of the song
2016-09-26 01:22 10110011: Yeah that
2016-09-26 01:23 10110011: I don't know that :v
2016-09-26 01:23 10110011: I knew we could, but I don't know how
2016-09-26 01:23 10110011: 01:41:751 (8) -
2016-09-26 01:23 10110011: Ok found out how, anyways, so I'll start here to make the slider pattern from before
2016-09-26 01:25 Sklyfe: Ok
2016-09-26 01:25 10110011: lagnet :<
2016-09-26 01:25 Sklyfe: rip
2016-09-26 01:26 Sklyfe: It's the same thing for the spinner too
2016-09-26 01:27 Sklyfe: You use a spinner in the first chorus, but don't use one in the second chorus
2016-09-26 01:27 10110011: I'm thinking of removing the spinner btw
2016-09-26 01:27 10110011: Because I feel like it's unusual lol
2016-09-26 01:27 10110011: Also it has like a second
2016-09-26 01:28 Sklyfe: I think it's definitely too long as it is right now
2016-09-26 01:28 Sklyfe: And it doesn't really fit the music
2016-09-26 01:28 Sklyfe: So I'd agree, take it out
2016-09-26 01:29 10110011: yeah lol
2016-09-26 01:29 Sklyfe: Both spinners are too long I'd say
2016-09-26 01:29 Sklyfe: The second one works better though
2016-09-26 01:29 10110011: I don't even think spinners are fine with this song
2016-09-26 01:29 10110011: I'll probably add it on the last
2016-09-26 01:29 Sklyfe: Yeah, that's fine
2016-09-26 01:30 Sklyfe: This pattern feels "overmapped" as they say
2016-09-26 01:30 Sklyfe: 01:15:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
2016-09-26 01:31 Sklyfe: as in, it has a difficulty spike that isn't warranted by the music
2016-09-26 01:31 Sklyfe: maybe tune down the jumps
2016-09-26 01:31 10110011: xD
2016-09-26 01:31 Sklyfe: lol
2016-09-26 01:32 10110011: i might keep it tho
2016-09-26 01:32 10110011: I'm sadistic
2016-09-26 01:32 10110011: heh
2016-09-26 01:33 Sklyfe: Ok, just know that it's unlikely to stay that way if you go for ranked
2016-09-26 01:33 10110011: aye
2016-09-26 01:33 Sklyfe: 01:29:041 (1) - This note isn't actually on a beat, which makes it sound weird
2016-09-26 01:33 Sklyfe: Especially since it's a new combo
2016-09-26 01:34 10110011: I was finding a way
2016-09-26 01:34 10110011: to make this slider
2016-09-26 01:34 10110011: 01:28:159 (6) - become slow
2016-09-26 01:34 Sklyfe: That's called slider velocity change
2016-09-26 01:34 10110011: Like no reverse
2016-09-26 01:34 10110011: I can't find where that's located
2016-09-26 01:34 Sklyfe: There's two ways to do it, I only actually know how to do one
2016-09-26 01:35 Sklyfe: One is editing the .osu file, which is only used sometimes
2016-09-26 01:35 Sklyfe: the other is to add an inherited timing point
2016-09-26 01:35 Sklyfe: If you hit f6, it opens the timing panel
2016-09-26 01:35 10110011: you can mod it for me if you want
2016-09-26 01:35 10110011: you can gain some credit
2016-09-26 01:36 Sklyfe: I mean, it's something you should learn to do anyway
2016-09-26 01:37 Sklyfe: Modding is just finding errors, not necissarily fixing them
2016-09-26 01:37 10110011: I tried changing the velocity yesterday
2016-09-26 01:37 10110011: It didn't do anything for me xD
2016-09-26 01:37 10110011: Or probably I did it wron
2016-09-26 01:37 10110011: wrong
2016-09-26 01:37 Sklyfe: so hit f6, and select that timing point you had
2016-09-26 01:38 Sklyfe: or rather, create a new inherited timing point right before the slider
2016-09-26 01:39 Sklyfe: so you create the point and check "Inherit previous timing settings"
2016-09-26 01:39 Sklyfe: and then you can change slider velocity
2016-09-26 01:40 10110011: Oh its changing :v
2016-09-26 01:40 Sklyfe: Yeah, it'll be weird because it still keeps the same number of reverses
2016-09-26 01:40 10110011: I can't go lower than 50 though
2016-09-26 01:40 Sklyfe: The only way to go lower than 50 is to edit the .osu file :p
2016-09-26 01:40 10110011: Yet I see maps that goes really slow on their sliders :<
2016-09-26 01:41 10110011: dangit lol
2016-09-26 01:41 10110011: Well the, time to go tinkering that file
2016-09-26 01:41 10110011: Wait, nah.
2016-09-26 01:41 10110011: I might screw up, I'm just gonna go make the slider longer
2016-09-26 01:41 Sklyfe: lol ok
2016-09-26 01:42 10110011: thnx m8
2016-09-26 01:42 Sklyfe: 01:30:895 (1) - this note is on a blue tick that I don't think it should be on
2016-09-26 01:42 10110011: Sshhh... :^)
2016-09-26 01:43 Sklyfe: I actually think the long break is fine
2016-09-26 01:44 Sklyfe: 02:10:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - this part has no sliders which it could use
2016-09-26 01:44 Sklyfe: sliders help make rhythm more digestable
2016-09-26 01:45 Sklyfe: there were a few other parts that had the same issue, let me find them real quick
2016-09-26 01:47 Sklyfe: 01:08:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -
2016-09-26 01:49 Sklyfe: and then right here, you use a wildly different type of slider 01:23:570 (15) -
2016-09-26 01:49 Sklyfe: I would try unifying slider types to all be similar
2016-09-26 01:50 Sklyfe: switching halfway through the map breaks the style of the map

and then I assume your internet cut out, big rip.

The only other thing I'll say is that this 02:21:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - will need to be remapped, no reason to have stacked notes like that.

There's obviously a lot to improve here, but that's all I'll do for now. Keep going, keep improving!