RoseusJaeger wrote:

Setomi wrote:

Pixel bathing suits in a friendly enviroment is too lewd?

Even bathing suits can be deemed innapropriate depending on context, sadly. I personally have no problem with it but it could become an issue later one since panties and bathing suits have different contextual circumstances.

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

Tbh i was expecting an nsfw warning when you requested this map to me since its in my ruleset lol

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

nsfw warning

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

nsfw

Kagari wrote:

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

Tbh i was expecting an nsfw warning when you requested this map to me since its in my ruleset lol

?

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

nsfw warning

??

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

nsfw

??????

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

having not knowing context of the anime, i thought the bg was a bit "wierd" to put it. i however think that the video should be fine if it was used in a ranked mapset before which it has.


just my 2 cents plz no flame luv u roseus

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

if you think the bg is justified bc of the context of the anime then i cant argue, but do consider the people who dont watch anime all the time since they do exist.

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

First of all, im going to start about the rain since i think that the map is fine except for 1 problem i have for both rains. I feel like the map feels way to fast paced with the ar being 9, even i have trouble keeping up with it tbh. i think it can be toned down alittle to like 8.5-8.8 for both rains but thats just me. - I'm still keeping it ar 9 nevertheless, but if few more modders suggested to lower the ar, i might reconsider it :3

everything else i thought was fine. good mapset, sorry for the short mod. - it's still a valuable mod, thanks for taking look at the mapset


also nice bg :^) - :>

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

GD Rain

General: As stated before, i think that the rains would look better with lower ar. maybe 8.7 idk

00:12:586 (6) - Harsh anitflow dash. it feels almost like an edge dash and i think that its a bit too brutal. Turned this into a 1/2 instead of 1/4 at the same x axis

00:16:949 (1) - same problem with the last one, its really harsh to do this one but another reason why its so hard is because its so horizontally mapped. I would nerf or slant the slider to become less horizontal. Changed distances in both (1) and previous (6) to make it more smooth

00:30:131 (2) - really hard to catch the slider end because of the hyper before it and because its so verticle. would make more horizontal. Fair enough!

00:41:313 (1) - i would make this repeat the other way to help the flow. I currently like the flow because it has a consistent left right pattern. This would not be the case if I changed direction on (1)

00:46:404 (2) - nerf the distance slightly since the pause might throw some people off. Slightly moved (2,3,4,5) to the left but I still want to keep the dash from (1) to (2)

everything else i thought was fine. good mapset, sorry for the short mod. Yay!

Thank you!!!! <3

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192,64,52677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,64,52767,2,0,L|288:112,1,47.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,52949,2,0,L|128:208,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,53313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,208,53495,6,0,P|432:272|320:288,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,336,54040,2,0,L|176:240,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,240,54404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,54586,2,0,L|304:144,1,95
96,144,54949,2,0,L|128:240,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,240,55313,2,0,L|416:144,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,55677,2,0,P|304:84|347:97,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,56040,2,0,P|128:156|85:143,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,56404,6,0,L|384:240,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,56677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,56767,2,0,L|160:112,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,57040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,57131,2,0,L|352:208,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,57495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,57677,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,288,57858,6,0,L|432:240,2,47.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,58131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,58222,2,0,L|272:256,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,256,58404,2,0,L|176:208,1,47.5
96,160,58586,6,0,L|112:112,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,58767,2,0,L|224:160,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,58949,2,0,L|352:112,2,47.5,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,59222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,59313,6,0,P|32:240|80:288,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,59677,2,0,P|224:224|336:256,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,60040,2,0,P|192:272|80:240,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,60404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,60586,6,2,L|224:192,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,60949,2,2,L|176:240,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,61313,2,2,L|272:208,1,95,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,61586,6,0,L|160:176,1,47.5
272,160,61767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,61858,2,0,L|352:96,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,62040,2,0,L|240:112,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,62222,6,0,P|448:224|352:256,1,142.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,272,62586,2,0,L|96:272,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,62858,2,0,L|256:272,1,47.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,63131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,63313,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,160,63495,2,0,L|96:112,1,47.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,63858,6,0,L|320:128,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,64040,2,0,L|240:192,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,64222,2,0,L|384:176,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,176,64404,2,2,L|480:128,1,47.5
464,96,64586,2,2,L|416:96,1,47.5
256,96,64767,2,2,L|303:208,1,95
32,192,65131,6,0,L|63:102,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,65495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,65677,2,0,L|224:144,1,47.5
336,128,65858,2,0,L|336:80,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,66040,2,0,L|192:64,1,47.5
288,95,66222,2,0,L|336:63,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,66404,6,0,P|128:128|192:160,1,142.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,66767,2,0,L|256:208,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,66949,2,0,L|80:224,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,67222,2,0,L|192:240,1,47.5,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,67495,2,0,L|144:192,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,67858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68040,6,0,P|224:144|224:96,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,32,68404,2,0,P|400:80|400:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,68677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,68767,2,2,L|176:240,1,95
288,240,69131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,69313,6,0,L|48:144,2,95,12|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,144,69858,2,0,L|480:240,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,70131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,208,70222,2,2,L|336:112,1,95
160,112,70586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,32,70767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,32,70949,6,0,L|48:32,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,32,71495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,71677,2,0,L|432:32,2,95,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,32,72222,1,12,0:0:0:0:
224,32,72586,5,12,0:0:0:0:
96,48,72767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,72949,1,12,0:0:0:0:
224,112,73131,1,12,0:0:0:0:
336,128,73313,2,0,L|352:176,1,47.5
256,208,73495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,73677,2,0,L|384:144,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,112,73858,6,0,P|120:94|54:111,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,74222,2,0,P|224:185|256:80,1,190,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,74767,2,0,L|64:192,1,95
352,176,75131,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,160,75313,2,0,L|224:64,1,95
80,48,75677,1,12,0:0:0:0:
336,48,75858,2,0,L|320:96,1,47.5
208,96,76040,2,0,L|256:192,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,76404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,176,76586,6,0,L|383:86,2,95,0|12|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,77131,2,0,L|256:176,2,95,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,77586,2,0,L|48:80,1,47.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,77858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,78040,6,0,L|64:128,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,78404,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,128,78586,2,0,L|144:32,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,78858,2,0,L|352:80,1,47.5,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,79131,2,0,L|320:160,1,95,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,160,79495,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,160,79586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,160,79677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,79858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,96,80040,6,0,L|464:192,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,80313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,80404,2,0,L|272:144,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,80586,2,0,L|416:48,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,80949,2,0,L|96:144,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81313,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,81404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,81495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,81677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,81767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,81858,1,12,0:0:0:0:
432,96,82040,2,0,L|448:48,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,48,82222,2,0,L|224:96,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,82404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,82586,6,0,L|16:96,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,82949,2,0,L|304:96,1,95
309,130,83222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,83313,2,0,L|432:48,1,47.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,83495,2,0,L|416:48,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,48,83858,6,0,L|16:48,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,84222,2,0,L|128:96,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,96,84586,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,96,84767,1,12,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84858,2,0,L|176:144,2,47.5
224,64,85131,2,2,L|272:64,1,47.5
368,64,85313,2,2,L|384:128,1,47.5
128,112,85495,6,0,L|112:208,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,85858,2,0,L|224:304,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,86222,2,0,L|448:304,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,86586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,208,86767,6,0,L|288:208,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,87131,2,0,L|160:208,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,208,87495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,208,87677,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87858,12,0,89313,0:0:0:0:

MMBan wrote:

Requested.

For this time i prefer long maps. - lel k xP

General:
Unused file to delete: One
nsfw.rar - will be deleted once its ready to get checked by the BN

Salad
Flashlight difficulty 7/10 . Very hard - FL well played
Didn't found anything there too.

Platter

If you follow vocal.
Hdash would fit to 00:19:852 -
01:03:495 - There would fit too
And here 01:09:313
hdashed for the first one you mentioned but other two options will be declined as it does not to be hdashed all the time imo

Rain
01:27:858 - Add spinner here and end it on 01:29:495 - - nah, i dont think spinner would be suitable for this song

Overdose

don't do distance 2,10x Its making NEAR pixel jump -
00:28:040 (5) - Impossible to catch without hdash (Pixel jump) Move to x376 - i'ts hdash not pixel dash

MMBan wrote:

Requested.

For this time i prefer long maps.

General:
No unsnapped timig lines.
No unsnapped notes.
Unused file to delete: One
nsfw.rar

Cup
No issues

Salad
Flashlight difficulty 7/10 . Very hard
Didn't found anything there too.

Platter

If you follow vocal.
Hdash would fit to 00:19:852 -
01:03:495 - There would fit too
And here 01:09:313

01:27:131 (2,3,4,5) - Make ending less brutal.
Placement suggestion
2 x168
3 x320
4 x244
5 x64

Platter GD

00:42:586 (3,4,5) - Place them like this [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6462643] x0.84~ to each other . Plays better for me

Rain
00:33:677 (3) - This note is a bit way too far to 4 . x296
01:27:858 - Add spinner here and end it on 01:29:495 -

Gd Rain
00:19:677 (2) - Somthing tells me its too far.. i can catch it but this distance is bit off intimidating giving think you won't catch it;s
00:28:586 (1) - Move to x464 but slider end keep on x416 y304. Always i overrun it
00:40:040 (5) - Pixel jump. Move closer or stack into trible
00:40:949 (3) - Next Pixel jump. Can't catch slider start. One square to right
00:44:404 (5) - Difficult to catch start. Move slider head to x80 y 128

Near Overdose like ;s Reminds a bit mine mapping style

Overdose

don't do distance 2,10x Its making NEAR pixel jump
00:01:495 (2) - Little bit to (3) closer to prevent near pixeljump from (1)
00:07:313 (2,3) - Both move two squares to left (x376)
00:28:040 (5) - Impossible to catch without hdash (Pixel jump) Move to x376
00:30:586 (3) - Confusing. x216
00:36:767 (5) - x304
00:42:495 (5) - x208

I might not notice other issues but somewhat i can't play this

Other note. Deluge is like done without precision ;s
Very anti flow

Catch The Beat wrote:

@Kagari please move note on 00:42:949 (5) - x:448

• fourfolium - SAKURA Skip

  Cup

  1. 00:12:767 (1,2,3) - This look bad. I prefer 00:13:131 (3) - to x:136
  2. 00:46:949 (4) - Move this slider to x:328
  3. 01:01:858 (3) - Move to x:48 (better look I think)
     Salad
  4. 00:03:677 (6) - Move to x:80
  5. 00:49:495 (2,3,4,5) - Move to x:240
  6. 00:54:586 (4,5) - Move to x:280
  7. 01:20:950 (1) - Move to x:336 (too hard)
     Platter (This diff is rly hard platter :X)
  8. 00:28:586 (1) - Move to x:408
  9. 00:47:313 (8) - Move to x:448
  10. 01:10:040 (3) - Move to x:280 (better look)
  11. 01:27:677 (5) - Move to x:88
      Kowaii_ne's Platter
  12. 00:21:131 (4) - Move to x:224
  13. 01:03:313 (1) - Move to x:480
  14. 01:11:495 (4) - Move to x:192
      Rain
  15. 00:13:495 (5,6) - Move to x:304 (maybe?)
  16. 01:02:949 (6,7) - Move to x:416
      Setomi's Rain
  17. 00:05:222 (7) - Move to x:352 and make new combo here.
  18. 00:33:131 (2) - move to x:304
      Overdose (Really hard to read...)
  19. 00:08:222 (1) - Move to x:360
      Kowaii_ne's Deluge
  20. 00:20:767 (4) - Move to x:448
  21. 00:21:131 (1) - Move to x:64
  22. 01:18:040 (3) - Move to x:368
  23. 01:27:131 (1) - Move tox:480
  24. 01:27:677 (4) - Move to x:32

1. The wave of "soft-hitwhistle.wav" is ending faster than the 100ms requirement, I extended the hitsound here.
2. that nsfw zip file in the folder I mean erm ranking criteria states that unused files should be removed from the song's folder, so if you still want to link that somewhere maybe do it in the description or something
3. Setomi's Rain still doesn't have video on, please add it.

1. 00:01:131 (1,2,1,2) - These have essentially the same pitch, and are from the same instrument, so why not use a uniform spacing? Feels weird to have one of the combo higher distance than the other.
2. 00:03:131 (3,4) - This rhythm doesn't make too much sense over the other options, as the slider skips over the prominent beat at 00:03:495 - (both trumpet(not sure) and drums), compared to the white tick. I would instead swap these 2 to emphasize on both instruments properly.
3. 00:11:131 (1) - As the trumpet's (seriously what's this instrument gosh) pitch is the highest for this section, I suggest you to increase the distance to 0.9x instead - right now it is lower than 00:08:222 (1) - , which has a significantly lower pitch of trumpet on it.
4. 00:13:495 (4) - The note here feels a little bit overemphasized as the similar note at 00:19:314 (4) - has smaller distance than this does. Lower the distance on this note a little bit so their distances become somewhat similar.
5. 00:18:586 (1) - There are no cymbal on the head of this slider in the song, so you should remove the finish.
6. 00:24:404 (1) - Could use a little bit more distance(0.8x) to give extra emphasis on the part transition.
7. 00:27:313 (1) - As there are no cymbals but only the trumpet here, I feel that the distance should be lowered to complement that - maybe reduce it down to 0.55x or something? Same goes with 00:28:040 (4) - .
8. 00:38:222 (3) - Nothing really special lands on the head of this slider except the kick and such, so maybe you should reduce the distance on this one. Hell it is even further away from the previous object than most of the other notes lol
9. 00:43:131 (1) - This should be having the same distance like 00:37:313 (1) - as they have the same open hi-hat sound.
10. 01:00:949 (2,3) - They are basically the same hi-hat sounds, so why are they getting different distances? You should be making them consistent.
11. 01:01:313 (3,1,2,3) - This movement can be quite challenging to execute for beginners as previously the snare streams were all having low-distance circles or close-to-vertical sliders, while this has comparably largely spaced circles instead. Even though this is linear movement, it can come as a surprise, and as such, I would either reduce down the distance between each notes, or use a slider instead.
12. Just pointed out the explicit problems with the map - but one thing that caught my eyes while playing is the excessive use of anti-flow in your patterns. More than half of your 1/1(or some 1/2) objects are having anti-flow movement to them - which makes them very repetitive to play, and sometimes they just get packed up on one side of the playfield for quite a while, which does not offer too much variety to the movement. I don't want to fill my mod with those stuff because I'll be repeating my words, but try to include more movement that follows the flow from the previous note.
13. Another thing (and this is subjective sooooo sorry if I sound rude) is that the curved sliders you are using basically for the span of the whole difficulty doesn't offer too much 'movement variety'. They basically feel like vertical straight sliders in play due to the AR and SV and etc etc, so they feel really bland as you go further into the map. At least try to use some horizontal sliders to offer more movement for the players, so the map doesn't feel too bland.

1. This difficulty similarly suffers from the repetitive movements like Cup - I would like to see more notes following the flow, not going against it.
2. 00:02:404 (1) - This distance is intimidating for new players and are likely to induce a dash - even if this is intended, having a distance that can be walked as well can still have some players walking to it, which isn't the intended effect(or vice versa). I would suggest making a clearer dash distance by increasing it, or having a clear walkable distance that isn't intimidating. Same goes for 00:03:131 (3) - .
3. 00:12:767 (1) - Could use a higher distance for a dash, as here the song changes parts.
4. 00:14:586 (2,3,4) - This movement could be somewhat ambiguous at first, as the momentum decrease set by (2) and (3) could make the following dash to (4) a little bit more challenging. If you want to keep (2) and (3) in their place, you should decrease the distance to (4).
5. 00:16:949 (1) - Like above, the small momentum set by the previous notes can make this distance increment ambiguous. I would reduce down the distance on this to avoid that.
6. 00:22:040 (4,5) - The same like above.
7. And so on and so forth. I strongly feel that the near-vertical circle patterns have negative impacts on the distances you set, because of the momentum. Try to find and fix all of them, there are way too many to list them all down in a single mod.
8. 00:28:586 (1) - You can really increase the distance here to 1.95x so that the dash is clear - and plus the trumpet's the loudest here so might want to emphasize on that.
9. 00:36:404 (2,3,4,5,6) - Honestly all these 1/2 circles feels really dense, especially when you are not emphasizing all of them - you are skipping the vocal at 00:38:040 - . Like, most of your 1/2 circles(I'll take 00:24:949 (2,3,4,5) - this for example) doesn't emphasize the trumpet at 00:26:404 - and in fact skipping this means 00:24:949 (2) - this note should be skipped too, due to their insignificancy. Really, you should try to revise your rhythm all over again for this difficulty.
10. 00:57:131 (2) - Since your hitsound for clap is a snare, they technically should be emphasizing the snares - but this tick doesn't have a snare on it, so the clap should be removed.
11. 01:01:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ok this is just way too dense for a Salad. Because your Cup was quite dense(which personally I don't find it fitting), I can kind of see the reason behind 00:00:404 (1,2,3,4,5) - this 5-plet(although it's an edge case), but a long stream like this? Save it for Platter. If you did decide to introduce 1/4 on Salad, keep it simple - use more triplets to emphasize on those 'prominent snare triplet' of the song (an example would be 00:38:040 - you can hear that the snares are quite louder than those other snare triplets), than straight up using 1/4 streams like this one.