SapphireGhost wrote:

Hi there this is me modding, I'm a bit tired at the moment so hopefully this doesn't sound too awful.

[Easy]
01:12:703 (2) - The curve here is a bit sharp. (cosmetic useless note) xD I made it smoother~
02:50:203 (4) - Pattern here can be a bit confusing for newbies. Yes, it can be - I flipped it vertically, and spread it out so that the mouse flow is more natural

[Normal]
01:05:203 (3,4) - This is really confusing ~ try moving one of the loop sliders so they don't overlap like that. Those loop sliders are really hard to place properly xD but I managed to do something about that.
02:20:203 (4,5,6) - Strange anti-jump. I almost hit (5) too early, but I got it so maybe this is a problem and maybe not. I guess it will be better to separate these

[Hard]
04:06:989 (2) - Why the strange spacing here? Ah, this was intentional - I just think a little slowdown fits with those drums being different from the vocal (which I'm mapping to)

This is the looong fooorgoooteeen star yeah xD

yangzd88 wrote:

[EZ]
01:34:132 (3) - +whistle?
02:09:489 - clap?
04:08:774 (4) - ctrl+r?
04:09:846 (1) - +clap?

[Medium]
00:30:917 (5) - clap ; 00:31:274 (6) - whistle
03:41:274 - vol+10?
03:49:131 - finish
04:02:703 (8) - vol-15

[HD]
03:36:631 (3) - +clap?
04:06:631 (1) - vol-25
04:06:989 (2) - vol-10

+star

theowest wrote:

btw, you're one of the only one who's good at symmetrical beatmaps.

narakucrimson wrote:

theowest wrote:

btw, you're one of the only one who's good at symmetrical beatmaps.

Really *o*?

Equivalent wrote:

Not much I wanna complain, sorry for the late mod too >.<

General:
I think your preview points time is inapproriate >.> There is no vocal there, I suggest at the beginning of kiai time, 03: 53:417. Well, in the end it up to you to decide Well, I chose 01:38:417. The reason is that your preview is too close to the end of the song, which would pretty much err... "cut" the sense of preview. Also, that part is like, different to the rest of the song. Check the new preview and see if you like it
Just a minor details; there is white line at left side of bg, it quite small but annoy me much though. Maybe remove those line? Lool, the RGB colour of that line is 121212, meaning it'salmost black, but it still bothers. Can't believe I have to full submit because of this...
Question: why does play in tags? o.o Is it suppose to be one phrase " dark passion play"? "Dark Passion Play" is the title of the album, which I included in the tags because this is part of the album project.
Custom hitclap: maybe use more? I heard only like a few notes using it Nah, it's just ok the way it is.

SPOILER

[Colours]
Combo1 : 233,233,233
Combo2 : 66,72,85
Combo3 : 51,53,117
SliderTrackOverride : 230,225,210
SliderBorder : 240,240,240

You surpassed me on those <3 Nevertheless, I don't really like the SliderTrackOverride forcing color, that make it look bad too me. For example: Starting and end is blue, than slidertrack is white. This is personal preferences though, up to you to decide
[attachment=0:37f95]screenshot058.jpg[/attachment:37f95]

SliderBorder will be needed as some skin use dark slider border thingy.

Ah, I kind of love how the skin looks. Sorry.

Easy:
Opposite RobotoRaccoon suggestion: I found AR3 more appropriate according to the slider speed there. I kind of like how it looks now, with AR2 :3

Normal/Hard:
No issues

Have a star <3

RJ wrote:

General
I probably would have tick 2'd this, but I am a tick rate megatroll and tick 1 works pretty well so whatevah xD I like how STR: 1 works, since the music is pretty calm and stuff~
I'd suggest keeping breaks consistent across diffs - probably best to map through the third break on the easier two diffs, since those two breaks are pretty close anwyay Talked about this on irc, I'll keep them

Hard
01:04:132 (3) - oops, look like this slider got magically shortened lol, how the heck did this happen? xD
01:52:346 (1,2) - This overlap seems like pointless ugliness to me. Point the sliders up a bit more so they don't touch? Fine, fine~
02:58:774 (1) - Maybe do this to stop the ends touching each other? Looks nicer to me. Yes, looks better indeed.
03:19:131 - This section is full of those annoying little overlaps. aargh I'm so sorry I have overlap OCD I'll stop now lol xDD they don't seems much of a problem to me here

Medium
00:31:453 (7) - This stuck out to me since hard doesn't have any 1/2 in the intro. Well, yeah, maybe it isn't a good idea to have this here
01:49:667 (3) - It feels a bit awkward hitting offbeat notes when there's so little in the music to imply them. Move it 1/2 later? I added a 1/1 long slider at 01:49:489. I had problems to apply tyou suggestion due to spacing issues. Hope you like it!
03:04:667 (3) - ^ As before, but now placed two circles stacked.
04:05:203 (3,4) - Not 100% sure about this jump... I added a new combo to make it more readable. However, I kept the jump. Hope you don't mind~

Easy
00:54:132 (7) - I'd avoid stacking under sliderends on the easiest diff if I were you. In fact, I can remove (7) and it still sounds good!
03:07:882 (3) - Similar to Hard's suggestion - unoverlap the ends. Ok, fixed!

Equivalent wrote:

The newly cut mp3

You know, I was wondering where did this map go after I see it bubbled, than saw you cut the mp3 yet still not sure about the timing. Above is the mp3 that I've cut, and total time for the new mp3 is 4:18:522 the size of the mp3 now is 4.92Mb. No need to worry about offset/timing because I used foobar to encode and using mp3DirectCut to cut the mp3. The offset will be the original offset = 11632

I hope you like the new mp3 and I hope I really help you in this matter

On the sidenotes, leaving this one here as some computers will indicate VBR as 320kbps
[attachment=0:c623e]mp3.jpg[/attachment:c623e]

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Blue Dragon wrote:

How can a retarded son of a bitch vote this masterpiece 1...

Sigh.

Haters gonna rate.

Blue Dragon wrote:

How can a retarded son of a bitch vote this masterpiece 1...

Sigh.

Haters gonna rate.