everyone gave me permission to reply for them (besides winber)
for neta
00:37:246 (1) - pretty sure the rhythm is clear enough and it's some nice variety amongst all the 1/1 spam, you can see this being done consistently
normal
01:37:591 (7) - ehh I feel like less is more here, the lack of 1/2 contrasts 01:35:522 (2,3,4,5) - and makes the vocal stand out
03:00:694 (1) - prefer the repeat for variety and i did it consistently for this set of sounds, 03:06:211 (1,2,3) - is for a build up so it should be a bit more dense
rlc
02:09:142 (1) - 02:10:694 (1) - i feel like the ncs are nice cause they make the vocals a bit more distinct from everything else
no reply = fixed