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Akiyama Uni - Kaoru Juyouka [CatchTheBeat]

posted 2016-09-14T17:33:44+00:00

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JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2017-05-10T11:41:50+00:00

Requested in my Interesting Queue

General

Did you make the skin elements yourself? It looks very similar to a number of old touhou skins, so if you copied elements from elsewhere, you'd need permission from the original creators in order to include them in your map.
Evanent's Rain has different shaded combo colours. Is this intentional?

Cup

00:49:702 (1,1) - 01:08:833 (3) - 01:22:746 (3) - Try and go for a smoother curve on these long sliders, the sharp angles make it easy to miss droplets, and even break combo since you're using Tick Rate 2

Other than that, nothing to complain about, nice diff.

Salad

00:06:224 (1,2) - Jump to the red tick here is unexpected, and the movement 00:06:876 (2,3) - is quite close to a dash also. A better place to emphasise with dash would be 00:07:094 (3,1) - for the finish hitsound
00:08:615 (2) - This beat is less important than the following white tick, so I'd move the circle to there
00:10:354 (2) - Slider passes through the white tick containing a strong sound, try putting a circle and 1/2 repeat slider here instead to better follow the rhythm. Appears a lot later on also such as 00:17:311 (2) -
00:14:050 (3,1) - Another strong sound that deserves to be emphasised with dash, also apply to 00:21:876 (1) - 00:27:528 (2,3,1) - 00:55:789 (3,1) - etc.
00:22:746 (3,4,5) - Would flow better if these were equally spaced
00:25:354 (1) - Consider Ctrl+Hing this so that the new combo gets a direction change for emphasis. Also apply to 00:32:311 (1) - etc.
00:38:181 (2,3) - If you intenced dash here, increase this spacing so it's more clear to the player. This can be walked at present without much difficulty, so it feels underemphasised
01:09:485 (3,4,1) - Dash parity is confusing here, you have strong spacing to the weak (4) but a standstill pattern for the kiai start at (1) which feels very strange to play

Emphasis needs some work, and rhythm could be improved slightly also

Platter

00:05:137 (3,4) - The previous patterns 00:01:659 (2,3) - and 00:03:398 (3,4) - didn't require dash, so having dash here is very unexpected. Suggest decreasing the spacing for consistency
00:21:007 (5,6,1) - Hyper should be to (1) and not (6) as that's where the strong cymbal sound is
00:23:398 (1) - 00:30:355 (1) - No justification for this hyper on a weak sound, please remove it
00:52:746 (3,1) - Why no hyper here when you used them on the weaker 00:49:049 (5,6,1) - ?
01:04:267 (2,3) - Remove hyper for consistency with 01:03:398 (7,1) - and because the pitch is decreasing. Also hypers into antiflow are not cool in Platter diffs ):
01:06:876 (7,1) - 01:20:789 (7,1) - Missing hypers for pitch emphasis
01:18:180 (2,3) - Same as 01:04:267 (2,3) -, also 01:19:050 (4,1) - is additionally hyper into antiflow and should be removed or changed for a more natural flowing pattern

A bit better than the Salad, but still lacking in proper emphasis in places

Rain

00:02:311 (5,6,1) - etc. - The Platter had only a few 1/2 hypers and now in the Rain you're throwing in 1/4 hyper chains straight away? This is a spread issue, please make the hyper patterns less intense in the opening part of the map, with singular 1/2 and 1/4 patterns
00:07:311 (2,3) - Quite an easy jump to miss given the intensity, and the fact that (3,4) are hypers makes this punishing if you mess up. Please reduce this distance a little
00:24:920 (3) - 00:31:876 (3) - Make these less horizontal so the hyper chain is more lenient and less easy to miss
00:28:398 (5,1) - Missing hyper for cymbal/finish emphasis
00:53:072 (8,1) - Could really do with a hyper for pitch emphasis
00:55:246 (4,1) - 00:55:680 (4,1) - 00:56:115 (4,1) - I'd have these as hypers considering 00:54:702 (6,1) - has one and is the same strength. Also makes for a nice buildup into the kiai
00:59:702 (5,1) - Same as 00:28:398 (5,1) -
01:06:550 (4,5) - Kinda tricky 1/4 jump, consider reducing

Emphasis a problem in some places, but generally ok

Evanent's Rain

00:06:876 (6,1) - Why no hyper here when it's stronger than 00:06:659 (5,6) - which does have one?]
00:14:920 (1) - How about Ctrl+ this to get a hyper for the cymbal/finish sound?
00:17:311 (2,3,1) - 00:31:224 (2,3,1) - Would look neater if these were equally spaced imo
00:27:420 (3) - Move this right a bit for a better looking curve like you had at 00:13:452 (2,3,4) -
00:45:789 (3,1) - Maintaining momentum on this strong normal dash is hard, so it's easy to miss the tail of (1). making this a hyper or making (1) more vertical would help
00:49:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - This is really cool
01:02:746 (1,2,3,4) - 01:16:659 (1,2,3,4) - The size of this wiggle is very unexpected, try reducing the spacing a little here for less of a difficulty spike
01:08:615 (2,1) - Missing hyper? Kinda annoying as a normal dash and strong enough to be one
01:24:485 - There's a not here you forgot to map xD A hyper on the end would be a nice way to finish the map

Not the prettiest map I've seen, but definitely fun to play. A little aesthetic polish and this'll be great

Blooming Flowers

00:08:833 (5) - Feels very squashed against the border and breaks flow. Try to move it away from the wall and make it more horizontal
00:13:181 (1,2) - Some nice 1/6 sounds you could map in here to make the difficulty more interesting like you did in other areas
00:34:703 (3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Weird jump emphasis here, (1), (3) and (1) are strong but get almost nothing, whereas 00:35:137 (2) - is weak and gets a hyper. Feels very odd to play, please reposition these to provide proper emphasis
00:35:789 - 00:49:702 - I like the pattern idea you have here, but it's far too repetitive at present. You can easily reverse some of those linear stream patterns for more variety, and add some jumps in between on patterns like 00:38:399 (3,4,5,6,7) - for the stronger sounds
00:51:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same deal here, very repetitive and could use a little spicing up with some direction changes

Watch your momentum coming off hypers in the kiai, some are too weak to properly hit the big curves you have following them and it's easy to miss tails. I'm talking about patterns like 01:12:963 (6,1,2,3,4) -

Hope this helps, good luck! (:

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-05-10T12:45:12+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Requested in my Interesting Queue very interesting queue

General
Did you make the skin elements yourself? It looks very similar to a number of old touhou skins, so if you copied elements from elsewhere, you'd need permission from the original creators in order to include them in your map. ~~Maybe I ask Louis Cyphre again~~, na maybe I draw Ryuuta only later, Skin removed
Evanent's Rain has different shaded combo colours. Is this intentional? I let Breathless fix

Cup
00:49:702 (1,1) - 01:08:833 (3) - 01:22:746 (3) - Try and go for a smoother curve on these long sliders, the sharp angles make it easy to miss droplets, and even break combo since you're using Tick Rate 2 sure
Other than that, nothing to complain about, nice diff. Tq :3

Salad
00:06:224 (1,2) - Jump to the red tick here is unexpected, and the movement 00:06:876 (2,3) - is quite close to a dash also. A better place to emphasise with dash would be 00:07:094 (3,1) - for the finish hitsound Fixed
00:08:615 (2) - This beat is less important than the following white tick, so I'd move the circle to there Fixed
00:10:354 (2) - Slider passes through the white tick containing a strong sound, try putting a circle and 1/2 repeat slider here instead to better follow the rhythm. Appears a lot later on also such as 00:17:311 (2) - Fixed
00:14:050 (3,1) - Another strong sound that deserves to be emphasised with dash it is dash c:, also apply to 00:21:876 (1) OK - 00:27:528 (2,3,1) it is dash c: - 00:55:789 (3,1) it is dash c: - etc.
00:22:746 (3,4,5) - Would flow better if these were equally spaced OK
00:25:354 (1) - Consider Ctrl+Hing this so that the new combo gets a direction change for emphasis. Also apply to 00:32:311 (1) - etc. OK
00:38:181 (2,3) - If you intenced dash here, increase this spacing so it's more clear to the player. This can be walked at present without much difficulty, so it feels underemphasised Looks better without dash i guess, a bit remapped.
01:09:485 (3,4,1) - Dash parity is confusing here, you have strong spacing to the weak (4) but a standstill pattern for the kiai start at (1) which feels very strange to play Fixed
Emphasis needs some work seems after mod was fine i guess, and rhythm could be improved slightly also Rhythm intended :3

Platter
00:05:137 (3,4) - The previous patterns 00:01:659 (2,3) - and 00:03:398 (3,4) - didn't require dash, so having dash here is very unexpected. Suggest decreasing the spacing for consistency OK
00:21:007 (5,6,1) - Hyper should be to (1) and not (6) as that's where the strong cymbal sound is No idea on how to make H-Dash on (1), but even so it was fine.
00:23:398 (1) - 00:30:355 (1) - No justification for this hyper on a weak sound, please remove it OK
00:52:746 (3,1) - Why no hyper here when you used them on the weaker 00:49:049 (5,6,1) - ? OK Fixed
01:04:267 (2,3) - Remove hyper for consistency with 01:03:398 (7,1) - and because the pitch is decreasing. Also hypers into antiflow are not cool in Platter diffs ): Ikr :^)
01:06:876 (7,1) - 01:20:789 (7,1) - Missing hypers for pitch emphasis Maybe its fine, cause doesn`t seem to find any place to put H-Dash in that flow.
01:18:180 (2,3) - Same as 01:04:267 (2,3) -, also 01:19:050 (4,1) - is additionally hyper into antiflow and should be removed or changed for a more natural flowing pattern Fixed
A bit better than the Salad, but still lacking in proper emphasis in places noted

Rain
00:02:311 (5,6,1) - etc. - The Platter had only a few 1/2 hypers and now in the Rain you're throwing in 1/4 hyper chains straight away? This is a spread issue, please make the hyper patterns less intense in the opening part of the map, with singular 1/2 and 1/4 patterns Since this was taken from Overdose but Rain-ified,I did change mostly on the beginning one starting from 00:01:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6).
00:07:311 (2,3) - Quite an easy jump to miss given the intensity, and the fact that (3,4) are hypers makes this punishing if you mess up. Please reduce this distance a little Looks fine after played for a while, but reducing a bit on the (3). Still keeping both hypers.
00:24:920 (3) - 00:31:876 (3) - Make these less horizontal so the hyper chain is more lenient and less easy to miss OK
00:28:398 (5,1) - Missing hyper for cymbal/finish emphasis OK
00:53:072 (8,1) - Could really do with a hyper for pitch emphasis okay, alongside with 00:53:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) to fix the flow a bit.
00:55:246 (4,1) - 00:55:680 (4,1) - 00:56:115 (4,1) - I'd have these as hypers considering 00:54:702 (6,1) - has one and is the same strength. Also makes for a nice buildup into the kiai OK, but might need recheck cuz lot of things changed here from now on./color]
00:59:702 (5,1) - Same as 00:28:398 (5,1) -
01:06:550 (4,5) - Kinda tricky 1/4 jump, consider reducing OK
Emphasis a problem in some places, but generally ok Thanks :3

Blooming Flowers
00:08:833 (5) - Feels very squashed against the border and breaks flow. Try to move it away from the wall and make it more horizontal Cause I like to make it H-Dash, but then again pattern changed a bit.
00:13:181 (1,2) - Some nice 1/6 sounds you could map in here to make the difficulty more interesting like you did in other areas Nice Idea
00:34:703 (3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Weird jump emphasis here, (1), (3) and (1) are strong but get almost nothing, whereas 00:35:137 (2) - is weak and gets a hyper. Feels very odd to play, please reposition these to provide proper emphasis adding 1/2 H-dash instead, since its Overdosish. Lets see...
00:35:789 - 00:49:702 - I like the pattern idea you have here, but it's far too repetitive at present. You can easily reverse some of those linear stream patterns for more variety, and add some jumps in between on patterns like 00:38:399 (3,4,5,6,7) - for the stronger sounds HW referrence, but I might change to something new.
00:51:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same deal here, very repetitive and could use a little spicing up with some direction changes Yes done add spice and sauce.
Watch your momentum coming off hypers in the kiai, some are too weak to properly hit the big curves you have following them and it's easy to miss tails. I'm talking about patterns like 01:12:963 (6,1,2,3,4) - Did something like changing pattern a bit, but making c shaped instead of slang slider. And also changed the 01:05:789 (3,4) to make a bit more flow.

And some self-mod based on the overdose feedback, like make used on tap dash on overdose 00:54:920 (1,2,3,4),
00:35:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4),
00:27:094 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) , and smoothing movements on 00:57:094 (4,5,6,7) :3
Hope this helps, good luck! (:

Thanks for modding, so much stuff fixed

Last edited by Moeruattack 2017-05-13T16:20:44+00:00, edited 26 times in total.

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-05-10T18:03:58+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Requested in my Interesting Queue

General
Did you make the skin elements yourself? It looks very similar to a number of old touhou skins, so if you copied elements from elsewhere, you'd need permission from the original creators in order to include them in your map.
Evanent's Rain has different shaded combo colours. Is this intentional? ~~Yes, It is XD~~

Evanent's Rain
00:06:876 (6,1) - Why no hyper here when it's stronger than 00:06:659 (5,6) - which does have one?]
00:14:920 (1) - How about Ctrl+ this to get a hyper for the cymbal/finish sound?
00:17:311 (2,3,1) - 00:31:224 (2,3,1) - Would look neater if these were equally spaced imo
00:27:420 (3) - Move this right a bit for a better looking curve like you had at 00:13:452 (2,3,4) -
00:45:789 (3,1) - Maintaining momentum on this strong normal dash is hard, so it's easy to miss the tail of (1). making this a hyper or making (1) more vertical would help
00:49:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - This is really cool - Thank you ♥
01:02:746 (1,2,3,4) - 01:16:659 (1,2,3,4) - The size of this wiggle is very unexpected, try reducing the spacing a little here for less of a difficulty spike
01:08:615 (2,1) - Missing hyper? Kinda annoying as a normal dash and strong enough to be one
01:24:485 - There's a not here you forgot to map xD A hyper on the end would be a nice way to finish the map
Not the prettiest map I've seen, but definitely fun to play. A little aesthetic polish and this'll be great

Hope this helps, good luck! (:

Well, no comments, when i made this diff I thought it was good, now i see it and really sucks. I'll try to take a look during the weekends, all the rest were fixed. Thank you very much Hyperion c:

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-05-10T21:38:00+00:00

breathless wrote:
when i made this diff I thought it was good, now i see it and really sucks. I'll try to take a look during the weekends, all the rest were fixed.

I think you missed my point a little. Your diff doesn't suck at all, I actually think it's really nice! Some distances and stream shapes just look a little ugly in my opinion. Please don't remap anything just because of my random opinion xD

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-05-13T01:55:14+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
I think you missed my point a little. Your diff doesn't suck at all, I actually think it's really nice! Some distances and stream shapes just look a little ugly in my opinion. Please don't remap anything just because of my random opinion xD

Well, I think is important to take seriously the opinions and suggestions, more if that person is an experimented player, mapper and modder e.e

UPDATE sorry if you already updated the previous D: this is the last for the moment

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Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-05-13T16:21:32+00:00

Updated, taking a lot of time cuz generating idea c:

breathless wrote:
Well, no comments, when i made this diff I thought it was good, now i see it and really sucks. I'll try to take a look during the weekends, all the rest were fixed. Thank you very much Hyperion c:

I think it was unique rain btw c:

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-06-20T02:27:20+00:00

A little update.

Let's try again? c:

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Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-06-20T19:41:49+00:00

Yep, lets try again

UPDATED

I still moved to WIP cause maybe I like to draw extras for skin, mod still continue.

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-07-09T03:52:12+00:00

Finally I'm able to play again TwT

And here, another little update

How to break a Rain

UPDATE

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During the week I'll maybe take a look to your diffs to make this going faster c:

~~Where's the "breathless" tag? :'c~~

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-09T15:02:34+00:00

breathless wrote:

Finally I'm able to play again TwT

And here, another little update

How to break a Rain

UPDATE

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40,281,63724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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472,340,66659,5,4,0:0:0:0:
484,284,66767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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193,176,67311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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230,112,67746,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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262,139,86985,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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430,152,87963,5,2,0:0:0:0:
470,216,88072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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313,210,88724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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241,220,89485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,224,89594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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267,246,90028,1,2,0:0:0:0:
333,280,90137,2,0,L|437:280,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,177,90463,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,145,90517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,133,90572,6,0,L|231:133,1,52.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,75,90789,2,0,L|241:75,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,170,91224,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,234,91441,6,0,L|346:234,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,296,91767,2,0,L|301:296,1,52.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,242,92094,2,0,L|55:242,1,52.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,186,92257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,175,92311,6,0,L|201:175,1,52.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,171,92528,2,0,L|284:117,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,122,92746,2,0,L|122:64,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,85,92963,2,0,L|289:32,1,52.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,28,93126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,33,93181,6,0,L|75:34,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,87,93507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
81,145,93615,2,0,L|197:142,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,190,93941,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,247,94050,6,0,L|140:247,1,52.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,301,94267,2,0,L|110:301,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,196,94702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,104,94920,6,0,L|267:104,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,102,95246,1,2,0:0:0:0:
267,69,95354,2,0,L|373:69,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,39,95681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
221,40,95789,5,2,0:0:0:0:
174,105,95898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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354,228,96224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,262,96441,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,235,96550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,291,96659,6,0,L|277:291,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,289,96985,1,2,0:0:0:0:
426,217,97094,2,0,L|310:216,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,172,97420,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,172,97474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,172,97528,5,2,0:0:0:0:
378,150,97637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,120,97746,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,107,97963,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,248,98181,5,8,0:0:0:0:
242,229,98289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
479,250,98398,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98615,12,0,101441,0:0:0:0:

During the week I'll maybe take a look to your diffs to make this going faster c:

~~Where's the "breathless" tag? :'c~~

Updated and fixed dose tag :^)

Sure, you can mod

(Althrough I`m not sure if I should add the last part and changing the Hitsounding Clap on the middle song to same as Normal Hitclap).
And yes, haven`t finish skin yet q-q

Really wish for rank this year

wwwww

Beatmap Nominator

103 posts

Joined May 2016

wwwww 2017-07-12T19:15:40+00:00

Here is my kind of mod

Cup

Wow this cup is already great i don't see any big flaws! the hit sounding is well done and fits with the song nothing for me to say here good job!

Salad

Once again this is very well done but there are some things i want to point out
00:15:789 (2) - this happens a little to late just move it a tad bit earlier https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575020
00:08:833 (2) - same goes for this one here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575030

Platter

Once again well done i love the intro there are just a few things to point out
00:13:615 (3) - for this circle move it closer to the 2 so its not awkwardly spaced out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575080

Evanets Rain

I feel so bad this is all so good like i have nothing to point out anymore xD maybe im to new at this and i am sorry for not pointing anything out

I do not desire kudosu for this mod i know i did not say a lot and i apologize for that. I have seen a lot of people mod this map and it seems like it has come a long way and it just keeps getting better and better. i love the song and hope it becomes ranked you do not have to give me kudosu for this if you do not want toi hardly pointed anything out and i sincerely apologize for that. Hope this becomes ranked good luck!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-13T08:28:09+00:00

xXShockwaveXx wrote:
Here is my kind of mod
Cup
Wow this cup is already great i don't see any big flaws! the hit sounding is well done and fits with the song nothing for me to say here good job!
Salad
Once again this is very well done but there are some things i want to point out
00:15:789 (2) - this happens a little to late just move it a tad bit earlier https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575020 Seems like its not blend it well, even though the beat really make a great pattern section here. No changed
00:08:833 (2) - same goes for this one here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575030 ^
Platter
Once again well done i love the intro there are just a few things to point out
00:13:615 (3) - for this circle move it closer to the 2 so its not awkwardly spaced out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575080 I prefer the previous one but sure
Evanets Rain
I feel so bad this is all so good like i have nothing to point out anymore xD maybe im to new at this and i am sorry for not pointing anything out

I do not desire kudosu for this mod i know i did not say a lot and i apologize for that. I have seen a lot of people mod this map and it seems like it has come a long way and it just keeps getting better and better. i love the song and hope it becomes ranked you do not have to give me kudosu for this if you do not want toi hardly pointed anything out and i sincerely apologize for that. Hope this becomes ranked good luck!

At least you tried for the best to mod this mapset xd
Thanks for modding!

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Kimitakari 2017-07-17T10:19:24+00:00

From my Modding Queue

Rain

00:19:267 (1,2,3) - Here I think the distance is big. (1) note - x:128, (2) note - x:368 and (1) note - x:128.
01:24:485 (1) - Quite a big distance. Move this to x:144

Evanent's Rain

To start off your map has distance problems starting with 00:07:963 until the rest of this diff. I won't point them all but I hope you understood what I actually meant.
00:15:572 (2,3,4) - x:256 however the (3) note place it to x:192
00:22:746 (3) - x:336
00:23:507 (3) - x:208
00:27:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - x:176
00:39:267 ~ 00:42:064 - This part is unrankable due to the distance spacing. Please look at it and make it playable.
And I have to stop it there, sorry. But you know what I mean. That main problem with your diff is distance. It's so big and makes harder to full combo it.

Blooming Flowers

00:04:267 (5) - For some creativity move the end tail to the right like on the (4) note
00:11:441 (1,2,3,4) - I think the distance between (5) note and (1)
note is preety big. Let's try to nerf it. So, (1) slider - x:80, (2) - x:224, (3) with (4) - x:392.
00:17:311 (8,9) - Same problem. (8) with (9) - x:316.
00:35:351 (3) - x:100
00:35:281 (5,6,7) - You can make this pattern like this. My opinion.
00:56:659 ~ 01:24:485 - Is filled with an uncomfortable streaming sliders. I'd highly recommend to look at it very closely and if you fix that it will be very comfortabe to play it. Other than that the rest of this kiai is fine. No unrankable parts I have found here.

That's all for me. Good luck with ranking!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-17T12:09:39+00:00

Nelly wrote:
From my Modding Queue

Rain
00:19:267 (1,2,3) - Here I think the distance is big. (1) note - x:128, (2) note - x:368 and (1) note - x:128.
01:24:485 (1) - Quite a big distance. Move this to x:144

OK All accepted
Evanent's Rain
To start off your map has distance problems starting with 00:07:963 until the rest of this diff. I won't point them all but I hope you understood what I actually meant.
00:15:572 (2,3,4) - x:256 however the (3) note place it to x:192
00:22:746 (3) - x:336
00:23:507 (3) - x:208
00:27:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - x:176
00:39:267 ~ 00:42:064 - This part is unrankable due to the distance spacing. Please look at it and make it playable.
And I have to stop it there, sorry. But you know what I mean. That main problem with your diff is distance. It's so big and makes harder to full combo it.
Blooming Flowers
00:04:267 (5) - For some creativity move the end tail to the right like on the (4) note kinda hard btw, but OK
00:11:441 (1,2,3,4) - I think the distance between (5) note and (1)
note is preety big. Let's try to nerf it. So, (1) slider - x:80, (2) - x:224, (3) with (4) - x:392. Looks...same. But OK
00:17:311 (8,9) - Same problem. (8) with (9) - x:316. OK
00:35:351 (3) - x:100 OK
00:35:281 (5,6,7) - You can make this pattern like this. My opinion. Cool, I take it.
00:56:659 ~ 01:24:485 - Is filled with an uncomfortable streaming sliders. I'd highly recommend to look at it very closely and if you fix that it will be very comfortabe to play it. Other than that the rest of this kiai is fine. No unrankable parts I have found here. I intended to make it plays like that, more like grip pattern stream.
But still, I may nerf a bit when other modder mention the same thing :)
That's all for me. Good luck with ranking!

Thanks for modding ;-;

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-07-17T23:53:36+00:00

Nelly wrote:
From my Modding Queue

Evanent's Rain
To start off your map has distance problems starting with 00:07:963 until the rest of this diff. I won't point them all but I hope you understood what I actually meant.
00:15:572 (2,3,4) - x:256 however the (3) note place it to x:192
00:22:746 (3) - x:336
00:23:507 (3) - x:208
00:27:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - x:176
00:39:267 ~ 00:42:064 - This part is unrankable due to the distance spacing. Please look at it and make it playable.
And I have to stop it there, sorry. But you know what I mean. That main problem with your diff is distance. It's so big and makes harder to full combo it.

That's all for me. Good luck with ranking!

Yeah, first I didn't get it but now that you mentioned it the distance is really a problem here. In the start it was difficult to have a big combo in the map. I'll work on the distances that still look weird

Thank you very much for the mod Nelly c:

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Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-20T05:28:59+00:00

Done Updated,

Maybe will be put to Pending on next mod and new ryuuta next week

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-07-20T16:04:47+00:00

Hello , came from my NM Queue I'm not that experienced. But i'll try my best

Only give kudosu if it was helpful

[Cup]

00:01:007 (1) - How about change this slider into Simple curve like this Click. Newbie players need a simple pattern in the beginning
00:02:746 (1) - Same ^. But CTRL + H this

[Salad]

00:01:007 (1) - Simple curve first Click. Easy pattern in the beginning first pls xd
00:01:659 (2) - Move to x : 208
00:01:876 (3) - CTRL + G Then move to x : 316
01:01:876 (1) - x : 332 ? Make a bit room for them

[Platter]

00:48:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove Hdash in the 00:49:049 (5) - By moving it to x : 136 Click
00:55:789 (1) - Remove Hdash by moving it to x : 176. New players Can't deal with that one i think. Because it uses Hdash in 00:56:224 (2) - :/

[Rain]

No Mistakes. I think. It's really enjoyable

[Evanent's Rain]

00:06:224 (1,2,3) - Maybe make a reversed slider here. Click
00:07:094 (1) - CTRL + G ?
01:38:615 (1) - Make the end of the spinner in here? I think because the song is finished in there

[Blooming Flowers]

Sorry. I still can't mod Overdose

I think this song is pretty good. I hope it will get ranked soon. Good Luck

A Star for you ( >.<)/ *Giving away a Star*

*Edit (Too much)
I hope i can make the platter of this song someday xD

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-20T17:15:42+00:00

Skycreeper- wrote:
Hello , came from my NM Queue I'm not that experienced. But i'll try my best

Only give kudosu if it was helpful

[Cup]
00:01:007 (1) - How about change this slider into Simple curve like this Click. Newbie players need a simple pattern in the beginning I tried to make something that very much referrence to HW convert pattern, so I think its fine if new Cup players tried out this map, but then again, nice idea. Changed completely.
00:02:746 (1) - Same ^. But CTRL + H this ^
[Salad]
00:01:007 (1) - Simple curve first Click. Easy pattern in the beginning first pls xd
00:01:659 (2) - Move to x : 208
00:01:876 (3) - CTRL + G Then move to x : 316
01:01:876 (1) - x : 332 ? Make a bit room for them

OK All changed
[Platter]
00:48:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove Hdash in the 00:49:049 (5) - By moving it to x : 136 Click *Too hard if move to that place, and adding H-Dash because beat is strong in this section.
00:55:789 (1) - Remove Hdash by moving it to x : 176. New players Can't deal with that one i think. Because it uses Hdash in 00:56:224 (2) - :/ I think its fine, the beat compliments the h-dash.
[Rain]
No Mistakes. I think. It's really enjoyable.
Thanks
[Evanent's Rain]
00:06:224 (1,2,3) - Maybe make a reversed slider here. Click
00:07:094 (1) - CTRL + G ?
01:38:615 (1) - Make the end of the spinner in here? I think because the song is finished in there
[Blooming Flowers]
Sorry. I still can't mod Overdose

:(
I think this song is pretty good. I hope it will get ranked soon. Good Luck
A Star for you ( >.<)/ *Giving away a Star*

*Edit (Too much)
I hope i can make the platter of this song someday xD
(I wish you would said that earlier but xd)

That was fast

Thanks for modding, you deserve the kookiesu ^^)

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-07-21T03:07:01+00:00

Skycreeper- wrote:
Hello , came from my NM Queue I'm not that experienced. But i'll try my best

Only give kudosu if it was helpful

[Evanent's Rain]
00:06:224 (1,2,3) - Maybe make a reversed slider here. Click - Accepted. Pretty good c:
00:07:094 (1) - CTRL + G ? - Same, it was a bit hard the pattern before (what? XD)
01:38:615 (1) - Make the end of the spinner in here? I think because the song is finished in there
- I didn't got it, so the spinner is still in that point, but ended at 01:41:007

I think this song is pretty good. I hope it will get ranked soon. Good Luck
A Star for you ( >.<)/ *Giving away a Star*

*Edit (Too much)
I hope i can make the platter of this song someday xD

Thank you very much for the mod Skycreeper- c:

UPDATE

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 789
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Kaoru Jiyoka
TitleUnicode:香る樹葉花
Artist:Akiyama Uni
ArtistUnicode:あきやま うに
Creator:murutattack
Version:Evanent's Rain
Source:東方Project
Tags:Touhou th10.5 fxt Twilight Frontier Tasofro 黄昏フロンティア zun Scarlet Weather Rhapsody jun Fragrant Plants チルノ Cirno murumuru breathless
BeatmapID:1119599
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OverallDifficulty:9
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murutattack wrote:
Done Updated,

Maybe will be put to Pending on next mod and new ryuuta next week

muruta, If you need help finding a ryuuta tell me and I'll help you, actually in danbooru are a lot of images you can use XD (can we do that, right?

)

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-22T14:05:17+00:00

murutattack wrote:
Done Updated,

Maybe will be put to Pending on next mod and new ryuuta next week

muruta, If you need help finding a ryuuta tell me and I'll help you, actually in danbooru are a lot of images you can use XD (can we do that, right?

)[/quote]

Updated

Maybe na, I let into Pending, while adding ryuuta when I have free time xd
(Just thinking of drawning myself quz bored or something lel)

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-07-23T05:21:44+00:00

As I told you, here a little mod for the low diffs c:

[Salad]
00:32:311 (1) - Maybe put this a little near to 00:31:877 (4) - That's the only "problem" I found catching

[Platter]
00:01:876 (3,4,4,5,4,5) - Seems like you can increase the distance between these notes, at how are they placed now they're easily "walkable", so a high use of dash here seems good (random sugerence, feel free to ignore)
00:07:963 (1) - Try this more horizontal
00:12:746 (6) - X:308
00:14:920 (1) - Here too, more horizontal
00:25:572 (4) - crtl+G and x:260, like this
00:27:963 (4) - x:75
00:32:528 (4) - ctrl+G and x:252, like this
00:34:485 (2) - Try it diagonal like this
00:54:920 (1,2) - ctrl+H, rotate 20 and x:72
00:55:354 (3,4) - ctrl+H, rotate 15 and x:288
01:02:311 (2) - x:246
01:16:224 (2) - x:266

I think is a very subjective mod, hope you can have some ideas

murutattack wrote:
Maybe na, I let into Pending, while adding ryuuta when I have free time xd
(Just thinking of drawning myself quz bored or something lel)

Kay XD

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-24T08:35:31+00:00

breathless wrote:
As I told you, here a little mod for the low diffs c:

[Salad]
00:32:311 (1) - Maybe put this a little near to 00:31:877 (4) - That's the only "problem" I found catching

[Platter]
00:01:876 (3,4,4,5,4,5) - Seems like you can increase the distance between these notes, at how are they placed now they're easily "walkable", so a high use of dash here seems good (random sugerence, feel free to ignore)
00:07:963 (1) - Try this more horizontal
00:12:746 (6) - X:308
00:14:920 (1) - Here too, more horizontal
00:25:572 (4) - crtl+G and x:260, like this
00:27:963 (4) - x:75
00:32:528 (4) - ctrl+G and x:252, like this
00:34:485 (2) - Try it diagonal like this
00:54:920 (1,2) - ctrl+H, rotate 20 and x:72
00:55:354 (3,4) - ctrl+H, rotate 15 and x:288
01:02:311 (2) - x:246
01:16:224 (2) - x:266

I think is a very subjective mod, hope you can have some ideas

murutattack wrote:
Maybe na, I let into Pending, while adding ryuuta when I have free time xd
(Just thinking of drawning myself quz bored or something lel)
Kay XD

All updated, moving to Pending :3
Although I wanna have more modder on "Salad" diff btw lol

sxy62146214

227 posts

Joined May 2016

sxy62146214 2017-07-29T15:11:56+00:00

Learn how to dance like a flower.

Green=It's not a problem.Just point this to discuss the possibility of improvement.
Black=Normal mod.
Orange=It looks like a big problem......
Red=What the hell.

[

Cup]
In fact you can NC more frequently.Such like 00:01:007 (1,2,3),They can even NC for each slider.And 00:07:963 (1,2,3,4,5),you can put a NC at 00:09:702 (4).But they are not big problems.
00:14:485 (2) - The same object(00:11:007 (5)) before is (prev:0.95x next:1.05x) but here is (1.01x 0.58x). 0.58x is too small.
00:15:790 (3,4) - Akward distant.
00:38:398 (4,1) - Is this anti-flow?
[

Salad]
00:01:007 (1,2) - I can't understand why this DS is so large since the two same part below is normal.(Yet a dash at 00:06:876 (2,3) is right.)
00:24:920 (4) - If me,I will but it hroizenal.
00:31:877 (4) - ^
00:34:485 (2) - X:112?
00:54:920 (1,2,3) - I think it should be more dashes.
01:01:876 (1,2) - ??? What a small DS.
01:06:224 (5) - It shuold be total horizenal.
01:15:789 (1,2) - ???
01:20:137 (5) - Well...There are lots of horizenal sliders in this part,so why you make this not hroizenal?
[

Platter]
00:13:615 (3,4,5) - hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.——Ranking Criteria.
00:22:528 (3) and 00:23:398 (1) and 00:26:007 (5) - They are too hroizenal.
00:49:702 (1,2) - DS is too large.
00:50:572 (4,5) - A little smaller but still too large.
00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It should be more beautiful.
01:07:746 (1,2) - It should be more farther so that it would be more beautiful.
01:10:354 (5,1) - hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.——Ranking Criteria.(Is this an anti-flow?)
01:13:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like the 00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)'s mod.
01:21:659 (1,2) - like the 01:07:746 (1,2)'s mod.
[

Rain]
Oh dears.Streams.
00:07:963 (1) - Em,it should be a little more hroizenal.
00:39:920 (2,3) - I think here should not be a hyperdash and the hyperdash should at 00:40:572 (4,1).Because you put hyperdashed every two "vings"
00:41:767 (2,3) - ^
00:44:485 (5,6) - ^
00:58:833 (5) - It should be more hroizenal.
Though it's 3.8*,it's very hard to play (maybe because i drank)
[

Evanent's Rain]
My fingers are shaking.
00:03:072 (4,5) - What?Should there be a hyperdash?
00:08:615 (2,3) - Since the same parts below have no HDash,Why here has?
00:34:485 (6) - Hey,Players thinks It should go to the right but wtf
00:46:876 (4,5) - Lefter like 3:X:312?
01:30:463 (4,5,1) - Weird.Just keep them in the same DS.
[

Blooming Flowers]
Ehhhh what's Overdose?I can't mod Overdose.Ehhhh.....

GL!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-29T16:59:23+00:00

sxy62146214 wrote:
Learn how to dance like a flower.

Green=It's not a problem.Just point this to discuss the possibility of improvement.
Black=Normal mod.
Orange=It looks like a big problem......
Red=What the hell.

[ Cup]
In fact you can NC more frequently.Such like 00:01:007 (1,2,3),They can even NC for each slider.And 00:07:963 (1,2,3,4,5),you can put a NC at 00:09:702 (4).But they are not big problems. Not really problem on NC on 00:01:007 (1,2,3) as the beat still the same pace, but the 00:07:963, yes.
00:14:485 (2) - The same object(00:11:007 (5)) before is (prev:0.95x next:1.05x) but here is (1.01x 0.58x). 0.58x is too small. I can`t fix this for some reason. If any pattern suggestion, then I accept.
00:15:790 (3,4) - Akward distant. ^
00:38:398 (4,1) - Is this anti-flow? Nope, Varieties :3
[ Salad]
00:01:007 (1,2) - I can't understand why this DS is so large since the two same part below is normal.(Yet a dash at 00:06:876 (2,3) is right.) Fixed
00:24:920 (4) - If me,I will but it hroizenal. Looks same.
00:31:877 (4) - ^ ^
00:34:485 (2) - X:112? Hmm...maybe i keep current now, looks wierd after played for a while.
00:54:920 (1,2,3) - I think it should be more dashes. Maybe? Ok only make 2.00x on (3)
01:01:876 (1,2) - ??? What a small DS. Oh didn`t notice about previous mod issues, fixed
01:06:224 (5) - It shuold be total horizenal. OK
01:15:789 (1,2) - ??? Fixed
01:20:137 (5) - Well...There are lots of horizenal sliders in this part,so why you make this not hroizenal? Same pattern but turned into not horizontal, same mod applies to the 01:06:224 (5).
[ Platter]
00:13:615 (3,4,5) - hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.——Ranking Criteria. C shaped pattern is fine, if its anti-flow, it might be the opposite direction of the flow, or entirely brakes the flow.
00:22:528 (3) and 00:23:398 (1) and 00:26:007 (5) - They are too hroizenal. Bingo, Fixed
00:49:702 (1,2) - DS is too large. Not really that problem but decrease a bit.
00:50:572 (4,5) - A little smaller but still too large. Intended to dash.
00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It should be more beautiful. Fixed since no one mention this :^)
01:07:746 (1,2) - It should be more farther so that it would be more beautiful. Fixed
01:10:354 (5,1) - hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.——Ranking Criteria.(Is this an anti-flow?) Intended
01:13:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like the 00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)'s mod. Fixed
01:21:659 (1,2) - like the 01:07:746 (1,2)'s mod. Fixed
[ Rain]
Oh dears.Streams. Welcome to the opposite to Evanent's Rain :3
00:07:963 (1) - Em,it should be a little more hroizenal. End up Vertical instead cause horizontal doesn`t seem fit.
00:39:920 (2,3) - I think here should not be a hyperdash and the hyperdash should at 00:40:572 (4,1).Because you put hyperdashed every two "vings" Seems better
00:41:767 (2,3) - ^ ???
00:44:485 (5,6) - ^ I think it fits.
00:58:833 (5) - It should be more hroizenal. OK fixed the flow
Though it's 3.8*,it's very hard to play (maybe because i drank) *Intended to make unusual Rain map *
[ Evanent's Rain]
My fingers are shaking.
00:03:072 (4,5) - What?Should there be a hyperdash?
00:08:615 (2,3) - Since the same parts below have no HDash,Why here has?
00:34:485 (6) - Hey,Players thinks It should go to the right but wtf
00:46:876 (4,5) - Lefter like 3:X:312?
01:30:463 (4,5,1) - Weird.Just keep them in the same DS.
[ Blooming Flowers]
Ehhhh what's Overdose?I can't mod Overdose.Ehhhh.....

D:

GL!

Thanks for mod, I will update 1 by 1, and m4m progress tomorrow

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-07-30T00:01:32+00:00

sxy62146214 wrote:
Learn how to dance like a flower.

[ Evanent's Rain]
My fingers are shaking. That's the idea c:
00:03:072 (4,5) - What?Should there be a hyperdash? - Well, no, but i thought it'll be a nice idea, fixed.
00:08:615 (2,3) - Since the same parts below have no HDash,Why here has? - Fixed.
00:34:485 (6) - Hey,Players thinks It should go to the right but wtf - Fixed. Seems good in my opinion but meh, still hard.
00:46:876 (4,5) - Lefter like 3:X:312? - Pretty good! Fixed.
01:30:463 (4,5,1) - Weird.Just keep them in the same DS. - Fixed (I think)

GL!

Thank you very much for the mod c:

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sxy62146214 wrote:
murutattack wrote:
Oh dears.Streams. Welcome to the opposite to Evanent's Rain :3

Actually this sounds really cool XD

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-08-02T12:00:48+00:00

UPDATED *kinda late updating, rl2buzy q-q*

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2017-08-07T22:16:22+00:00

Hi there, sorry for the looong late.

[General]

I see a conflict with the duration between your difficulties and the difficulty of breathless, I think the overall duration should be the same, so, you have to choose to reduce the duration on the breathless difficulty or, lengthen the duration of the difficulties with the difficulty of breathless.
Currently you have two colors in the combos, I suggest you add two more, so that at least 4, I'll leave some colors (put it on the .osu file (open with notepad) and scroll down untill the "Colours"):
```
109,145,56
136,153,102
```
Well, I think that's all I could find, let's go with the mod.

[Cup]

00:13:181 (1,1) - I feel a little empty of those sliders, it can be much better if you choose to make them 1/1 with repeat, just like you did on other occasions: 00:09:702 (1,1) - but if you want to keep them, I suggest you change the way you go from side to side during a slider, something "tired" for new players, I would choose to do something similar to this. (If you agree to use my suggestion, remember to avoid joining the notes with the previous sliders, give the appropriate distance and keep it for all.)
00:22:746 (2,4) - I see that you have many of these repeats, so to give a little variety to the map, try intercalating triplets horizontally, since in my opinion it gives a better aspect to your map, I would choose to do something like this. (Remember that the image is only visual support, keep your distances and avoid uncomfortable patterns.)
00:53:181 (1) - What do you think of replacing it with a spinner?
Well, I do not have so much problem with this difficulty, since it is very basic.

[Salad]

If the sound is the same in 00:02:746 (1,1) - these sliders, why add a dash 00:06:224 (1) - there when it does not work? I suggest you use the previous distances, because it does not look suitable for a dash, on the other hand add a 00:07:963 (1) - dash here, would be appropriate.
00:13:833 (2,3) - It's hard for me to get these notes, I do not know if it's a dash or a walk, specify that pattern more, I suggest you reduce the distance and dash you add between 00:14:050 (3,1) - these notes.

I will leave the mod here, since I can not concentrate xD, a thousand apologies (do not respond until it is finished) Q A Q

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-08-28T11:55:07+00:00

UPDATE c:

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 789
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.899999

[Metadata]
Title:Kaoru Jiyoka
TitleUnicode:香る樹葉花
Artist:Akiyama Uni
ArtistUnicode:あきやま うに
Creator:murutattack
Version:Evanent's Rain
Source:東方Project
Tags:Touhou th10.5 fxt Twilight Frontier Tasofro 黄昏フロンティア zun Scarlet Weather Rhapsody jun Fragrant Plants チルノ Cirno murumuru breathless
BeatmapID:1119599
BeatmapSetID:508690

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.1
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-08-28T12:24:54+00:00

Updated!

~~Still waiting Jusenkyo if he still continue modding or not lol~~

meh, i mod which he did for now, but call bn a while

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-09-08T18:16:37+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
Hi there, sorry for the looong late.

[General]
I see a conflict with the duration between your difficulties and the difficulty of breathless, I think the overall duration should be the same, so, you have to choose to reduce the duration on the breathless difficulty or, lengthen the duration of the difficulties with the difficulty of breathless. I think Breathless already decreased it.
Currently you have two colors in the combos, I suggest you add two more, so that at least 4, I'll leave some colors (put it on the .osu file (open with notepad) and scroll down untill the "Colours"):
109,145,56
136,153,102
Sure
Well, I think that's all I could find, let's go with the mod.
[Cup]
00:13:181 (1,1) - I feel a little empty of those sliders, it can be much better if you choose to make them 1/1 with repeat, just like you did on other occasions: 00:09:702 (1,1) - but if you want to keep them, I suggest you change the way you go from side to side during a slider, something "tired" for new players, I would choose to do something similar to this. (If you agree to use my suggestion, remember to avoid joining the notes with the previous sliders, give the appropriate distance and keep it for all.) The (2) is underdistancing and adding more distance making other notes/slider issues. Maybe I stick to current.
00:22:746 (2,4) - I see that you have many of these repeats, so to give a little variety to the map, try intercalating triplets horizontally, since in my opinion it gives a better aspect to your map, I would choose to do something like this. (Remember that the image is only visual support, keep your distances and avoid uncomfortable patterns.) Seems ok, but I think I keep the current now as it plays fine at the moment.
00:53:181 (1) - What do you think of replacing it with a spinner? I think I wanna stick every diff as zero spinners.
Well, I do not have so much problem with this difficulty, since it is very basic.
[Salad]
If the sound is the same in 00:02:746 (1,1) - these sliders, why add a dash 00:06:224 (1) - there when it does not work? I suggest you use the previous distances, because it does not look suitable for a dash, on the other hand add a 00:07:963 (1) - dash here, would be appropriate. I think it works fine when there`s a stronger beat on the next part, so I keep this for a while.
00:13:833 (2,3) - It's hard for me to get these notes, I do not know if it's a dash or a walk, specify that pattern more, I suggest you reduce the distance and dash you add between 00:14:050 (3,1) - these notes. Reduced a bit :p

I will leave the mod here, since I can not concentrate xD, a thousand apologies (do not respond until it is finished) Q A Q
Lol its ok, I just approve what mod you done lol

Well at least I have time to mod for now xd
Thanks for modding

Jemzuu

Beatmap Nominator

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-09-09T11:26:03+00:00

hello from my Q

General
there are some unsnapped objects in other diffs that i'll not be modding pls check aimod
why does Cup up to Evanent's Rain has the same HP? it's not good for spread vary them? it's neccessary for ranked
shouldn't be the preview time be at 00:56:224 -

Blooming Flowers

00:36:550 (7,8) - uncomfortable dash movement here D: make it hyper instead? move 8 to x440
00:36:876 (1) - make this hdash as well? stack it to 00:36:007 (2) - now it's easier to catch them c:
00:49:593 (4,1) - the spacing here is quite empty just move these 00:49:485 (3,4) - closer like 220|208 it plays better imo
01:15:571 (3) - object isnt snapped via aimod
01:21:659 (1) - this could get more space imo x425 mayb

woah great diff i love it

Salad

00:27:963 (3) - edge dash move to x172
00:31:223 (3) - object not snapped
00:36:659 (2) - could get more space x304
00:54:050 (2) - just reduce this abit x190
01:07:094 (1) - awkward distance imo increase space a bit since there's a pause in the music anyway so perhaps x216 to overlap 01:08:833 (1) - aesthetics uwu
01:21:007 (1) - same reason above overlap it with 01:22:746 (1) -

those are the only diffs u asked me to mod so yea goodluck! dont forget to add me in modder box xd
nice map i really liked it take this star~

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-09-09T12:24:09+00:00

AJamez wrote:
hello from my Q

General
there are some unsnapped objects in other diffs that i'll not be modding pls check aimod *wow it is Fixed!*
why does Cup up to Evanent's Rain has the same HP? it's not good for spread vary them? it's neccessary for ranked (Yep, forgot to change HP, but because I like less HP drain so 3 > 3.5 > 4 > 4.5 > 5 > 6 seems ok.]
shouldn't be the preview time be at 00:56:224 -

Blooming Flowers

00:36:550 (7,8) - uncomfortable dash movement here D: make it hyper instead? move 8 to x440 v
00:36:876 (1) - make this hdash as well? stack it to 00:36:007 (2) - now it's easier to catch them c: Seems cool, althrough might some ppl triggering about this pattern but lets try :3
00:49:593 (4,1) - the spacing here is quite empty just move these 00:49:485 (3,4) - closer like 220|208 it plays better imo Good idea, but I refer to the 00:54:920 (1,2) as a referrence :3
01:15:571 (3) - object isnt snapped via aimod Fixed
01:21:659 (1) - this could get more space imo x425 mayb *Buffed*
woah great diff i love it *tq :3*

Salad

00:27:963 (3) - edge dash move to x172
00:31:223 (3) - object not snapped
00:36:659 (2) - could get more space x304
00:54:050 (2) - just reduce this abit x190
01:07:094 (1) - awkward distance imo increase space a bit since there's a pause in the music anyway so perhaps x216 to overlap 01:08:833 (1) - aesthetics uwu
01:21:007 (1) - same reason above overlap it with 01:22:746 (1) -

Seems like all accepted

those are the only diffs u asked me to mod so yea goodluck! (lol i ask mod cup until overdose but its ok xd) dont forget to add me in modder box xd sure
nice map i really liked it take this star~ tq, and thanks for your mod, really appreciated ^^

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-09-18T01:33:14+00:00

01:22:746 - Missing finish/clap here (Cup)
Ending finish/clap hitsounds are really, really loud. Tone them down a bit, I can't hear the music.
Not sure if you have a custom whistle or not, but it's kind of out of place if you don't.
Looking through AIMod, Evanent's Rain's kiai times are inconsistent with that of the other diffs. Change it?

[Cup]
Nice cup!
00:48:833 (4,1) - No movement here at all. Considering that this is a strong trumpet part you're following, it might be nice to add some in, at least.
00:49:702 (1) - This slider repeat at 00:51:007 also confuses me. I'm not exactly a fan of this huge slider here, and it would be nice to map this a little more.

[Salad]
00:03:615 (3) - Might be nice to make this slider a 1/2 repeat slider for consistency. Also, this opens the potential for a dash to 00:04:485 (1), like 00:01:876 (3,1).
00:14:050 (3) - Is there any way to make this a dash? It's introducing a new section, and it might be nice to emphasize it.
00:21:007 (3) - Just a suggestion, but maybe flip this slider and move it to around x=130 or so. This makes some nice antiflow that represents the different instrument playing.
00:22:746 (3) - Slightly ambiguous between a dash and a walk. Increase or lower distance to make it clear.
00:27:963 (3) - No movement within this gap.
00:40:137 (2) - No movement here--consider adding some movement.
00:55:354 (2,3) - I would suggest increasing the distance here. That will make it more clear that it's a dash instead.
01:21:876 (2) - I would increase distancing here a little more. The trumpet increases in pitch drastically, making a huge contrast in an already high-energy setting.

[Platter]
00:10:572 (3,4) - I think this would play more interestingly as a repeat 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:11:224, since that's a much softer sound.
00:21:007 (5,6,1) - I find it strange that (5,6) is a hyper, but (6,1) is not.
00:24:702 (2,3) - Is it absolutely necessary for this to be a HDash? It feels a little overwhelming in distance.
00:36:659 (4) - Make this a repeat 1/2 slider for consistency.
00:42:093 (5) - Hyperdash here feels a little harsh.
00:47:963 (1,2,3,1) - I feel like this is too many dashes in a row--it may be a little easy to miss (3,1).
00:54:920 (1,2) - Compared to 00:55:789 (1,2), this doesn't follow the music in the same way, but also is quite underwhelming in terms of spacing.
00:59:919 (7,1) - I think this should be a hyper (may require some stream rearrangement).

[Rain]
00:05:137 (6) - The antiflow here is a little shocking to the player and may cause some misses.
00:15:681 - I would add a hitcircle here for consistency.
00:27:963 (7) - Might be nice to add a few hypers here instead, to accent the instruments.
00:51:007 (3,4,1) - Careful of the spacing! The snapping motion may be a little too difficult for rain players.
00:59:702 (5,1) - Make this a hyper--it's accenting a new phrase.
01:00:789 (3,1,2) - Make this stream movement a little softer, please.
01:14:920 (1,2,3,4) - Movement here is a little harsh for a rain, as it requires a 1/4 hyper in one direction, then a held dash immediately. Lower distancing between the four notes.

[Evanent's Rain]
00:08:615 (2,3) - I would rather this be more like 00:09:485 (1,2,3) for easier flow.
00:13:615 (5,1) - Did you mean for this to be a hyperdash? It's a bit edgy for play...I'd rather you increase the distance.
00:24:920 (3,1) - Modify this distance slightly--feels a bit low for a HDash but a bit high for a regular dash.
00:39:267 (1,2,3) - The wiggles here are a bit difficult for a rain player to catch--I would simplify the movement.
00:46:876 (4,5) - Agh, sorry, small thing--could you make this a horizontal slider like the rest of them? (Aesthetics)
00:52:963 (4,1) - Make this dash into a hyper into a pattern that doesn't require standing still. The hyper will compliment the music, and simplify the motion.
01:17:420 (4,1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3,4) is a bit of a harsh pattern from the dash (4,1). Make things even more curved on (1,2,3,4).
01:21:659 (1,2,3) - I think the antiflow pattern at 01:21:007 (1,2,3) is quite nice, and you should mirror it here without a hyper.
01:22:528 (2,1) - Stronger hyper for the trumpet reaching all the way up in pitch.
01:23:398 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel this pattern is a bit too challenging for winding down at the end, but that's me. I would simplify it a teeny bit.

[Blooming Flowers]
I really like the style of this overdose!

00:01:333 (4,5) - You make hypers at 00:04:920 (5,6), but not here. I would either put hyper patterns at both sites or neither.
00:14:267 (2,3) - Lower distance on (3) to x=88 for a simpler movement.
00:30:572 (1,2,3) - Curious if you were specifically avoiding hypers here, or you meant them. Just pointing the section out.
00:36:441 (6,7,8,1) - The double hyper coming from antiflow (6,7) feels really awkward here. I would move (7) to the right side of (6) while keeping (7,8) a hyper. This makes the movement smoother. 00:36:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7) can be gently curved to the right to accommodate this shift.
00:49:267 (1,2) - Could you please make this a hyper? It's really hard to hit if it's not a hyper.
00:49:484 (2) - Not sure if it's me but AIMod says this note is still unsnapped.
00:51:549 (2,3) - Lower distance here slightly? It's a bit hard to catch.
Really fun streams at the end!

Call me back.

YukaRei

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YukaRei 2017-09-18T20:49:03+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
01:22:746 - Missing finish/clap here (Cup)
Ending finish/clap hitsounds are really, really loud. Tone them down a bit, I can't hear the music.
Not sure if you have a custom whistle or not, but it's kind of out of place if you don't.
Looking through AIMod, Evanent's Rain's kiai times are inconsistent with that of the other diffs. Change it? Done. I think

[Evanent's Rain]
00:08:615 (2,3) - I would rather this be more like 00:09:485 (1,2,3) for easier flow. Done.
00:13:615 (5,1) - Did you mean for this to be a hyperdash? It's a bit edgy for play...I'd rather you increase the distance. I thought It was easy, but I was really wrong XD. Done
00:24:920 (3,1) - Modify this distance slightly--feels a bit low for a HDash but a bit high for a regular dash. Done.
00:39:267 (1,2,3) - The wiggles here are a bit difficult for a rain player to catch--I would simplify the movement. Changed the pattern into a easily catchable one, I think.
00:46:876 (4,5) - Agh, sorry, small thing--could you make this a horizontal slider like the rest of them? (Aesthetics) Done. Looks cuter than before
00:52:963 (4,1) - Make this dash into a hyper into a pattern that doesn't require standing still. The hyper will compliment the music, and simplify the motion. It was really hard to understand this, but I think I fixed it correctly. Done
01:17:420 (4,1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3,4) is a bit of a harsh pattern from the dash (4,1). Make things even more curved on (1,2,3,4). ~~What did I do~~... Done
01:21:659 (1,2,3) - I think the antiflow pattern at 01:21:007 (1,2,3) is quite nice, and you should mirror it here without a hyper. Done.
Now looks and feel better than before.
01:22:528 (2,1) - Stronger hyper for the trumpet reaching all the way up in pitch. I can't believe I missed this. Done
01:23:398 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel this pattern is a bit too challenging for winding down at the end, but that's me. I would simplify it a teeny bit.
Well, for me looks nice and I think to have a little challenge pattern at the end is really good. By the way, I changed a bit the distances c:

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Thank you very much for the mod Zero c:

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I hope I'm not missing something...

Moeruattack

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Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-09-19T16:47:35+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
01:22:746 - Missing finish/clap here (Cup)
Ending finish/clap hitsounds are really, really loud. Tone them down a bit, I can't hear the music.
Not sure if you have a custom whistle or not, but it's kind of out of place if you don't.
Looking through AIMod, Evanent's Rain's kiai times are inconsistent with that of the other diffs. Change it?

[Cup]
Nice cup!
00:48:833 (4,1) - No movement here at all. Considering that this is a strong trumpet part you're following, it might be nice to add some in, at least.
00:49:702 (1) - This slider repeat at 00:51:007 also confuses me. I'm not exactly a fan of this huge slider here, and it would be nice to map this a little more.

[Salad]
00:03:615 (3) - Might be nice to make this slider a 1/2 repeat slider for consistency. Also, this opens the potential for a dash to 00:04:485 (1), like 00:01:876 (3,1). Sure
00:14:050 (3) - Is there any way to make this a dash? It's introducing a new section, and it might be nice to emphasize it. Already dash c: But i add even more distance a bit.
00:21:007 (3) - Just a suggestion, but maybe flip this slider and move it to around x=130 or so. This makes some nice antiflow that represents the different instrument playing. Kinda hard pattern, but OK
00:22:746 (3) - Slightly ambiguous between a dash and a walk. Increase or lower distance to make it clear. OK, might check again though
00:27:963 (3) - No movement within this gap. OK
00:40:137 (2) - No movement here--consider adding some movement. OK
00:55:354 (2,3) - I would suggest increasing the distance here. That will make it more clear that it's a dash instead. OK
01:21:876 (2) - I would increase distancing here a little more. The trumpet increases in pitch drastically, making a huge contrast in an already high-energy setting. OK

[Platter]
00:10:572 (3,4) - I think this would play more interestingly as a repeat 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:11:224, since that's a much softer sound. Hmm, it was good too but seems like I prefer this way as it implies flow and hitsounding.
00:21:007 (5,6,1) - I find it strange that (5,6) is a hyper, but (6,1) is not. Sure, switched.
00:24:702 (2,3) - Is it absolutely necessary for this to be a HDash? It feels a little overwhelming in distance. Hmm sure, same goes with related pattern.
00:36:659 (4) - Make this a repeat 1/2 slider for consistency. Nice
00:42:093 (5) - Hyperdash here feels a little harsh. Looks ok but i "did" change a bit.
00:47:963 (1,2,3,1) - I feel like this is too many dashes in a row--it may be a little easy to miss (3,1). Yeah, nerfed
00:54:920 (1,2) - Compared to 00:55:789 (1,2), this doesn't follow the music in the same way, but also is quite underwhelming in terms of spacing. Kinda, but sure
00:59:919 (7,1) - I think this should be a hyper (may require some stream rearrangement). Fixed, i added H-Dash on that part and some buff distance on next pattern.

[Rain]
00:05:137 (6) - The antiflow here is a little shocking to the player and may cause some misses. Removed the repeated, then make 1 slider h-dash, might that work out
00:15:681 - I would add a hitcircle here for consistency. Alright, seems better
00:27:963 (7) - Might be nice to add a few hypers here instead, to accent the instruments. Sure
00:51:007 (3,4,1) - Careful of the spacing! The snapping motion may be a little too difficult for rain players. Hmm...Alright removed that flow and make a stream instead. Also added H-Dash on 00:51:876 (5).
00:59:702 (5,1) - Make this a hyper--it's accenting a new phrase. OK
01:00:789 (3,1,2) - Make this stream movement a little softer, please.
01:14:920 (1,2,3,4) - Movement here is a little harsh for a rain, as it requires a 1/4 hyper in one direction, then a held dash immediately. Lower distancing between the four notes. (The flow were similar as Overdose (old non-mod map) but end up remapping a bit cuz i dun like it after played for a while xd, fixed alongside the related pattern and the 01:00:789.

[Blooming Flowers]
I really like the style of this overdose! tq :3
00:01:333 (4,5) - You make hypers at 00:04:920 (5,6), but not here. I would either put hyper patterns at both sites or neither. Intended i guess, just to follow the flow rhythmatic :p But OK - I added some H-Dash/distance on certain area around 00:01:007 till 00:04:267.
00:14:267 (2,3) - Lower distance on (3) to x=88 for a simpler movement. OK
00:30:572 (1,2,3) - Curious if you were specifically avoiding hypers here, or you meant them. Just pointing the section out. Yup, seems like I forgot to add it, along with the similar pattern also added.
00:36:441 (6,7,8,1) - The double hyper coming from antiflow (6,7) feels really awkward here. I would move (7) to the right side of (6) while keeping (7,8) a hyper. This makes the movement smoother. 00:36:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7) can be gently curved to the right to accommodate this shift. Somehow doesn`t seem work well with the current pattern flow, but I using 00:40:354 (4,5,6,7) as referrence since it looks better. Still H-Dash stays only 1 on (7,8)
00:49:267 (1,2) - Could you please make this a hyper? It's really hard to hit if it's not a hyper. still passable but OK :3
00:49:484 (2) - Not sure if it's me but AIMod says this note is still unsnapped. How I didn`t see this D: Fixed
00:51:549 (2,3) - Lower distance here slightly? It's a bit hard to catch. 2.00x changed to a bit 1.80x around of them
Really fun streams at the end! :3

Call me back. (Sure :p)

Done updated all mapset ^^

Absolute Zero

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Absolute Zero 2017-09-25T15:03:22+00:00

Going to get strict with hitsounding.
Could you move the offset to 1007 instead, for convenience and for the lack of sounds before?

Play

[Cup]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Salad]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Platter]
00:52:746 (3,4) - This hyper goes to a note that is past the suggested distance from a wall. Additionally, it's quite strong to play. Lower distancing while keeping it a hyper (or at least a dash).
01:13:832 (7,1) - Quite a strong hyperdash here. Lower distancing.

[Rain]
00:09:485 (1,2) - No hyper here that you do elsewhere. I think you should keep consistency because (1) as a vertical slider is also a little weird.
00:24:702 (2,3) - ^

[Harder Rain]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Overdose]
01:19:485 (2,3) - Could you tone down the distance here slightly? It's a little strong for playing.

Hitsounding

[Cup]
00:01:007 - Whistle here for consistency and also to start off the song, please.
00:02:311 - Clap here for consistency.
00:02:746 - Same as 00:01:007.
00:04:050 - Same as 00:02:311.
00:07:094 (2) - I think a whistle here works with consistency.
00:08:833 - Add whistle here--it compliments the beat.
00:09:702 - You should add something here, it feels quite empty.
00:11:441 - Strong downbeat with no finish and/or clap or hitsound at all! Please add one!
00:12:311 - Same as 00:08:833.
00:14:485 (2) - To go into further explanation--the weakness of a strong finish here is that there's only a little "ting" from the triangle, which is a huge overshoot. Additionally, it might be nice to switch to a different hitsound set for 00:28:398 (2) solely, just to get that one hitsound. Below, I mention 00:35:789, and this might be a nice opportunity to use it.
00:15:789 - Same as 00:12:311.
00:16:659 - Same as 00:09:702.
00:21:442 (2) - I think this works better as a clap, giving a chance for 00:21:876, a downbeat, to be a finish instead.
00:24:485 (4) - Add whistle here for consistency.
00:25:354 - Finish here, please.
00:28:398 (2,1) - Same as 00:14:485.
00:31:659 - Same as 00:08:833.
00:35:789 - Default whistle hitsound hurts, please find metallic triangle-like hitsound for the whistle. It should fit better. If you need some help, just pm me and I'd be more than willing to search around.
00:44:485 (3) - I would remove the whistle on the repeat.
00:49:702 - I would suggest a stronger hitsound here--right now, this one feels awfully weak compared to the horn.
01:22:094 - Whistle here for consistency.

I was less thorough past 30 sec because I want the hitsounds to be reviewed here. Check more closely for inconsistencies. Even if you didn't use hs copier--there are a lot of downbeats that are not hit, and things that are overemphasized with nothing to suggest them. The rain and overdose are fine, but if you could just check out the salad/platter as well and then come back to me that would be nice.

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-10-01T17:19:31+00:00

[quote="Absolute Zero"]Going to get strict with hitsounding.
Could you move the offset to 1007 instead, for convenience and for the lack of sounds before? OK

[box=Play][Cup]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Salad]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Platter]
00:52:746 (3,4) - This hyper goes to a note that is past the suggested distance from a wall. Additionally, it's quite strong to play. Lower distancing while keeping it a hyper (or at least a dash). I can`t lower h-dash since its already too low.
01:13:832 (7,1) - Quite a strong hyperdash here. Lower distancing. OK

[Rain]
00:09:485 (1,2) - No hyper here that you do elsewhere. I think you should keep consistency because (1) as a vertical slider is also a little weird. Hmm... Maybe i did random brain generator XD But still, the Hyper dash doesn`t seem work well with current pattern. Current now seems fine.
00:24:702 (2,3) - ^

[Harder Rain]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Overdose]
01:19:485 (2,3) - Could you tone down the distance here slightly? It's a little strong for playing. I think I prefer if this keep like this, as it flows well.[/box]

Did rework on the hitsounding, based on previous mapset I did (The triangle metalic sound) So idk might works out well.
I think I poke AZ again :p

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-10-15T02:28:54+00:00

Quick quick
[Cup]
00:51:441 - Consider adding a whistle here.
01:22:746 - Finish, please.

wew lads

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-10-15T06:29:59+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
Quick quick
[Cup]
00:51:441 - Consider adding a whistle here.
01:22:746 - Finish, please.

wew lads

Kek done lol

Absolute Zero

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Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-10-15T16:53:29+00:00

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