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EnakoRin
  才……才不是来加星星的呢!
Neptunus
carry on! hope to be a good map!
Evil_Victorica
star ;)
Ayeen_old
First to mod I guess.

326's Easy:
00:21:449 (1) stack with (2)
00;28:782 (3) stack with (4)
00:30;782 (1) stack with (4) look nicer.
02:01:449 (2) stack with (1)
02:38:782 (4) Symetrical, but a little bit touch up on it will make it look nicer.
Break time is a bit long too me :roll:

Edit:

Yznoob:
00:49:615 (3) was intentionally like this? http://puu.sh/1sBV Nothing wrong,but it a bit.. ugly
Hitsound is way too soft from beginning until 00:53:282. Consider make it 50%
As Zlodeuka said, some of the notes drop on blue ticks.
01:14:782 (1) Spinner is the same white tick with (1) slider
02:10:782 (1) End of slider meet/stack the early of slider. Will make confusion.

Hard:
01:45:615 (6) New combo?
01:55:949 (5) New combo?
ZLOdeuka-
PM request.

it would be better to increase BPM twice (180) though not necessarily mb...

Kiai Mod

start 00:53:449
finish 01:14:782
start 02:00:115
finish 02:18:782
start 02:21:449
finish 02:42:782
do Kiai Maud so everywhere! and add it to the yznoob's Normal.

[326's Easy]

too much scatter Normal and Soft hitsounds...

00:10:782 (1) - finish? (Volume 50%)
00:13:449 (1) - ^ (Volume 45%)
00:21:448 (1) - remove the new combo
00:21:782 (2) - new combo
00:24:115 (1) - remove the new combo
00:24:782 (2) - new combo
01:09:449 (1,2,3) - 3 combo is closer to 2

[yznoob's Normal]

Soft sounds at the beginning!I like it.

a lot of sliders, ending with blue ticks.they do not sound out there ... and may confuse

00:49:615 (3) - Put it on the slider! or do as well as here 00:26:449 (4,1)
00:47:449 (4) <3
01:13:782 (3) - new combo
01:14:115 (1) - delete new combo
01:37:282 (1) - move here 01:37:449 (1) and Soft Hitsound
01:37:782 (2) - soft
01:56:115 (3) - new combo
02:10:782 (1) - need a warning sign! or do so to make it clear in which direction to move
02:21:449 (1) - remove the new combo
02:21:782 (2) - new combo
02:25:783 (7) - ^
02:26:615 (1) - delete new combo

[Hard]

may start with the spinner?from here 00:08:115 if not then 00:11:115 (2) - new combo

00:19:449 (5) - new combo
00:21:782 (4) - ^
00:26:615 (5) - ^
00:27:782 (1) - delete new combo
00:27:949 (2) - new combo
00:29:949 (1) - move here 00:30:115
00:37:115 (1) - delete new combo
00:38:115 (5) - new combo
00:38:949 (1) - delete new combo
00:40:782 (5) - new combo
00:42:115 (1) - delete new combo
00:47:615 (6) - Soft. and Whistle
00:57:448 (2,3,4) - oops... spacing.should be so http://puu.sh/1s2N.
01:11:949 (7) - new combo
01:49:615 (1) - delete new combo
01:49:782 (2) - new combo
01:52:115 (1) - delete new combo
01:52:449 (2) - new combo

It would be better if there is one more complexity.Only the rhythm to the music! Because you have it everywhere under the choir...

STAR<3
sherrie__fay
._.326'sGD
..
star
Samah
[326's Easy]
00:24:782 (2) - The end of this slider sounds nasty. Change it to soft hitsounds instead?
01:13:782 (1) - Soften the end of this spinner.

[yznoob's Normal]
01:14:865 (1) - Soften the end of this spinner.
02:40:783 (6,7) - Gap is too big for the timing.

[Hard]
00:57:782 (4) - One grid right.

Nice song and maps.
Disoy
首先:
好長的break time...


[326's Easy]
00:26:115 (3) - 這裡的綠線為啥是N 0.0感覺怪怪的~
00:36:115 (3) - 在Slider的尾巴加上clap??
00:38:115 (3) - 加上clap??
01:52:782 (3) - 同00:26:115 (3)

[yznoob's Normal]
這感覺上向Normal+了0.0

00:20:115 (4) - Normal最好不要變速...
01:14:865 (1) - 開始至01:15:115 ??
01:37:282 (1) - 這樣的在Normal出現不知好不好0.0
01:58:949 (1) - 去掉這spinner,之後01:59:449跟02:00:115加上note
02:10:782 (1) - 這很好看= = 但是它讓我不知道他要往哪個方向跑...

[Hard]
00:29:949 (1) - 開始至00:29:449

star~^ ^
Hyguys
mod request by pm~~~~~~~~~
dat easy
od - 1 o3o
00:35:449 add a timing section with normal sample set and set clap.
01:01:449 whistle ~~~~~
01:10:115 clap? :?
01:54:115 soft sample on timing section and set whistle
01:55:449 clap
02:04:782 clap~~~ and remove finish ~~~
02:07:449 whistle
02:26:115 clap
and on the spinner : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73890

dat normal rename to hard ~~~ ~~
HEY WHATS UP WITH THE KIAI
00:12:782 clap~~
00:17:449 ^
00:19:282 one grid left and one grid down
00:38:115 http://puu.sh/1sOK
00:41:226 http://puu.sh/1sON
00:53:449 WHERES KIAI HASJKLDHASJKDHAKSJDHA

hard aoraoro
clap overmap here ha?
tick rate 2 plox
00:12:115 remove clap and put whsitle
00:21:782 whsitle
00:25:449 whislte

nice map by the way
loveFantasy
你好

well..建議還是回一下modder的post吧, 後面的modder好知道你改過哪些東西

[Easy]
- 輕重hitsound反差好大, 很抱歉雖然從綠線可以看出你音效下的功夫很大, 但我只覺得太花俏, 用太多不同的東西了, KIAI部分的slider音量調整倒是不錯
<00:29:115> (4) 這條居然不是用輕/消音 音效啊!?
<00:40:115> (3) 結果這條反而消音了, 後面那個finish好突兀
<01:43:449> (4) S:clap
<02:15:449> (2) S:clap, 其實我覺得前面那兩個clap很莫名..這邊的clap是跟前面consistent, 而且後一大段反而都沒clap了
<02:18:115> (3) S:clap, (1) S:finish
<02:37:449> 這音效也未免太突然了吧..

[Normal]
- 感覺上稍微做些調整會是個很不錯的Hard, 做為Normal節奏挺多變的
<00:49:615> (3,4) same spacing, or stack
<00:56:782> (6) inconsistent spacing
<00:59:449> (2) ^
- no KIAI section? 另外副歌部分的whistle下的太飄逸了, 不太懂怎麼下的
<01:06:615> 前面的紅線下note, (1)延1/4拍到白線上比較好聽(結尾處不變)
<01:44:115> (5) stack
<01:58:782> (8) 既然(3)(5)都沒疊就拉出來吧
<02:05:449..> (1..) 這兩條和後面那個愛心上的whistle超級吵
音效感覺能下很多功夫..

[Hard]
- 聽不懂clap怎麼下的..沒辦法給你mod hitsound因為和我的價值觀差太多了
<00:57:615> (3) inconsistent spacing
Curisu

Ayeen wrote:

First to mod I guess.
Yznoob:
00:49:615 (3) was intentionally like this? http://puu.sh/1sBV Nothing wrong,but it a bit.. ugly no sry
Hitsound is way too soft from beginning until 00:53:282. Consider make it 50% 30% is enough in the beginning.
As Zlodeuka said, some of the notes drop on blue ticks.
01:14:782 (1) Spinner is the same white tick with (1) slider It's not allowed? lol
02:10:782 (1) End of slider meet/stack the early of slider. Will make confusion. OK

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[yznoob's Normal]

Soft sounds at the beginning!I like it. thx!

a lot of sliders, ending with blue ticks.they do not sound out there ... and may confuse

00:49:615 (3) - Put it on the slider! or do as well as here 00:26:449 (4,1) OK.
00:47:449 (4) <3
01:13:782 (3) - new combo OK.
01:14:115 (1) - delete new combo OK.
01:37:282 (1) - move here 01:37:449 (1) and Soft HitsoundOK.
01:37:782 (2) - soft OK.
01:56:115 (3) - new combo OK.
02:10:782 (1) - need a warning sign! or do so to make it clear in which direction to move Already fix the snapped lol.
02:21:449 (1) - remove the new combo OK.
02:21:782 (2) - new combo OK.
02:25:783 (7) - ^ OK.
02:26:615 (1) - delete new combo sry but I think it's better now.

Samah wrote:

[yznoob's Normal]
01:14:865 (1) - Soften the end of this spinner. Why not lol
02:40:783 (6,7) - Gap is too big for the timing.

Disoy wrote:

[yznoob's Normal]
這感覺上向Normal+了0.0 ...

00:20:115 (4) - Normal最好不要變速... xsk这变速不是很难吧...
01:14:865 (1) - 開始至01:15:115 ?? No.
01:37:282 (1) - 這樣的在Normal出現不知好不好0.0 本来想合歌的...好像难了些
01:58:949 (1) - 去掉這spinner,之後01:59:449跟02:00:115加上note No.
02:10:782 (1) - 這很好看= = 但是它讓我不知道他要往哪個方向跑... 233 3个modder同时吐槽这个吗...

star~^ ^

Hyguys wrote:

dat normal rename to hard ~~~ ~~ Why= =.

HEY WHATS UP WITH THE KIAI
00:12:782 clap~~ lol in my nm there is no soft-clap.
00:17:449 ^ ^.
00:19:282 one grid left and one grid down no.
00:38:115 http://puu.sh/1sOK ...OK.
00:41:226 http://puu.sh/1sON Why..
00:53:449 WHERES KIAI HASJKLDHASJKDHAKSJDHA OK.

loveFantasy wrote:

[Normal]
- 感覺上稍微做些調整會是個很不錯的Hard, 做為Normal節奏挺多變的
<00:49:615> (3,4) same spacing, or stack No.
<00:56:782> (6) inconsistent spacing OK.
<00:59:449> (2) ^
- no KIAI section? 另外副歌部分的whistle下的太飄逸了, 不太懂怎麼下的
<01:06:615> 前面的紅線下note, (1)延1/4拍到白線上比較好聽(結尾處不變) No.
<01:44:115> (5) stack
<01:58:782> (8) 既然(3)(5)都沒疊就拉出來吧 No.
<02:05:449..> (1..) 這兩條和後面那個愛心上的whistle超級吵 ...OK
音效感覺能下很多功夫.. .
LOL thanks all modder
Download: Owl City - Fireflies (Adam Young Remix) (JauiPlaY) [yznoob's Normal].osu

(累死我了....)
IceBeam
Normal is the only difficulty w/o Kiai time.
It'd be better,if you fix it.

Over 20 seconds' break is too much,you may have some probs with ranking.

[Easy]
I'm not sure if offset is correct,but normal hitsounds sound so rough,really,maybe reduce volume at least?

00:29:115 (4) - Finish this slider at 00:30:115 (5).It sounds/plays much better.
02:32:115 (1) - Finish.

[Normal]
00:19:282 (2) - Kinda hard to read,really,nice rhytm,but that's what players would expect at last.
00:20:115 (4) - 0.5x? There's no slider tick,so..yes,let's say it can't be read normally.
00:49:615 (3,4) - Not for Normal difficulty..really,your freestyle mapping would be more appreciated in hard difficulties,but Normal needs to be just readable and expected,at least.
02:10:782 (1) - Slider arrow helps,but still..uh.

Awesome mapping style,but all these stylish things turns around you,because it's used be Normal,but it's not.

[Hard]
00:47:615 (6) - I'd remove this note.
00:51:448 (1,1,1,1) - Combo spamming.
01:57:782 - Add this note to keep the rhytm on.
01:58:115 (1,1,1,1) - Again,keep it in one combo.

Nice one.

Star.
Curisu

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal]
00:19:282 (2) - Kinda hard to read,really,nice rhytm,but that's what players would expect at last. fixed00:20:115 (4) - 0.5x? There's no slider tick,so..yes,let's say it can't be read normally. lol...I think is well
00:49:615 (3,4) - Not for Normal difficulty..really,your freestyle mapping would be more appreciated in hard difficulties,but Normal needs to be just readable and expected,at least. ok
02:10:782 (1) - Slider arrow helps,but still..uh. already fixed in last post. btw 4 people said that this slider is... :o
Download: Owl City - Fireflies (Adam Young Remix) (JauiPlaY) [yznoob's Normal+].osu
Shinki
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
SPOILER

Ayeen wrote:

Hard:
01:45:615 (6) New combo?okay.
01:55:949 (5) New combo?> <

ZLOdeuka wrote:

it would be better to increase BPM twice (180) though not necessarily mb...yeah not necessarily XP

[Hard]

may start with the spinner?from here 00:08:115 if not then 00:11:115 (2) - new comboi guess it's fine...

fixed some combo problem.
00:29:949 (1) - move here 00:30:115well actually it's confusing, and i guess it's fine.
00:47:615 (6) - Soft. and Whistle> <
00:57:448 (2,3,4) - oops... spacing.should be so http://puu.sh/1s2N.fixed.

It would be better if there is one more complexity.Only the rhythm to the music! Because you have it everywhere under the choir...i do not wanna make so many complicating things in this song. imo it is a map only for relaxing.

STAR<3thx XD

Samah wrote:

[Hard]
00:57:782 (4) - One grid right.sure.

Nice song and maps.thank you.

Disoy wrote:

首先:
好長的break time...留給大家聽歌啦...

[Hard]
00:29:949 (1) - 開始至00:29:449我覺得這樣就好...

star~^ ^謝謝!

Hyguys wrote:

hard aoraoro
clap overmap here ha?yeah.
tick rate 2 ploxit's cool, man
00:12:115 remove clap and put whsitlehard whistle? not a good idea imo...
00:21:782 whsitle^
00:25:449 whislte^

nice map by the waythank you.

loveFantasy wrote:

well..建議還是回一下modder的post吧, 後面的modder好知道你改過哪些東西前陣子有點忙...不好意思

[Hard]
- 聽不懂clap怎麼下的..沒辦法給你mod hitsound因為和我的價值觀差太多了隨性下的
<00:57:615> (3) inconsistent spacingfixed.

IceBeam wrote:

[Hard]
00:47:615 (6) - I'd remove this note.if someone notice it again, i'll
00:51:448 (1,1,1,1) - Combo spamming.hp drains here...
01:57:782 - Add this note to keep the rhytm on.i guess not.
01:58:115 (1,1,1,1) - Again,keep it in one combo.hp drains here...

Nice one.

Star.thx!
updated.
thank you for your modding! :)
xinhe
STAR
Cirno
Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it. Joking.

[萌妹]

00:29:115 (4) - 移到00:29:449 ?
00:31:449 (3) - 移到x 192 y 160如何
00:56:782 (6) - 在00:57:115结束, 00:57:449 (7) 移到00:57:282 + whistle, 00:57:615 加note +whistle ?
01:06:615 (1) - 01:06:782 开始?
02:04:115 - add note?
02:10:782 (1) - this.
SPOILER

I love 萌妹
02:34:615 (6) - move to 02:34:782
02:34:949 (1,2) - move to 02:35:115
Original BG does not fit this diff, use this one for [yznoob's Normal+] plzzzzzzzzzzzz

[326]

HPD和萌妹一样 要不要-2?
others fine for me

[JPY]
00:15:448 (4,5,6) - 下降1格
00:18:115 (1) - move to 00:18:282
00:29:449 - add note?
01:44:282 (1) - delete
01:44:782 (9) - move to 01:44:615
01:45:115 (10,11) - move to 01:44:949
01:45:449 - add note
01:51:615 (6) - move to 01:51:449

Star~

Also my answer: 326+萌妹+JPY = 萌妹+326+JPY = yangzd88+samuel326+JauiPlaY = yanGzd88+sAmuel326+jauiplaY = GAY

Curisu

Cirno wrote:

[萌妹]

00:29:115 (4) - 移到00:29:449 ? no.
00:31:449 (3) - 移到x 192 y 160如何 看不清..
00:56:782 (6) - 在00:57:115结束, 00:57:449 (7) 移到00:57:282 + whistle, 00:57:615 加note +whistle ? OK.
01:06:615 (1) - 01:06:782 开始? OK.
02:04:115 - add note? no.
02:10:782 (1) - this.
SPOILER
ATTACH[jpy_bg.JPG]
不要再吐槽这心了= =
02:34:615 (6) - move to 02:34:782 OK.
02:34:949 (1,2) - move to 02:35:115 no.
Original BG does not fit this diff, use this one for [yznoob's Normal+] plzzzzzzzzzzzz
SPOILER
ATTACH[bg.jpg]
妹的给我自重点!

Also my answer: 326+萌妹+JPY = 萌妹+326+JPY = yangzd88+samuel326+JauiPlaY = yanGzd88+sAmuel326+jauiplaY = GAY
....
Download: Owl City - Fireflies (Adam Young Remix) (JauiPlaY) [yznoob's Normal+].osu
Shinki
[326]

HPD和萌妹一样 要不要-2? -1了 感觉中肯些吧..
others fine for me

[Also my answer: 326+萌妹+JPY = 萌妹+326+JPY = yangzd88+samuel326+JauiPlaY = yanGzd88+sAmuel326+jauiplaY = GAY[/quote]
居然被你发现了
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
updated and i'm sorry.
Ekaru
All difficulties:

Finish to end of singing please.

Hard:

01:10:115 (3,4) - The hitburst of the "3" overlaps the end of the "4", making it hard to read, and you don't know if it ends under (3) or under (5).
01:11:949 (7) - This slowdown feels random, but eh.

Normal:

00:47:449 (4) - The clump in the middle of the slider is unreadable in OpenGL mode. So, it looks like the slider ball is randomly having a seizure in the middle of the slider. Not a pretty sight.
02:10:782 (1) - Put the slider ends further apart. The reverse arrow makes the entire thing look super ugly as it currently is.

Easy:

Fine.

Star!
Nymph
326老湿good star~ ><
LaunchedthousandShip
Hi :)

Easy
绿线不要在正好落在beat上面,特别是关于音效的,应该在beat之前,这样如果玩家如果点快了或慢的情况下会造成声音的不同,无法达到你预期的音效效果。
理论上来讲,approved maps以外的任何一个map都应该有一个难度可以让第一次接触OSU的人来玩, 也就是这里面的Easy。
所以Easy不需要任何花样和各种各样的变化,只需要让玩家可以轻易跟随旋律和节奏来敲击和移动。
从这样的角度来看,
00:21:449 (4,1) - 这里的beat对于新玩家来说有些难了,意料之外的加速,难以读懂
00:28:782 (3,4) - ^
02:41:782 (1) - 对于新玩家来说太短了

Normal+
00:11:449 - 加note
00:22:115 - ^
00:24:449 - ^
00:26:115 - ^
00:32:782 - ^
00:35:449 - ^
00:41:115 - ^
00:43:449 - ^
00:45:782 - ^
00:49:449 - ^
00:54:782 - ^
01:11:615 (5) - 移动到前面白线上去再在后面红线加个note可能更适合这样一个难度
01:38:115 (2) - 少重复一次也许更好
01:39:449 - 加note
01:42:115 - ^
01:50:115 - ^
01:53:615 (4) - 从后面红线位置开始更好,在白线结束
02:01:449 - 加note
02:03:449 (3) - 延长到白线
02:19:615 (2) - 移动到前面白线上去再在后面红线加个note可能更适合这样一个难度
02:22:782 - 加note
02:41:282 (7) - 太难,对于这个难度来说,换成在白线上的note
我想简单的说,就是尽量避免slider在蓝线上开头和结束,现在这个难度整体感觉很怪,加note只是一个基本的修改方法,这样修改结果就是类似00:55:782 (4,5) - 这样的,当然也可以修改成00:56:782 (6,7,8,9) - 这样,或者干脆延长/缩短slider到红线或白线上去, 不过00:58:115 (10,1) - 这样的类型是没有问题的。我的建议是延长/缩短到红白线上去,鉴于这是一个更接近于Normal的难度.

Hard
01:08:282 (2,3) - 把2移到红线上把3删除更好一些,或者改成02:05:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样也可以
02:36:282 (2,3) - ^
theowest
Didn't like this map. No mod from me. Sorry. :(
noneed
General: Not really sure with the 20~ sc break. I would recommend mapping again from 01:28:499

Easy:
omfg i almost felt asleep modding this >~<
uh well I can just recommend to change slider velocity in the chorus to 1.5 since the map is really really really really really slow and this makes it kinda boring :u
but fine

Normal:
01:44:115 (5) - stack it with prev. sliderend
01:56:115 (3) - ^
01:57:115 (5) - ^
02:08:115 (2) - select it and ctrl+r. look really awesome then :)


Nice mapset! Good luck with this :)
wmfchris
[General]
20 sec break seems too long, put a few notes between them?

[Hard]
00:12:782 (4,5,6) - (4) clap, (5) remove clap?
01:00:949 (6,7) - (6) remove clap, (7) clap?
02:04:449 (4,6) - clap?

[Normal]
00:19:449 (2) - clap?
01:47:782 (2) - left 1 grid

cool map, nice hitsound~ >_<
Lesjuh
Offset : 5440

Would be more interesting without the long break in the middle of the map.

Normal
02:05:449 (1,2,3,1) - pretty lame compared to the first chorus

That's it.
Curisu
@suck
虽然知道蓝线nm很2 但是这是我所想表达的东西 请理解.

Download: Owl City - Fireflies (Adam Young Remix) (JauiPlaY) [yznoob's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
SPOILER

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

Hard
01:08:282 (2,3) - 把2移到红线上把3删除更好一些,或者改成02:05:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样也可以i don't think so
02:36:282 (2,3) - ^^

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
20 sec break seems too long, put a few notes between them?just for relaxing, guess it's fine.okay.

[Hard]
00:12:782 (4,5,6) - (4) clap, (5) remove clap?okay.
01:00:949 (6,7) - (6) remove clap, (7) clap??_?
02:04:449 (4,6) - clap?hmm...maybe not.

Lesjuh wrote:

Offset : 5440nah.

Would be more interesting without the long break in the middle of the map.a long break may not be interesting, but just for relaxing. i hope that people could play this map for relax.no more long breaks now.
thx for your modding! :)
Nixnez
As per request from mod queue~

[326's Easy]
-開了DT。。還是。。 好。。。。慢。。。。

[yznoob's Normal+]
- 01:10:106 (2,3) - 這裡重疊感覺不順,會不知覺就因之前的pattern而打了1/4拍。分開照distance排吧?
- 01:47:440 (2,3) - Spacing稍微有點大。
- 02:40:773 (6,7) - Spacing稍微有點大。

[Hard]
- 00:51:439 (1,1,1,1) - 改成 (1,2,3,4), new combo 00:53:773 (2)?
- 01:58:106 (1,1,1,1) - ^, new combo 02:00:440 (2)?
- 02:26:773 (1) - 建議以下slider?(開.osu,倒數第八行大串碼改成以下)
Slider Code
360,144,146773,6,0,B|304:192|320:288|424:280|453:206,2,240,0|8|0
- 02:29:440 (1) - 若有改以上的話,就flip吧。

很好聽的歌。
Sallad4ever
Hi JauPlay :D

[General]
- I agree that 20 sec break is too long

[326's Easy]
01:54:773 (1) - the slider end is overlapped with the previous slider, it looks bad so can you move the slider end?

[yznoob's Normal+]

The volume of the hitsound is too little, please increase the volume for overall section by 20%
00:20:106 (3) - the only 0.5 speed in this diff, doesn't play really good imo
00:24:606 (1) - doesn't play very good, better move this 1/4 beat later to the white tick
00:46:439 (2) - ^, if you following the vocal, this should be move 1/4 beat back
00:47:439 (4) - GREAT <3
01:01:439 (1) - why end this on 1/4 ? it's better if you make it like 00:56:773 (6,7)
01:10:773 (4,5) - I suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/1BsA
01:40:106 (1) - remove NC
02:10:773 (1) - I fix the heart http://puu.sh/1Bte below is the code
SPOILER
232,104,130773,6,0,B|144:24|32:176|168:304|254:339|254:339|344:304|480:176|368:24|280:104,2,800,6|2|6
02:16:440 (1) - I suggest to make this into double stack and put it in the center of the heart slider, it'll get rid of the ugly overlap
02:17:773 (3,4) - move this 1/4 beat back
02:18:773 (1) - lengthen this 1/4 beat, remove 02:19:606 (2) if you do this
02:35:440 (4) - shorten this 1/4 beat
02:41:273 (7) - why 1/8? that doesn't make sense :(

[Hard]

00:23:440 (3,4,5) - using grid lv4, move these circles 1 grid right the 1 grid down. This should fix the stack
00:35:106 (1,2,3) - could you move this a little bit to the right so it won't overlap ?
00:56:106 (1) - the repeat on 1/4 doesn't sounds good, it's better if you lengthen it 1/4 beat more
01:11:939 (7) - move this forward and return it to it's position (in the timeline)
01:13:773 (1) - end this spinner in 01:14:773 ?
02:02:773 (1) - same as 00:56:106 (1)
02:24:106 (1) - ^
02:41:773 (1) - end this on 02:42:773

Nice map could still be improved here and there so, Good Luck
Star
kanpakyin
:| 為甚麼你選歌都不符合主流?

[General]
沒Source嗎?

[326's Easy]
Slider Tick Rate : 1
00:18:106(3)-slider開頭漏了Soft-clap?
00:21:773(1)-這裏繼續用soft-hitsound把..normal很怪.
00:50:773(x)-加clap.
00:53:440(x)-加音.
01:10:773(1)-難看了.
01:18:106(x)-這個break超過20秒,有點多,而且會被MAT/BAT說.(unrankable是30秒)
02:00:106(x)-重音位,加音
02:10:106(2.3.1)-Spacing有點不一致.
02:41:773(x)-這個spinner太短..easy裏auto最少也要轉個6000把
排版稍微有一點亂 :O

[yznoob's Normal+]
00:19:440(2)-再這裏加一個Soft的clap.
00:30:106(1)-這個不要stack阿..
00:31:273(x)-再這裏加音.
00:32:106(1)-換個位置吧...在(3)-之下很難看..
00:54:940(3)-稍微nazi下...這個slider畫的左右不平衡!
01:13:773(1)-這個New combo沒必要..
01:18:106(x)-這個break超過20秒,有點多,而且會被MAT/BAT說.(unrankable是30秒)
01:47:440(2)-沒有縮短間距的理由.
02:07:440(x)-加音.
02:18:773(1.2.3)-節奏古怪違和
02:22:940(2)-Slider尾部出屏了.換一個位置.

[Hard]
00:34:106(7)-難看了.
00:52:106(1.1)-Remove new combo.then add whistle on these notes.
00:56:106(1)-節奏違和.而且在折返clap違和感無限曠大
01:11:106(6)-藍線上對不準音..這個slider尾部應該snap在1/6
01:18:106(x)-這個break超過20秒,有點多,而且會被MAT/BAT說.(unrankable是30秒)
01:57:106(8.9.10)-不對準於(6)-會更好看..
01:58:773(1.1)-Remove new combo.then add whistle on these notes.
02:05:440(1)-Stack with (7)-
Gomo Psivarh
OH MY SHOULDER :o
我mod的都被说了...所以就没了...

BONUS 80000! :D
Kitsuneko
Hi JauiPlaY
as your modding request

[Overall]
I think breaktime is too long... please cut about half if you can do. :?

[326's Easy]
All Inheriting section are same place on notes. please move sections -167ms before.
(Can move all once in Timing Panel)

01:46:773 (2) - rotate and move like this

[yznoob's Normal+]
Why "+" in diff name? I think no need.

02:10:773 (1) - move points like this
02:41:273 (7) - move close ? It is confused a little in Normal.

[Hard]
same Easy, please move Inheriting sections.

nice hit sounds ~ ♪
good luck (/ 'ω')/☆ star here
Curisu
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
fixed some and updated.
thx a lot everyone! :D
wanhyrzh
没什么好mod的了,一些nazi而已~
随意看看就好w
SPOILER
全员:
1.KIAI时间(包括起止点)要全难度保持一致啊……这个很重要。
另外有个可能会被挑的就是KIAI的起止时间要在长白线的重音上。不过这个貌似有的会挑有的不会,看着办吧……
2.没有source?
3.不切歌大丈夫?都超了将近1/5了……

SHINKI:
这个的音量我建议参考萌妹的音量,至少整体下调20%...现在稍微有些吵了……尤其是sliderslide OTL强烈建议静音sliderslide
OD+1?
别的没什么w

萌妹:
圈能不能小一号?真的太大了我觉得>_>
HP+1~2?OD+1
00:16:106(1) nazi 按ctrl在下面加个锚点,控制一下弧度,就像0050773一样?现在这种不对称的感觉很微妙……
00:31:273(X) 感觉这里加个note会更好玩也更好听……
00:49:773(3) 这个有点太出界了,都跑到屏幕外了OTL
00:54:940(3) nazi 中部锚点左1下1,左边的锚点移到尾部圆圈的中央
02:10:773(1) 这个差点让我以为是easy了……lol没什么

基片呀:
lol要加入对称哥+送分行列了么
00:52:106(1) 出界了= =把这四个1整体上移一格吧?
01:36:773~01:37:106(X) 加2~3个note或1个slider(折返亦可)?然后把音量调小就好
01:59:440(1) 同0052106
star~加油rank ;)
Lesjuh
alright bubbled!
Hyguys
the fuck
hitsounds are absotely random and this got bubbled?
;3;
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
thx Lesjuh, i love you :3

Hyguys wrote:

the fuck
hitsounds are absotely random and this got bubbled?
;3;
don't just care about the randomness, if it feels great, few people would complain with it. :D

edit: oops and i must say that actually they are NOT absolutely random
ztrot
meh ranked
Tenshi-nyan

Hyguys wrote:

the fuck
hitsounds are absotely random and this got bubbled?
;3;
^dis

At least they aren't synched with the music, like they're supposed to be.
narakucrimson
My god, I was going to mod this tomorrow ;_;

Sorry for the extreme delay, really :C

And congratulations!
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
thx ztrot and narakucrimson! <3

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Hyguys wrote:

the fuck
hitsounds are absotely random and this got bubbled?
;3;
^dis

At least they aren't synched with the music, like they're supposed to be.
i'm sorry. :(
Gens
Sorry I wasn't able to mod this, seems I was just late...

Anyway, congrats!
Kamure

Gens wrote:

Sorry I wasn't able to mod this, seems I was just late...

Anyway, congrats!
Same here, I wouldn't have been able to help anyway...

Congrats anyway!
Sallad4ever
congratz for the rank :3
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
thanks everyone! :D
IkkiMinami
Good :)
Curisu
卧槽 来晚了
祝贺 :D

@players
mind my eggpain style lol
Pimpi
Gratz. ;)
I really like the map, the song, and so the hitsounds too, they are fine for me.
I SS all the maps already lol so addictive song *-*
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