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Muse - Hysteria

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Topic Starter
bambool
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月9日 at 11:42:00

Artist: Muse
Title: Hysteria
Tags: Absolution OzzyOzrock
BPM: 93.15
Filesize: 4705kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.8 stars, 527 notes)
  2. Normal (2.62 stars, 241 notes)
  3. Ozzy's Hystaikoteria (4.94 stars, 1002 notes)
Download: Muse - Hysteria
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd beatmap.
Special thanks to OzzyOzrock for his taiko map.

Thank you for your mod.
04/03 samul326's mod.
04/04 OzzyOzrock's mod.
04/05 IceBeam's mod.
04/06 Numbers 596108's taiko mod.
04/07 Weiren's mod.
04/15 theowest's mod.
05/09 LaunchedthousandShip's mod.
05/09 chungskale's mod.
05/17 TorNis's mod.
05/17 sherrie__fay's mod.
07/30 Hushu's mod.
07/30 zsr123's mod.
_Kiva
stress
szhb_89122
竹子V5~
star~ :D
Shinki
yoooooooooo
EnakoRin
先给星,清明回来MOD
Royal Flare
都是壓力
Royal Flare
都是壓力
OzzyOzrock
[Normal]
Maybe try adding hitsounds to the beginning too? Like...

00:21:370 (2) - clap
00:22:014 (3) - ^
00:23:302 (1) - ^
00:25:234 (4) - ^

but that's a suggestion since I guess you can hear the snare behind it a bit.

during kiai, maybe you could add whistles to other notes that aren't just sliders but it's all good.
[Hard]
00:59:856 (4,5) - jump is a bit hard to read
02:35:186 (4,5) - same here, but it's probably on purpose

03:26:233 (1) - also assuming this is on purpose, but just confused me because you don't do it anywhere else

rest is good. starred.


I will make the taiko map :3
Topic Starter
bambool

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Normal]
Maybe try adding hitsounds to the beginning too? Like...

00:21:370 (2) - clap
00:22:014 (3) - ^
00:23:302 (1) - ^
00:25:234 (4) - ^

but that's a suggestion since I guess you can hear the snare behind it a bit.

during kiai, maybe you could add whistles to other notes that aren't just sliders but it's all good.
[Hard]
00:59:856 (4,5) - jump is a bit hard to read
02:35:186 (4,5) - same here, but it's probably on purpose

03:26:233 (1) - also assuming this is on purpose, but just confused me because you don't do it anywhere else

rest is good. starred.


I will make the taiko map :3
[normal] hitsound added.
[hard] It is all on purpose.If other modders say it can be that i will change it.

And,thank you for making a taiko diff for my map :)
Axey
竹子神麻婆

我也超级喜欢muse~~~~~~~xDDD

/me shoot star~
OzzyOzrock
done~

Download: Muse - Hysteria (bambool) [Ozzy's Hystaikoteria].osu
feel free to change the name orz
Topic Starter
bambool

OzzyOzrock wrote:

done~

[attachment=0:5954d]Muse - Hysteria (bambool) [Ozzy's Hystaikoteria].osu[/attachment:5954d]
feel free to change the name orz


Awesome!
IceBeam
Oh,this song..
Awesome.

Add OzzyOzrock to Tags.

[Normal]
Reduce volume for a little? Hitsounds sound much louder then the song.

00:42:948 (2,3) - I'm not sure if such patterns would be easy enough for beginners.It's okay for normal,but..it's the easiest difficulty,keep it in mind.

01:22:239 - I'd add note here as well.
01:22:561 - ^ with finish.
01:50:903 (1) - This overlap looks bad,try to avoid such things.
02:14:091 - Note with finish?
02:24:397 - I think you should start mapping from here.
03:41:692 (1) - Why spinner? Maybe change to a single note with finish?

[Ozzy's]
Catchy rhytm,but why have you changed combo colours? It doesn't affect anyhow.

[Hard]
Same issue about volume..it's too high.

01:03:077 (2) - Fix distance,too close.
02:24:397 - Add a note with finish.
03:41:692 (1) - Change to a single note with finish?

Star.
Numbers 596108
Mod Request from bambool

Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

Taiko

Timing :

00:10:420 93.15 BPM - N - -> Currect to 00:00:114
01:01:949 2.0x - K - -> BPM x1.5
01:21:917 2.0x - N - -> Remove
01:22:561 1.0x - N - -> OK
01:53:472 2.0x - K - -> BPM x1.5
02:13:447 2.0x - N - -> Remove
02:14:091 1.0x - N - -> OK
03:05:621 2.0x - K - -> BPM x1.5
03:25:589 2.0x - N - -> REmove
03:26:233 1.0x - N - -> OK
03:41:692 1.0x - N - -> Remove

Notes :

00:11:064 (1,2) -
00:13:640 (1,2) -
00:16:217 (1,2) -
00:18:793 (1) -
00:45:524 (3,1,1) -
01:32:384 (1) -
02:28:423 (2) -
03:41:289 (x) - Add a


Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 5 -> 6~7
Circle Size - 3 -> Max
Approach Rate - 8 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 5 -> 3~4
EnakoRin
Now is modding "Hysteria(Muse) - bambool"

----------
General
{
offset = 10401
Tags里面加上"OzzyOzrock"
}

Normal
{
00:20:725 (1) - 加上finish
00:22:014 (3) - 去掉一地个圈的clap,加在最后一个圈上
00:23:302 (1) - 同上
00:27:167 (3) - 同上
00:28:455 (1) - 同上
00:32:320 (2) - 去掉clap
00:32:964 (4) - 加上clap
00:33:608 (1) - 去掉一地个圈的clap,加在最后一个圈上
00:37:473 (2) - 去掉clap
00:38:117 (4) - 加上clap
00:41:337 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
01:12:255 (1) - 同上
01:21:273 (5) - 建议不要重叠在一起,不太容易看出来
01:32:867 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
01:50:903 (1) - 加上finish
01:53:479 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
02:03:785 (1) - 同上
02:10:226 (3) - 没有重叠好,关掉GS把DS调为0再排
02:11:515 (1) - 建议分开,不太容易读出来
02:14:091 (x) - 建议增加一个circle,new combo再加finish
02:34:703 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
02:42:432 (1) - 加上finish
02:45:009 (1) - 最后一个圈加clap
02:47:585 (1) - 同上
02:54:349 (3) - 加上clap
02:55:315 (1) - 最后一个圈加clap
02:57:891 (1) - 同上
03:05:621 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
03:15:927 (1) - 同上
03:23:656 (1,2) - 建议分开,不太容易看清
03:26:233 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
03:28:809 (1) - 同上
03:31:386 (1) - 加上finish
03:33:962 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
03:41:692 (1) - 把这个的音量降到0

做得挺不错的,把音效再做细一点就完美了
}

Ozzy's Hystaikoteria
{
Sorry I don't know how to mod Taiko diff,but it sounds great when I watched Autoplay.
}

Hard
{
00:35:540 (9) - 去掉最后一个圈上的clap
01:00:017 (5) - new combo
01:00:983 (10) - 同上
01:01:949 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
01:03:077 (2) - 距离不对
01:05:492 (2) - 同上
01:12:255 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
01:32:867 (1) - 同上
01:53:479 (1) - 同上
02:03:785 (1) - 同上
02:14:091 (1) - 加上finish
02:24:397 (x) - 建议增加一个circle,new combo再加finish
02:34:703 (1) - 加上finish
02:35:347 (5) - new combo
02:54:671 (6) - 去掉clap
02:54:993 (8) - 加上clap
02:55:315 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
02:56:603 (4) - 加上clap
03:05:621 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
03:15:927 (1) - 同上
03:27:521 (3) - new combo
03:30:097 (7) - 同上
03:33:318 (8) - 同上
03:35:250 (5) - 同上
03:37:827 (7) - 同上
03:40:403 (6) - 同上
03:41:048 (10) - 同上,加上finish
03:41:692 (1) - 把这个的音量降到0

感觉不是太难= =
}
——————
EasyModder Beta3
Program By Weiren
OzzyOzrock

IceBeam wrote:

[Ozzy's]
Catchy rhytm,but why have you changed combo colours? It doesn't affect anyhow.
Helps me.

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod Request from bambool
Taiko

Timing :

00:10:420 93.15 BPM - N - -> Currect to 00:00:114 ok
01:01:949 2.0x - K - -> BPM x1.5 I would agree, but it looks better 2x...
01:21:917 2.0x - N - -> Remove ok
01:22:561 1.0x - N - -> OK ...ok
01:53:472 2.0x - K - -> BPM x1.5 ^^^
02:13:447 2.0x - N - -> Remove^^^
02:14:091 1.0x - N - -> OK^^^
03:05:621 2.0x - K - -> BPM x1.5^^^^^^
03:25:589 2.0x - N - -> REmove^^^^^^
03:26:233 1.0x - N - -> OK^^^^^^
03:41:692 1.0x - N - -> Remove ok

Notes :

00:11:064 (1,2) - no ;;
00:13:640 (1,2) - ^
00:16:217 (1,2) - ^
00:18:793 (1) - ^
00:45:524 (3,1,1) - no...
01:32:384 (1) - already is??
02:28:423 (2) - ^
03:41:289 (x) - Add a ^

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 5 -> 6~7
Circle Size - 3 -> Max
Approach Rate - 8 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 5 -> 3~4



rather leave it at old standards, but raised circle size and approach to make 5*


Sorry for not adding much, but I wanna keep it at 999... heh

Download: Muse - Hysteria (bambool) [Ozzy's Hystaikoteria].osu
Topic Starter
bambool

IceBeam wrote:

Oh,this song..
Awesome.

Add OzzyOzrock to Tags.

[Normal]
Reduce volume for a little? Hitsounds sound much louder then the song. Redeced volume to 70%.

00:42:948 (2,3) - I'm not sure if such patterns would be easy enough for beginners.It's okay for normal,but..it's the easiest difficulty,keep it in mind. i think it's ok.

01:22:239 - I'd add note here as well.
01:22:561 - ^ with finish.
01:50:903 (1) - This overlap looks bad,try to avoid such things.
02:14:091 - Note with finish? all fixed.
02:24:397 - I think you should start mapping from here. here i keep it same with hard.
03:41:692 (1) - Why spinner? Maybe change to a single note with finish? i think a map whitout a spinner is not good.

[Ozzy's]
Catchy rhytm,but why have you changed combo colours? It doesn't affect anyhow. It seems that it is easier to map a taiko map whit BLUE and RED notes.Since it doesnt affect anythings,i will not change it for now.

[Hard]
Same issue about volume..it's too high. Reduced.

01:03:077 (2) - Fix distance,too close.
02:24:397 - Add a note with finish. fixed.
03:41:692 (1) - Change to a single note with finish? same with nomal.

Star.
Topic Starter
bambool

Weiren wrote:

Now is modding "Hysteria(Muse) - bambool"

----------
General
{
offset = 10401
Tags里面加上"OzzyOzrock"
}

Normal
{
00:20:725 (1) - 加上finish
00:22:014 (3) - 去掉一地个圈的clap,加在最后一个圈上
00:23:302 (1) - 同上
00:27:167 (3) - 同上
00:28:455 (1) - 同上
00:32:320 (2) - 去掉clap
00:32:964 (4) - 加上clap
00:33:608 (1) - 去掉一地个圈的clap,加在最后一个圈上
00:37:473 (2) - 去掉clap
00:38:117 (4) - 加上clap
00:41:337 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
01:12:255 (1) - 同上
01:21:273 (5) - 建议不要重叠在一起,不太容易看出来
01:32:867 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
01:50:903 (1) - 加上finish
01:53:479 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
02:03:785 (1) - 同上
02:10:226 (3) - 没有重叠好,关掉GS把DS调为0再排
02:11:515 (1) - 建议分开,不太容易读出来
02:14:091 (x) - 建议增加一个circle,new combo再加finish
02:34:703 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
02:42:432 (1) - 加上finish
02:45:009 (1) - 最后一个圈加clap
02:47:585 (1) - 同上
02:54:349 (3) - 加上clap
02:55:315 (1) - 最后一个圈加clap
02:57:891 (1) - 同上
03:05:621 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
03:15:927 (1) - 同上
03:23:656 (1,2) - 建议分开,不太容易看清
03:26:233 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
03:28:809 (1) - 同上
03:31:386 (1) - 加上finish
03:33:962 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
03:41:692 (1) - 把这个的音量降到0

做得挺不错的,把音效再做细一点就完美了
}

Ozzy's Hystaikoteria
{
Sorry I don't know how to mod Taiko diff,but it sounds great when I watched Autoplay.
}

Hard
{
00:35:540 (9) - 去掉最后一个圈上的clap
01:00:017 (5) - new combo
01:00:983 (10) - 同上
01:01:949 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
01:03:077 (2) - 距离不对
01:05:492 (2) - 同上
01:12:255 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
01:32:867 (1) - 同上
01:53:479 (1) - 同上
02:03:785 (1) - 同上
02:14:091 (1) - 加上finish
02:24:397 (x) - 建议增加一个circle,new combo再加finish
02:34:703 (1) - 加上finish
02:35:347 (5) - new combo
02:54:671 (6) - 去掉clap
02:54:993 (8) - 加上clap
02:55:315 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
02:56:603 (4) - 加上clap
03:05:621 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
03:15:927 (1) - 同上
03:27:521 (3) - new combo
03:30:097 (7) - 同上
03:33:318 (8) - 同上
03:35:250 (5) - 同上
03:37:827 (7) - 同上
03:40:403 (6) - 同上
03:41:048 (10) - 同上,加上finish
03:41:692 (1) - 把这个的音量降到0

感觉不是太难= =
}
——————
EasyModder Beta3
Program By Weiren

多谢对音效的建议。基本全部都修改了,多谢MOD~

至于难度问题,本来HARD就想做成刷分,不想做成有困难的那样……
AoiX
来射一发~
Shiki
staaaaaaaaar~
MisakaMikoto
;)
theowest
Hello, nice beatmap you've got here! :D

Lower all sound to 70% but keep it to 80% during the kai's.
Resnap the inherited timing section to 01:01:930
Do the same for 01:21:898, 01:53:460, 02:13:428, 03:05:602, 03:25:570 and 03:41:673.

Claps come every second white tick. ALWAYS. You can hear a clapish sound in the background of the song.
If you don't do as I say here.. You're gonna be in deep trouble my friend.. Deep trouble... Deep trouble.... Very deep trouble.....

Normal:

SPOILER
01:02:574 - Replace whistle with clap
01:05:151 - Replace whistle with clap
01:12:880 - ^
01:15:457 - ^
01:22:542 - Add finish hitsound
01:46:053 - Remove clap
01:46:375 - Add clap
01:46:697 - Remove clap
01:54:104 - Replace whistle with clap
01:56:681 - ^
01:58:935 - Remove clap
01:59:257 - Add clap
01:59:579 - Remove clap
02:00:545 - Add clap
02:00:867 - Remove clap
02:01:834 - Replace whistle with clap
02:04:410 - ^
02:06:987 - ^
02:09:241 - Remove whistle
02:09:563 - Replace whistle with clap
02:12:140 - ^
02:35:328 - Add clap
02:35:972 - Remove clap
02:37:905 - Add clap
02:38:549 - Remove clap
02:40:481 - Add clap
02:50:787 - ^
02:53:041 - Remove clap
02:53:363 - Add clap
02:53:686 - Remove clap
03:00:771 - ^
03:01:093 - Add clap
03:01:415 - Remove clap
03:02:059 - Add clap
03:06:246 - Replace whistle with clap
03:08:822 - ^
03:11:077 - Remove clap
03:11:399 - Add clap
03:11:721 - Remove clap
03:12:365 - ^
03:12:687 - Add clap
03:13:009 - Remove clap
03:13:975 - Replace whistle with clap
03:16:552 - ^
03:18:806 - Remove whistle
03:19:128 - Replace whistle with clap
03:26:858 - Add clap
03:28:146 - ^
03:29:434 - ^
03:30:723 - ^
03:32:011 - ^
03:33:299 - ^
03:34:587 - ^
03:35:876 - ^
03:37:164 - ^
03:38:452 - ^
03:39:740 - ^
03:41:029 - ^

Hard:

SPOILER
00:21:351 - Add clap
00:23:927 - ^
00:26:504 - ^
00:29:080 - ^
00:29:885 - I don't get why you add beats here which clearly isn't anywhere near to the song but you don't add beats here: 00:30:529 and 00:30:851. You must listen to the song and add beats to how the song sounds.
00:31:657 - Add clap
00:34:233 - ^
00:36:810 - ^
00:39:386 - ^
00:40:674 - ^
00:40:996 - ^
00:41:157 - ^
00:46:793 - http://youtu.be/xoMgnJDXd3k - Remove clap
00:47:115 - Add clap
00:47:438 - Remove clap
00:50:014 - ^
00:54:523 - ^
00:54:845 - Add clap
00:55:167 - Remove clap
00:57:099 - ^
00:57:421 - Add clap
00:57:743 - Remove clap
01:02:574 - Replace whistle with clap
01:05:151 - ^
01:07:405 - Remove whistle
01:07:727 - Replace whistle with clap
01:09:982 - Remove whistle
01:10:304 - Replace whistle with clap
01:12:880 - ^
01:15:457 - ^
01:17:711 - Remove whistle
01:18:033 - Replace whistle with clap
01:19:000 - Remove whistle
01:19:322 - Replace whistle with clap
01:21:898 - Add clap
01:22:220 - ^
01:22:381 - ^
01:40:578 - Remove clap
01:40:900 - ^
01:41:222 - Add clap
01:41:544 - Remove clap
01:42:188 - ^
01:42:510 - Add clap
01:51:850 - ^
01:54:104 - Replace whistle with clap
01:57:969 - ^
02:00:062 - Add clap
02:01:512 - Remove clap
02:01:834 - Add clap
02:02:156 - Remove clap
02:04:410 - Replace whistle with clap
02:06:665 - Remove whistle
02:06:987 - Replace whistle with clap
02:08:919 - Add finish hitsound
02:09:563 - Add clap
02:14:716 - ^
02:15:682 - ^
02:17:293 - ^
02:18:259 - ^
02:19:869 - ^
02:22:446 - ^
02:35:328 - ^
02:36:294 - Remove clap
02:36:938 - ^
02:37:905 - Add clap
02:38:549 - Remove clap
02:38:871 - ^
02:39:515 - ^
02:40:481 - Add clap
02:41:769 - ^
02:42:413 - ^
02:42:896 - Add normal clap beat
02:43:058 - Remove clap
02:43:380 - Add normal clap beat
02:43:863 - ^
02:44:185 - Add normal beat
02:45:634 - Add clap
02:46:439 - Move beat 4 here and make it a clap
02:48:210 - Add clap
02:49:016 - Move beat 6 here
02:50:787 - Add clap
02:53:041 - Remove clap
02:53:363 - Add clap
02:53:686 - Remove clap
02:55:940 - Add clap
03:01:898 - ^
03:03:669 - ^
03:06:246 - Replace whistle with clap
03:08:822 - ^
03:09:628 - Add clap here not on 5.
03:10:755 - Same as before.. You probably know what to do know...
03:12:365 - Put the clap on the 4 not this 5.
03:13:331 - As always, I bet ya know now.
03:16:552 - Replace with.. Yes. A clap.
03:19:128 - Here too.
03:21:061 - Nobody likes sliders with two whistle sounds on them like this. Repeated hundreds of times over and over again. Do it like before. :D
03:21:705 - And yeah, remember the clap here, like the other ones I told ya' about.
03:22:510 - This middle beat shall have the clap, not the last one. Just like before.
03:25:570 - See this every second white tick? It means, CLAP
03:28:146 - Same here.
03:29:434 - And here.
03:30:723 - And here.
03:32:011 - AAAAAAND here.
03:33:299 - Also here.
03:34:587 - But never forget here! :D
03:35:876 - here too.
03:37:164 - See those white ticks? See the pattern? Every second white tick? Ever second white tick = clap? OMG! Add clap here.
03:38:452 - ^
03:39:257 - Now you can here two claps after each-other, here and
03:39:418 - here.
03:39:740 - And as always here.
03:40:545 - Same here, clap here and
03:40:706 - Here.
03:41:190 - Remove finish

The taiko diff is perfect. I love it. Ozzy is awesome!

AND THAT'S IT. This took me at least 2 hours to write. You should be thankful! :D Please do what I've said here, coz I'm pro and I know what this is and what it's all about. Hope ya get it ranked soon. ;D
Topic Starter
bambool

theowest wrote:

Hello, nice beatmap you've got here! :D

Lower all sound to 70% but keep it to 80% during the kai's.
Resnap the inherited timing section to 01:01:930
Do the same for 01:21:898, 01:53:460, 02:13:428, 03:05:602, 03:25:570 and 03:41:673.

Claps come every second white tick. ALWAYS. You can hear a clapish sound in the background of the song.
If you don't do as I say here.. You're gonna be in deep trouble my friend.. Deep trouble... Deep trouble.... Very deep trouble.....

Normal:

SPOILER
01:02:574 - Replace whistle with clap
01:05:151 - Replace whistle with clap
01:12:880 - ^
01:15:457 - ^
01:22:542 - Add finish hitsound
01:46:053 - Remove clap
01:46:375 - Add clap
01:46:697 - Remove clap
01:54:104 - Replace whistle with clap
01:56:681 - ^
01:58:935 - Remove clap
01:59:257 - Add clap
01:59:579 - Remove clap
02:00:545 - Add clap
02:00:867 - Remove clap
02:01:834 - Replace whistle with clap
02:04:410 - ^
02:06:987 - ^
02:09:241 - Remove whistle
02:09:563 - Replace whistle with clap
02:12:140 - ^
02:35:328 - Add clap
02:35:972 - Remove clap
02:37:905 - Add clap
02:38:549 - Remove clap
02:40:481 - Add clap
02:50:787 - ^
02:53:041 - Remove clap
02:53:363 - Add clap
02:53:686 - Remove clap
03:00:771 - ^
03:01:093 - Add clap
03:01:415 - Remove clap
03:02:059 - Add clap
03:06:246 - Replace whistle with clap
03:08:822 - ^
03:11:077 - Remove clap
03:11:399 - Add clap
03:11:721 - Remove clap
03:12:365 - ^
03:12:687 - Add clap
03:13:009 - Remove clap
03:13:975 - Replace whistle with clap
03:16:552 - ^
03:18:806 - Remove whistle
03:19:128 - Replace whistle with clap
03:26:858 - Add clap
03:28:146 - ^
03:29:434 - ^
03:30:723 - ^
03:32:011 - ^
03:33:299 - ^
03:34:587 - ^
03:35:876 - ^
03:37:164 - ^
03:38:452 - ^
03:39:740 - ^
03:41:029 - ^

Hard:

SPOILER
00:21:351 - Add clap
00:23:927 - ^
00:26:504 - ^
00:29:080 - ^
00:29:885 - I don't get why you add beats here which clearly isn't anywhere near to the song but you don't add beats here: 00:30:529 and 00:30:851. You must listen to the song and add beats to how the song sounds.
00:31:657 - Add clap
00:34:233 - ^
00:36:810 - ^
00:39:386 - ^
00:40:674 - ^
00:40:996 - ^
00:41:157 - ^
00:46:793 - http://youtu.be/xoMgnJDXd3k - Remove clap
00:47:115 - Add clap
00:47:438 - Remove clap
00:50:014 - ^
00:54:523 - ^
00:54:845 - Add clap
00:55:167 - Remove clap
00:57:099 - ^
00:57:421 - Add clap
00:57:743 - Remove clap
01:02:574 - Replace whistle with clap
01:05:151 - ^
01:07:405 - Remove whistle
01:07:727 - Replace whistle with clap
01:09:982 - Remove whistle
01:10:304 - Replace whistle with clap
01:12:880 - ^
01:15:457 - ^
01:17:711 - Remove whistle
01:18:033 - Replace whistle with clap
01:19:000 - Remove whistle
01:19:322 - Replace whistle with clap
01:21:898 - Add clap
01:22:220 - ^
01:22:381 - ^
01:40:578 - Remove clap
01:40:900 - ^
01:41:222 - Add clap
01:41:544 - Remove clap
01:42:188 - ^
01:42:510 - Add clap
01:51:850 - ^
01:54:104 - Replace whistle with clap
01:57:969 - ^
02:00:062 - Add clap
02:01:512 - Remove clap
02:01:834 - Add clap
02:02:156 - Remove clap
02:04:410 - Replace whistle with clap
02:06:665 - Remove whistle
02:06:987 - Replace whistle with clap
02:08:919 - Add finish hitsound
02:09:563 - Add clap
02:14:716 - ^
02:15:682 - ^
02:17:293 - ^
02:18:259 - ^
02:19:869 - ^
02:22:446 - ^
02:35:328 - ^
02:36:294 - Remove clap
02:36:938 - ^
02:37:905 - Add clap
02:38:549 - Remove clap
02:38:871 - ^
02:39:515 - ^
02:40:481 - Add clap
02:41:769 - ^
02:42:413 - ^
02:42:896 - Add normal clap beat
02:43:058 - Remove clap
02:43:380 - Add normal clap beat
02:43:863 - ^
02:44:185 - Add normal beat
02:45:634 - Add clap
02:46:439 - Move beat 4 here and make it a clap
02:48:210 - Add clap
02:49:016 - Move beat 6 here
02:50:787 - Add clap
02:53:041 - Remove clap
02:53:363 - Add clap
02:53:686 - Remove clap
02:55:940 - Add clap
03:01:898 - ^
03:03:669 - ^
03:06:246 - Replace whistle with clap
03:08:822 - ^
03:09:628 - Add clap here not on 5.
03:10:755 - Same as before.. You probably know what to do know...
03:12:365 - Put the clap on the 4 not this 5.
03:13:331 - As always, I bet ya know now.
03:16:552 - Replace with.. Yes. A clap.
03:19:128 - Here too.
03:21:061 - Nobody likes sliders with two whistle sounds on them like this. Repeated hundreds of times over and over again. Do it like before. :D
03:21:705 - And yeah, remember the clap here, like the other ones I told ya' about.
03:22:510 - This middle beat shall have the clap, not the last one. Just like before.
03:25:570 - See this every second white tick? It means, CLAP
03:28:146 - Same here.
03:29:434 - And here.
03:30:723 - And here.
03:32:011 - AAAAAAND here.
03:33:299 - Also here.
03:34:587 - But never forget here! :D
03:35:876 - here too.
03:37:164 - See those white ticks? See the pattern? Every second white tick? Ever second white tick = clap? OMG! Add clap here.
03:38:452 - ^
03:39:257 - Now you can here two claps after each-other, here and
03:39:418 - here.
03:39:740 - And as always here.
03:40:545 - Same here, clap here and
03:40:706 - Here.
03:41:190 - Remove finish

The taiko diff is perfect. I love it. Ozzy is awesome!

AND THAT'S IT. This took me at least 2 hours to write. You should be thankful! :D Please do what I've said here, coz I'm pro and I know what this is and what it's all about. Hope ya get it ranked soon. ;D
thank you in advance.

I almost changed everything as your mod.

except that
[Hard]

02:46:439 - Move beat 4 here and make it a clap
02:48:210 - Add clap
02:49:016 - Move beat 6 here

↑↑↑

I think this part is ok, i will not change it for now.

You helped me a a lot. :)
gustjr1997
good
LaunchedthousandShip
这个normal说实话不是很难,不过还是稍微考虑一下是否做个easy

Normal
00:36:165 (1) - 不喜欢叠在下面
01:11:270 (2) - 建议把这个移到前面白线上去,这里的音有些off,不在这条红线上。。。现在这样不是很舒服
00:31:012 (1) - 不喜欢叠在下面
00:36:165 (1) - ^
01:19:000 (2) - 建议把这个移到前面白线上去,这里的音有些off,不在这条红线上。。。现在这样不是很舒服

hard
00:59:354 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不喜欢这里的ds改变,太突然,比较下这里01:56:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
如果你把这里的12 34 12 34 5之间的ds都变成4和1之间的还比较好理解
02:34:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:47:244 - 加note
02:49:821 - ^
02:52:397 - ^
02:57:550 - ^
03:02:703 - ^
TTTTTTTTTTTT
A star
chungskale
你好~ 維多利加好 ( ◕‿◕) /
音效不太在行。所以在排列方面給點意見~
[Normal]
  1. 02:43:058 (2) - 左一格,上一格, 這樣可以對上02:41:769 (4) 看起來整潔一點點
  2. 02:43:702 (3) - 上面有跟著做的話,這個可以distance snap 和02:42:413 (1) 並排吧. 後面的也需要作些調整。
  3. 03:08:178 (1) - 上一格
  4. 03:37:808 (3) - 第一個白正方向上拉一格
  5. 03:20:417 (5) - 這個用whistle會不會好點?
[Hard]
  1. 00:59:837 (4,1) - 這個跳有點整人吧。
  2. 02:35:167 (4,1) - ^
  3. 01:10:304 (2) - 上一格?
  4. 02:20:513 (4) - 左一格?
  5. 02:47:888 (2,3) - 建議不重疊
  6. 02:49:177 (6,7) - 左一格
  7. 嗯。結尾那些是insane無誤了。可以想想要不要把這改成insane~這樣整人的跳可以保留了~
star!!
話說呢。好像也好久沒和你mp 了。。
Screenagers
good 8-) 8-)
Topic Starter
bambool

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

这个normal说实话不是很难,不过还是稍微考虑一下是否做个easy 暂时想以这个NORMAL做最简单的难度。

Normal
00:36:165 (1) - 不喜欢叠在下面 是指读起来会有困难么,不过我还是设了分色觉得还是比较易读,这个先等其他建议。
01:11:270 (2) - 建议把这个移到前面白线上去,这里的音有些off,不在这条红线上。。。现在这样不是很舒服在这里我打起来的感觉是滑完这个滑调突然变成两个四分NOTE对新手来说不好反应,如果确实音OFF不可以的话我再这么改。
00:31:012 (1) - 不喜欢叠在下面
00:36:165 (1) - ^
01:19:000 (2) - 建议把这个移到前面白线上去,这里的音有些off,不在这条红线上。。。现在这样不是很舒服

hard
00:59:354 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不喜欢这里的ds改变,太突然,比较下这里01:56:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
如果你把这里的12 34 12 34 5之间的ds都变成4和1之间的还比较好理解
02:34:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:47:244 - 加note
02:49:821 - ^
02:52:397 - ^
02:57:550 - ^
03:02:703 - ^ all fixed
Topic Starter
bambool

chungskale wrote:

你好~ 維多利加好 ( ◕‿◕) /
音效不太在行。所以在排列方面給點意見~
[Normal]
  1. 02:43:058 (2) - 左一格,上一格, 這樣可以對上02:41:769 (4) 看起來整潔一點點
  2. 02:43:702 (3) - 上面有跟著做的話,這個可以distance snap 和02:42:413 (1) 並排吧. 後面的也需要作些調整。 修改成应该是个等腰三角形的样子了,不知道可以不……
  3. 03:08:178 (1) - 上一格
  4. 03:37:808 (3) - 第一個白正方向上拉一格
  5. 03:20:417 (5) - 這個用whistle會不會好點? fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:59:837 (4,1) - 這個跳有點整人吧。
  2. 02:35:167 (4,1) - ^
  3. 01:10:304 (2) - 上一格?
  4. 02:20:513 (4) - 左一格? all fixed
  5. 02:47:888 (2,3) - 建議不重疊 这个觉得还可以啊,再等等其他MODDER的说法
  6. 02:49:177 (6,7) - 左一格 fixed
  7. 嗯。結尾那些是insane無誤了。可以想想要不要把這改成insane~這樣整人的跳可以保留了~其实BPM不高单手点可以吧……可能开DT困难了些。目的是想做个刷分的HARD。
star!!
話說呢。好像也好久沒和你mp 了。。学校网最近不给力了……
professeur layton
i like this map 1 kudosu
TorNis
[Normal]
00:42:929 - why from this point you are doing 2 claps? :( In chorus it's ok, but not before. Especially since in beginning you have 1 clap.
01:34:458 - ^
02:09:563 (2,3,4,5,6) - that's too unexpected from your Normal diff pace.
02:51:753 - again, what's with 1 clap then 2 claps?

[Hard]
00:42:929 - same as Normal
01:34:458 - ^
02:48:210 (3) - I honestly failed here Full Combo test :(
03:27:502 - This part is epic, but I would loved to see a small breaks because it's quite long non-stop clicking.

Star for non-J song :)
sherrie__fay
star
sherrie__fay
[normal]
[01:18:677]加note
[02:54:008]^

……
……誒不是 等下 你N這類地方的三個或者是兩個note是根據什麼擺的 這裡的音樂感覺上是沒有key音的 加三個或者兩個拍子都可以……如果可以的話注意一下這類位置note擺放的宏觀對稱

[hard]
[02:10:529]加個note?還是你故意要空一拍?因為前面都是三個三個的啊
[02:11:173]這裡也加個吧 這個位置感覺是歌詞的小高潮結尾部分 note間還是感覺不要空拍了

感覺跟N一樣 空拍有點找不到規律

[03:40:706](3)改成grid4 右移一格._.
[03:41:029](5)改成grid4 下移一格._.

尼瑪你都mod成這樣了還找我來 我就只有nazi了啊魂淡

其實我說這些都等於沒說
還找人mod毛?要泡去吧

GOGO BAMBOOL
CuriosityLove
This beatmap isn't ranked. BUT WHYYYY? Dx
Topic Starter
bambool

TorNis wrote:

[Normal]
00:42:929 - why from this point you are doing 2 claps? :( In chorus it's ok, but not before. Especially since in beginning you have 1 clap.
01:34:458 - ^
02:09:563 (2,3,4,5,6) - that's too unexpected from your Normal diff pace. made it easier now,i think.
02:51:753 - again, what's with 1 clap then 2 claps? all fixed。

[Hard]
00:42:929 - same as Normal
01:34:458 - ^
02:48:210 (3) - I honestly failed here Full Combo test :( all fixed
03:27:502 - This part is epic, but I would loved to see a small breaks because it's quite long non-stop clicking. music here does not have a break.and i think this part is not so hard.i will not change it for now.

Star for non-J song :)
Topic Starter
bambool

sherrie__fay wrote:

[normal]
[01:18:677]加note
[02:54:008]^

……
……誒不是 等下 你N這類地方的三個或者是兩個note是根據什麼擺的 這裡的音樂感覺上是沒有key音的 加三個或者兩個拍子都可以……如果可以的話注意一下這類位置note擺放的宏觀對稱

[hard]
[02:10:529]加個note?還是你故意要空一拍?因為前面都是三個三個的啊
[02:11:173]這裡也加個吧 這個位置感覺是歌詞的小高潮結尾部分 note間還是感覺不要空拍了

感覺跟N一樣 空拍有點找不到規律

[03:40:706](3)改成grid4 右移一格._.
[03:41:029](5)改成grid4 下移一格._.

All fixed.

尼瑪你都mod成這樣了還找我來 我就只有nazi了啊魂淡

其實我說這些都等於沒說
還找人mod毛?要泡去吧菲挂太爱口胡了……

GOGO BAMBOOLthank you.
lucyfly
Star~
鼓点很不错~!加油~!
Hushu_old
Hii, here is my mod...

SPOILER
Normal:
1:01:930 - Your map is full of 1/1 sliders and 3xcircles so it would be less boring if you deleted (2) and repeated the 1/1 slider during this bit.
1:10:948 - Just because it is normal does not mean it needs to have at least 1/1 space between each note - especially during the kiai. Add a note here?
1:11:270 (3,4) - Sound better as one 1/2 long slider. So replace?
1:13:202 - To stop repeating chorus sequences, add a note here
1:13:524 (3,4,5) - Again stopping copy and paste, I would make a 1/1 long slider here or a 1/2 long repeated.
1:15:779 - Place a slider 1/1 long here after removing (2) and (3).
1:21:254 - Shorten by half, repeat two more times to stop the 1/1 sounds making it boring...
1:34:136 - Remove (2,3) and add a slider 1/1 long here.
1:36:713 - ^
1:44:442 - Remove (2) and place a slider 1/2 long here.
1:52:172 - Finish sound here?
1:52:494 - I think you should add a note here to rise tension which the chorus about to start
1:54:426 - Remove (2) and place a slider 1/2 long here
1:57:003 - Remove (2) and place a slider 1/1 long here.
2:03:766 - Make it half long. And add a circle at 2:04:410.
2:06:987 - Remove (2,3,4) and repeat this slider twice.
So now now... It really does not need to be that you copy and past 20 times to make a good beatmap, is it? Try to make new sequences like I did so that there is not many the same sequences especially in kiai times and definitly not the same sequence in the kiai time that is during the periods without kiai time!

Hard:
0:34:877 - I think this slider is not needed here. Place a circle 1/2 later instead? Sounds nicer like this.
1:52:172 - Don't finish here, it does not fit...
1:52:494 - New combo?
2:41:125 - New combo here definitly because there is one at 2:38:549 and at 2:35:972.
3:04:636 - New combo
3:19:450 - Undo whistle!
3:28:790 - No new combo
3:29:112 - New combo
3:31:367 - No new combo
3:31:689 - New combo
3:32:655 - New combo
3:33:299 - No new combo
3:33:943 - No new combo
3:34:265 - New combo
3:36:520 - No new combo
3:36:842 - New combo
3:39:096 - No new combo
zsr123
Hi, :D

都是些个人的感受和建议..不喜欢可以全部无视...

[Normal]

03:20:417 (5) - 感觉很奇怪= = 去掉whistle 用clap ?
03:39:096 (1,2,3,4) - 删除 , 03:41:673 (1) 移到 03:39:096 结尾延长到 03:41:673 绿线删除 感觉比较好

[Hard]

02:23:412 (7) - 取消 clap
02:23:734 (9) - 取消 clap
02:58:516 (5) - clap
02:59:483 (8) - 移到 02:59:322
03:00:449 (1) - 结尾 clap
03:07:212 (4) - 移到 03:07:051
03:24:925 (3,4,5,6) - 全部提前2格 到 03:24:603 (3,4,5,6)
03:26:053 (7) - 取消
03:25:570 (6) - 用slider到 03:26:214 代替原本的03:26:214 (1)

star :)
PotsBreaker
8-) 8-)
Topic Starter
bambool

Hushu wrote:

Hii, here is my mod...

SPOILER
Normal:
1:01:930 - Your map is full of 1/1 sliders and 3xcircles so it would be less boring if you deleted (2) and repeated the 1/1 slider during this bit.
1:10:948 - Just because it is normal does not mean it needs to have at least 1/1 space between each note - especially during the kiai. Add a note here?
1:11:270 (3,4) - Sound better as one 1/2 long slider. So replace?
1:13:202 - To stop repeating chorus sequences, add a note here
1:13:524 (3,4,5) - Again stopping copy and paste, I would make a 1/1 long slider here or a 1/2 long repeated.
1:15:779 - Place a slider 1/1 long here after removing (2) and (3).
1:21:254 - Shorten by half, repeat two more times to stop the 1/1 sounds making it boring...
1:34:136 - Remove (2,3) and add a slider 1/1 long here.
1:36:713 - ^
1:44:442 - Remove (2) and place a slider 1/2 long here.
1:52:172 - Finish sound here?
1:52:494 - I think you should add a note here to rise tension which the chorus about to start
1:54:426 - Remove (2) and place a slider 1/2 long here
1:57:003 - Remove (2) and place a slider 1/1 long here.
2:03:766 - Make it half long. And add a circle at 2:04:410.
2:06:987 - Remove (2,3,4) and repeat this slider twice.
So now now... It really does not need to be that you copy and past 20 times to make a good beatmap, is it? Try to make new sequences like I did so that there is not many the same sequences especially in kiai times and definitly not the same sequence in the kiai time that is during the periods without kiai time! ok...you really mean a remapping.i will change something as your mod but not all. i will wait for other modders to make my normal diff better.

Hard:
0:34:877 - I think this slider is not needed here. Place a circle 1/2 later instead? Sounds nicer like this.didn't change
1:52:172 - Don't finish here, it does not fit...
1:52:494 - New combo?
2:41:125 - New combo here definitly because there is one at 2:38:549 and at 2:35:972.
3:04:636 - New combo
3:19:450 - Undo whistle! all fixed
3:28:790 - No new combo
3:29:112 - New combo
3:31:367 - No new combo
3:31:689 - New combo
3:32:655 - New combo
3:33:299 - No new combo
3:33:943 - No new combo
3:34:265 - New combo
3:36:520 - No new combo
3:36:842 - New combo
3:39:096 - No new comboi dont know why you want me to change newcombo timepoint here. didn't change them.
Topic Starter
bambool

zsr123 wrote:

Hi, :D

都是些个人的感受和建议..不喜欢可以全部无视...

[Normal]

03:20:417 (5) - 感觉很奇怪= = 去掉whistle 用clap ? fixed
03:39:096 (1,2,3,4) - 删除 , 03:41:673 (1) 移到 03:39:096 结尾延长到 03:41:673 绿线删除 感觉比较好 这一部分是想和HARD一致

[Hard]

02:23:412 (7) - 取消 clap
02:23:734 (9) - 取消 clap
02:58:516 (5) - clap fixed
02:59:483 (8) - 移到 02:59:322 didn't change
03:00:449 (1) - 结尾 clap fixed
03:07:212 (4) - 移到 03:07:051 didn't change
03:24:925 (3,4,5,6) - 全部提前2格 到 03:24:603 (3,4,5,6)
03:26:053 (7) - 取消 changed
03:25:570 (6) - 用slider到 03:26:214 代替原本的03:26:214 (1) didn't change

star :)
RhaiizoN
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
EvianBubble
Mod, as requested :3

General
Uncheck "letterbox during breaks", IMO it would look better without the bars with your BG

Normal
OK, while I don't think there is anything "technically" wrong with this map (as I was playing), I can only say that it was not FUN to play. You used a lot of the same patterns over and over again :S So I am going to suggest some other patterns you can use to make them different
00:30:690 (5) - I'd remove the finish here and add it on the beginning of (1)
00:31:012 (1) - Extend to the red line and move (2) to 00:33:267 (it should be come 4 - change hitsounds accordingly)
00:37:454 (2) - Move half beat back to the red line
00:46:471 (1) - Do something like this? (Look at the timeline, not spacing)
00:50:336 - New combo here, add another repeat (so remove new combo of next beat)
00:52:591 - Add slider here ending on where (3) is
00:54:201 (1) - Extend for half a beat, move (2) back to the white line?
01:01:608 - Add note here
01:01:930 (1) - Add finish here. I would suggest lowering the volume to 60% ish 'cus I think the whistle is too loud. Also, I'd say change the clap at the end of the slider to a whistle because it ends really abruptly and sounds kind of weird :S
01:04:507 (1) - I'd suggest removing the whistle on here. It doesn't really fit. Finish instead?
01:12:236 (1) - Here too. Well, I just don't like these whistles TBH. Use your own judgement with this I guess
01:12:236 (1) - Suggest using this pattern (again, look at timeline). For hitsounds, keep (1) as it is (so it should have finish at beginning + whistle + clap at end), add clap to the beginning of (4) and remove it from (5). I'd add something on (3) but I can't find anything good >_<
01:21:254 (5) - Did you forget to add clap here?
01:22:542 - You should end Kiai time here, otherwise it feels really odd while playing
01:33:814 - Add a half beat slider in here, it fits in so well :P
01:36:391 - I'd do the same thing here but make the slider in the middle (so circle, slider, circle)
01:41:866 (3) - Add another repeat
01:43:154 (1) - Finish on the beginning
Hmm ... do you see what I mean? I'm not going to do the whole song but try to think of some new patterns yourself :) Oh and also end kiai times on the downbeat :P
02:14:716 - This break is way too long. Can you cut it in half?

Hard has the same problem as Normal. A lot of the patterns were repetitive. Although I did think it was a bit better. There were also some streams that I didn't think fit, and some places where I thought a stream would have been wonderful :O

Please call me back after. I wouldn't mind rechecking this at all. Good luck on your map and pattern creating :P
Fraolinch
Hi~


[General]

"The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps." -Official Ranking Submission Criteria
Your .mp3 has a 320kbps bitrate. You have to re-encode it. I can do it for you if you don't know how to.


[Normal]

Ugh, ugly sliders :< You should really read this guide and fix your sliders.
Apart from that, there is technically no problem with this diff. However, the lack of nice patters make it really unpleasant to the eye, and not really fun to play.


[Hard]

Same advice as above about the sliders~

00:23:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - It doesn't really fit the rhythm you created with the previous notes, try something like this? :
00:27:148 (4) - You don't need this note, for same reason as above
00:34:072 (4) - ^
00:34:877 (7) - Move it to next blue tick
00:55:972 (6) - Delete
00:58:066 (4) - Remove 2 repeats and add a HC at 00:58:710 -
00:59:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Rearrange that pattern so that it looks nice (try making a circle, for instance)
01:03:058 (2,3) - Move to previous red tick
01:05:795 (4) - Delete
01:16:101 (4) - ^
01:19:322 (4) - Move to previous blue tick
01:19:644 (X) - Add a HC
01:39:450 (5) - Delete
01:42:671 (7) - Clap ?
01:42:993 (X) - Add a HC
01:46:214 (4) - Delete
02:34:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same as 00:59:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -


[Ozzy's Hystaikoteria]

I guess it's fine. Could be more dynamic, though.




Well... globally, your mapset has, technically speaking, nothing wrong, but it definitely doesn't look nice. I really suggest you read the guide I linked you.
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