1. Easy (2.55 stars, 91 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 308 notes)
3. Lunet's Hard (4.85 stars, 231 notes)
4. S o r d a's Normal (4.09 stars, 147 notes)

KSHR wrote:

swish puro!!

rEdo wrote:

[S o r d a's Normal]
1:12:597 (4,1) - swap new combos Fixed
1:15:506 (5) - add new comboFixed
1:17:688 - 1:19:870 (x) - insert a break timeFixed
1:54:779 (1) - add some silencing timing sections, like in swish's Easy difficultyok,Fixed

rEdo wrote:

hello

[Easy]
0:38:415 (2) - delete whistle at it's end, so it follows the pattern Fixed
0:44:960 (2,3) - sounds better if it's the (2) that have it's whistle, instead of (3) Fixed
1:34:415 (3,4,5) - spacing, make sure that the distance between those notes is the same Fixed
1:52:415 (2,3,4) - sounds better if they've got whistles too Fixed

[Lunet's Hard]
0:33:142 (3) - it's slightly disaligned with previous (6) slider's end　Fixed
1:21:324 (1) - this new combo's not really necessary Fixed
1:49:869 (3) - kinda unexpected jump, some players might find it confusing Fixed

[Insane]
nothing wrong found i just kinda dislike this new combo spacing, but it's fine as it is now too


Navel <3 yay xD
good luck!

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Sorda's Normal+]
00:46:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's strange how the previous notes have whistle but these notes are blank Add whistle
00:52:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
00:55:506 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:01:324 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:06:051 (7) - following the vocal this should be lengthen 1/4 beat more to 01:06:324, adjust the spacing after this. Oh and remove the whistle too No
01:16:779 (2,3) - I suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/1sJJ No
01:22:779 (6) - NC Fixed
01:34:960 (2) - it's better if you can remove this to the side so it won't overlapped by the previous slider No
02:00:233 (T) - change the hitsound sample to soft Fixed

_Kiva wrote:

[NORMAL]
stack latency too high :3
00:48:960 (6) - add a whistle? Fixed
01:08:960 add a note to fit the beat with 01:11:142 (2,3) ? Add note Fixed
01:34:415 (1,2) - i cant comment this stacking but maybe some other people would also pick on it XD No
01:41:324 (3) - finish? Fixed
01:45:142 (4) - feel little bit strange here , consider fix No
01:53:142 (6) - about this slider .. maybe for my personaly i will extend to 01:54:415 , but it is just my idea XD No

Sallad4ever wrote:

hi swish
Spoilerboxed cause it's long. you've been warned :3

SPOILER

[General]
- try to use normal-clap and normal-finish too, using so only whistle from the start until the end is kinda monotone. Maybe use clap in the kiai time, that way the chorus will be more colorful
- if you wonder how to make a symmetrical slider read this guide, it'll help you a lot

[Easy]
00:42:233 (1) - add finish Fixed
00:42:779 (T) - remove this timing section, the volume change is too sudden it's bad Fixed
00:46:779 (1) - unstack this, not only that the color difference make this kinda hard to read for novice, the space in the time line is to fast too Fixed
01:12:597 (1,3) - add finish Fixed
01:19:870 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:34:415 (3) - NC (new combo) this Fixed
01:41:506 (1) - add finish here too Fixed
01:42:415 (2) - remove this timing section Fixed
01:46:415 (3) - NC Fixed
01:53:233 (T) - I suggest to use 0.75 instead of 0.5 for this timing section. 0.5 is too extreme for Easy diff, beside it'll confuse Easy level player Fixed
02:00:233 (T) - change the hitsound sample to soft Fixed

[Lunet's Hard]
the diff is very2 lack of hitsound. Please add more hitsound on them. I suggest this pattern:
00:32:233 (6) - clap at the beginning Fixed
00:32:960 (2) - clapFixed
00:33:324 (4) - clap at the end Fixed
00:34:051 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:35:142 (2) - clap at the beginning Fixed
00:35:870 (4) - clap Fixed
etc, the rest you can follow the above pattern or make your own hitsound pattern
00:31:506 (5) - this is too weird, might as well continue the stream, it'll sound a lot better then the awkward 1/2 repeating slider Fixed
00:40:597 (1,2,3) - add finish at the start of each sliders Fixed
00:42:415 (1) - finish this Fixed
00:49:324 (1,2,3) - it plays better if you stack these circles Fixed
01:16:960 (1,2,3) - move these triple 1/2 beat back to 01:16:779 Fixed
01:43:960 (3,5) - these 1/4 notes are too random, it ignore the music completely. I suggest to remove it Fixed
01:53:505 (4,5) - the only 1/2 jump in the diff, I suggest to make this into normal spacing Fixed


[Insane]
00:42:779 (T) - remove this timing section Fixed
00:53:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can you make this into a better pattern? currently the pattern is kinda random making the jump kinda random too maybe something like this http://puu.sh/1sMb ? sorry, no change ;_;
01:02:415 (7) - shorten this 1/4 beat so the repeat lands on blue tick Fixed
01:06:051 (10) - ^ Fixed
01:19:870 (1) - finish at the start Fixed
01:31:506 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:42:415 (T) - remove this timing section Fixed
01:41:506 (1) - add finish here too Fixed
02:00:233 (T) - change the hitsound sample to soft Fixed

That's all from me, the lack of hitsounds is my bigger concern here

Nice map and Good Luck
Star

_Kiva wrote:

:P
[General]
Make all diff have same Kiai time.

[EASY]
stack latency too high :3
00:42:233 (1) - start this spinner at 00:42:051　sorry, no change

[HARD]
00:44:960 (4) - stack already repaired
00:55:688 (2,4,6) - around here , how about only putl claps on them Fixed
00:58:597 (2,4) - clap only , remove clap from others Fixed
01:19:324- put a note here sounds better Fixed
01:36:597 (7) - looks like doest stacked properly already repaired

[INSANE]
01:08:233 (1) - new combo here?　no change
01:25:142 (11) - finish no change

Good song~ ganbare desu~