KSHR wrote:

swishさん

SPOILER

Easy
00:46:415 (4) - remove whistle, add finish
00:49:324 (4) - ^
00:55:142 (5) - add finish
01:12:597 (1,2,3,4) - remove whistle?
01:15:506 (5) - 棒の部分にwhistle, remove whistle at end
01:18:415 (3) - remove all whistles
01:53:506 (4) - 棒の部分にwhistle


Insane
00:34:597 (6,1) - 1grid down & right
00:46:052 (1,3) - remove whistle
00:46:779 (6) - new combo
00:54:233 (5) - 1grid right?
00:54:960 (8) - add finish at end
00:57:688 (2,4) - remove whistle
01:05:142 (5) - new combo?
01:18:415 (1,3,5,7) - ^
01:19:142 (9) - ^ at beginning
01:27:506 (7,8) - 1grid down
01:33:142 (7,1,2) - ^
01:40:597 (4) - 1grid left
01:48:233 (9) - new combo
01:53:506 (7) - new combo?

Insaneについてはwhistleが多くなってしまうと言っていたので、
参考に音付けKSHR ver.を作ってPMでお渡しします～

Lunetさん

SPOILER

00:37:142 (2) - 1grid down & right
00:40:597 (1,2,3) - add finish at end
00:45:324 (5,1,2) - 1grid left
00:58:051 (11) - remove whistle, add finish
01:19:870 (1) - add finish at beginning
00:45:324 (5,1,2) - 1grid down
>01:37:324 (4) - 1grid left
01:51:869 (1,2,3) - ^ at end
01:53:688 (5) - 01:54:415 (6)を削除して、
01:54:415まで伸ばす方が曲に合うと思いました
（Insaneと同じように変速を使うと修正しやすくなると思います）

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:36:597 (4) - clap? Fixed
00:40:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1,3,5) finish, (2,4,6) remove finish? Fixed
0:44 -> use soft? No ;_;
00:45:506 (6,7) - stack, (7) 1 pixel right Fixed
00:52:960 (5) - finish Fixed
01:17:324 (3,6) - clap? Fixed

[Lunet's Hard]
00:36:960 (1) - remove clap? Fixed
00:58:779 (3) - make it symmetrical, up 1 grid Fixed
00:59:506 (6,7) - stack Fixed
01:03:142 (9,10) - ^ Fixed

nice map, star~ >~<

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal+]
00:31:870 (1) - Finish. Fixed
00:37:688 (1) - ^ ^
00:54:051 - Add a note? No
01:02:779 - Plays/sounds better if you add a note here. ^
01:06:779 (1) - Finish.Fixed
01:19:870 (1) - ^ ^
01:31:506 (1) - ^ ^
01:43:142 (1) - ^ No
01:53:688 - Why there's such a huge space between the last object and the last spinner? slider repeat end 01:31:506

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
00:31:870 (1) - Finish.
00:37:688 (1) - ^
00:40:597 (1,2,3) - ^
00:55:142 (5) - This note is out,and it's even harder to read when it stacked.I suggest you to move this note back to 00:54:960.
01:06:779 (1) - Finish.

[Hard]
01:06:779 (1) - It's too close to previous object.
01:15:506 (2) - ^ Same,don't look at distance snap,it counts like 0.5x but we're playing 1x up to this slider.

[Insane]
00:37:688 (1) - Finish?
01:03:324 (8) - Too close to previous object,fix distance.

KanaRin wrote:

Taiko diff ほしです！
いいなのか？

1. move the offset to 30415. cuz there are some notes before the red section in Hard
2. add S_o_r_d_a to tags

1. 00:49:506 (3,4) - spacing here, or consider place 00:49:324 (1,2,3), these on (4).
2. 01:26:779 (7) - 1 more repeat
3. 01:35:142 (5) - ^
4. 01:41:506 (T) - add note with clap here
5. 01:46:415 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing

1. 01:52:960 (5,6,7,1) - suggest: [img]http://puu.sh/1yv6/img]
2. ^ and 01:54:870 (1) - remember adjust the ending place to right one

1. 01:53:506 (4) - new combo

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. move the offset to 30415. cuz there are some notes before the red section in Hard
2. add S_o_r_d_a to tags
   All Fixed

[S o r d a's Normal+]:

1. 01:52:960 (5,6,7,1) - suggest: [img]http://puu.sh/1yv6/[img] Fixed
2. ^ and 01:54:870 (1) - remember adjust the ending place to right one Fixed

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. move the offset to 30415. cuz there are some notes before the red section in Hard
2. add S_o_r_d_a to tags

[Lunet's Hard]:

1. 00:49:506 (3,4) - spacing here, or consider place 00:49:324 (1,2,3), these on (4).
2. 01:26:779 (7) - 1 more repeat
3. 01:35:142 (5) - ^
4. 01:41:506 (T) - add note with clap here
5. 01:46:415 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing

[Easy]:

1. 01:53:506 (4) - new combo

All fixed~

I still remember your first map, and now look much skilled than used to be! thanks
star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

Sorry to the late mod :/ no~ thanks

SPOILER

Easy
- I think AR+1 would be nice Fixed
00:36:233 (2,3) - In my opinion, these notes wil sounds better if you move them 1/2 earlier no change ;_;
01:09:687 (3) - Add a finish ? Fixed
01:15:505 (5) - Add a finish at the beginning ? Fixed

S o r d a's Normal+
- Remove the "+" in the difficulty name ? Remove the "+"
- AR+2 o_o The notes appears too slowly and it's really unpleasant in a non-easy difficulty Fixed
00:54:051 - Add a note here ? Fixed
01:16:778 (2) - Remove the reverse and add a note at 01:17:324 some fixed

Lunet's Hard
01:02:505 (6) - This triplet sounds weird imo, so I think you should remove this note no change ;_;
01:02:960 - Add a note here ? Fixed
01:08:596 (4) - Add a clap on this circle and remove the claps onto 01:08:960 (5,6) Fixed
01:11:142 (5) - Add a clap at the end and remove the claps onto 01:11:869 (6,7) Fixed
01:26:778 (7) - New combo ? Fixed
01:40:960 (5) - New combo ? Fixed

Insane
- Cool difficulty ~
00:37:324 (7) - Add a clap at the beginning ? Fixe
01:53:505 (1) - Try to make the beginning and the end completely symmetrical ? no change ;_;

> KuraiPettan
thanks mod and star~

winber1 wrote:

S o r d a's

00:39:142(2) - delete note Fixed
00:39:687(3) - move 1/2 back Fixed
00:40:415(4) - end repeat slider here Fixed

[Do the above three together]

01:06:142(7) - add one repeat to this slider Fixed
01:25:324(1,2,3,4...) - add some more hitsounds? oops,Fixed

Seems a little hard for normal. Oh well...

winber1 wrote:

SPOILER

sorry it took 11 days lol 　　no, thanks >.<

Insane

01:16:869(x) - add note
01:18:687(1,2,1,2,1,2) - do you really need these new combos? D:


Lunet's

AR -1 fits better imo

00:55:505(1,2,3,4,5..11) - um i realyl don't agree with these hitsounds D;. i don't really like them that much
Yeah, basically, my problem with this diff is the hitsounds. Some places lack hitsounds imo. sometimes, you have like 6 whistles in a row and it doesn't sound that good to me. hmm.. some hitsounds fixed



Easy

01:12:596(1,2,3,4) - continue whistle pattern?

All fixed~

> winber1
thanks mod and star~~

> lkp
thanks star~

Garven wrote:

[S o r d a's Normal]
01:06:778 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - <3 the motion for this thank you>_<
01:28:233 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm feels so off compared to the music here Chenged note Fixed
01:40:596 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:54:051 (7) - Maybe this?
Fixed

Garven wrote:

[Lunet's Hard]
01:37:051 (2) - Up and right one grid Fixed~

[Insane]
00:33:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really hard to see with that combo color against the video. ;_;
hmm.. All diff combo2 color changed~