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William K

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Joined January 2013

William K 2016-12-21T06:37:50+00:00

Alright, my mod here...

[Imperial Knights]

01:18:631 (78631|2,78631|3,78936|0,78936|1,79088|0,79088|1,79088|2) - I dunno why the pattern here is the only one that I felt repetitive. This pattern is pretty similar to 01:17:413 (77413|1,77413|3,77717|0,77717|1,77870|1,77870|0,77870|2) - ... How about moving 01:18:936 (78936|1) - so there's more variation among them?
00:07:667 (7667|1,7819|2) - Just a personal suggestion, considering that you did a right to left movement at 00:06:753 (6753|3,6905|1,7058|0) - and at 00:07:362 (7362|1,7514|0) - , how about making 00:07:667 (7667|1,7819|2) - the same too by CTRL+H-ing?
00:12:692 (12692|2,12692|0) - Same? If you apply ^
00:54:875 - Felt more intense here, I think increasing the volume sound would help.
00:43:758 - Miss note here? Sounds pretty much the same as 00:43:149 (43149|2,43149|3,43149|0) - so I think one more note is necessary. (Like you did at 00:52:286 (52286|0,52286|3,52286|2,52438|1,52438|0,52438|3) -

[Normal]

00:04:316 (4316|2,4316|3) - Not placing this in the middle like 00:03:250 (3250|3,3707|1,3707|2) - ?
00:52:743 (52743|2,52895|1,53047|3) - Would cause mindblocks to Normal players imo. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6858394? Pretty hard for beginners focusing in the middle, I think.

That's all, I guess.

Frim4503

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Joined July 2013

Frim4503 2016-12-21T12:46:22+00:00

will mark for mod
you say in chat this map is not generic tivi saizu.
well, let see if you right

Maxus

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Maxus 2016-12-21T16:58:12+00:00

William K wrote:
Alright, my mod here...

[Imperial Knights]

01:18:631 (78631|2,78631|3,78936|0,78936|1,79088|0,79088|1,79088|2) - I dunno why the pattern here is the only one that I felt repetitive. This pattern is pretty similar to 01:17:413 (77413|1,77413|3,77717|0,77717|1,77870|1,77870|0,77870|2) - ... How about moving 01:18:936 (78936|1) - so there's more variation among them? ok and rearrange some
00:07:667 (7667|1,7819|2) - Just a personal suggestion, considering that you did a right to left movement at 00:06:753 (6753|3,6905|1,7058|0) - and at 00:07:362 (7362|1,7514|0) - , how about making 00:07:667 (7667|1,7819|2) - the same too by CTRL+H-ing? good idea
00:12:692 (12692|2,12692|0) - Same? If you apply ^ not here, the LN here already lead to the leftside.
00:54:875 - Felt more intense here, I think increasing the volume sound would help. don't think so, the atmosphere still the same imo.
00:43:758 - Miss note here? Sounds pretty much the same as 00:43:149 (43149|2,43149|3,43149|0) - so I think one more note is necessary. (Like you did at 00:52:286 (52286|0,52286|3,52286|2,52438|1,52438|0,52438|3) - good catch

[Normal]

00:04:316 (4316|2,4316|3) - Not placing this in the middle like 00:03:250 (3250|3,3707|1,3707|2) - ? nope, the double having the pattern from 12 - 23- 34 there.
00:52:743 (52743|2,52895|1,53047|3) - Would cause mindblocks to Normal players imo. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6858394? Pretty hard for beginners focusing in the middle, I think. hmm, but it is repeating drum, which i usually use same pattern to emphasize, will keep for now.

That's all, I guess.

Thank you keinginan iam -w-)

Frim4503 wrote:
will mark for mod
you say in chat this map is not generic tivi saizu.
well, let see if you right

please frim :v..

4hri

175 posts

Joined September 2016

4hri 2016-12-22T04:22:54+00:00

hi nm |1|2|3|4|

imperial ...

00:15:585 (15585|1) - move to 3
00:29:976 - add a note to 3

Nice song~

Maxus

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Maxus 2016-12-23T12:14:35+00:00

Ascension_H wrote:
hi nm |1|2|3|4|
imperial ...
00:15:585 (15585|1) - move to 3 nope
00:29:976 - add a note to 3 yes and rearrange some.
Nice song~

Thanks.

-SoraGami-

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-SoraGami- 2016-12-24T12:28:25+00:00

Hi Maxus and Dell =w=

oke, here's my mod
(these are just my suggestions so feel free to reject =3=)

Column Format:
4K = |1|2|3|4|

[Easy]

- umm... i think these notes 00:00:814 (814|1,1271|3,1728|0,2184|2) are not enough to cover those guitar sounds, it doesnt feel that special while playing even tho this is an EASY diff, i think you could add more after each notes like here 00:00:966 - 00:01:423 - 00:01:880 and then make this 00:02:184 (2184|2) an LN ending on 00:02:641 - it can also add some impact feeling for these notes 00:02:641 (2641|1,2946|3) caused by the LN (better to place the LN in inner columns to differ its sound from the the rest of the LNs that has stream sound) up to you =w=

- 00:14:976 (14976|1,15585|1) - how about move these to 1? feels more better if placed in the outer column, feels more impactful, something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6885720

- i still think that it is better to follow the melody here 00:49:088 instead of the crash sounds 00:48:936 (48936|2,49240|2) to be consistent with the melody, it feels sudden changing the pace that fast

- 00:52:743 (52743|2,53047|1,53352|2) - feels a bit weird to play, because the starting note 00:52:743 (52743|2) is softer than the others and carries the weird feeling until the end, how about something the same to this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6886020

- 01:00:053 - you missed a note here, bass sound like 01:09:799 -

[Normal]

-~~00:09:646 - maybe add note here? feels weird cutting the flow here and feels sudden since the whole section here has 1/2 flow bundle like 00:06:753 and also to be consistent with 00:14:520~~ nvm xD guitar?

- in here 00:30:357 - 00:32:794 - 00:34:012 - you missed the snare sounds here that should have been a double notes, yah

- i think you should atleast consider adding 1 more note either of these two 00:39:037 (39037|0,39190|1) to feel more the impact of the snare sounds, also it is too loud so it might get feel weird

- 00:50:763 - add note here too for the snare sound like 00:51:981

- 01:04:012 - maybe you can remove 1 note? to feel more difference with 01:03:403 and 01:04:621 whether there is a cymbals or not, and also it is not loud as the snare sound

- 01:07:058 - add note for cymbals to be consistent with 00:57:311 and the others

- 01:23:352 - snare sound again xD

[Dell's Hard]

- i dont think these notes 00:02:184 (2184|0,2337|2,2489|2) doesnt resembles the sound that the song gives, i mean the jack feeling should starts at 00:02:184 so maybe you could do a pattern structure similar to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892484 or if you prefer something more smooth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892488

- 00:06:448 to 00:14:672 - based on how you map the jacks in this part, these notes 00:12:235 (12235|3,12388|2) should be aligned in the same column so the jacks can be layered properly with 00:11:322 (11322|3,11474|3,11778|2,11931|2,12235|3,12388|2) like the ones you did on the 1st part here 00:06:448 (6448|1,6601|1,6905|0,7058|0,7362|3,7514|3)

- 00:32:032 - add note? i guess this should be double note to be consistent with the flow here 00:27:159 since they are the same but the sound of the second one is not that strong as the first one

- 00:46:195 - add note? for consistentcy of the sounds you have mapped like 00:45:890 (45890|0,46499|3,46804|3) and so on...

- 00:52:438 - dd note for cymbals, and while we were at it, this part 00:52:743 is some what easy for this diff especially this is the climax part before entering the chorus, and the weight of the notes are kind of light for its sounds... i suggest make it a bit harder, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892804

[Imperial Knights]

- i still think that this 00:00:053 (53|2,53|3,129|1,129|0,205|2,205|0,205|3) is kinda forcefull, same thing with this 00:05:230 maybe you can reduce a note in between like 00:00:129 but idk, (maybe it is just me) slap me xD

- maybe add note here? 00:32:032 i think this should be double note, it is the same with 00:30:814 the only difference is that the sound of the 2nd one is not that strong as the 1st one, but adding this can make a consistent flow

- 00:39:342 (39342|1) - move to 3? feels more balance

- should have an LN here? 00:35:992 and 00:36:144 for consistency with the other parts like 00:38:428 (38428|0,38580|2) and 00:40:865 (40865|0,41017|1) and for the full feeling of the vocals (or the guitar ones) being played, and also you might want to add note in here 00:41:626 for the consistency with 00:36:753

- 00:45:738 (45738|0,46499|2) - can be quite confusing at first whether in which one you are following (the melody or vocals), but i assume it is the vocals because of 00:47:108 so maybe you can remove this 00:45:738 (45738|0)

- should have a LN here? 00:54:875 and 01:04:621 - because it is the same with the others like 00:56:093 (56093|3) and so on...

- 01:15:281 (75281|0) - move to 4, you can notice the pressure in the left hand and then mirror this 01:18:936 (78936|2,79240|1) so you can move this 01:19:545 (79545|2) to 4 for proper balance and then 01:20:154 (80154|1) move to 1 ya.. (just my suggestion)

- 01:22:895 (82895|0,83504|1) - these LNs should be 1/1 long only because it changes pitch here 01:23:200 and 01:23:809 and if you are following the sounds before like 01:19:849 (79849|2,80459|1,81068|2,81677|3) it technically end on those points

i hope this can help
tbh, i really can't find anything worthy to point out while modding this..
because you map ET =w=
rank it already xD

Maxus

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Maxus 2016-12-26T08:42:18+00:00

-SoraGami- wrote:
Hi Maxus and Dell =w= yayy sora D

oke, here's my mod
(these are just my suggestions so feel free to reject =3=)

Column Format:
4K = |1|2|3|4|

[Easy]
- umm... i think these notes 00:00:814 (814|1,1271|3,1728|0,2184|2) are not enough to cover those guitar sounds, it doesnt feel that special while playing even tho this is an EASY diff, i think you could add more after each notes like here 00:00:966 - 00:01:423 - 00:01:880 and then make this 00:02:184 (2184|2) an LN ending on 00:02:641 - it can also add some impact feeling for these notes 00:02:641 (2641|1,2946|3) caused by the LN (better to place the LN in inner columns to differ its sound from the the rest of the LNs that has stream sound) up to you =w= a great catch! acc but i don't want to add double for this diff.

- 00:14:976 (14976|1,15585|1) - how about move these to 1? feels more better if placed in the outer column, feels more impactful, something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6885720 want to make it trill at first, but this also works too ;D

- i still think that it is better to follow the melody here 00:49:088 instead of the crash sounds 00:48:936 (48936|2,49240|2) to be consistent with the melody, it feels sudden changing the pace that fast i decide arrange to follow crash instead, the ascending sound of it feels more fit to be emphasized furthermore.

- 00:52:743 (52743|2,53047|1,53352|2) - feels a bit weird to play, because the starting note 00:52:743 (52743|2) is softer than the others and carries the weird feeling until the end, how about something the same to this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6886020 nice, accepted

- 01:00:053 - you missed a note here, bass sound like 01:09:799 - correct

[Normal]
-~~00:09:646 - maybe add note here? feels weird cutting the flow here and feels sudden since the whole section here has 1/2 flow bundle like 00:06:753 and also to be consistent with 00:14:520~~ nvm xD guitar? yeah guitar :3

- in here 00:30:357 - 00:32:794 - 00:34:012 - you missed the snare sounds here that should have been a double notes, yah blame me

- i think you should atleast consider adding 1 more note either of these two 00:39:037 (39037|0,39190|1) to feel more the impact of the snare sounds, also it is too loud so it might get feel weird i guess

- 00:50:763 - add note here too for the snare sound like 00:51:981 rip xd

- 01:04:012 - maybe you can remove 1 note? to feel more difference with 01:03:403 and 01:04:621 whether there is a cymbals or not, and also it is not loud as the snare sound want to keep it for consistency here.

- 01:07:058 - add note for cymbals to be consistent with 00:57:311 and the others yesss

- 01:23:352 - snare sound again xD i miss too much xd

[Dell's Hard]
- i dont think these notes 00:02:184 (2184|0,2337|2,2489|2) doesnt resembles the sound that the song gives, i mean the jack feeling should starts at 00:02:184 so maybe you could do a pattern structure similar to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892484 or if you prefer something more smooth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892488

- 00:06:448 to 00:14:672 - based on how you map the jacks in this part, these notes 00:12:235 (12235|3,12388|2) should be aligned in the same column so the jacks can be layered properly with 00:11:322 (11322|3,11474|3,11778|2,11931|2,12235|3,12388|2) like the ones you did on the 1st part here 00:06:448 (6448|1,6601|1,6905|0,7058|0,7362|3,7514|3)

- 00:32:032 - add note? i guess this should be double note to be consistent with the flow here 00:27:159 since they are the same but the sound of the second one is not that strong as the first one

- 00:46:195 - add note? for consistentcy of the sounds you have mapped like 00:45:890 (45890|0,46499|3,46804|3) and so on...

- 00:52:438 - dd note for cymbals, and while we were at it, this part 00:52:743 is some what easy for this diff especially this is the climax part before entering the chorus, and the weight of the notes are kind of light for its sounds... i suggest make it a bit harder, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892804

[Imperial Knights]
- i still think that this 00:00:053 (53|2,53|3,129|1,129|0,205|2,205|0,205|3) is kinda forcefull, same thing with this 00:05:230 maybe you can reduce a note in between like 00:00:129 but idk, (maybe it is just me) slap me xD i rearrange a bit, but i still want the minijack there wkwk

- maybe add note here? 00:32:032 i think this should be double note, it is the same with 00:30:814 the only difference is that the sound of the 2nd one is not that strong as the 1st one, but adding this can make a consistent flow i guess :3

- 00:39:342 (39342|1) - move to 3? feels more balance sure

- should have an LN here? 00:35:992 and 00:36:144 for consistency with the other parts like 00:38:428 (38428|0,38580|2) and 00:40:865 (40865|0,41017|1) and for the full feeling of the vocals (or the guitar ones) being played, and also you might want to add note in here 00:41:626 for the consistency with 00:36:753 much better now, thanks :3

- 00:45:738 (45738|0,46499|2) - can be quite confusing at first whether in which one you are following (the melody or vocals), but i assume it is the vocals because of 00:47:108 so maybe you can remove this 00:45:738 (45738|0) nice catch here.

- should have a LN here? 00:54:875 and 01:04:621 - because it is the same with the others like 00:56:093 (56093|3) and so on... added and rearrange

- 01:15:281 (75281|0) - move to 4, you can notice the pressure in the left hand and then mirror this 01:18:936 (78936|2,79240|1) so you can move this 01:19:545 (79545|2) to 4 for proper balance and then 01:20:154 (80154|1) move to 1 ya.. (just my suggestion) at first wanna make it anchoring, but okay :3

- 01:22:895 (82895|0,83504|1) - these LNs should be 1/1 long only because it changes pitch here 01:23:200 and 01:23:809 and if you are following the sounds before like 01:19:849 (79849|2,80459|1,81068|2,81677|3) it technically end on those points really nice here

i hope this can help
tbh, i really can't find anything worthy to point out while modding this.. your mod really bring a huge improvement here, believe me
because you map ET =w= yu et , found many mistake here -w-
rank it already xD will do!

Thank you so much sora xD
that is one hell of great mod there :3 , haven't encounter it for a while

Maxus

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Maxus 2016-12-28T16:52:15+00:00

Dell's Reply

Dellvangel wrote:
-SoraGami- wrote:
[Dell's Hard]
- i dont think these notes 00:02:184 (2184|0,2337|2,2489|2) doesnt resembles the sound that the song gives, i mean the jack feeling should starts at 00:02:184 so maybe you could do a pattern structure similar to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892484 or if you prefer something more smooth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892488 the jack seems fine for me since i hear 00:02:184 (2184|0,2337|2) - have different pitch each other.

- 00:06:448 to 00:14:672 - based on how you map the jacks in this part, these notes 00:12:235 (12235|3,12388|2) should be aligned in the same column so the jacks can be layered properly with 00:11:322 (11322|3,11474|3,11778|2,11931|2,12235|3,12388|2) like the ones you did on the 1st part here 00:06:448 (6448|1,6601|1,6905|0,7058|0,7362|3,7514|3) nice, rearranged.

- 00:32:032 - add note? i guess this should be double note to be consistent with the flow here 00:27:159 since they are the same but the sound of the second one is not that strong as the first one nice catch, should be mapped with 2 notes for kick sound, added.

- 00:46:195 - add note? for consistentcy of the sounds you have mapped like 00:45:890 (45890|0,46499|3,46804|3) and so on... added a note on column 1, i forgot to map the hi-hat there.

- 00:52:438 - dd note for cymbals, and while we were at it, this part 00:52:743 is some what easy for this diff especially this is the climax part before entering the chorus, and the weight of the notes are kind of light for its sounds... i suggest make it a bit harder, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6892804 added the note for the cymbal sound, but the second one that you pointed here, i rearranged it with my own pattern.

Thanks sora for mod

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined December 2013

Critical_Star 2016-12-30T11:41:11+00:00

Meow

Column 1 2 3 4

All DIFF
00:49:697 - there is kick here too, add W
00:28:682 - remove W, since there is no kick sound here
01:02:870 - add W (kick)

Easy
Hitsound
> 00:00:205 (205|0,509|2) - add F , it is fine to use double hitsound for a note in easy diff
> 00:02:641 (2641|1,2946|3) - both C and F
> 00:03:707 (3707|2,4316|0) - W and F
> 00:06:144 (6144|0) - add F
> 00:08:580 (8580|0) - add C
> 00:11:017 (11017|1) - add F
> 00:13:454 (13454|1) - add W
> 00:23:200 - add F
> 00:14:672 (14672|2,14976|0,15281|3,15585|1) - all W and C
> 00:15:890 (15890|2) - add C
> 00:25:636 - add F
> 00:30:509 - add W
> 00:34:164 - add W
> 00:37:819 - add F
> 00:39:342 (39342|0,39646|3) - add C
> 00:40:256 (40256|0) - add F
> 00:42:692 - add W
and so on, i think u get the idea for all these single hitsounded lol

Mod
> 00:17:413 (17413|2,17565|3) - i think it will be nice to make it 1-4 or 4-1 for kick variation here like 00:16:195 (16195|0,16347|3) -
> 00:21:525 (21525|3,21677|0,21829|1,21981|2) - maybe http://puu.sh/t5EmX/c493c98661.png (left hand kick and right hand drum kick)
> 00:23:047 (23047|2,23200|0) - like before my idea, u can CTRL+G it
> 00:25:636 - think should be fine using double note here to start a new phase beat
> 00:35:382 - same here for another new phase beat
> 00:54:875 - ^ really good for double note
> 01:00:966 (60966|2) - why not make into a vocal LN just like u did at 00:59:748 (59748|1) -
> 01:10:712 (70712|0) - here too ^
> 01:14:367 - double note?

Normal
> 00:09:646 - missing note?
> 00:34:469 (34469|2,34469|3,34621|2,34621|3,34773|0,34926|0) - they have the same sound but different note usage, i suggest 4-1 1/2 trill here > http://puu.sh/t5ETk/af18a91033.png
> 00:39:037 (39037|3,39037|2,39190|0,39190|1,39342|2,39342|3,39646|0,39646|1) - how about this? > http://puu.sh/t5EXp/0c9c309798.png
> 01:24:723 (84723|3,85027|1) - CTRL+G?

Dell's Hard
> you can change it to Angel's Hard if u like
> 00:35:078 (35078|2) - move to 1? instead of 34 maybe 12 for the ending double
> 00:44:748 (44748|3,44824|1) - CTRL+G could be nice for kick variation
> 00:52:743 (52743|0,52743|1,52895|1,53047|2,53047|0,53200|0,53352|1,53352|2,53504|2) - not sure if it is just me or i find the pattern here is a little off due to different note usage which the sound is about the same here, how about > http://puu.sh/t5FuA/2d48fa0f03.png ? a short LN tril will fit the electronic guitar sound better
> 00:59:443 (59443|2,59520|3,59596|1,59672|0) - maybe > http://puu.sh/t5Fxi/1e4a0610f1.png ? suggestion for kick variation
> 01:01:118 (61118|3) - the pattern flow seems better by removing the snare note here, what do you think?
> 01:10:865 (70865|0) - ^

<<<<3333

Imperial Knights
> 00:34:469 (34469|1,34469|2,34469|3,34621|1,34621|0,34621|2) - not double like others here?
> 00:53:809 (53809|2,54113|2) - maybe move to the 4?
> 00:59:748 - doesn't seems hard to have triple for crash here, add at 2 would be nice
> 01:03:403 (63403|3,63403|1,64012|1,64012|2) - why not triple? since from the beginning there is always a minijack after double trill, so i guess it won't hurt to have triple here

nicee 'w'

call me back after fix

Maxus

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Maxus 2016-12-30T13:28:40+00:00

Critical_Star wrote:
Meow u kitty

Column 1 2 3 4

All DIFF
00:49:697 - there is kick here too, add W
00:28:682 - remove W, since there is no kick sound here
01:02:870 - add W (kick) acc all

Easy
Hitsound
> 00:00:205 (205|0,509|2) - add F , it is fine to use double hitsound for a note in easy diff
> 00:02:641 (2641|1,2946|3) - both C and F
> 00:03:707 (3707|2,4316|0) - W and F
> 00:06:144 (6144|0) - add F
> 00:08:580 (8580|0) - add C
> 00:11:017 (11017|1) - add F
> 00:13:454 (13454|1) - add W
> 00:23:200 - add F
> 00:14:672 (14672|2,14976|0,15281|3,15585|1) - all W and C
> 00:15:890 (15890|2) - add C
> 00:25:636 - add F
> 00:30:509 - add W
> 00:34:164 - add W
> 00:37:819 - add F
> 00:39:342 (39342|0,39646|3) - add C
> 00:40:256 (40256|0) - add F
> 00:42:692 - add W
and so on, i think u get the idea for all these single hitsounded lol decided to double all the Single HS xd

Mod
> 00:17:413 (17413|2,17565|3) - i think it will be nice to make it 1-4 or 4-1 for kick variation here like 00:16:195 (16195|0,16347|3) -
> 00:21:525 (21525|3,21677|0,21829|1,21981|2) - maybe http://puu.sh/t5EmX/c493c98661.png (left hand kick and right hand drum kick)
> 00:23:047 (23047|2,23200|0) - like before my idea, u can CTRL+G it
> 00:25:636 - think should be fine using double note here to start a new phase beat
> 00:35:382 - same here for another new phase beat
> 00:54:875 - ^ really good for double note
> 01:00:966 (60966|2) - why not make into a vocal LN just like u did at 00:59:748 (59748|1) -
> 01:10:712 (70712|0) - here too ^
> 01:14:367 - double note? applied all

Normal
> 00:09:646 - missing note? was following guitar, the idea is from the imperial knight diff, the LN in that diff = note in normal diff around this section.
> 00:34:469 (34469|2,34469|3,34621|2,34621|3,34773|0,34926|0) - they have the same sound but different note usage, i suggest 4-1 1/2 trill here > http://puu.sh/t5ETk/af18a91033.png the clap one is bigger than the W one, want to emphasize that by note differences.
> 00:39:037 (39037|3,39037|2,39190|0,39190|1,39342|2,39342|3,39646|0,39646|1) - how about this? > http://puu.sh/t5EXp/0c9c309798.png yay
> 01:24:723 (84723|3,85027|1) - CTRL+G? sure

Imperial Knights
> 00:34:469 (34469|1,34469|2,34469|3,34621|1,34621|0,34621|2) - not double like others here? same like normal xd, bcoz the drum is bigger and is C sound, want to emphasize it xd
> 00:53:809 (53809|2,54113|2) - maybe move to the 4? sure
> 00:59:748 - doesn't seems hard to have triple for crash here, add at 2 would be nice aaaa everytime 14-23 or 13-24 jumptrill, i always intentionally make the crash double to avoid people hate me for hard pattern x.x
> 01:03:403 (63403|3,63403|1,64012|1,64012|2) - why not triple? since from the beginning there is always a minijack after double trill, so i guess it won't hurt to have triple here aaaaa yeah same like above, i set it so the only minijack occurs only from 12-34 jumptrill, since minijack at 197bpm from 13-24 or 14-23 people may angry at me x.x"

nicee 'w' xie xie ;D

call me back after fix

Thank you bintang for mod

now waiting for dell -w-

EDIT: yayy the reply xd

Dellvangel wrote:
Critical_Star wrote:
Dell's Hard
> you can change it to Angel's Hard if u like lmao, everything is okay for you.
> 00:35:078 (35078|2) - move to 1? instead of 34 maybe 12 for the ending double oki.
> 00:44:748 (44748|3,44824|1) - CTRL+G could be nice for kick variation nice, applied.
> 00:52:743 (52743|0,52743|1,52895|1,53047|2,53047|0,53200|0,53352|1,53352|2,53504|2) - not sure if it is just me or i find the pattern here is a little off due to different note usage which the sound is about the same here, how about > http://puu.sh/t5FuA/2d48fa0f03.png ? a short LN tril will fit the electronic guitar sound better look unique, okay, and re-arranged some notes too around this part.
> 00:59:443 (59443|2,59520|3,59596|1,59672|0) - maybe > http://puu.sh/t5Fxi/1e4a0610f1.png ? suggestion for kick variation re-arranged with similar pattern from your suggestion, also did something on 01:09:037 - since it should be same each other..
> 01:01:118 (61118|3) - the pattern flow seems better by removing the snare note here, what do you think? oh yea, deleted because it should be same with 00:59:900 - which doesnt have a note there since i only focus with the "waw waw" sound and the drum.
> 01:10:865 (70865|0) - ^ ^

<<<<3333 <3 <3 <3Thanks star for the meow

Wokay, Updated! xd

Critical_Star

Beatmap Nominator

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Critical_Star 2016-12-30T15:05:48+00:00

rechecked and boom

EDIT: rebubbled to fix some LN consistency

Last edited by Critical_Star 2017-01-21T03:15:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Maxus

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Maxus 2016-12-30T15:10:01+00:00

Critical_Star wrote:
rechecked and boom

Xie xie kitty

Sandalphon

1,470 posts

Joined May 2013

Sandalphon 2017-02-01T17:27:34+00:00

[Easy]
00:40:256 - Add one to emphasize the vocal and finish
Thats all for this diff
[Normal]
00:07:971 - Pls reduce the LN to 00:08:276 - , the pitch change at that timing
00:12:844 - Same for this one
[Hard]
00:04:316 (4316|0) - Quite sure this one suppose to finished at 00:04:621 -
00:04:773 (4773|1,4926|3) - Same pitch, will be nice if you place them at same col
00:07:971 - LN should be finished at 00:08:276 - if its for the guitar (this mod also apply to other LN
[Imperial Knights]
00:46:499 (46499|2) - The main sound start at 00:46:651 - ,pls fix. Then extend 00:46:195 (46195|1) - till 00:46:651 -
00:48:327 (48327|1) - I dont see any reason will this LN is placed at this timing, since the main sound star at 00:48:174 -
00:48:936 (48936|0,49393|3) - If those two are for the bass, 00:49:545 - this is the timing when they change the pitch. If they are for the main sound, then each of them should star at 00:49:088 - and 00:49:545 -

Thats all, call me when you finish

Dellvangel

1,269 posts

Joined November 2014

Dellvangel 2017-02-02T12:21:22+00:00

YaHao wrote:
[Hard]
00:04:316 (4316|0) - Quite sure this one suppose to finished at 00:04:621 -
00:04:773 (4773|1,4926|3) - Same pitch, will be nice if you place them at same col
00:07:971 - LN should be finished at 00:08:276 - if its for the guitar (this mod also apply to other LN

Fixed everything, thanks.

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192,192,34164,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,65687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65839,128,2,67058:0:0:0:0:
320,192,66144,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,66296,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,66601,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,66905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67058,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67058,128,2,68276:0:0:0:0:
448,192,67362,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67971,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68276,128,2,68885:0:0:0:0:
192,192,68428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,68428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68580,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,68733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69037,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69113,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,69190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69266,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,69494,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69494,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69494,128,0,69799:0:0:0:0:
448,192,69799,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69951,128,0,70103:0:0:0:0:
192,192,70256,128,2,70408:0:0:0:0:
64,192,70256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70408,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,70560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,70560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70712,128,2,70865:0:0:0:0:
192,192,70712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71017,128,2,71169:0:0:0:0:
64,192,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71169,128,8,71322:0:0:0:0:
448,192,71169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,71474,128,2,71778:0:0:0:0:
448,192,71474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,71931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71931,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,72388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72540,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72692,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,72844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,72997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73149,128,2,73758:0:0:0:0:
320,192,73149,128,4,73758:0:0:0:0:
64,192,73910,128,0,74367:0:0:0:0:
192,192,74367,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74367,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74367,128,0,74824:0:0:0:0:
320,192,74672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74976,128,2,75433:0:0:0:0:
64,192,75281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,75433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75585,128,2,76042:0:0:0:0:
448,192,75890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76195,128,2,76651:0:0:0:0:
64,192,76499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76651,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76804,128,4,77261:0:0:0:0:
64,192,76804,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77108,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77413,128,2,77870:0:0:0:0:
64,192,77717,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77870,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78022,128,2,78479:0:0:0:0:
192,192,78327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78479,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78631,128,2,79088:0:0:0:0:
448,192,78936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79240,128,4,79697:0:0:0:0:
64,192,79240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79849,128,2,80306:0:0:0:0:
64,192,80154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,80306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80459,128,2,80915:0:0:0:0:
448,192,80763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81068,128,2,81525:0:0:0:0:
64,192,81372,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81677,128,4,82134:0:0:0:0:
448,192,81677,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82286,128,2,82743:0:0:0:0:
320,192,82438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82591,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82743,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82895,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82895,128,2,83200:0:0:0:0:
448,192,82895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83504,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83504,128,4,83809:0:0:0:0:
192,192,83504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84113,128,2,84266:0:0:0:0:
448,192,84113,128,8,84266:0:0:0:0:
64,192,84113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84418,128,8,84570:0:0:0:0:
64,192,84418,128,2,84570:0:0:0:0:
448,192,84418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84723,128,8,84875:0:0:0:0:
64,192,84723,128,2,84875:0:0:0:0:
448,192,84723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85027,128,8,85179:0:0:0:0:
448,192,85027,128,2,85179:0:0:0:0:
64,192,85027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85332,128,4,88987:0:0:0:0:
448,192,85332,128,8,88987:0:0:0:0:
64,192,85332,128,2,88987:0:0:0:0:
192,192,85332,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Maxus

Nomination Assessment Team

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Topic Starter

Maxus 2017-02-02T16:21:53+00:00

YaHao wrote:
[Easy]
00:40:256 - Add one to emphasize the vocal and finish
Thats all for this diff applied.
[Normal]
00:07:971 - Pls reduce the LN to 00:08:276 - , the pitch change at that timing
00:12:844 - Same for this one all applied
[Hard]
00:04:316 (4316|0) - Quite sure this one suppose to finished at 00:04:621 -
00:04:773 (4773|1,4926|3) - Same pitch, will be nice if you place them at same col
00:07:971 - LN should be finished at 00:08:276 - if its for the guitar (this mod also apply to other LN
[Imperial Knights]
00:46:499 (46499|2) - The main sound start at 00:46:651 - ,pls fix. Then extend 00:46:195 (46195|1) - till 00:46:651 - this follows the singer's vocal.
00:48:327 (48327|1) - I dont see any reason will this LN is placed at this timing, since the main sound star at 00:48:174 - this too, i follow vocal until 00:48:936 - where i change to guitar, and then follow vocal again at 00:49:849 -
00:48:936 (48936|0,49393|3) - If those two are for the bass, 00:49:545 - this is the timing when they change the pitch. If they are for the main sound, then each of them should star at 00:49:088 - and 00:49:545 - decided to make the second LN started at 00:49:545 -

Thats all, call me when you finish