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IOSYS - Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game [OsuMania|Osu]

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Yanganof
DE
102 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
Yanganof
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 25. Februar 2017 at 18:36:53

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game
Source: Touhou
BPM: 153
Filesize: 18630kb
Play Time: 03:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. DarkLams Basic - 4Key (1,84 stars, 715 notes)
  2. Easy (1,74 stars, 220 notes)
  3. Insane (4,37 stars, 235 notes)
  4. Normal (2,26 stars, 259 notes)
  5. VEZOKs Hard (2,8 stars, 359 notes)


Download: IOSYS - Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game
Download: IOSYS - Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game (no video)
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Added Vezoks Hard diff
finished Normal
Added DarkLams Basic (4K)

28.10.
Updated Vezoks Hard
Added Insane

27.11.
Updatet Normal

31.12.
updated Vezoks Hard


finished easy
Last edited by Yanganof , edited 28 times in total.
VEZOK
DE
103 posts
Joined March 2014
VEZOK
Hier meine Diff:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 77419
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game
TitleUnicode:Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game
Artist:IOSYS
ArtistUnicode:IOSYS
Creator:VEZOK
Version:Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Wakasagihime.full.1517619.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"【Touhou IOSYS PV】Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game【東方】.avi"
//Break Periods
2,23080,25015
2,114806,116519
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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26169,312.5,4,1,0,80,1,0
77419,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
97419,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
138669,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
158669,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
181169,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,138,21
Combo2 : 0,128,0
Combo3 : 0,105,234
Combo4 : 247,102,123

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Hitsounds werde ich später noch hinzufügen
freakDJstar
DE
7 posts
Joined December 2013
freakDJstar
Bin dem modden nicht vertraut, aber für DarkLam mach ich eine Ausnahme ;)

Mod für DarkLams 4k:

TIMING
Eine MENGE an Noten liegen off-Beat! Scheint als wäre beim offset beim Timing Punkt um Sekunde 25 etwas schiefgelaufen. Ich habe mir mal die Freiheit genommen den Fehler zu beheben :)

Zudem waren einige Noten versetzt (offbeat zur eigentlichen Melodie) angeordnet, auch diese habe ich wieder an ihre vorgesehen Position gesetzt.
Hier die gefixte Beatmap: http://puu.sh/rCoLQ/7a3797e4ca.osu


RHYTHM
Ich zähle mal die größeren Sachen auf, die ich verändern würde.
00:16:214 (16214|2) - LN bis zum Taktende ziehen, die Gitarre erklingt so lange
00:17:782 (17782|3,18174|1) - die achtelpausen zwischen den LNs spielen sich ziemlich unintuitiv und decken sich nicht mit der Gitarre, ich würde die LN entweder aneinander angrenzen lassen also länger ziehen oder verkürzen sodass sie sich mit der Gitarre decken.
00:18:567 (18567|2) - LN bis 00:18:959 ziehen
00:39:294 (39294|3) - LN nur bis 00:39:762 ziehen, fühlt sich besser an (optional)
00:44:294 (44294|1) - entwder bis 00:44:919 oder bis 00:45:075, die kleine Pause zwischen der LN und der nachfolgenden Note spielt sich unangenehm
00:52:106 - Note hier
00:59:294 (59294|2) - LN bis 00:59:606 ziehen
00:59:919 (59919|3) - LN nicht zwischen den Noten enden lassen. Lieber zusammen mit einer der anderen, das ist angenehmer (zB 01:00:856, 01:01:012 oder 01:01:169 (61169|2))
01:00:075 (60075|2,60231|0,60387|1,60544|0,60700|1,60856|0) - Ein wenig mehr abwechslung in der Verteilung wäre ganz nett :D
01:03:356 (63356|3,63356|2) - Warum 2 Noten? Ich fänds besser wenn du bei der einfachen Melodie auch bei einfachen Noten bleibst um ein wenig einheitlichkeit in der Map zu haben. Der Zweiklang an der Stelle wirkt willkürlich.
01:05:544 (65544|3,65544|2) - die LNs bis 01:05:856 ziehen
01:20:231 (80231|2,80231|1) - Das überschneiden der LNs ist unangenehm zu spielen und deckt sich nicht mit dem Beat. Diese beiden LNs bitte auf 01:20:309 (80309|2,80309|1) verschieben, sodass sie hinter den vorherigen LNs liegen Vorschau
01:21:794 (81794|1,81794|0) - nur bis 01:22:106 ziehen
01:29:919 (89919|2) - in dem Part die Noten umverteilen sodass sie der Melodie besser folgen, zum Beispiel SO
01:33:981 (93981|1) - LNs auf die Spalten verteilen
01:35:856 (95856|2,95856|1) - entweder LNs durch normale Noten ersetzen oder bis zum Taktende ziehen
01:46:794 (106794|1,106794|0) - nur bis 01:47:106 ziehen
01:51:637 (111637|0) - Note entfernen
01:51:794 (111794|0) - Note hinzufügen
01:52:106 (112106|0) - Note entfernen
01:55:934 (115934|3,116090|2,116247|2,116559|0) - versuche nicht Stimmen zu mappen, die nicht im Beat liegen.Versuche stattdessen eine Pause oder LNs zum überbrücken des Parts oder mappe den Beat eines anderen Instrumentes wie Gitarre oder Percussion als Ersatz.
02:04:606 (124606|2,124606|1) - selbes wie in 01:03:356 wegen konsistenz der map
02:04:919 (124919|2,124919|0) - selbes
02:05:231 (125231|2,125231|0) - selbes
02:12:419 (132419|2) - ersetzen mit LN bis 02:12:731
02:16:794 (136794|0) - LN bis 02:17:419
02:17:419 - Note hier
02:23:044 (143044|1) - LN bis 02:23:356
02:43:044 (163044|2) - LN bis 02:43:356
02:50:700 (170700|3) - siehe 01:29:919
02:58:044 (178044|0,178044|3) - Den Teil könnte man ein wenig umändern, um dem Ende ein wenig mehr pepp zu geben :D [img=Beispiel]https://i.imgur.com/MrN8lre.png[/img]
Insgesamt gibt es noch kleine Stellen an denen man was ändern könnte, aber an sich ist die Map schonmal ganz gut.

Tipps:
- Versuche die Position der Noten dem Melodieverlauf anzupassen. Wenn in der Melodie der nächste Ton eine andere Tonhöhe besitzt, sollte in der Regel auch die nächste Note die Spalte wechseln. Das gibt einem mehr das Gefühl als würde man die Melodie selbst spielen und ist intuitiver.
- Achte darauf wo du deine LNs enden lässt. Versuche rauszuhören, wie lange ein Ton gehalten wird und setzen die länger der LN danach fest. Auch das Ende der LN sollte in dem Beat einen sinnvollen Platz finden.
VEZOK
DE
103 posts
Joined March 2014
VEZOK
"später" = 1 Monat :( *sigh


hier nun die Version mit Hitsounds:

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game
TitleUnicode:Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game
Artist:IOSYS
ArtistUnicode:IOSYS
Creator:Yanganof
Version:VEZOKs Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:
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in editor press [ctrl][shift][a] you will see

fix these and check for distance snap. on normal and easy diff(when you have it)

Normal

  1. ur hitsoundvolume is too loud
  2. general comment about lower diffs, its ok to ignore certain sounds, but DO NOT map sounds that are not there.
  3. also remap it with lower base SV, maybe like 1.1 or 1.0
  4. 00:12:292 (4) - what is this mapped tothis is better
  5. 00:13:861 (1) - make this a 1/1 slider no repeat
  6. 00:19:743 (5) - move this to start 00:19:547 -
  7. 00:21:704 (1) - you can end the spinner here 00:24:841 - and it would fit the music better
  8. Since you are mapping vocals so far, it didn't make sense to make these 00:53:669 (1,2,3) - all 1/2 apart
  9. 01:19:919 (1) - why is the 3/4 rhtythm, do not do this, it doesn't fit the music
  10. 01:21:325 - u can do this sound, you should consider reworking the rhythm to be like this because this follows the music better this
  11. 01:22:419 - likewise here you can better follow the vocals with something like this
  12. 01:24:294 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I think this is too hard for a normal player because 1: there are so many circles in a row, and 2: they look like jumps. Use simpler rhythm
  13. 01:27:419 (1,2,3,4) - similar to above

Vekoz's Hard

  1. a general comment would be try to cover more of the screen, its not quite bad how you have it, but you could do more.
  2. 00:10:724 - turn hitsound volumes downto 50 or 40
  3. 00:11:900 (3) - remove clap
  4. 00:12:292 (4) - change sample set to drum
  5. 00:12:684 (5) - remove repeat. and make 00:13:273 - clickable something like this
  6. this is probably better with a drum whistle
  7. 00:15:233 - this sound should be mapped too - maybe something like this
  8. 00:15:429 (4) - at most make this a whistle.
  9. 00:16:018 - this should be clickable
  10. 00:16:998 (1) - make this a finish
  11. 00:16:018 - this and 00:16:606 (5) - should be clickable. like this and remove the clap at 00:16:214 -
  12. 00:18:959 (5) - remove repeat
  13. you need to see if your rhythms are supported by the music.


this map is bugging out my osu holy crap

also I think after you get more mods from people who know what they are talking about, you can remap it.
Yanganof
DE
102 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
Yanganof

Pyroflayer wrote:

in editor press [ctrl][shift][a] you will see

fix these and check for distance snap. on normal and easy diff(when you have it)

I'll add an easy diff after finishing insane

Normal

  1. ur hitsoundvolume is too loud reduced to 60%
  2. general comment about lower diffs, its ok to ignore certain sounds, but DO NOT map sounds that are not there.
  3. also remap it with lower base SV, maybe like 1.1 or 1.0 I'll think about this.
  4. 00:12:292 (4) - what is this mapped tothis is better changed to something similar
  5. 00:13:861 (1) - make this a 1/1 slider no repeat I think it is good as it is now
  6. 00:19:743 (5) - move this to start 00:19:547 - fixed
  7. 00:21:704 (1) - you can end the spinner here 00:24:841 - and it would fit the music better fixed
  8. Since you are mapping vocals so far, it didn't make sense to make these 00:53:669 (1,2,3) - all 1/2 apart I think they fit in there quite well
  9. 01:19:919 (1) - why is the 3/4 rhtythm, do not do this, it doesn't fit the music changed a bit
  10. 01:21:325 - u can do this sound, you should consider reworking the rhythm to be like this because this follows the music better this Mhmm... changed a bit
  11. 01:22:419 - likewise here you can better follow the vocals with something like this ame as with the 1/2 apart before, no change
  12. 01:24:294 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I think this is too hard for a normal player because 1: there are so many circles in a row, and 2: they look like jumps. Use simpler rhythm replaced 2 of them with a slider
  13. 01:27:419 (1,2,3,4) - similar to above ONly 4 in a row, so I'll leave this.

this map is bugging out my osu holy crap

the video in the editor is somewhat of... buggy. yeah. but no problems while playing, so...

also I think after you get more mods from people who know what they are talking about, you can remap it.

Will happen most likely.
Thank you very much!
VEZOK
DE
103 posts
Joined March 2014
VEZOK
Mod~
Vekoz's Hard


a general comment would be try to cover more of the screen, its not quite bad how you have it, but you could do more.
- i think it's fine that way :3
00:10:724 - turn hitsound volumes downto 50 or 40
- check
00:11:900 (3) - remove clap
- and why??
00:12:292 (4) - change sample set to drum
- i like this part way better with soft
00:12:684 (5) - remove repeat. and make 00:13:273 - clickable something like this
- check
this is probably better with a drum whistle
- it's not
00:15:233 - this sound should be mapped too - maybe something like this
- check
00:15:429 (4) - at most make this a whistle.
- nah, thats a finish
00:16:018 - this should be clickable
- check
00:16:998 (1) - make this a finish
- check
00:16:018 - this and 00:16:606 (5) - should be clickable. like this and remove the clap at 00:16:214 -
00:18:959 (5) - remove repeat
- check
you need to see if your rhythms are supported by the music.
- check

new version
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 77419
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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Title:Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game
TitleUnicode:Wakasagihime's 100 Sushi Topping Game
Artist:IOSYS
ArtistUnicode:IOSYS
Creator:Yanganof
Version:VEZOKs Hard
Source:Touhou
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204,108,103044,2,0,P|164:184|168:240,1,130,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
332,231,103669,2,0,P|376:256|392:284,2,65,0|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
196,132,104294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
280,132,104450,1,8,2:0:0:0:
364,132,104606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
224,228,104919,6,0,P|308:280|356:256,1,130,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
332,104,105544,1,2,2:0:0:0:
172,152,105856,1,2,2:0:0:0:
20,76,106169,2,0,P|40:171|8:223,2,130,0|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
140,196,107106,1,8,2:0:0:0:
216,348,107419,6,0,L|304:288,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
220,244,107731,2,0,L|320:176,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
216,148,108044,2,0,L|292:92,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
203,52,108356,1,2,2:0:0:0:
372,60,108669,2,0,L|440:112,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
356,152,108981,2,0,L|412:192,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
351,252,109294,2,0,L|419:296,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
356,352,109606,1,2,2:0:0:0:
188,323,109919,6,0,P|160:255|95:240,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
76,160,110387,1,2,2:0:0:0:
144,108,110544,2,0,P|224:80|240:28,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
388,124,111169,2,0,P|472:164|492:160,2,65,8|0|8,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
344,196,111637,1,2,2:0:0:0:
304,268,111794,2,0,P|352:304|392:296,2,65,8|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
296,100,112419,6,0,P|232:92|184:143,2,130,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
231,256,113356,1,8,2:0:0:0:
384,332,113669,2,0,P|456:296|512:295,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
392,168,114294,2,8,P|300:180|228:232,1,130,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
424,168,117419,5,4,2:0:0:0:
320,300,117731,1,8,2:0:0:0:
152,284,118044,2,0,P|112:208|124:148,1,130,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
284,160,118669,2,0,P|328:136|344:108,2,65,0|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
140,247,119294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
224,247,119450,1,8,2:0:0:0:
308,247,119606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
180,140,119919,6,0,P|264:84|304:104,1,130,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
395,215,120544,1,2,2:0:0:0:
232,252,120856,1,2,2:0:0:0:
68,300,121169,2,0,P|88:204|56:147,2,130,0|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
236,279,122106,1,8,2:0:0:0:
288,156,122419,6,0,P|204:104|156:128,1,130,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
180,280,123044,1,2,2:0:0:0:
340,231,123356,1,2,2:0:0:0:
492,307,123669,2,0,P|472:212|504:160,2,130,0|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
372,188,124606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
295,36,124919,6,0,L|208:96,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
292,140,125231,2,0,L|192:207,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
296,236,125544,2,0,L|220:291,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
308,332,125856,1,2,2:0:0:0:
140,324,126169,2,0,L|72:272,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
156,232,126481,2,0,L|100:192,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
160,132,126794,2,0,L|92:88,1,65,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
156,32,127106,1,2,2:0:0:0:
324,60,127419,6,0,P|352:128|416:144,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
435,223,127887,1,2,2:0:0:0:
368,276,128044,2,0,P|288:304|272:355,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
124,260,128669,2,0,P|40:220|20:224,2,65,8|0|8,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
168,187,129137,1,2,2:0:0:0:
208,116,129294,2,0,P|160:80|120:88,2,65,8|0|8,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
216,283,129919,6,0,P|280:292|328:240,2,130,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
280,128,130856,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,131169,12,8,132106,2:0:0:0:
240,280,132419,5,4,2:0:0:0:
320,131,132731,1,8,2:0:0:0:
152,104,133044,2,0,P|112:180|124:239,1,130,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
284,223,133669,2,0,P|328:248|344:275,2,65,0|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
140,136,134294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
224,136,134450,1,8,2:0:0:0:
307,135,134606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
180,244,134919,6,0,P|263:300|304:279,1,130,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
396,168,135544,1,2,2:0:0:0:
232,132,135856,1,2,2:0:0:0:
68,84,136169,2,0,P|88:180|56:236,2,130,0|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
236,104,137106,1,8,2:0:0:0:
292,132,137419,6,0,L|247:60,2,65,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
276,300,138044,2,0,L|224:219,1,65,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
316,204,138356,2,0,L|368:284,1,65,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
288,316,138669,6,0,P|232:328|216:356,2,65,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
208,168,139294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
372,124,139606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
384,292,139919,2,0,P|480:264|488:268,2,65,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
216,324,140544,1,8,2:0:0:0:
132,176,140856,1,8,2:0:0:0:
288,116,141169,6,0,P|360:136|428:108,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
376,284,141794,1,8,2:0:0:0:
216,232,142106,1,8,2:0:0:0:
52,196,142419,2,0,P|104:148|176:144,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
288,252,143044,1,8,2:0:0:0:
440,184,143356,1,8,2:0:0:0:
360,332,143669,6,0,B|300:343|296:280|188:308,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
84,228,144294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
252,204,144606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
144,72,144919,2,0,B|212:44|212:116|308:84,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
424,156,145544,1,8,2:0:0:0:
292,264,145856,1,8,2:0:0:0:
456,307,146169,6,0,P|368:312|320:332,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
208,208,146794,2,0,P|168:172|160:156,2,65,2|0|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,147419,12,8,148356,2:0:0:0:
224,316,148669,6,0,P|280:327|296:356,2,65,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
303,168,149294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
140,124,149606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
128,291,149919,2,0,P|32:264|24:267,2,65,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
296,324,150544,1,8,2:0:0:0:
380,176,150856,1,8,2:0:0:0:
224,116,151169,6,0,P|152:136|84:108,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
136,283,151794,1,8,2:0:0:0:
296,231,152106,1,8,2:0:0:0:
460,196,152419,2,0,P|408:147|336:144,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
224,252,153044,1,8,2:0:0:0:
72,184,153356,1,8,2:0:0:0:
152,332,153669,6,0,B|211:344|216:280|324:308,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
428,228,154294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
260,203,154606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
368,72,154919,2,0,B|300:44|300:116|204:84,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
88,156,155544,1,8,2:0:0:0:
220,264,155856,1,8,2:0:0:0:
56,307,156169,6,0,P|144:312|192:332,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
304,207,156794,2,0,P|343:171|352:156,2,65,2|0|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
184,88,157419,1,2,2:0:0:0:
96,231,157731,1,2,2:0:0:0:
252,296,158044,1,2,2:0:0:0:
288,68,158669,6,0,P|232:56|216:28,2,65,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
208,216,159294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
372,260,159606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
384,92,159919,2,0,P|480:120|488:116,2,65,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
216,60,160544,1,8,2:0:0:0:
132,208,160856,1,8,2:0:0:0:
288,268,161169,6,0,P|360:248|428:276,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
376,100,161794,1,8,2:0:0:0:
216,152,162106,1,8,2:0:0:0:
52,188,162419,2,0,P|104:236|176:240,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
288,132,163044,1,8,2:0:0:0:
440,200,163356,1,8,2:0:0:0:
360,52,163669,6,0,B|300:40|296:104|188:76,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
84,156,164294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
252,180,164606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
144,312,164919,2,0,B|212:340|212:268|308:300,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
424,228,165544,1,8,2:0:0:0:
292,120,165856,1,8,2:0:0:0:
456,76,166169,6,0,P|368:72|320:52,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
208,176,166794,2,0,P|168:212|160:228,2,65,2|0|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,167419,12,8,168356,2:0:0:0:
224,68,168669,6,0,P|280:56|296:28,2,65,4|0|4,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
304,216,169294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
140,260,169606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
128,92,169919,2,0,P|32:120|24:116,2,65,4|0|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
296,60,170544,1,8,2:0:0:0:
380,208,170856,1,8,2:0:0:0:
224,268,171169,6,0,P|152:248|84:276,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
136,100,171794,1,8,2:0:0:0:
296,152,172106,1,8,2:0:0:0:
460,188,172419,2,0,P|408:236|336:240,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
224,132,173044,1,0,2:0:0:0:
72,200,173356,1,0,2:0:0:0:
152,52,173669,6,0,B|212:40|216:104|324:76,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
428,156,174294,1,8,2:0:0:0:
260,180,174606,1,8,2:0:0:0:
368,312,174919,2,0,B|300:340|300:268|204:300,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
88,228,175544,1,8,2:0:0:0:
220,120,175856,1,8,2:0:0:0:
56,76,176169,6,0,P|144:72|192:52,1,130,4|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
304,176,176794,2,0,P|344:212|352:228,2,65,2|0|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
184,296,177419,1,2,2:0:0:0:
96,152,177731,1,2,2:0:0:0:
252,88,178044,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,178669,12,4,180544,2:0:0:0:
Asherz007
GB
647 posts
Joined September 2016
Asherz007
Hey there! My German's not that good yet, so I'll likely get the message across faster in English. I'll focus on the mania map and give a couple of personal opinions and such:

Also... if this beatmap is going to have a mania option on it, it needs at least 2 maps. Easier or harder doesn't matter, but it does need another one.

4K (0|1|2|3)

In general, it's good... except for the offset problem after the speed up. The realignment shouldn't be too hard, theoretically.

And hitsounds! Put some in! ;)

However, I'm not really a fan of this [00:11:312 (11312|3,11508|3)], and so quite a few suggested edits will revolve around this.
  1. 00:11:508 (11508|3) - Move to column 2
  2. 00:12:880 (12880|3) - Move to 2
  3. 00:13:273 (13273|1) - Move to 0
  4. 00:16:214 (16214|2) - I think this LN should stop at 00:16:606, rather than where it does.
  5. 00:17:782 (17782|3) - LN for 1 beat, rather than slightly less.
  6. 00:17:782 (17782|3) - As above.
  7. 00:18:567 (18567|2) - I don't think this one should be an LN.
  8. 00:20:135 (20135|0) - LN for 2 beats, rather than slightly less
  9. 00:21:018 (21018|3) - Same here, start at 00:20:920
  10. 00:21:802 (21802|2) - LN for 4 beats, rather than slightly less; start at 00:21:704
  11. 00:24:939 (24939|3) - Move to 2


Gets a little difficult to mod from this point, given the timing issue.
  1. 00:40:700 (40700|1) - Move to 3
  2. 00:41:012 (41012|2) - Move to 0
  3. 00:43:669 (43669|2) - Either change this so that it's not an LN, or make the LN end at the start of the next LN.
  4. 00:44:294 (44294|1) - End with [00:44:762 (44762|3)]
  5. 00:57:419 (57419|2) - Move to 0
  6. 00:59:294 (59294|2) - Make sure the end of this LN is the same time as the start of the next LN. (Makes it easier to time the release properly)
  7. 01:03:200 (63200|3) - Move to 1
  8. 01:05:544 (65544|3,65544|2) - Make sure these last 1 whole beat, rather than slightly less. (Hard to tell from the timing issue whether this actually exists or that it's just me)
  9. 01:06:169 (66169|0,66637|2,67419|0,67887|2,68669|3,69137|0,69919|1,70387|2,71169|3,71637|1,72419|0,72887|1,73669|2,74137|3,74919|2,75387|1,76169|3,76481|2,76794|1,77106|0) - This section's a little too simple. You could add a few notes in here from the drums.
  10. 01:19:919 (79919|0,79919|3) - Make sure the end of this LN is the same time as the start of the next LN. Could be a little difficult to time properly otherwise.
  11. 01:29:762 (89762|2) - Move to 0
  12. 01:30:387 (90387|3) - Move to 1
  13. 01:30:856 (90856|0) - Move to 3
  14. 01:31:325 (91325|2) - Move to 0
  15. 01:35:856 (95856|1,95856|2) - These don't need to be LNs.
  16. 01:38:981 (98981|2) - Move to any other column.
  17. 01:40:387 (100387|2) - Move to 3
  18. 01:43:044 (103044|0) - Move to any other column.
  19. 01:43:669 (103669|2) - Move to 3
  20. 01:45:075 (105075|1) - Move to 0
  21. 01:45:231 (105231|2) - Move to 3
  22. 01:45:544 (105544|0) - Move to 1
  23. 01:45:856 (105856|1) - Move to 2 or 3
  24. 01:46:637 (106637|2) - Move to 3
  25. 01:46:794 (106794|0,106794|1) - Make these LNs 1 beat long, rather than slightly more.
  26. 01:49:294 (109294|0) - As above.
  27. 01:52:575 (112575|3,112887|2) - I don't think these need to be LNs.
  28. 01:55:934 (115934|3,116090|2,116247|2) - Something feels ever so slightly off with the timing of these 3 notes.
  29. 01:56:247 (116247|2) - Move to 1
  30. 01:59:137 (119137|2) - Move to 0 or 1
  31. 02:09:294 (129294|1) - Move to 3
  32. 02:11:012 (131012|0) - Move to 3
  33. 02:11:325 (131325|1) - Move to 2
  34. 02:11:481 (131481|3) - It doesn't feel quite right to have an LN here.
  35. 02:15:700 (135700|1) - Move to 2
  36. 02:19:528 (139528|3,139840|2) - Timing is slightly off.
  37. 02:20:622 (140622|2,140778|1,140934|0) - As above.
  38. 02:23:044 (143044|1) - Make sure this is 1 beat long.
  39. 02:29:840 (149840|0) - Timing not quite for the start of the LN.
  40. 02:36:559 (156559|1,156715|0) - Timing not quite right.
  41. 02:41:541 (161541|0) - As above (same with end of LN)
  42. 02:44:666 (164666|2) - As above
  43. 02:47:400 (167400|1) - Make sure this is 3 beats, rather than slightly more.
  44. 02:54:979 (174979|3,175291|1,175604|0,175916|2,176229|1) - Timing not quite right
  45. 02:57:322 (177322|0,177322|3,177635|1,177635|2,177947|0,177947|3) - As above
  46. 03:00:604 (180604|3,180604|1) - I reckon these would work better not being LNs.


Sorry for the long list of minor edits, but the timing issue certainly hasn't helped your case, nor has my dislike for that mapping technique.
Besides, it's better than I flag these and in reality, they turn out to be fine, rather than them being ignored and causing problems later on.

Hope this helps and good luck! :D
Yanganof
DE
102 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
Yanganof
Thanks Asherz007

english is just fine :)
Lam is curently kinda bussy, so i dont know, when he has time for looking a your mod (i hope soon ._.)
I'm waiting for... a long time now. I hope hes finishing his diff sometime xD
6th
FR
592 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
Hey

[Easy]
The beginning may be too intense. In fact, it's as dense as the rest of the map which doesn't make much sense since it's way less intense.
00:29:919 (3) - End it at 00:30:544 - ?
00:38:669 (4) - It doesn't really follow the song, does it ? What you can do is ending it at 00:39:294 -, repeating it and fill up the gap after.
00:43:669 (5) - Consider spacing its end more from (4).
00:47:419 (3) - Work on consistency. Why is that slider so long when others are really short ?
01:07:419 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NCs
01:21:481 (4) - Flows weirdly for a beginner diff. CTRL+J ?
01:36:481 (4) - 2 circles instead ?
01:54:919 - You really don't want to map that part ? ):
02:03:669 (6) - Use a long slider as you did just before.
02:57:731 (5) - 2 circles ?
This really looks like a Normal rather than a Easy imo but well...
Imagine if that were the first map you would have played :/

[Normal]
00:38:669 (1,6) - Use sliders OR spinners, avoid using both for consistency.
00:54:294 - It would be more intuitive if this was clickable.
01:20:544 (2,3,4,5) - Difficulty spike here. You shouldn't suddenly map that much ticks.
01:23:200 (3) - There is nothing really dominant on its head to justify it being clickable.
02:46:169 (1,2,3,4) - Considering these are the only stacked circles of the map, you should unstack them because beginners won't know if it's 1/1 or 1/2.
02:57:419 (1) - Insert a direction change here ?
The rhythm is not that bad but you need to work on structure/aesthetics. Stuff like 01:31:794 (4,2) - aren't that pretty for example, you could have made a blanket.

[Hard]
00:38:669 (1,2,3) - Symmetry could be better.
00:39:919 (4,5,6) - This looks cool but in fact the flow is really inintuitive. Make a better transition between 00:39:919 (4,5) - .
00:43:669 (1) - That spinner is quite sudden and really short. Could you get rid of it ?
00:44:919 (1,2,3) - What you seem to be mapping starts at 00:45:075 - , therefore it should be clickable.
Half of the map is copy pasted so I stop there.

Good luck !
Yanganof
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Yanganof

6th wrote:

Hey

[Easy]
The beginning may be too intense. In fact, it's as dense as the rest of the map which doesn't make much sense since it's way less intense.
I think it's okay, since theres already lower bpm. Han't got anything todo with the map itself, but it's less intense

00:29:919 (3) - End it at 00:30:544 - ? fixed
00:38:669 (4) - It doesn't really follow the song, does it ? What you can do is ending it at 00:39:294 -, repeating it and fill up the gap after.
changed so it conitinues till 00:39:919 - where the vocals end

00:43:669 (5) - Consider spacing its end more from (4). changed a bit
00:47:419 (3) - Work on consistency. Why is that slider so long when others are really short ? following vocals?
01:07:419 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NCs fixed
01:21:481 (4) - Flows weirdly for a beginner diff. CTRL+J ? fixed
01:36:481 (4) - 2 circles instead ? fixed
01:54:919 - You really don't want to map that part ? ): No :/
02:03:669 (6) - Use a long slider as you did just before. I prefer it the way it is now.
02:57:731 (5) - 2 circles ? fixed and removed point at 02:57:731 (5) -

This really looks like a Normal rather than a Easy imo but well...
Imagine if that were the first map you would have played :/
I started with beginenrs diff... not with easy xD


[Normal]
00:38:669 (1,6) - Use sliders OR spinners, avoid using both for consistency. fixed
00:54:294 - It would be more intuitive if this was clickable. fixed
01:20:544 (2,3,4,5) - Difficulty spike here. You shouldn't suddenly map that much ticks. removed point at 01:21:325 -
01:23:200 (3) - There is nothing really dominant on its head to justify it being clickable. fixed

02:46:169 (1,2,3,4) - Considering these are the only stacked circles of the map, you should unstack them because beginners won't know if it's 1/1 or 1/2.
is now a triangle

02:57:419 (1) - Insert a direction change here ?
No. I don't really see why?

The rhythm is not that bad but you need to work on structure/aesthetics. Stuff like 01:31:794 (4,2) - aren't that pretty for example, you could have made a blanket.

You're right. I'll give this another look

Good luck !
Thanks!
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