Nymph_ wrote:

Hi~ Nymph_here and here is my beginner mod~

general:

because you have changed the offset after you finished the map, so some of the timing lines goes off.please fixed them.
the sliderball is just shining, so maybe you can also use a beautiful hitcircle and a hitcircleoverlay? still can not find a better one

01:38:372 (5,6,7) - not very beautiful. I know you want to make a shape using 4~7. But I think using 2~7 to make a shape is even better.
nah..this is a section which is waiting for next part of map...
01:39:122 (1,2,3) - why are these notes so crowd here? BPM didn't change, seperate them. that's whyi make 4~7 are close to 1,2,3
02:00:122 (1) - make this slider just hit on the white and the red line is better. the sound on the blue line feel weird. still cant handle it , waiting for
02:02:122 (1) - same as 02:00:122 (1). ^
02:02:872 (2) - maybe remove this? just suggestion. ^
02:10:122 (2) - well. these sounds a little little different with the drums..but I don't know how to deal with these..so...just keep it now.
feel good ,k but i just del a note (02:10:497).
02:13:497 (5) - maybe this place can be a note and the slider starts from 02:13:622? just suggestion. nah
02:48:622 (4) - stack it perfectly. k
02:50:247 (2) - I think this one can be removed. It sounds a little unnecessary. k
02:59:372 (1) - well.. I don't understand these following notes's spacing..maybe you have some particular meanings?
yea..you got it~ but i think i just be lazy with this part..

so, that is all! I think it is so good and much better than my map... I really learnt something from it~

star~[/color]

LuPiiTa wrote:

Hello there~

Hard

00:59:872 (x) - Maybe add a note here? nah
01:00:122 (4) - Add whistle nah
01:40:122 (1) - Delete new combo yep
01:43:122 (3) - Make this slider more right nah
01:55:122 (1) - Strange slider ^
02:31:122 (1) - ^ ^
03:00:372 (5) - I think Spacing is strange here, fix it k

Uhh sorry for poor mod e.e
Star!