Lunet wrote:

늦어서 죄송합니다. 무엇이든지 할 테니까 용서해 주십시오. 무엇이든지 합니다. 추잡한 것은…
마음에 걸리는 부분이 있으면 변경해도 문제 없습니다 "~"/

1. 1024x600 bg cause your combo/accuracy display being cut by black border
   inconsistency of red(uninherited) timing section:
2. 00:18:097 - i know all solo diff has a spinner at this time, but still..only taiko diff use a red line to adjust offset here
3. [Lunet] - all red line need to be moved +18ms
4. also, lunet diff has different audio lead-in and preview time (though the difference is small)

1. 00:16:115 (1) - end this spinner on blue ticks as [Lia] and [Insane] did.
2. 00:20:599 (1) - this suddenly goes from "very noisy" to "very quiet", you should consider other hitsound
3. 00:37:142 (4) - add finish (difference is small but taiko players will be pleased)
4. 00:37:969 (1,3) - whistle endpoint instead of startpoint
5. 01:07:349 (1,2,1,2,3) - ok two thing, first- can be confusing as an Easy, second- tickpoint appear on red ticks which is wierd, if you want to enhance the vocal, how about using special-shaped slider? for example:
   
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6. 01:18:521 - slient this tickpoint
7. 01:26:797 - ^
8. 01:40:038 - ^
   also you have some red tick sliderticks in chorus part, it's a relatively obvious hitsound and fits a little bad to me, consider silent/lowering the volume of them?

1. NOTE: i use your current (wrong) offset in this modding post
2. KIAI line must be snapped (on white ticks)
3. 00:00:847 (1) - remove whistle on slider body? other sliders are ok, but this one really sounds too loud
4. 00:16:097 (1) - end this spinner on blue ticks as [Lia] and [Insane] did.
5. 00:38:486 (T) - lower volume in this section? too loud for me
6. 00:41:280 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix the spacing evenly
7. last thing i have to mention your hitsound pattern, they just appear as piles, like (n=normal w=whistle) nnnnnnn and wwwwwww, usually mixing like nnwnnnwn provides better effect, some example:
   00:33:004 (3,4,5) - x,x,clap,x,whistle,whistle,whistle
   00:41:280 (1,2,3,4) - x,x,whistle,x,x,x,whistle,x
   01:21:831 (3,4,5,6) - clap,x,clap,x or x,x,clap,x
   01:35:073 (3,4,5,6) - same^
   ...
   not necessary to fix, just my point of view

1. 00:37:142 (1) - slider fits more than spinner for me (want to hit something at 00:37:142!)
2. 00:41:280 (3) - new combo
3. 01:00:521 (7,8) - clap instead of whistle?
4. 01:06:624 (4) - shorten by 1/4 and add a circle at 01:06:935?
5. 01:08:486 (x) - add a circle if you applied above fix
6. 01:10:142 (x) - ^
7. 01:35:486 (5) - whistle (for hitsound consistency)
8. 01:36:935 (4) - ^, whistle endpoint
9. 01:46:659 (1-9) - how about using grid snap and make this stream symmetrical to y-axis?
10. 02:09:624 (2-6) - ^
    actually there're more similar layout which are a few grid off from symmetrical, but i leave them to you~

1. 01:02:176 (25,26,27,28) - kd kd? (background G-D D-B here)
2. 01:21:004 (1) - big D?

1. starting part - add some whistle ;_;?
2. 00:34:349 (8) - move 1/4 ahead (00:34:245)
3. 00:51:211 (1) - finish instead of whistle, or you can add clap like 01:06:107 (1)
4. 01:00:521 (12,13,14) - pattern like this really need hitsound. it lacks "feeling of hitting"
5. chorus - adding claps on these notes can bring nice effect:
   01:22:038 (7) -
   01:23:693 (6) -
   etc. (red tick before every 4th white tick)
6. 01:25:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard x_x

y u c a wrote:

o mozy(・∀・)！

y u c a

BG size 800x600 or 1024x728 is good O:

Easy

00:21:427 (1) -remove whistle and add finish (end of slider) and volume is 00:20:599(T)40%,00:21:427 (T)60% is better imo Fixed~
00:51:211 (1) - add finish Fixed~
01:06:107 - ^ Fixed~
01:12:728 (1) - ^ Fixed~
01:14:383 (2) - ^ Fixed~
01:16:038 (1) -^ Fixed~
02:05:683 (1) - ^ Fixed~


insane

00:36:314 (1.3.4) - add finish Fixed~
00:56:590 (4,6) - kirei na stack here?eigo wakannnai Orz... like this Fixed~

SPOILER

01:06:107 (1) - add finish Fixed~
01:13:969 (6) - ^ Fixed~
01:14:383 (1) - ^ Fixed~
01:15:624 (6) - ^ Fixed~
01:16:038 (1) - ^ Fixed~
02:07:349 (1,3,4) - ^ Fixed~
02:09:004 (1) - ^ Fixed~


ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

loveFantasy wrote:

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]

• 01:02:176 (25,26,27,28) - kd kd? (background G-D D-B here)

1. All diffs: Add ''studio ryokucha'' in the tag (The game company) ''すたじお緑茶''
2. Ok just that problem I can see, so let's move on to the diffs.

1. Goob job~

1. 00:05:615 (1) - imo , it has a bit hard for the new players. I suggest:
   
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2. 00:43:762 (6) - The same problem here, If you do this ↓ , it can let the players know they should turn right.
   
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3. 01:09:418 (3) - If you do agree to me ^ , you will know how to change it XD
4. 01:31:349 (2) - looks hidden here, find a scheme to fix it as well.
5. The diff has a bit hard as a Normal , but I think it's fine Nice~

1. 00:23:900 (4,5,6,7,8) - Has a bit too hard as a Hard diff>< Can you use other patterns?
2. 01:26:590 (4,5,6,7) - change it to slider?
3. To be honest, it's really a Insane diff , less jumps as well.

1. 00:39:624 (6) - Should add a New combo here?
2. 00:52:866 (8) - In fact I don't like the combo number >10, that's why I suggest so manynew combo here, but if you don't agree this, just ignore it~
3. 01:26:590 (1) - New combo here because the spacing changed.
4. 01:58:866 (5,6) - Oh that's the only one big spacing 1/4 , I guess it will fake some player *w*..
5. Nice hitsound <3

1. OD-1? =A= I don't know why you set OD6 here w.
2. Good job as always<3