Sprite,Background,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
 F,0,0,,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Black.png",320,240
 S,0,87610,,1.906667
 F,0,87610,88428,1
 M,0,87610,91701,320,240,320,237.8667  <- Useless and wrong code
 F,0,88428,89519,1  <- can be conbined with line 2

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Black.png",320,240
 S,0,87610,,1.906667
 F,0,87610,91701,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\White.png",320,240
 S,0,-2116,31701,4.274667,4.276454
 F,0,-2116,36065,1
 M,0,1156,96064,318.9333,238.9333,319.4923,237.8666 <- Useless and wrong code
 S,0,31701,199700,4.276454,4.285334 <- Useless and wrong code
 F,0,36065,52974,1
 F,0,52974,83792,1
 F,0,83792,87065,1
 F,0,87065,87610,1,0
 F,0,87610,91428,0
 F,0,91428,91701,0,1
 F,0,91701,160701,1
 M,0,96064,182245,319.4923,237.8666,320,238.9333 <- Useless and wrong code
 F,0,160701,161246,1,0
 F,0,161246,164519,0
 F,0,164519,164791,0,1
 F,0,164791,218518,1
 M,0,182245,240472,320,238.9333,320,236.8 <- Useless and wrong code
 F,0,218518,219063,1,0
 F,0,219063,222336,0,0.1304452
 F,0,222336,222609,0.1304452,1
 F,0,222609,244154,1
 M,0,240472,274972,320,236.8,320,235.7333 <- Useless and wrong code
 F,0,244154,318216,1
 M,0,274972,320790,320,235.7333

Ranking Criteria wrote:

There must not be any unnecessary transparency around storyboarded images, so crop and resize them as much as possible. If there are particular reasons for apparently useless transparency, then please explain them. For transparent sprites, there should be at least one pixel of transparent border around them so that interpolation (e.g. a black-bordered image on a black background) works properly (although a shadow or glow around the image will fix this problem as well).

1. More of the storyboard's problem, but towards the end(from 04:52:427 - to 05:09:881 - ), the red indicator of hypers in this section are literally 'whitened' out because of the BG. Picture1 Picture2 You should definitely be fixing this as it really disturbs players from reading the hypers. I am not an expert on fixing BGs, but maybe you could make the middle part of the BG(where there are light) and the flashes a little bit more darker.
2. In the lyrics folder, regarding 's4.png', isn't the text should be 'back in the days', instead of 'back in da days'? Unless there is an official source supporting the current lyrics, the lyrics should be modified to a proper article. While we are on that topic it would be good if you got someone who knows japanese well to check on the japanese lyrics.

1. 02:14:791 (3) - This is equally strong to the previous notes, so why not add a cymbal here? The vocals doesn't differ too much as well.
2. 03:00:200 (1) - Although the song got a lot more weaker here, the vocal which you emphasized with a hyper at 01:46:973 (1) - is still apparent, so at least I would give a dash.
3. 04:10:290 (3,4,5) - Really expected more movement here, considering this is the last kiai(which is the most strongest out of all), and due to the strong vocals on the previous notes. You didn't make 3-vertical circles in this way before so it could be surprising for some players as well - so I would instead add a curve or something. You could possibly move (4) to the left a little bit to make a curve going to the left.

koliron wrote:

<3 aesthetic

Nozhomi wrote:

Fruits are healthy ~