[General]Why do you have "fall" twice in the tags?
"of" is a too general tag
I suggest instead of "fall of fall" use "Autumn Fall" i remember this song better by that name on the original version by ZUN
And on the tags subject you could also add the name of the game the original comes from "Mountain Faith" (since "of" is a tag that is too general)
Use 2 seconds audio lead-in
[Insane]00:16:140 (1,2,3,4) - Either lower HP drain or add more notes in this section, you lose half your health IF YOU 300 EVERYTHING.
01:56:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - The stack is making the notes go out of bounds, i suggest you move this down.
03:10:613 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Could align these better check
Example[Hard]00:06:034 (1,2,3) - I recommend you use a silenced soft-sliderslide in these and ONLY these.
01:12:824 (6) - I'd say remove this note, i dont see what it's following and it sounds better without this note, since it sounds like an extra cymbal to the rythm, very awkward
01:16:929 (3) - Pretty disorienting i kept tripping here because i was following the lyrics so i didnt expect this slider to repeat so often.
03:13:139 (1) - Slider end sounds off, i dont recommend you use a repeat for this one, instead remove the repeat and add a note at: 03:13:929
[Normal]Normally, for a normal i'd say the slider speed is ok... however this is the easiest diff of the mapset, meaning that this has to be nice to newbies... and 1.0 SV at 190 bpm is just too much,
either slow this down or include an easier diff on your mapsetJust because it's the easier diff doesnt mean you should be scared from red lines for example: 01:10:613 (1,2) Sound really off, i'd suggest something like this:
Follows the music better and there's still a nice 1/1 gap between both sliders.
01:56:245 (4,5,6,7) - Sorry but no... this is too much for the easiest diff of the mapset, 1/2 stacks at 190 bpm is just... no >.<
02:12:508 (1,2) - I dont see any reason for these to be stacked, it also looks pretty awkward on the playfield, it would be less confusing and simpler to just unstack them, you can still achieve symmetry, etc.
Well that was simple, wont give star icon since the mapset still doesnt have a proper Easy tho, i'll rehceck when you've done fixes, etc.