Thank you for the mod! <3Logic Agent wrote:
(you're not from my queue but I made this cute graphic recently so fk it I'm putting it everywhere xD)
M4m stuff~
[General]Oh. Hm. I'm not sure what'd I would change it to exactly, but I'll ask around if I need to
- Maybe put the preview point on a different kiai? Idling on this preview point makes it just repeat itself over and over, there's so much more of this great song to be heard!
Ah, changed it to the first chorus- For your Insane diff, maybe put a unique diffname like Falling or Scattered
[Insane]I loooooooove this song and this is map is nice! Hopefully with these changes you'll be on the road to ranking it! osu needs more reoooooooooooooooollllll!!
- 00:01:231 (1) - maybe shorten this so it only repeats once, and then put a note on the white tick?
Hmm. If I do that, I'll be missing a beat on: 00:01:407 -- 00:03:106 (7) - nc
Okay~- 00:03:106 (7,8) - also I've mentioned it to you before but you really have a thing for super tight blankets hehe. I'm not going to mention it past this one, but I think making your blankets more loose would look [url=http://i.imgur.com/aBkTs9N.png]so much better[url]
Oh okay, Changed what I saw- 00:02:403 (5,6) - I think an antijump here would be more fitting
Um, I'm not sure what an anti-jump is- 00:04:278 (3,4) - ^ these are purely suggestive though and would just be how I would map this
^^^^- 00:05:216 (2) - 2 circles maybe? and do something like this
I'm not sure because the synthy noises starts at the beginning of the slider and ends at the end, two circles would just leave it empty inbetween, but I'm not sure yet. I'll come back to this!- 00:13:185 (1,2) - oh hey look, a loose blanket
- 00:15:997 (4,5,6) - I would make the spacing of the 5 and 6 on the tail of 4 smaller, maybe like .7 ds or something
The reason I have it at ds 1 is so that it's the same speed of the slider that you have to contiune~- 00:16:935 (1) - making this into 2 circles could make a cute lil pattern
I kinda like it too, but same as above, I'll have to check it out later and get other's opinions- 00:16:935 (1,2,3) - also, back to the tight blankets I see? You should pick one and stay consistent
Yeah changed from before~- 00:20:216 - totally a personal thing but removing the note here follows the vocals just as well and is a nice break in flow.. 00:20:450 (5) - would need to be repositioned though
It feels kind of out of place if that's the only break in the whole song I think :<- 00:20:685 (1,2,3) - if you like that flow-breaky change than this is another fitting one and plays just as well
^^^^- 00:25:606 (4) - x341 y223 to make 00:25:841 (5) - more emphasized?
I feel like a larger jump there out of nowhere is a little odd, but I do kind of like that.. IDKajuaeflauf- 00:34:513 (5) - don't think this should be 3/4
Ahh okay changed- 00:38:263 (3,4) - maybe play around with the spacing here some as you're leading into the kiai?
I actually made the slider velocity lower here leading into the bridge lol- 00:41:778 (1) - putting a nc here is kinda cute
sure why not- 00:43:419 - important sound being skipped here
The whole point of the first bridge was to only map the beat of the main drum, which is why it's kind of scarce in notes, the second one though does 00:41:778 (1) -- 00:54:903 (3) - this is a suggestion for every kick like this (so 00:54:903 (3) - 00:56:778 (4) - 00:55:841 (8) - etc) try to emphasize them through spacing or using sharper angles than the rest a little bit more. I'm not going to point them all out for times sake but if you want to try and improve them a bit it might look and feel better to play!
Aaaaaa that gets rid of the nice triangles they make :< Although I'll probly do something with them now that you mention it.Okay so here's what I'm gonna do, the first chorus won't have any changes, the second one will have slight ones, and the last will have the biggest? idk I think that's okay, we'll see~Actually, after going through it, doing so kind of messes up the structure I already had in place :<- 01:00:997 (1) - you could nc here if you want
aaaa idk- 01:05:216 (6,1) - nazi blanket mod here
I suk at these ;-;- 01:06:856 (6,1,2) - ^
rip- 01:12:247 (4) - two circles maybe?
Same as above^^- 01:16:231 (4,1) - ctrl + g
yeah- 01:17:169 (3,4) - ctrl +g or make the slider into 2 circles... also you could have some fun with the spacing here cause the music spikes a tiny bit
I like the ctrl g thing~ Changed a few other things here- 01:20:685 (1) - nc
weeeeee- 01:26:310 (1,2) - blanket
cry- 01:31:700 (5,2) - blanket
ery- 01:35:216 (5,1) - blanket (ok I'll be honest I didn't start paying much attention to the blankets until recently so you might wanna go back and recheck the rest of them)
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rip- 01:37:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think maybe having 1 2 3 closer together and then bigger spacing on the 4 5 would help emphaisize the lyrics
Not sure if this plays well, but I cchanged it- 01:38:263 (5,6,7) - with that being said I think that putting the 1/2 slider 01:38:263 - here and then having 2 circles helps follow the lyrics better.. so maybe find a nice compromise between the two
I can agree that 01:38:497 (6) - might not follow the lyrics, but i'm not sure about the other stuff. I'll probly change this note though somehow. The slider afterwards is there because she ends the note there- 01:39:903 (2) - maybe make this higher up and to the right a tad
ah I didn't realize this was weirdly spaced- 01:47:638 (3) - turning this into a kickslider with 2 circles afterwards might be kinda neat
Ahh this part follows the lyrics, but I might do that in the last chorus?- 01:48:810 (1,2) - I would space these a tiiiiiiiiiiny bit more
idk I think its okay- 01:49:981 (5,6) - ctrl +g?
I kinda like the way it is- 01:50:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would adjust the spacing here by toning it down in general but having emphasis on the jump between 01:51:622 (4,5,6) - these
Changed~- 02:01:114 (4) - overmapped
Changed, but I'm not sure I like what I changed it to- 02:04:630 - but if you wanted you could do a note here to make triples on these kinds of noises
Ahh I could've huh, dang that's gonna be a lot of adjusting ;-; I'll have to do it later- 02:07:091 (6,1) - super nazi blanket here
Changed the slider completely- 02:08:966 (7,2) - less nazi of a blanket here
Oh whoops my bad- 02:10:138 (3,4) - ^
aaaaaa nazis are bad :<- 02:27:247 (4) - move this down some?
It fits the ds tho :<- 02:29:591 (5,1,2) - fix this somehow, by either putting the 5 on the tail of 2 or blanketing the 5 into the 1
Oh wtf, I had this correctly before, I must've messed it up- 02:36:622 (4,5) - ctrl + g to have a click on kick (i hate that i can't say this without it rhyming zz)
Changed, not sure it's great though- 02:38:966 (4,5) - stack maybe?
wait what?- 02:45:529 (2,5) - blanket
yeah- 02:48:810 (1,2) - ^
aaaaaaa- 02:49:981 (5,7) - ^
aaaaaaaaaa- 02:50:216 (6,7) - also maybe make the angle between these two sharper to emphasize the lyric
I kinda like the DS change instead- 02:54:200 (6) - nc here maybe?
ah idk about that- 03:04:278 (2,5) - I'm being a bit of a nazi aren't I >>;
maybe- 03:08:731 (8,1,2) - ^
aaa- 03:12:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe do a rhythm like this for the ending?
ah okay
yay