怎么就没人说Insane难度做得好呢。
kiva杯具

Snowy Dream wrote:

:| 怎么就没人说Insane难度做得好呢。
kiva杯具

STRESS.

eveless wrote:

[Yuki]
00:15:777 (1) - 把这里分解成note+slider或者slider+note或者note note note 等等其他排列 总之现在这个节奏不太好lol 这里应该还行把
00:22:230 (1,2) - 这边的音效转换有点不自然 建议跟前面一样 fixed 我也觉得哪里有点怪异
00:30:079 (5) - 改成note + 3连折返 或者5连折返 不知道是不是这样?
00:34:789 (x) - 加个note fixed
00:36:358 (8) - 有点太近了 间距还可以拉远点 会打快 fixed
00:39:672 (1,2,3,4) - 这还可以拉开点 让5不要靠到slider fixed 1.2*distance
00:57:114 (1) - 后退1/2 现在的节奏有点难抓
01:37:579 (3,4) - 拉开一点 不要靠住5 fixed 1.2*distance

yuki难度做的真不错:3 thx

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu

reverted unwanted mod

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Hard].osu

纯补完 don't kds

[General]

Preview point in Easy/Normal is different..

Offset: 595

00:46:639~01:01:639: Take care of this part, you need 1/3 beat snap divisor for some beats. (only for Insane diff actually..不用1/3梗感觉亏了...实际上I难度的这段也是感觉最失望的..缺少蓄势感

[Normal]

Seriously the slider velocity is too high = =...

Use distance snap wisely...I can't understand your spacing well = =

00:16:649 (3,1) - Stacking = =?
00:21:533 (1,1) - Spacing
01:06:707 (3) - Move 1/2 beat backward and extend this for 1/2 beat?
01:10:370 (4,5) - Move 5 up? and rearrange 4 like this?

[Hard]

Well...I don't like the arrangement much..too many stacks around center; also I don't feel the diff flows well as I play = =

00:27:463 (3,1) - Spacing?
00:54:498 (5,1,2) - Stacking
01:00:080 (5,1,2) - ^
01:02:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how you expect players to hit these without any transition...Merge them into one slider? ._.

[Insane]

00:27:899 (4,5) - add finish?
00:34:430 (2) - Finish begin
00:36:348 (10) - Move here to make 00:36:872 (2) more visible?
00:39:139 (4,5) - Finish?
01:05:651 (1,2) - Stacking
01:11:755 (7) - New combo?
01:20:999 (7) - finish?
01:31:290 (1) - ^

[Yuki YukI]

00:29:033 (2,6,3) - Any reason to slow down these?

= =..有些喧宾夺主的感觉 还好分不多

= =..sorry for the long delay

Insane fixed.
other diff wait for mapper's response.

ok H I Yuki难度弄好了

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Insane].osu

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Hard].osu

good!

Lyrics:
雷神の右腕
雷神的右腕


遥かなる　時の彼方
遙遠時空的彼方
一人の英雄の物語…
一位英雄的故事…

混沌を纏し　邪悪なる神々
飄揚渾沌之中 邪惡的諸神
破壊の日々に戯れ
日日以破壞為樂
かつて　楽園と呼ばれた大地は
在過去 被譽為樂園的這片大地
その輝きを　失った…
當時的光輝 已不復見

絶望が　呼び寄せた
絕望中被呼喚的
吹き荒れる　嵐の中
現身於猛烈的暴風雨中
勇敢な戦士が
勇敢的戰士啊
神々に　戦いを挑んだ…
向諸神挑起了戰鬥…

戦いは　壮絶を極め
征戰啊壯烈至極
天地は　揺れ動いた
乾坤啊地働天殤
戦士が　右腕と引き替えに
戰士以右腕做為代價
放った　雷の槍は
放出了雷之槍
天を裂き　地を割り
蒼天崩解 大地割裂
遂に　神々を打ち倒した…
終於 打倒了諸神…

戦士は　英雄と呼ばれ
歌頌為英雄的戰士啊
神と崇められた
被當成神一般尊崇
戦士は　その右腕を失い
犧牲了右腕的戰士啊
神と崇められた…
被當作神一般尊崇…

やがて　時は流れ
不久後 時光流轉
街角の子供達は問う
街角的孩子這樣問著
雷神には何故
雷神為什麼
右腕が無いのかと…
沒有右腕呢…

00:27:463 (3,1) - Spacing? it's an Easy jump + pattern need
00:54:498 (5,1,2) - Stacking
01:00:080 (5,1,2) - ^ aren't them arleady stacked?
01:02:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how you expect players to hit these without any transition...Merge them into one slider? ._. there are hard with longer stream

_Kiva, an instrumental with lyrics?

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

_Kiva, an instrumental with lyrics?

Yeah .. this is a story song but they decided not to have vocals even though they have written the lyrics for it.

卧槽那Lyric要干嘛......

Ohai

General
* Black.png should start in 00:00:000 on design mode
* If you want have a blank skin, make sure that blank skin dimensions is 1x1. Otherwise, it'll be makes the filesize are big

Easy
00:06:176 (T) - You don't need to add green timing section for volume. Just change the volume in red timing section
00:07:571 (2) - Press "Ctrl+>" twice and "Ctrl+R", if you stay this, the pattern will be odd to see
00:24:315 (2) - Move further away from 00:22:920 (1) to make the spacing stay consistent
00:17:339 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
00:34:083 (1) - ^
00:36:874 (1) - ^
00:53:269 (2) - ^
01:00:594 (1) - ^
01:22:920 (K) - Snap the kiai to 01:15:943
01:24:315 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
01:27:804 (2) - ^
01:31:292 (4) - Don't use too much 1/2 repeating slider, remove few/lots of repeating slider or remap this part. Otherwise, average player can't tell how many repeating slider they are

Normal
I feel like "Normal+" for me, since it's a little bit difficult for average player. Perhaps, change the diff name to "Normal+"? I am pretty not sure D:

00:06:176 (T) - You don't need to add green timing section for volume. Just change the volume in red timing section
00:06:176 (1) - It's a bit weird if this 2% curve. Make a parallel instead.
00:09:664 (2) - Inconsistent spacing. It's automatically move 1 grid right when I trying to move this
00:14:548 (1,2) - Move further away from 00:13:153 (1), look at 00:13:676 to see why
00:18:734 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
00:19:432 (1) - Stack with 00:18:734 (1). If you can't stack it, move further away
00:22:920 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
00:23:618 (2) - ^ (no jump for normal diff please)
00:24:316 (1) - ^
00:25:711 (1) - Inconsistent spacing. It's automatically move 1 grid right when I trying to move this
00:26:409 (2) - ^
00:27:106 (3) - Inconsistent spacing
00:27:629 (4) - Would be nice if this stack with tail slider in 00:27:106 (3) to make easier
00:28:851 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
00:30:944 (1) - ^
00:33:734 (5) - ^
00:36:874 (1) - ^
00:37:397 (2) - ^
00:59:374 (2) - ^
01:00:595 (2) - ^
01:01:903 (3) - Move 1/4 forward
01:12:281 (7) - Inconsistent spacing
01:16:641 (2) - ^
01:17:339 (1) - ^
01:22:920 (1) - ^
01:27:106 (1) - ^
01:38:269 (1) - ^

Hard
* I would like to see the volume is high in hitsound

00:21:786 (3) - Inconsistent spacing
00:26:408 (4,5,6,1,2) - Pattern looks odd for me, can you make a flower pattern?
00:36:525 (1) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
00:39:664 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
01:23:618 (3) - ^
01:38:269 (1) - Remove finish? It's a drum sound you know?

Yuki YukI
Fine

Insane
00:07:571 (1) - Don't put this object behind slider, it covered with hitbursts
00:20:827 (3) - ^
00:53:618 (8) - New combo for spacing change
01:06:525 (4) - These slider are bit weird
01:11:757 (1) - Reduce the jump please. It hard to reach that, especially for fast song

I'm sorry for long mod! I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm sorry!

Hard
* I would like to see the volume is high in hitsound

00:21:786 (3) - Inconsistent spacing
00:26:408 (4,5,6,1,2) - Pattern looks odd for me, can you make a flower pattern?
00:36:525 (1) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
00:39:664 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
01:23:618 (3) - ^ for the pattern sake
01:38:269 (1) - Remove finish? It's a drum sound you know? (there was a Finish like song plus a default Normal-hitmormal sound)

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Hard].osu

加油 star一个

Leorda wrote:

Insane
00:07:571 (1) - Don't put this object behind slider, it covered with hitbursts -fixed
00:20:827 (3) - ^ -fixed
00:53:618 (8) - New combo for spacing change -fixed
01:06:525 (4) - These slider are bit weird -it's ok
01:11:757 (1) - Reduce the jump please. It hard to reach that, especially for fast song -it's ok, this is made for insane

LesTrucsRose wrote:

01:07:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - I can't follow this.

-it's ok

=w=

00:38:618 (1) - I couldn't see this beat overlayed like that. Try increasing the distance snap of 00:37:222 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3).

no need to make it harder, deleted (2)

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Hard].osu

eveless wrote:

[Normal]
01:01:911 (3) - 这个换掉吧 用其他的加法比较好 毕竟最后一个音结束也不是结束在蓝线而是后面的红线 而且感觉3蓝线的话也有点早...全部后移1/4吧 fixed
01:04:789 (3) - 遮slider的箭头不好fixed

Selee wrote:

[Normal]

Seriously the slider velocity is too high = =... fixed
Use distance snap wisely...I can't understand your spacing well = = =.=

00:16:649 (3,1) - Stacking = =? fixed
00:21:533 (1,1) - Spacing fixed
01:06:707 (3) - Move 1/2 beat backward and extend this for 1/2 beat? fixed
01:10:370 (4,5) - Move 5 up? and rearrange 4 likethis? fixed

Leorda wrote:

Normal
I feel like "Normal+" for me, since it's a little bit difficult for average player. Perhaps, change the diff name to "Normal+"? I am pretty not sure D: I think it doesn't need/ It seems that the rating is a litter high , but I think it's easy for players to play.

00:06:176 (T) - You don't need to add green timing section for volume. Just change the volume in red timing section fixed
00:06:176 (1) - It's a bit weird if this 2% curve. Make a parallel instead. fixed
00:09:664 (2) - Inconsistent spacing. It's automatically move 1 grid right when I trying to move this fixed
00:14:548 (1,2) - Move further away from 00:13:153 (1), look at 00:13:676 to see whyfixed
00:18:734 (1) - Inconsistent spacingfixed
00:19:432 (1) - Stack with 00:18:734 (1). If you can't stack it, move further awayfixed
00:22:920 (1) - Inconsistent spacingfixed
00:23:618 (2) - ^ (no jump for normal diff please)fixed
00:24:316 (1) - ^fixed
00:25:711 (1) - Inconsistent spacing. It's automatically move 1 grid right when I trying to move thisfixed
00:26:409 (2) - ^fixed
00:27:106 (3) - Inconsistent spacingfixed
00:27:629 (4) - Would be nice if this stack with tail slider in 00:27:106 (3) to make easierfixed
00:28:851 (2) - Inconsistent spacingfixed
00:30:944 (1) - ^ fixed
00:33:734 (5) - ^ fixed
00:36:874 (1) - ^ fixed
00:37:397 (2) - ^ fixed
00:59:374 (2) - ^ fixed
01:00:595 (2) - ^ fixed
01:01:903 (3) - Move 1/4 forward fixed
01:12:281 (7) - Inconsistent spacing fixed
01:16:641 (2) - ^ fixed
01:17:339 (1) - ^fixed
01:22:920 (1) - ^fixed
01:27:106 (1) - ^ fixed
01:38:269 (1) - ^ fixed

sorry I'm too late.;_;
Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Normal].osu

啥时候来个雷神的左腿。。

[Easy]
boost the volume to 60% at the first parts. AT LEAST.
0:08:967 (3,4) - those sliders are missing a whistle at their ends
1:13:850 - 1:15:943 - insert a break time
1:32:688 (1) - finish at its end?
1:35:478 (1) - ^
1:36:874 (3) - ^

[Normal]
just like in the beginning, boost the volume on first 20 secs, please.
0:27:978 (1) - finish at its beginning?
0:53:269 (1) - delete new combo

[Hard]
0:21:699 (2,3,4) - spacing
1:02:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - such a stream on a hard?
1:38:269 (1) - don't really like that loud spinner's ending, i'd suggest silencing it

[Yuki YukI]
0:16:292 (2) - new combo, because this slider's velocity is different than (1)'s
0:22:222 (1) - delete new combo

[Insane]
0:35:827 (8) - move it by one grid to the left
0:39:664 (1) - one grid to the right
1:26:060 (11) - one grid higher
1:25:711 (8) - new combo, so it follows the pattern
1:26:408 (1) - delete new combo, so it follows the pattern too
1:37:571 (1) - ^

it deserves a star, i think
good luck ;)

nicemap!
FIGHT!
(　^ω^)ノ・・・☆★☆★

rEdo wrote:

[Normal]
just like in the beginning, boost the volume on first 20 secs, please.
0:27:978 (1) - finish at its beginning?
0:53:269 (1) - delete new combo

ALL FIXED

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Normal].osu

[Hard]
0:21:699 (2,3,4) - spacing
1:02:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - such a stream on a hard? it's not that difficult >.<
1:38:269 (1) - don't really like that loud spinner's ending, i'd suggest silencing it

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Hard].osu

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
boost the volume to 60% at the first parts. AT LEAST.
0:08:967 (3,4) - those sliders are missing a whistle at their ends
1:13:850 - 1:15:943 - insert a break time
1:32:688 (1) - finish at its end?
1:35:478 (1) - ^
1:36:874 (3) - ^

rEdo wrote:

[Yuki YukI]
0:16:292 (2) - new combo, because this slider's velocity is different than (1)'s
0:22:222 (1) - delete new combo

[Insane]
0:35:827 (8) - move it by one grid to the left
0:39:664 (1) - one grid to the right
1:26:060 (11) - one grid higher
1:25:711 (8) - new combo, so it follows the pattern
1:26:408 (1) - delete new combo, so it follows the pattern too
1:37:571 (1) - ^

all accepted. thx for modding

holy this is so fun, especially insane, the jumps are so fun, i preferred it over raijin no hidariude
star

gatitoneku wrote:

holy this is so fun, especially insane, the jumps are so fun, i preferred it over raijin no hidariude
star

lolz thanks a lot.

神mapper 这么快就7页了。。
我那图坑了快1年了也就⑨页
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Edit:
Mod~:

_Kiva wrote:

The previous story song of Raijin no Hidariude

你这连接有问题 点不开~多加了个http://
然后最好加上 'by AngelHoney' >.>
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别忘了kds

Download: Sound Horizon - Raijin no Migiude (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu

啊啊星星

一般我看到已经有那么多mod帖子的图都提不太起多少精力，因为我很怀疑再mod下去会有多少实质性的提高。好吧，下面我就鸡蛋里挑骨头。
[Easy]

1. 00:06:176 (1,2) - 这两个感觉如果能弄成一样的会看起来美观些，第二个slider感觉看上去比较舒逸，通过复制黏贴然后平衡旋转能够达到效果。
   
2. 00:36:176 (4) - spacing error. (00:35:827 (x) - 在这一点加一个circle或者把spacing拉大作相应的调整)
3. 01:05:478 (4) - 中间加个finish
4. 01:07:571 (3) - remove clap and add finish
5. 01:22:222 (2) - 移除start的finish并在中间和end部分加finish
6. 01:23:618 (4) - 移除start的finish并只在end加finish

[Normal]

1. 01:12:105 (2,3) - 感觉稍稍有些不太美观，如果能简单的作重叠pattern可能会比较好点。

[Hard]

1. 全程以custom-whislte为主调并不太适合，在高潮部分还是用custom-finish会比较好。

[Yuki YukI]

1. awesome!
2. 00:37:746 (5,6) - 这两个note重叠在4上可能会比较适合，现在你所设的spacing感觉有点尴尬。

[Insane]

1. 01:15:595 (4,5,6) - hmmm,如果是我会移除中间的一个finish...

Sound Horizon <3
No need to say more.

全程以custom-whislte为主调并不太适合，在高潮部分还是用custom-finish会比较好。

listen -> try to remove one custom whistle -> listen ... seems nothing changed XD, won't mod hitsound, then

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

全程以custom-whislte为主调并不太适合，在高潮部分还是用custom-finish会比较好。

listen -> try to remove one custom whistle -> listen ... seems nothing changed XD, won't mod hitsound, then

Ouch, that post should have been written in English. Sorry for my not notice it.

And it doesnt fit the song well that you add hitsounds with custom-whistle as the dominant hue imo.( yea, you used too much)
If I were you, I'd use custom-finish to add hitsound on those warm-blooded rhythm part.

I wont be picky, but If you could accept the suggestion above, that diff would get better.