Sorry for the delays, univ things kinda a bit exploding.
[Sentuhan Avalon]
Wah balik lagi ni ke osu wwkkw
00:13:765 (13765|2) - I felt you can accenting the loud drum better if you make this note at col 4 instead, the stack will be much more emphasized that way.
00:15:640 (15640|1,15875|0,16109|1) - Try make this 1-2-1? it would alleviate the col 2 biases to be more balance, since i felt the diff patterning is around comfortability too.
00:44:234 - Kinda wish you want to add another LN for the rising sound occured here, similar to what you did at 00:59:703 (59703|0) -
01:50:328 (110328|2,111734|2) - I'm not sure if this LNs contain synth kind of sound here.. changing it to normal note seems more fit with the current instrument.
01:52:203 - Although I know the double LN want to follow additional BG effect sound at the back, but it feels didn't suit the pattern structure somehow because of the "suddenly appear" feeling.. i think you can follow the arrangement like
http://puu.sh/uXC3h/be997072dd.png , the reason i also make 01:52:672 - a LN is because it's actually the same sound as 01:45:172 (105172|2,105406|0) -
01:54:781 (114781|2,115015|3) - Switch column here? it will fit a lot more in terms of PR.
01:56:890 - should be added another note to follow low cymbal layering at 01:57:359 - 01:57:828 - ,etc.
[Hyper]
00:48:922 - Feels like this kinda breaks the LN flow considering the one that you make at 00:52:672 - 00:56:422 - which all is LN stairs, I suggest you also make it like
http://puu.sh/uXD6O/783c3e8c95.png , the Pitch also ascending higher here anyway..
01:00:172 - Don't see the reason why is this single, if it's because of avalon's diff also use single, his diff avoid 1/2 shield for that, but in this diff, you don't avoid the shield, so make this double will be more fit.
01:04:859 (64859|1,65093|2,65328|1) - I recommend make these 3-2-3 column here, this way you will got 3-4 double at 01:05:328 - which mirroring 01:03:922 (63922|1,63922|0) - to form better structure.
01:06:968 (66968|3,67203|0) - Also it's better to switch column here , the current flow feels really awkward tbh..
01:20:797 - I recommend you try
http://puu.sh/uXG6j/48c1847e4e.png this, because this section only has 2 jack, while the section at 01:17:047 - have 3 jack, which kinda inconsistent.
01:33:336 (93336|3,93453|1) - you should switch column here, so you got the same pattern as 01:32:750 - , similar to how you did at 01:36:500 - 01:36:968 - , and 01:40:250 - 01:40:718 -
01:54:547 - feels like this breaks the PR things which kinda awkward imo, suggest
https://puu.sh/uXGj4/1054f5c3f3.png01:57:125 (117125|2,117359|1) - Also switch column here, so you can accent the PR differences with 01:57:828 (117828|2) -
[Normal]
00:23:843 (23843|2) - pretty sure this note shouldn't exist if following how you layer at 00:16:343 - 00:20:093 -
01:45:172 (105172|0,106109|0,106578|0,107047|0,107515|0,107984|0,108453|0,108922|0,109859|0) - Felt unnecessary.. I think you can try
http://puu.sh/uXGJh/8a6ca5ccb7.png instead (it starts from 01:47:281 - )
01:48:453 (108453|0) - you might also want to make 1/2 LN seeing how you also make one at 01:55:953 (115953|3) - (you might want to tweak a bit of my suggestion before)
[BANGKE's Easy]
00:26:422 (26422|2,26890|0,27359|1) - You might want to make this 1-4-1 , the drum becoming more prominent here, it's awkward to having the same structure as the pattern before.
00:59:234 (59234|1) - Don't understand with this LN have different start from other diff, since i don't really hear any special sound starting here
01:18:453 (78453|1,78687|2,79859|1,80328|2,81265|1,81734|2,83140|1,83609|2,84547|1,85015|2) - Felt this got repeated too many times.. suggesting that at 01:19:390 - , you make it like
http://puu.sh/uXH4d/4bb9b7555d.png to also mirroring at 01:24:078 -
01:39:078 (99078|1,99547|2) - Feels like switching column here will be much better to mirroring 01:35:797 (95797|0,96265|1,96734|2,97203|3) -
01:41:422 (101422|3) - it's better to move this to col.2 , so that it will also neutralize biases for the jack at the 4th column that occured after this pattern.
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