Krfawy wrote:

I forgot this song existed and then I saw it in your pending maps because I was checking pro mappers if they've been mapping songs I do like. I wish it were the full version. ;_; Still, I love Mako's beatmap. Yeah I know, hope you will make the longer version of this one :p

What a bunch of cute moes in the background! o3o/ I take that as a compliment, thank you <3

Hard

1. How about AR7.7? Fixed
2. 00:36:562 (5) - and 01:21:213 (5) - Personally I'd CTRL+G them to make them flow nicer, just my opinion. Umm I prefer the current position, I want to highlight the bass on both part without using a zig zag pattern
3. 01:32:841 (1,2) - Maybe this would be a nice idea to place the circle on the reverse and to swap the sliderend with the sliderhead? Surely that would easen the transition from the previous note and the flow between another ones would be smoother as well! Isn't that will make the polarity on (2) more harder? actually I prefer this kind of rhythmical which can cover the vocal and have easier polarity to follow
4. 01:43:074 (3,4,5,6) - So in Betreyal difficulty I suggested a circle 01:43:190 - here but I guess it would be a bit too complex in Hard difficulty like this, wouldn't it? Yes I think that will be too much for this diff xD I actually been nerf'd the long stream here 01:27:492 (2) - by using 1/4 reverse and use simple triplet to cover more easier stream to cover the drum sound

Normal

1. How about AR5.2-5.5? Fixed, I use 4.7 instead, if I use 5 or above somewhat the ar will too fast

That's a really great and adorable mapset and I can't wait to see it ranked. Good job Mako, wendao and Alarido, good luck guys! :3 Thanks!

How about a purring cat for you? ~(.=o3o=). I love cat btw

Krfawy wrote:

Betrayal

1. How about AR8.7-8.8? the song is kinda slow and I think AR 8.5 is quite fast enough
2. 00:21:213 (1,2,3) - I know it might be very picky from Krfawy (which is me) but I think the map would play nicer if this part got deleted and a break were pasted instead. It's just because the sounds are quite chaotic here and it's not that rhythmical, so that's why I'm suggesting it even if it's the Insane difficulty. okay, deleted those stupid objects.
3. 00:35:632 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:20:283 (2,3,4,5) - Personally I get confused when I see this slider and then the stacks because firstly my reaction was like "Oh, what a cute, innocent and beautiful 1/2 slider with a nice triple that completes the picute of the marvel!" and then my reality got ruined because I understood that was a 3/4 slider lik the previous one. Maybe it's just me, but it would be less misleading if the pattern was mapped like a regular stream like *THIS* or something similar. Not sure why, but honestly 00:44:120 (6,7,8,1) - that was more obvious than the stack and that was really confusing to me. ;___; k
4. 01:07:725 (1) - I can't help myself thinking the transition between the circle before (01:07:492 (5) - ) and this note and the transition between the very slow slider and the following note (01:08:655 (1) - ) would be improved if the slider was a bit curved like *THIS* actually I used white combocolour here on purpose, but okay.
5. 01:43:074 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you listen carefully with 25% speed, you'll be able to hear there is a specific sound on 01:43:190 - that seems to be the percussion, or >at least< the resembling stuff that would be benefitial if mapped I believe. Simply, I advice the mapper map a circle here and makes a nice penta stream. overmap it a bit, let's see if it works or not.

1. Why using a watermark when you have the original picture? You state that you don't allow the use of that picture anyway, and in the case someone steals your image, that watermark is pretty easy to remove :/
2. I don't see any tracks on the artist's soundcloud, so why pointing it out as a source? In the album that you show the artist is written as "MADCOM
   " (all caps) as well as the title "BEGGIN'". Then I couldn't find this specific track on the official website, there are just a couple of videos which come from YouTube. Also, on the official website, the artist is written in all caps too http://puu.sh/rj13D/46f834ff1e.png
   but for some reason they turn lowercase if I select them O_O http://puu.sh/rj1jb/4cd7075bcb.png

1. 00:18:422 (1) - I hope that's enough recovery time for beginners

1. 00:37:027 (1) - This slider is not exactly off-screen, but it's super very close by a bit, you may wanna move it a bit up, just a tiny bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6146181

ezek wrote:

Hi, pretty girl!

[General]

1. Why using a watermark when you have the original picture? You state that you don't allow the use of that picture anyway, and in the case someone steals your image, that watermark is pretty easy to remove :/ Regarding the watermark, I have been told twice by the photographer that also edited the photo http://puu.sh/rjPZA/140ed27733.png, tl;dr he said I can use the photo as the background on osu as long as I don't crop or remove the watermark, since he put many effort on arranging the photo season that day and editing the whole things up
2. I don't see any tracks on the artist's soundcloud, so why pointing it out as a source? In the album that you show the artist is written as "MADCOM
   " (all caps) as well as the title "BEGGIN'". Then I couldn't find this specific track on the official website, there are just a couple of videos which come from YouTube. Also, on the official website, the artist is written in all caps too http://puu.sh/rj13D/46f834ff1e.png
   but for some reason they turn lowercase if I select them O_O http://puu.sh/rj1jb/4cd7075bcb.png Nowadays many Artist use stylization font for their page and album, and let's we took a look on their official facebook and twitter page, on those page they refers theyself as Madcon instead MADCON (1 and 2). So I believe that caps on Artist and Title only used for stylization purpose only so their page and album more attractive, take a look also on their another album cover http://images.coveralia.com/audio/m/Mad ... rasera.jpg which more like stylization than an official one, but if you think we need a second opinion on this, then I more than welcome to have another discussion on it:)
   

I really don't know what's going on with metadata here, could you get a check on that from someone reliable? (IamKwan or Alacat, I guess)

you may call me back :3

1. 00:18:422 (1,1) - last time I checked we needed about 1500ms of recovery time for theeasiest difficulties, but it's been a while ago. So, make sure that there is enough recovery time, please.
2. 00:56:097 - somewhat sad to see you ignore the strong beat here. Probably you could sacrifice the classical symmetrical look of the slider for a better beat emphasis.
   
   Neat otherwise.

ezek wrote:

[Betrayal]

1. 00:37:027 (1) - This slider is not exactly off-screen, but it's super very close by a bit, you may wanna move it a bit up, just a tiny bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6146181 sure, fixed

ezek wrote:

[Alarido's Soft]

1. 00:18:422 (1) - I hope that's enough recovery time for beginners ► ok, shortened to 00:20:283 - Gracias ^^

you may call me back :3

Bakari wrote:

[Easy]

00:18:422 (1,1) - last time I checked we needed about 1500ms of recovery time for theeasiest difficulties, but it's been a while ago. So, make sure that there is enough recovery time, please. ► ok, shortened to 00:20:283 - спасибо ^^
00:56:097 - somewhat sad to see you ignore the strong beat here. Probably you could sacrifice the classical symmetrical look of the slider for a better beat emphasis. ► Done.

Neat otherwise.

Bakari wrote:

The metadata dude has been summoned Thanks for coming

• MADCON is a stylized version, there isn't really any point in using it.
  
  As for the title, I'd llet mapper decide. Both options are actually fine. the artist prefers Beggin but label and the VEVO channel use Beggin', various album arts also alter between these two, so whatever you decide to go with should be fine. Agree, therefore I chose to use Madcon - Beggin' for the metadata, also I add Begging and Beggin to the Tags just in case if people prefer to write that while searching this map
  
  Neat otherwise.

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Best of luck! Thank you Bakari~

kanor wrote:

[Easy]
01:25:399 (1,2) - maybe we can better the blanket Fixed, just a bit readjust the last node


nice diffs!
GL Thanks kanor~

wendao wrote:

err... fixed missing hitsound on 2 circles

sorry for the inconvenience

http://puu.sh/rpz4R.zip

Haruto wrote:

Congrats kak Mako! Style kaka di bg mirip awkarin imo xD