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Yousei Teikoku - keep existing (Short Ver.)
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@NatsumeRin: Aww, I'm sorry ;_; You can mod it when it's complete instead :3 Thanks for the star and for supporting this, though ><
yaho~
e.e
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Star~
irc modded.
log if needed.
log if needed.
SPOILER
15:31 <osuplayer111> : did you liked my Insane though?
15:32 <NatsumeRin> : haven't checked through, do you want me to mod it now?
15:36 <NatsumeRin> : when you start to love this hitsounds set so much
15:37 <osuplayer111> : but this time at least I've added a custom finish
15:37 <osuplayer111> : what do you think about it?
15:37 <osuplayer111> : and yeah, with yousei teikoku's songs suits perfectly
15:37 <NatsumeRin> : really fits no doubt
15:38 <NatsumeRin> : 7140 yen for the common ver, 10290 yen for the limited ver
15:38 <NatsumeRin> : advertisements wwww
15:38 <osuplayer111> : yeah D:
15:39 <osuplayer111> : no video without them, fuck! xD
15:40 <osuplayer111> : Mafia liked it btw :3
15:41 <osuplayer111> : this time no green lines at all
15:41 <osuplayer111> : if you can suggest some, you're welcome xD
15:41 <NatsumeRin> : i'm trying ww, but i guess it's more like a common modding this time
15:46 <osuplayer111> : so I did it well this time?
15:46 <NatsumeRin> : better than Asgard imo
15:46 <osuplayer111> : awesome
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66301
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : 01:20:027 (2) - for this slider, maybe
15:47 <osuplayer111> : let me try :3
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : a sudden mute, then start
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : is the feeling like this to me
15:47 <osuplayer111> : I tried with 0.5x but they sucks xD
15:47 <osuplayer111> : okay, let me do it
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : 0.5x won't work wel
15:48 <NatsumeRin> : if feel it's hard to draw you could just make one with grid and turn it
15:49 <osuplayer111> : let me restart first, osu! is going out of sync >_>
15:50 <NatsumeRin> : haha
15:50 <NatsumeRin> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66303 and this for
15:50 <osuplayer111> : ok back, hope no more lag x_x
15:50 <NatsumeRin> : 01:26:885 (4) -
15:50 <NatsumeRin> : 01:29:992 (8) - maybe a clap at the beginning
15:51 <osuplayer111> : added
15:51 <osuplayer111> : let's see if I can make that 2 sliders
15:51 <osuplayer111> : I rarely made them xD
15:51 <osuplayer111> : make*
15:52 <NatsumeRin> : haha personally i like sliders like that and did a lot
15:53 <NatsumeRin> : i try to use sliders at those 2 to express a "sudden" feeling
15:53 <NatsumeRin> : 00:39:956 - add a note?
15:55 <osuplayer111> : can you give me the code of that 2 sliders? meh
15:55 <NatsumeRin> : sure
15:55 <NatsumeRin> : a minute
15:55 <osuplayer111> : I'm trying to make them but I'm not satisfied lol
15:55 <osuplayer111> : thanks
15:56 <osuplayer111> : added the note too btw
15:57 <NatsumeRin> : 8,90,80027,2,8,B|32:110|32:110|33:121|33:121|43:109|43:109|44:120|44:120|148:208,1,180,8|8
15:57 <NatsumeRin> : first
15:57 <NatsumeRin> : 218,210,86885,2,8,B|233:222|281:222|297:254|281:286|233:286|217:254|233:222|281:222|313:198,1,180
15:57 <NatsumeRin> : second
15:58 <NatsumeRin> : you may need to adjust where they placed (and notes after it) though
15:59 <osuplayer111> : txt order doesn't matter or it does?
15:59 <NatsumeRin> : dunno, better to keep the original order i guess
15:59 <NatsumeRin> : i always do so
15:59 <osuplayer111> : ok :3
16:04 <NatsumeRin> : [Easy] 00:51:099 (1) - i'll suggest to reduce one repeat
16:06 <NatsumeRin> : [Normal]01:03:099 (1,2,3) - disagree with the notes here
16:07 <NatsumeRin> : since it's better to follow the vocal imo...
16:08 <NatsumeRin> : a quick check through the 2 easier diffs and i think they're mostly fine, a little not sure about many 1/2 triples in Normal though, but BPM is
16:08 <NatsumeRin> : only 140 so anyway
16:10 <osuplayer111> : fixed easy
16:10 <osuplayer111> : removed 2 on normal
16:10 <osuplayer111> : I didn't liked that too
16:10 <NatsumeRin> : ._.
16:11 <osuplayer111> : just forgot to remove xD
16:11 <osuplayer111> : 1st slider of the 2 you gave me has only 1 of the 4 points red T_T
16:11 <osuplayer111> : osu!bug XD
16:12 <NatsumeRin> : ...
16:12 <NatsumeRin> : orz why
16:12 <osuplayer111> : T_T
16:12 <osuplayer111> : there is no way to select them?
16:12 <NatsumeRin> : need i to get the code again?
16:12 <osuplayer111> : and made them red?
16:13 <NatsumeRin> : emm, i draw one slider like that in axis-X first and turn 40 degrees
16:13 <NatsumeRin> : clockwise
16:13 <NatsumeRin> : the 4 red lines is just 1 grid in grid level 3
16:13 <osuplayer111> : hrid 4?
16:13 <osuplayer111> : grid*
16:14 <NatsumeRin> : red points
16:14 <NatsumeRin> : in grid level 4 i can't get anything clearly all i can see is grids....
16:16 <osuplayer111> : maybe I copied slider code bad @_@
16:17 <NatsumeRin> : 8,90,80027,2,8,B|32:110|32:110|33:121|33:121|43:109|43:109|44:120|44:120|148:208,1,180,8|8
16:17 <NatsumeRin> : shouldn't be problems...@_@
16:18 <osuplayer111> : http://puu.sh/1ego I forgot this lol
16:19 <osuplayer111> : wtf o_O
16:19 <NatsumeRin> : ...XDDD how could you
16:19 <osuplayer111> : now 2 points are red out of 4
16:19 <osuplayer111> : whaaaat XD
16:19 <osuplayer111> : *suicide*
16:19 <NatsumeRin> : checke the 4 points (32:110 33:121 43:109 44:120)
16:20 <NatsumeRin> : and see if they're wrote double(red)
16:20 <NatsumeRin> : oh 43 109 and 44 120
16:20 <NatsumeRin> : poor guy
16:20 <osuplayer111> : ohhh
16:20 <osuplayer111> : I get it
16:21 <osuplayer111> : I resolved itDD
16:21 <NatsumeRin> : but how could you copy a line and skip some in that line...
16:21 <NatsumeRin> : wtf...
16:21 <osuplayer111> : I copied carefully orz
16:21 <NatsumeRin> : type it, XDD
16:22 <osuplayer111> : correct code
16:22 <osuplayer111> : 8,90,80027,2,8,B|32:110|32:110|33:121|33:121|43:109|43:109|44:120|44:120|148:208,1,180,8|8
16:22 <NatsumeRin> : yes
16:23 <osuplayer111> : ok I'll finally upload everything XD
16:24 <NatsumeRin> : i'll go to get my kudosu ww
16:24 <osuplayer111> : of course, you helped a lot xD
16:24 <NatsumeRin> : also i heard that now if you did a irc modding you need to post the log then..?
15:32 <NatsumeRin> : haven't checked through, do you want me to mod it now?
15:36 <NatsumeRin> : when you start to love this hitsounds set so much
15:37 <osuplayer111> : but this time at least I've added a custom finish
15:37 <osuplayer111> : what do you think about it?
15:37 <osuplayer111> : and yeah, with yousei teikoku's songs suits perfectly
15:37 <NatsumeRin> : really fits no doubt
15:38 <NatsumeRin> : 7140 yen for the common ver, 10290 yen for the limited ver
15:38 <NatsumeRin> : advertisements wwww
15:38 <osuplayer111> : yeah D:
15:39 <osuplayer111> : no video without them, fuck! xD
15:40 <osuplayer111> : Mafia liked it btw :3
15:41 <osuplayer111> : this time no green lines at all
15:41 <osuplayer111> : if you can suggest some, you're welcome xD
15:41 <NatsumeRin> : i'm trying ww, but i guess it's more like a common modding this time
15:46 <osuplayer111> : so I did it well this time?
15:46 <NatsumeRin> : better than Asgard imo
15:46 <osuplayer111> : awesome
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66301
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : 01:20:027 (2) - for this slider, maybe
15:47 <osuplayer111> : let me try :3
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : a sudden mute, then start
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : is the feeling like this to me
15:47 <osuplayer111> : I tried with 0.5x but they sucks xD
15:47 <osuplayer111> : okay, let me do it
15:47 <NatsumeRin> : 0.5x won't work wel
15:48 <NatsumeRin> : if feel it's hard to draw you could just make one with grid and turn it
15:49 <osuplayer111> : let me restart first, osu! is going out of sync >_>
15:50 <NatsumeRin> : haha
15:50 <NatsumeRin> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66303 and this for
15:50 <osuplayer111> : ok back, hope no more lag x_x
15:50 <NatsumeRin> : 01:26:885 (4) -
15:50 <NatsumeRin> : 01:29:992 (8) - maybe a clap at the beginning
15:51 <osuplayer111> : added
15:51 <osuplayer111> : let's see if I can make that 2 sliders
15:51 <osuplayer111> : I rarely made them xD
15:51 <osuplayer111> : make*
15:52 <NatsumeRin> : haha personally i like sliders like that and did a lot
15:53 <NatsumeRin> : i try to use sliders at those 2 to express a "sudden" feeling
15:53 <NatsumeRin> : 00:39:956 - add a note?
15:55 <osuplayer111> : can you give me the code of that 2 sliders? meh
15:55 <NatsumeRin> : sure
15:55 <NatsumeRin> : a minute
15:55 <osuplayer111> : I'm trying to make them but I'm not satisfied lol
15:55 <osuplayer111> : thanks
15:56 <osuplayer111> : added the note too btw
15:57 <NatsumeRin> : 8,90,80027,2,8,B|32:110|32:110|33:121|33:121|43:109|43:109|44:120|44:120|148:208,1,180,8|8
15:57 <NatsumeRin> : first
15:57 <NatsumeRin> : 218,210,86885,2,8,B|233:222|281:222|297:254|281:286|233:286|217:254|233:222|281:222|313:198,1,180
15:57 <NatsumeRin> : second
15:58 <NatsumeRin> : you may need to adjust where they placed (and notes after it) though
15:59 <osuplayer111> : txt order doesn't matter or it does?
15:59 <NatsumeRin> : dunno, better to keep the original order i guess
15:59 <NatsumeRin> : i always do so
15:59 <osuplayer111> : ok :3
16:04 <NatsumeRin> : [Easy] 00:51:099 (1) - i'll suggest to reduce one repeat
16:06 <NatsumeRin> : [Normal]01:03:099 (1,2,3) - disagree with the notes here
16:07 <NatsumeRin> : since it's better to follow the vocal imo...
16:08 <NatsumeRin> : a quick check through the 2 easier diffs and i think they're mostly fine, a little not sure about many 1/2 triples in Normal though, but BPM is
16:08 <NatsumeRin> : only 140 so anyway
16:10 <osuplayer111> : fixed easy
16:10 <osuplayer111> : removed 2 on normal
16:10 <osuplayer111> : I didn't liked that too
16:10 <NatsumeRin> : ._.
16:11 <osuplayer111> : just forgot to remove xD
16:11 <osuplayer111> : 1st slider of the 2 you gave me has only 1 of the 4 points red T_T
16:11 <osuplayer111> : osu!bug XD
16:12 <NatsumeRin> : ...
16:12 <NatsumeRin> : orz why
16:12 <osuplayer111> : T_T
16:12 <osuplayer111> : there is no way to select them?
16:12 <NatsumeRin> : need i to get the code again?
16:12 <osuplayer111> : and made them red?
16:13 <NatsumeRin> : emm, i draw one slider like that in axis-X first and turn 40 degrees
16:13 <NatsumeRin> : clockwise
16:13 <NatsumeRin> : the 4 red lines is just 1 grid in grid level 3
16:13 <osuplayer111> : hrid 4?
16:13 <osuplayer111> : grid*
16:14 <NatsumeRin> : red points
16:14 <NatsumeRin> : in grid level 4 i can't get anything clearly all i can see is grids....
16:16 <osuplayer111> : maybe I copied slider code bad @_@
16:17 <NatsumeRin> : 8,90,80027,2,8,B|32:110|32:110|33:121|33:121|43:109|43:109|44:120|44:120|148:208,1,180,8|8
16:17 <NatsumeRin> : shouldn't be problems...@_@
16:18 <osuplayer111> : http://puu.sh/1ego I forgot this lol
16:19 <osuplayer111> : wtf o_O
16:19 <NatsumeRin> : ...XDDD how could you
16:19 <osuplayer111> : now 2 points are red out of 4
16:19 <osuplayer111> : whaaaat XD
16:19 <osuplayer111> : *suicide*
16:19 <NatsumeRin> : checke the 4 points (32:110 33:121 43:109 44:120)
16:20 <NatsumeRin> : and see if they're wrote double(red)
16:20 <NatsumeRin> : oh 43 109 and 44 120
16:20 <NatsumeRin> : poor guy
16:20 <osuplayer111> : ohhh
16:20 <osuplayer111> : I get it
16:21 <osuplayer111> : I resolved it
DD16:21 <NatsumeRin> : but how could you copy a line and skip some in that line...
16:21 <NatsumeRin> : wtf...
16:21 <osuplayer111> : I copied carefully orz
16:21 <NatsumeRin> : type it, XDD
16:22 <osuplayer111> : correct code
16:22 <osuplayer111> : 8,90,80027,2,8,B|32:110|32:110|33:121|33:121|43:109|43:109|44:120|44:120|148:208,1,180,8|8
16:22 <NatsumeRin> : yes
16:23 <osuplayer111> : ok I'll finally upload everything XD
16:24 <NatsumeRin> : i'll go to get my kudosu ww
16:24 <osuplayer111> : of course, you helped a lot xD
16:24 <NatsumeRin> : also i heard that now if you did a irc modding you need to post the log then..?
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Sup
Awesome mapset again.Totally flawless..
Only one suggestion at Lucifer's Normal:
00:44:670 (6) - starting a new combo here
(:
Awesome mapset again.Totally flawless..
Only one suggestion at Lucifer's Normal:
00:44:670 (6) - starting a new combo here
(:
Topic Starter
Thanks noneed, re-arranged in another way.
Done.
It is a Hard!
Edit: Upload a new rar file
Download: Yousei Teikoku - keep existing (Short Ver.) (osuplayer111) [Kanpakyin's Hard].osu
Download: O_O.rar
It is a Hard!
Edit: Upload a new rar file
Download: Yousei Teikoku - keep existing (Short Ver.) (osuplayer111) [Kanpakyin's Hard].osu
Download: O_O.rar
Topic Starter
Updated.
Waiting only for Vicho-kun~
Waiting only for Vicho-kun~
Topic Starter
Awesome 
Ready for mod~
Ready for mod~
[General]
[Suggestion] Why don't you add tag 'Lucifer' which is aka Louis Cyphre?
[Easy]
01:01:813 (4) - [Nazi Suggestion] Seems little sharp imo, why don't you use this code to loss some sharpness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66926
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:30:956 (1) - [Nazi] Both grey dots which are between 1,2 and 3,4 red dots are not mirrored. Consider please ;_;
00:37:813 (4,6) - [Nazi] Make these things symmetric?
01:03:099 (1) - [Nazi Suggestion] Use this code to make it more symmetric? Also, don't forget to stack (2) too :3
[Vicho's Hard]
:3
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
00:46:385 (2,3,4) - This overlapping might not be good ;_;
[Insane]
:3
Nice mapset :3
I would give just few suggestions ;_;
Anyway good luck XD
ps. This is not related with m4m queue orz
[Suggestion] Why don't you add tag 'Lucifer' which is aka Louis Cyphre?
[Easy]
01:01:813 (4) - [Nazi Suggestion] Seems little sharp imo, why don't you use this code to loss some sharpness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66926
1
344,304,61813,2,8,B|480:304|418:256|480:208|344:208,1,240
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:30:956 (1) - [Nazi] Both grey dots which are between 1,2 and 3,4 red dots are not mirrored. Consider please ;_;
00:37:813 (4,6) - [Nazi] Make these things symmetric?
01:03:099 (1) - [Nazi Suggestion] Use this code to make it more symmetric? Also, don't forget to stack (2) too :3
2
01:19:813 (6,3) - [Nazi] Not symmetric so why don't you make them symmetric :3? [If do, you would move some notes ;_;]376,192,63099,6,0,B|376:126|376:126|280:126|256:48|256:48|232:126|136:126|136:126|136:192,1,440,8|8
[Vicho's Hard]
:3
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
00:46:385 (2,3,4) - This overlapping might not be good ;_;
[Insane]
:3
Nice mapset :3
I would give just few suggestions ;_;
Anyway good luck XD
ps. This is not related with m4m queue orz
hii :3 mod4mod its just suguestion
Easy
looks fine , nothing to say
Lucifer Normal
00:19:170 - add note?
00:20:885 - add note?
00:33:956 - remove new combo?
00:35:242 - new vombo? so remove new combo there 00:35:670
00:37:813 - new combo?
00:59:670 - add finish?
thats all , btw nice diff
Vicho Hard
so awesome , i cant find anything wroght
Kanpakyin insane
00:51:742 - remove whistle? sounds weird
00:57:956 - add whistle?
nice :3
Insane
01:18:527 - add finish?
this is awesome , i cant find anything wroght :3
Tooo nice mapppp¡¡¡ star
Easy
looks fine , nothing to say
Lucifer Normal
00:19:170 - add note?
00:20:885 - add note?
00:33:956 - remove new combo?
00:35:242 - new vombo? so remove new combo there 00:35:670
00:37:813 - new combo?
00:59:670 - add finish?
thats all , btw nice diff
Vicho Hard
so awesome , i cant find anything wroght
Kanpakyin insane
00:51:742 - remove whistle? sounds weird
00:57:956 - add whistle?
nice :3
Insane
01:18:527 - add finish?
this is awesome , i cant find anything wroght :3
Tooo nice mapppp¡¡¡ star
[general]
Tag "Lucifer", as usual?
Insane
00:14:027 (3) - [nazi) right 1 grid
00:51:742 (3) - clap?
00:53:436 (1,2) - stack? (difference by 1 pixel orz)
Kanpak's Insane
ok for me
Vicho's Hard <- no finishes in the middle part but there's similar sound in the music, so consider to add finishes back like [Insane]?
00:06:849 (7) - down 1 grid
00:11:456 (8) - right 1 grid?
00:30:956 (2) - ^?
00:51:742 (3) - clap?
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:24:956 (3) - down 1 grid to make it symmetrical
01:22:385 (4,5) - down 1 grid
star~ >_<
Tag "Lucifer", as usual?
Insane
00:14:027 (3) - [nazi) right 1 grid
00:51:742 (3) - clap?
00:53:436 (1,2) - stack? (difference by 1 pixel orz)
Kanpak's Insane
ok for me
Vicho's Hard <- no finishes in the middle part but there's similar sound in the music, so consider to add finishes back like [Insane]?
00:06:849 (7) - down 1 grid
00:11:456 (8) - right 1 grid?
00:30:956 (2) - ^?
00:51:742 (3) - clap?
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:24:956 (3) - down 1 grid to make it symmetrical
01:22:385 (4,5) - down 1 grid
star~ >_<
Here some mod
Yeah , its all suggestion.
So..Let's go WW
[Easy]
00:53:242 (1) - Remove New combo
00:54:099 (4) - New combo.
[BakaLC's Normal]
00:37:813 (4) - Newcombo?=w=
[Vicho's Hard]
Fine
[KPY's Insane]
01:00:206 (x) - Add a note?
01:30:313 (1) - Remove Newcombo?
Edit:
00:11:670 (1) - Delete the note?
Then start the spinner in
00:11:670 - 00:13:385 End.
[Insane]
Perfect.
Good job as always.
Can't find any big problem =a=
Star.
Yeah , its all suggestion.
So..Let's go WW
[Easy]
00:53:242 (1) - Remove New combo
00:54:099 (4) - New combo.
[BakaLC's Normal]
00:37:813 (4) - Newcombo?=w=
[Vicho's Hard]
Fine
[KPY's Insane]
01:00:206 (x) - Add a note?
01:30:313 (1) - Remove Newcombo?
Edit:
00:11:670 (1) - Delete the note?
Then start the spinner in
00:11:670 - 00:13:385 End.
[Insane]
Perfect.
Good job as always.
Can't find any big problem =a=
Star.
mod4mod
[General]
offset : 1,375
[Easy]
fine~
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:20:242 (1) - delete finish from slider start
00:52:813 - 01:13:385 - add more finish hitsounds in this section , they fit great
01:01:802 (4) - delete finish from slider start
[Vicho's Hard]
00:15:956 (2) - add finish here
00:16:813 (4) - ^
00:17:670 (6) - ^
00:18:527 (3) - ^
00:19:285 (5) - ^
00:20:242 (7) - ^
00:25:385 (1) - ^
00:26:992 (7) - ^
00:32:242 (1) - ^
00:33:849 (7) - ^
....
you better recheck the hitsounds. I think if you add more finishes it will fit great
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
same like previous diff ^
[Insane]
00:15:313 - 00:26:456 - if you add finishes int this section Ii think it will sound better ( i think I'm obsessed with that finish hitsound)
01:13:599 - 01:30:099 - ^
nice song, great map. Star
[General]
offset : 1,375
[Easy]
fine~
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:20:242 (1) - delete finish from slider start
00:52:813 - 01:13:385 - add more finish hitsounds in this section , they fit great
01:01:802 (4) - delete finish from slider start
[Vicho's Hard]
00:15:956 (2) - add finish here
00:16:813 (4) - ^
00:17:670 (6) - ^
00:18:527 (3) - ^
00:19:285 (5) - ^
00:20:242 (7) - ^
00:25:385 (1) - ^
00:26:992 (7) - ^
00:32:242 (1) - ^
00:33:849 (7) - ^
....
you better recheck the hitsounds. I think if you add more finishes it will fit great
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
same like previous diff ^
[Insane]
00:15:313 - 00:26:456 - if you add finishes int this section Ii think it will sound better ( i think I'm obsessed with that finish hitsound)
01:13:599 - 01:30:099 - ^
nice song, great map. Star
Hello,here is what I think about it:
General:
No SB,right? then delete OSB file.
Easy:
I can't find anything wrong here. Maybe just a little high SV and that's all.
Lucifer's Normal:
Slider Velocity here is 1,1 and on Easy diff it is 1,2 :/ I don't think that this is good.
Vicho's Hard:
Pretty high HP drain here..better to put 5.
Kanpakyin's Insane:
00:32:992 - I hear a beat here,so I think you can put here a circle too
Insane:
Such a high HP Drain..maybe you should put 6?
Well,that is all. Star!
General:
No SB,right? then delete OSB file.
Easy:
I can't find anything wrong here. Maybe just a little high SV and that's all.
Lucifer's Normal:
Slider Velocity here is 1,1 and on Easy diff it is 1,2 :/ I don't think that this is good.
Vicho's Hard:
Pretty high HP drain here..better to put 5.
Kanpakyin's Insane:
00:32:992 - I hear a beat here,so I think you can put here a circle too
Insane:
Such a high HP Drain..maybe you should put 6?
Well,that is all. Star!
arien666 wrote:
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
00:46:385 (2,3,4) - This overlapping might not be good ;_; Lol.Change anyway
KanaRin wrote:
[KPY's Insane]
01:00:206 (x) - Add a note? X.It sounds weird if add a note here.
01:30:313 (1) - Remove Newcombo? Fix
Edit:
00:11:670 (1) - Delete the note? X.It fine now.
Then start the spinner in
00:11:670 - 00:13:385 End.
Thanks for modding.Tonoicutzu wrote:
[Vicho's Hard]
you better recheck the hitsounds. I think if you add more finishes it will fit great Please..Finish is add in accent.Too much useless Finish will make annoying
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
same like previous diff ^
Download: Yousei Teikoku - keep existing (Short Ver.) (osuplayer111) [Kanpakyin's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Fixed some, thanks guys!
A little bit of IRC modding.
I think I still feel a little bit of my St. Patrick's Day celebration...
I think I still feel a little bit of my St. Patrick's Day celebration...
You know what kind of mods I do, but here they are anyway
11:46 <osuplayer111> : Garven-sama! do you have time to take a request of mine? o/ if not it's okay xD
11:46 <Garven> : Uhh, I'll try
11:46 <Garven> : Been kind of in a weird mood today. @_@
11:46 <Garven> : Link?
11:46 <osuplayer111> : Aw, sorry ;_;
11:47 <osuplayer111> : Uhm, okay... but if you don't feel like I don't wanna force you D:
11:47 <Garven> : Nah, I'll try.
11:47 <osuplayer111> : Thanks so much in advance then D: hope you'll get better though...
11:47 *osuplayer111 is listening to (Yousei Teikoku - keep existing (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27379]
11:47 <osuplayer111> : it's this one
11:47 <Garven> : It is supposed to be lowercase like that?
11:48 <osuplayer111> : yeah, check video :3
11:48 <Garven> : Slow DL. D:
11:50 <Garven> : Visual novel really needed as tags?
11:51 <Garven> : Still have sound in the video. :x
11:51 <osuplayer111> : well, it is a visual novel ><
11:51 <Garven> : It's a strange thing to look for when looking for music to play though. :/
11:51 <osuplayer111> : I don't know how to remove audio without losing quality
11:51 <osuplayer111> : you know how to?
11:51 *osuplayer111 is noob D:
11:52 <Garven> : I'd have to reinstall everything to give it a shot
11:52 <Garven> : My computer has been a mess these past couple weeks.
11:52 <Garven> : Lost my huge mod queue, so there's that plus, at least.
11:52 <osuplayer111> : yeah I read your sign...
11:52 <Garven> : Lost a lot o fother projects, though. :<
11:52 <osuplayer111> : oh damn
11:54 <Garven> : 00:30:956 (2) - This is kinda ugly (Easy) Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/1fB9
11:55 <osuplayer111> : let me see
11:55 <osuplayer111> : damn, I suck at making sliders
11:55 <Garven> : w
11:55 <Garven> : I'm working on trying to make 01:01:813 (3) - look better atm :P
11:56 <osuplayer111> : fixed it
11:56 <osuplayer111> : that one arien made it!
11:56 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/1fBe
11:56 <osuplayer111> : check his mod
11:56 <Garven> : That looks better imo
11:56 <osuplayer111> : okay, let me try
11:57 <Garven> : 01:11:670 (2,3) - eeh, this is kind of pushing it for an easy.
11:58 <Garven> : In normal: 00:06:527 (1) - He could have at least copy/pasted 00:04:813 (1) - and just extended it one repeat...
12:00 <osuplayer111> : I wanted to make it different ><
12:01 <osuplayer111> : going to change 01:11:670 now
12:01 <osuplayer111> : but I have no ideas argh
12:01 <Garven> : Normal is okay, I guess. Really boring though. Rhythms made me sleepy.
12:02 <Garven> : Maybe a rhythm lke this? http://puu.sh/1fBo
12:02 <Garven> : For the easy thing
12:04 <Garven> : Vichi's is nice
12:05 <Garven> : In Kanpakyin's: 00:16:813 (1) - This combo feels a little long
12:05 <Garven> : 00:55:813 (5,1) - These coul dbe lined up better
12:06 <osuplayer111> : done
12:06 <osuplayer111> : about the combo, I think it's fine... dunno
12:06 <Garven> : There were a couple weird combos
12:06 <Garven> : finding them...
12:07 <osuplayer111> : alright, tell me
12:07 <Garven> : 00:18:527 (1) - New combo (seems to be changing combos on phrase changes, so this would be the logical place for one)
12:08 <Garven> : 00:30:527 (6) - New combo
12:08 <Garven> : 00:38:885 (5) - New combo here or at the 6
12:08 <Garven> : Hrm
12:08 <Garven> : maybe not
12:08 <Garven> : 00:40:813 (8) - Do it here instead
12:09 <Garven> : And remove 00:41:670 (1) -
12:09 <Garven> : 00:43:813 (1) - And here, add new at 00:44:456 (2) - ... maybe
12:09 <Garven> : 00:52:813 (6) - New combo here
12:10 <Garven> : 01:06:527 (4) - New combo
12:10 <osuplayer111> : Garven doing a combo mod, I am dreaming?
12:10 <Garven> : I hate doing these. ;_;
12:11 <Garven> : But this map is really bad. The sliders are in bad places for the way he had it half-set up
12:11 <osuplayer111> : kanpakyin's ?
12:11 <Garven> : Yeah
12:11 <osuplayer111> : I personally find it fun :<
12:11 <Garven> : 01:14:670 (1) - Remove
12:11 <Garven> : 01:15:099 (2) - add
12:11 <Garven> : The map plays fine, btu the new combo placement is sporadic and inconsistent
12:11 <Garven> : Makes the phrases feel off
12:12 <Garven> : 01:16:599 (5,6) - New combo on the 5 or 6
12:12 <Garven> : Depending on which you did (if you did) on the earlier one
12:12 <Garven> : 01:21:956 (6) - new combo
12:12 <Garven> : 01:22:813 (1) - remove
12:12 <Garven> : 01:23:670 (2) - new
12:12 <Garven> : 01:25:385 (6) - new
12:13 <Garven> : Phew
12:15 <Garven> : I was kind of expecting a faster slider velocity than that on your diff. :<
12:15 <osuplayer111> : he copied me lol
12:16 <Garven> : 00:04:813 (3) - This slider looks un-even since the start has kind of a neck compared to the ending
12:17 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/1fBP
12:17 <Garven> : Try that and see if you like it better
12:17 <osuplayer111> : let me try
12:18 <osuplayer111> : nice!
12:21 <osuplayer111> : you're being too silent... my diff is that good? o.o
12:21 <Garven> : 01:26:885 (4) - Fixing this :P
12:21 <osuplayer111> : lol NatsumeRin make that for me
12:21 <osuplayer111> : made*
12:22 <Garven> : Try 216,208,86885,2,8,B|232:220|280:224|292:252|280:282|232:282|220:252|232:224|280:220|296:208,1,180 for http://puu.sh/1fC3
12:22 <osuplayer111> : so pro~ teach me
12:22 <osuplayer111> : ok I'll copy it
12:22 <Garven> : Turn distance snap off and lots of H/V flipping. :P
12:23 <Garven> : It's not quite symmetrical, but it's a lot closer now
12:25 <osuplayer111> : so much points :3
12:25 <osuplayer111> : added it :D
12:25 <Garven> : I just moved what was already there. ;p
12:25 <Garven> : That's about it for yours though
12:25 <osuplayer111> : should I have to upload?
12:26 <Garven> : Uh, if you want me to recheck, I guess
12:26 <osuplayer111> : I have to finish fighting with this first
12:26 <osuplayer111> : 01:01:813 (3) - on easy lol
12:26 <Garven> : Whaat
12:26 <Garven> : Need code?
12:27 <Garven> : 344,304,61813,2,8,B|464:340|464:172|344:208,1,240
12:28 <osuplayer111> : seems like I made it but since I'm not sure... XD
12:28 <Garven> : Haha
12:29 <osuplayer111> : or you want to see it?
12:29 <Garven> : You can check it by moving it so it's centered on the Y axis and do vertical flips
12:29 <Garven> : If the cponts don't move at all, it's correct
12:31 <osuplayer111> : it seems correct to me
12:31 <Garven> : k
12:31 <osuplayer111> : updated *hopes that it is correct*
12:33 <Garven> : 00:10:813 (1) - I never noticed this before, but the custom sound on the tick is really really loud. :/
12:33 <osuplayer111> : Easy?
12:33 <Garven> : 00:15:956 (3) - ^
12:33 <Garven> : Yeah
12:33 <Garven> : Seems everywhere it's showing up, hehe
12:33 <osuplayer111> : it sounds too low to me instead orz
12:34 <Garven> : Heh
12:34 <Garven> : Ah well
12:34 <osuplayer111> : it is 90 the volume of it
12:34 <osuplayer111> : volume of others is 100
12:34 <osuplayer111> : if I put 80 it's really low
12:34 <osuplayer111> : they are SBed hitsounds
12:34 <Garven> : They are SBed?
12:34 <Garven> : orz
12:34 <osuplayer111> : yeah :P
12:35 <osuplayer111> : better than custom ticks to me
12:35 <Garven> : Eeh, they don't sound good to me, but whatever.
12:35 <osuplayer111> : :< what can I do?
12:35 <osuplayer111> : I can use custom slidertick if you want
12:36 <Garven> : Eeh
12:36 <Garven> : It's up to you, really
12:36 <Garven> : Hitsounds are really subjective anyway
12:36 <Garven> : They just stick out a lot to me and sound bad.
12:36 <Garven> : If they're okay to you, then I don't care too much. ;p
12:37 <osuplayer111> : it will sound the same with custom tick anyway XD
12:37 <osuplayer111> : maybe even louder, lol
12:37 <osuplayer111> : since it's lowered by 10 with SB code :3
12:37 <osuplayer111> : all looks good now anyway other than that?
12:37 <Garven> : Yeah
12:37 <osuplayer111> : sliders, especially xD
12:38 <osuplayer111> : yay I did it
12:38 <Garven> : Going to sleep my way through the Normal real quick
12:38 <osuplayer111> : Louis is being too lazy, I agree
12:38 <osuplayer111> : costant 1/2 >_>
12:39 <Garven> : Ugh.
12:39 <Garven> : Technically fine, boring boring boring ugh
12:39 <osuplayer111> : yeah it's boring
12:39 <osuplayer111> : even with DT ~_~
12:39 <Garven> : You sohuld just make your own
12:39 <Garven> : It'd be 1000% better
12:39 <osuplayer111> : yeah I will, better I guess
12:40 <osuplayer111> : thanks :D
12:42 <Garven> : In Kanpakyin's: 01:19:385 (3,4) - this spacing almost felt uncharacteristically large compared to the rest of the map
12:42 <Garven> : And tbh, doesn't feel like a great place for accellerated spacing to me
12:43 <osuplayer111> : I'll reduce it a bit
12:43 <osuplayer111> : any suggestion?
12:44 <Garven> : Keeping the sapcing even amongst the 1, 2, 3, and 4 would probably feel fine
12:44 <Garven> : So keep it at a 3.1x spacing or so
12:45 <Garven> : Everything else looked good
12:45 <osuplayer111> : done, I suppose
12:45 <osuplayer111> : I think it's way better now
12:46 <osuplayer111> : fixed :D
12:46 <Garven> : nom
12:46 <Garven> : Do you want to remap the Normal then?
12:46 <Garven> : Or just go with what you have?
12:47 <osuplayer111> : you mean with having 2 normal or removing his one?
12:47 <osuplayer111> : I would feel bad ;_;
12:47 <Garven> : Eh, it's up to how you feel about the quality of your mapset
12:48 <osuplayer111> : maybe it's better to take it in mind for my future mapsets XD
12:48 <Garven> : Hehe, okay
12:48 <osuplayer111> : since Louis mapped here already
11:46 <Garven> : Uhh, I'll try
11:46 <Garven> : Been kind of in a weird mood today. @_@
11:46 <Garven> : Link?
11:46 <osuplayer111> : Aw, sorry ;_;
11:47 <osuplayer111> : Uhm, okay... but if you don't feel like I don't wanna force you D:
11:47 <Garven> : Nah, I'll try.
11:47 <osuplayer111> : Thanks so much in advance then D: hope you'll get better though...
11:47 *osuplayer111 is listening to (Yousei Teikoku - keep existing (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27379]
11:47 <osuplayer111> : it's this one
11:47 <Garven> : It is supposed to be lowercase like that?
11:48 <osuplayer111> : yeah, check video :3
11:48 <Garven> : Slow DL. D:
11:50 <Garven> : Visual novel really needed as tags?
11:51 <Garven> : Still have sound in the video. :x
11:51 <osuplayer111> : well, it is a visual novel ><
11:51 <Garven> : It's a strange thing to look for when looking for music to play though. :/
11:51 <osuplayer111> : I don't know how to remove audio without losing quality
11:51 <osuplayer111> : you know how to?
11:51 *osuplayer111 is noob D:
11:52 <Garven> : I'd have to reinstall everything to give it a shot
11:52 <Garven> : My computer has been a mess these past couple weeks.
11:52 <Garven> : Lost my huge mod queue, so there's that plus, at least.
11:52 <osuplayer111> : yeah I read your sign...
11:52 <Garven> : Lost a lot o fother projects, though. :<
11:52 <osuplayer111> : oh damn
11:54 <Garven> : 00:30:956 (2) - This is kinda ugly (Easy) Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/1fB9
11:55 <osuplayer111> : let me see
11:55 <osuplayer111> : damn, I suck at making sliders
11:55 <Garven> : w
11:55 <Garven> : I'm working on trying to make 01:01:813 (3) - look better atm :P
11:56 <osuplayer111> : fixed it
11:56 <osuplayer111> : that one arien made it!
11:56 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/1fBe
11:56 <osuplayer111> : check his mod
11:56 <Garven> : That looks better imo
11:56 <osuplayer111> : okay, let me try
11:57 <Garven> : 01:11:670 (2,3) - eeh, this is kind of pushing it for an easy.
11:58 <Garven> : In normal: 00:06:527 (1) - He could have at least copy/pasted 00:04:813 (1) - and just extended it one repeat...
12:00 <osuplayer111> : I wanted to make it different ><
12:01 <osuplayer111> : going to change 01:11:670 now
12:01 <osuplayer111> : but I have no ideas argh
12:01 <Garven> : Normal is okay, I guess. Really boring though. Rhythms made me sleepy.
12:02 <Garven> : Maybe a rhythm lke this? http://puu.sh/1fBo
12:02 <Garven> : For the easy thing
12:04 <Garven> : Vichi's is nice
12:05 <Garven> : In Kanpakyin's: 00:16:813 (1) - This combo feels a little long
12:05 <Garven> : 00:55:813 (5,1) - These coul dbe lined up better
12:06 <osuplayer111> : done
12:06 <osuplayer111> : about the combo, I think it's fine... dunno
12:06 <Garven> : There were a couple weird combos
12:06 <Garven> : finding them...
12:07 <osuplayer111> : alright, tell me
12:07 <Garven> : 00:18:527 (1) - New combo (seems to be changing combos on phrase changes, so this would be the logical place for one)
12:08 <Garven> : 00:30:527 (6) - New combo
12:08 <Garven> : 00:38:885 (5) - New combo here or at the 6
12:08 <Garven> : Hrm
12:08 <Garven> : maybe not
12:08 <Garven> : 00:40:813 (8) - Do it here instead
12:09 <Garven> : And remove 00:41:670 (1) -
12:09 <Garven> : 00:43:813 (1) - And here, add new at 00:44:456 (2) - ... maybe
12:09 <Garven> : 00:52:813 (6) - New combo here
12:10 <Garven> : 01:06:527 (4) - New combo
12:10 <osuplayer111> : Garven doing a combo mod, I am dreaming?
12:10 <Garven> : I hate doing these. ;_;
12:11 <Garven> : But this map is really bad. The sliders are in bad places for the way he had it half-set up
12:11 <osuplayer111> : kanpakyin's ?
12:11 <Garven> : Yeah
12:11 <osuplayer111> : I personally find it fun :<
12:11 <Garven> : 01:14:670 (1) - Remove
12:11 <Garven> : 01:15:099 (2) - add
12:11 <Garven> : The map plays fine, btu the new combo placement is sporadic and inconsistent
12:11 <Garven> : Makes the phrases feel off
12:12 <Garven> : 01:16:599 (5,6) - New combo on the 5 or 6
12:12 <Garven> : Depending on which you did (if you did) on the earlier one
12:12 <Garven> : 01:21:956 (6) - new combo
12:12 <Garven> : 01:22:813 (1) - remove
12:12 <Garven> : 01:23:670 (2) - new
12:12 <Garven> : 01:25:385 (6) - new
12:13 <Garven> : Phew
12:15 <Garven> : I was kind of expecting a faster slider velocity than that on your diff. :<
12:15 <osuplayer111> : he copied me lol
12:16 <Garven> : 00:04:813 (3) - This slider looks un-even since the start has kind of a neck compared to the ending
12:17 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/1fBP
12:17 <Garven> : Try that and see if you like it better
12:17 <osuplayer111> : let me try
12:18 <osuplayer111> : nice!
12:21 <osuplayer111> : you're being too silent... my diff is that good? o.o
12:21 <Garven> : 01:26:885 (4) - Fixing this :P
12:21 <osuplayer111> : lol NatsumeRin make that for me
12:21 <osuplayer111> : made*
12:22 <Garven> : Try 216,208,86885,2,8,B|232:220|280:224|292:252|280:282|232:282|220:252|232:224|280:220|296:208,1,180 for http://puu.sh/1fC3
12:22 <osuplayer111> : so pro~ teach me
12:22 <osuplayer111> : ok I'll copy it
12:22 <Garven> : Turn distance snap off and lots of H/V flipping. :P
12:23 <Garven> : It's not quite symmetrical, but it's a lot closer now
12:25 <osuplayer111> : so much points :3
12:25 <osuplayer111> : added it :D
12:25 <Garven> : I just moved what was already there. ;p
12:25 <Garven> : That's about it for yours though
12:25 <osuplayer111> : should I have to upload?
12:26 <Garven> : Uh, if you want me to recheck, I guess
12:26 <osuplayer111> : I have to finish fighting with this first
12:26 <osuplayer111> : 01:01:813 (3) - on easy lol
12:26 <Garven> : Whaat
12:26 <Garven> : Need code?
12:27 <Garven> : 344,304,61813,2,8,B|464:340|464:172|344:208,1,240
12:28 <osuplayer111> : seems like I made it but since I'm not sure... XD
12:28 <Garven> : Haha
12:29 <osuplayer111> : or you want to see it?
12:29 <Garven> : You can check it by moving it so it's centered on the Y axis and do vertical flips
12:29 <Garven> : If the cponts don't move at all, it's correct
12:31 <osuplayer111> : it seems correct to me
12:31 <Garven> : k
12:31 <osuplayer111> : updated *hopes that it is correct*
12:33 <Garven> : 00:10:813 (1) - I never noticed this before, but the custom sound on the tick is really really loud. :/
12:33 <osuplayer111> : Easy?
12:33 <Garven> : 00:15:956 (3) - ^
12:33 <Garven> : Yeah
12:33 <Garven> : Seems everywhere it's showing up, hehe
12:33 <osuplayer111> : it sounds too low to me instead orz
12:34 <Garven> : Heh
12:34 <Garven> : Ah well
12:34 <osuplayer111> : it is 90 the volume of it
12:34 <osuplayer111> : volume of others is 100
12:34 <osuplayer111> : if I put 80 it's really low
12:34 <osuplayer111> : they are SBed hitsounds
12:34 <Garven> : They are SBed?
12:34 <Garven> : orz
12:34 <osuplayer111> : yeah :P
12:35 <osuplayer111> : better than custom ticks to me
12:35 <Garven> : Eeh, they don't sound good to me, but whatever.
12:35 <osuplayer111> : :< what can I do?
12:35 <osuplayer111> : I can use custom slidertick if you want
12:36 <Garven> : Eeh
12:36 <Garven> : It's up to you, really
12:36 <Garven> : Hitsounds are really subjective anyway
12:36 <Garven> : They just stick out a lot to me and sound bad.
12:36 <Garven> : If they're okay to you, then I don't care too much. ;p
12:37 <osuplayer111> : it will sound the same with custom tick anyway XD
12:37 <osuplayer111> : maybe even louder, lol
12:37 <osuplayer111> : since it's lowered by 10 with SB code :3
12:37 <osuplayer111> : all looks good now anyway other than that?
12:37 <Garven> : Yeah
12:37 <osuplayer111> : sliders, especially xD
12:38 <osuplayer111> : yay I did it
12:38 <Garven> : Going to sleep my way through the Normal real quick
12:38 <osuplayer111> : Louis is being too lazy, I agree
12:38 <osuplayer111> : costant 1/2 >_>
12:39 <Garven> : Ugh.
12:39 <Garven> : Technically fine, boring boring boring ugh
12:39 <osuplayer111> : yeah it's boring
12:39 <osuplayer111> : even with DT ~_~
12:39 <Garven> : You sohuld just make your own
12:39 <Garven> : It'd be 1000% better
12:39 <osuplayer111> : yeah I will, better I guess
12:40 <osuplayer111> : thanks :D
12:42 <Garven> : In Kanpakyin's: 01:19:385 (3,4) - this spacing almost felt uncharacteristically large compared to the rest of the map
12:42 <Garven> : And tbh, doesn't feel like a great place for accellerated spacing to me
12:43 <osuplayer111> : I'll reduce it a bit
12:43 <osuplayer111> : any suggestion?
12:44 <Garven> : Keeping the sapcing even amongst the 1, 2, 3, and 4 would probably feel fine
12:44 <Garven> : So keep it at a 3.1x spacing or so
12:45 <Garven> : Everything else looked good
12:45 <osuplayer111> : done, I suppose
12:45 <osuplayer111> : I think it's way better now
12:46 <osuplayer111> : fixed :D
12:46 <Garven> : nom
12:46 <Garven> : Do you want to remap the Normal then?
12:46 <Garven> : Or just go with what you have?
12:47 <osuplayer111> : you mean with having 2 normal or removing his one?
12:47 <osuplayer111> : I would feel bad ;_;
12:47 <Garven> : Eh, it's up to how you feel about the quality of your mapset
12:48 <osuplayer111> : maybe it's better to take it in mind for my future mapsets XD
12:48 <Garven> : Hehe, okay
12:48 <osuplayer111> : since Louis mapped here already
Topic Starter
Thanks Garven!
Also, added video without audio. (Special thanks to ziin)
Also, added video without audio. (Special thanks to ziin)
[Storyboard?]
Idk why, but even tho you have a blank.png at the end it isn't working, map is not reaching that point and there is no "skip" button, maybe move it to the outro?
[All difficulties]
For evertime white grayish combo color appears in mid of 00:01:385 - 00:14:456 please colorhax it to a different color because it's blending with the video.
[Insane]
00:51:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagons are supposed to have all their side equally distanced, this one looks too thin :V if you want to, you could cross points like a 5 point star would be able to keep spacing the same with a way better shaped pentagon.
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
00:13:706 (1,2,3) - I think some full screen jumps in a triangular shape would make this pattern more fun to play.
00:31:813 (1) - I don't think a slider fits here since all instruments (vocals included) break it around 00:32:027 Would make more sense to end the slider there then add a hitcircle or something similar.
00:37:813 (3) - This slider is also breaking at 00:38:027 for the same reason stated above ^
00:45:742 (1) - Vocal isnt sustained so i dont know why you have a slider in here, it would make more sense to use 2 circles.
00:54:634 (2,3) - The 2nd slider is starting kinda late because the 1st slider is ending right where the 2nd one should be starting.
01:28:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Love the hitsound work here good job!
[Vicho-kun's Hard]
Add an extra 300 ms of audio lead-in to make up for the extra note before the offset.
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:21:956 (1) - Slider doesnt fir the song, instead split it into 3 circles 1 at start, 1 at end and another in 00:22:385.
00:26:242 - Please remove slidertick hitsound or remap this slider so that it has an end or repeat in there so it makes more sense, although imo the regular slider tick hitsound is good enough for this slider anyways.
00:30:956 (1) - I dont really hear any difference in the sliderticks of this slider? and as the above one it sounds good enough already
01:03:099 (1) - Once again you're breaking the laws of sliders making sense with the song for your pretty patterns >_> once again i recommend you remove this slidertick hitsound or put a repeat in here.
01:29:885 (X) - Add a note?.
[Easy]
Why does this diff have higher Slider Vel. than Normal, if anything swap them around, or make this one 1.0 or lower
01:06:099 (3,4) - Ahh gotta love these pretty patterns.... except not really because they are breaking the song flow, there's a 2 beat lyric that starts at the end of the first slider then idk what the 2nd one is following?
01:11:670 (2) - Extend by 1/2 a beat
01:18:528 (3) - Slider doesnt make sense with the song, instead you could stop it at around 01:18:956 (since it's an easy, otherwise 01:18:742 would be better).
01:21:528 (3) - Sounds weird D: i think using 2 hitcircles would be better.
01:24:956 - Slidertick hitsounding... what not you too :<
Idk why, but even tho you have a blank.png at the end it isn't working, map is not reaching that point and there is no "skip" button, maybe move it to the outro?
[All difficulties]
For evertime white grayish combo color appears in mid of 00:01:385 - 00:14:456 please colorhax it to a different color because it's blending with the video.
[Insane]
00:51:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagons are supposed to have all their side equally distanced, this one looks too thin :V if you want to, you could cross points like a 5 point star would be able to keep spacing the same with a way better shaped pentagon.
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
00:13:706 (1,2,3) - I think some full screen jumps in a triangular shape would make this pattern more fun to play.
00:31:813 (1) - I don't think a slider fits here since all instruments (vocals included) break it around 00:32:027 Would make more sense to end the slider there then add a hitcircle or something similar.
00:37:813 (3) - This slider is also breaking at 00:38:027 for the same reason stated above ^
00:45:742 (1) - Vocal isnt sustained so i dont know why you have a slider in here, it would make more sense to use 2 circles.
00:54:634 (2,3) - The 2nd slider is starting kinda late because the 1st slider is ending right where the 2nd one should be starting.
01:28:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Love the hitsound work here good job!
[Vicho-kun's Hard]
Add an extra 300 ms of audio lead-in to make up for the extra note before the offset.
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:21:956 (1) - Slider doesnt fir the song, instead split it into 3 circles 1 at start, 1 at end and another in 00:22:385.
00:26:242 - Please remove slidertick hitsound or remap this slider so that it has an end or repeat in there so it makes more sense, although imo the regular slider tick hitsound is good enough for this slider anyways.
00:30:956 (1) - I dont really hear any difference in the sliderticks of this slider? and as the above one it sounds good enough already
01:03:099 (1) - Once again you're breaking the laws of sliders making sense with the song for your pretty patterns >_> once again i recommend you remove this slidertick hitsound or put a repeat in here.
01:29:885 (X) - Add a note?.
[Easy]
Why does this diff have higher Slider Vel. than Normal, if anything swap them around, or make this one 1.0 or lower
01:06:099 (3,4) - Ahh gotta love these pretty patterns.... except not really because they are breaking the song flow, there's a 2 beat lyric that starts at the end of the first slider then idk what the 2nd one is following?
01:11:670 (2) - Extend by 1/2 a beat
01:18:528 (3) - Slider doesnt make sense with the song, instead you could stop it at around 01:18:956 (since it's an easy, otherwise 01:18:742 would be better).
01:21:528 (3) - Sounds weird D: i think using 2 hitcircles would be better.
01:24:956 - Slidertick hitsounding... what not you too :<
and..Sakura Hana wrote:
[Kanpakyin's Insane]
00:13:706 (1,2,3) - I think some full screen jumps in a triangular shape would make this pattern more fun to play. Done
00:31:813 (1) - I don't think a slider fits here since all instruments (vocals included) break it around 00:32:027 Would make more sense to end the slider there then add a hitcircle or something similar.Done
00:37:813 (3) - This slider is also breaking at 00:38:027 for the same reason stated above ^Done
00:45:742 (1) - Vocal isnt sustained so i dont know why you have a slider in here, it would make more sense to use 2 circles.X.I'm follow the Vocal
00:54:634 (2,3) - The 2nd slider is starting kinda late because the 1st slider is ending right where the 2nd one should be starting.Done
01:28:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Love the hitsound work here good job!lol.Thanks
Can you tell me why it is bad? I really try my best to do any map.But I'm suck at combo T^T If you have other reson cause you said my map bad.Just teel me.I'll do it more improvement. (upset that I heard your criticism ;_;)Garven wrote:
12:11 <Garven> : But this map is really bad. The sliders are in bad places for the way he had it half-set up
12:11 <osuplayer111> : kanpakyin's ?
12:11 <Garven> : Yeah
Download: Yousei Teikoku - keep existing (Short Ver.) (osuplayer111) [Kanpakyin's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Fixed some, thanks Sakura!
And I think Sakura pretty much cleaned up the little stuff.. Good luck sir :s
yousei tenkokuI was referring to the combo placement. The slider placements you used were at the start of several phrases, so it broke up what patterning you could achieve using the combo patterns that you were using. It made the map really inconsistent feeling and looked a little sloppy. The placement and rhythms felt fine for me - the combos were the thing that bugged me the most, and I usually don't care too much about combo placement. :Pkanpakyin wrote:
Can you tell me why it is bad? I really try my best to do any map.But I'm suck at combo T^T If you have other reson cause you said my map bad.Just teel me.I'll do it more improvement. (upset that I heard your criticism ;_;)Garven wrote:
12:11 <Garven> : But this map is really bad. The sliders are in bad places for the way he had it half-set up
12:11 <osuplayer111> : kanpakyin's ?
12:11 <Garven> : Yeah
Either way, sorry for the misinterpretation.
I guess you don't need that recheck after all, eh?
Added +1 to AR on [Insane] for more fun-ness.
Ranked.
Ranked.
Gratz, mapping machine
S i R i R u wrote:
Gratz, mapping machine
S i R i R u wrote:
Gratz, mapping machine
take care yourself!!!
ranked
very early
but nice map!!!
my pending
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=48053
please checking!!!!!
good song
very early
but nice map!!!
my pending
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=48053
please checking!!!!!
good song