hihi
first time modding a map so hope this helps.
firstly, the timing is pretty off. I suggest 195 bpm for this song.
- 00:01:701 - i feel this where your song should start. Set your offset here.
- 00:24:393 - this slider doesn't look too good. I suggest a less "curvier" slider and make it slightly more straight. The same goes for subsequent sliders.
In terms of general comments:
- most normal/hard beatmaps follow the downbeat and upbeat of a song (read this here
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory) center your mapping sround those while mixing it up a little.
- try to use combos when you map, such as blanket or double stacks (more of such can be found here
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques)
- do read through the mapping section on osu wiki to get a better idea on how to map and time maps better. You can also view other maps for reference such as what rhythms to map and circle placements.
Hope this helps and continue mapping!
(PS i'll create a guest for this map as well i'll send you the link when i'm done)