The fact that there is already a ranked chart on this just makes me feel…. ugh….
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00:01:939 - I would really prefer you to have doubles on the whites and not the reds. Most people use doubles as a way of keeping timing, but at such a weird spot, it is very hard to. Plus you have that in the later section anyway so it’s consistency too
00:12:094 (12094|0) - this is very uncomfortable after the shield. Move it to 3?
00:12:250 (12250|2,12250|1,12250|0,12406|2) - at the same time you can rearrange these to make it less boring
00:18:032 (18032|0,18084|1,18135|2) - sounds like 1/8 to me, if you’re gonna change that then you probably have to adjust the mini jumpjacks too because they are not fun to hit at all
I mean,
this suggestion is probably not the best because it goes against your layering but it still represents the 1/8s (mind you that it can be approximated with a trill)
00:20:063 (20063|3,20063|1,20063|0) - stream sounds like it starts from here, not 00:20:219 (20219|2) - here, so you may want to adjust it
00:22:095 - missing double?
man this is getting a bit repetitive…
00:25:376 - why do you not use a triple here? You used it 00:15:375 (15375|1,15375|0,15375|3) - here and 00:16:313 (16313|2,16313|3,16313|1) - here. It goes against your layering too so
00:26:469 (26469|1,26469|0,26547|1,26547|0,26625|3,26625|2,26703|3,26703|2,26781|1,26781|0,26859|1,26859|0) - I’m not sure if this is the best pattern to use but I’ll let it slide for now
00:27:875 (27875|0,27875|3,27875|1,27953|1,27953|0,28031|3,28083|2,28135|1,28188|3,28188|2,28188|0) - this one again, but I’ll use a
similar suggestion but same effect
00:29:438 (29438|0,29438|3,29438|2,29594|1,29594|2,29750|0,29750|3,29750|1,29906|2,29906|1,30063|3,30063|2,30063|0,30219|2,30219|1,30375|1,30375|0,30375|3,30531|2,30531|1) - is that seriously all you can do? your already heavy layering really makes it hard to bring out specific parts of the song, like 00:30:063 (30063|0,30063|3,30063|2) - this, triples are so prevalent in this chart that it is hard to bring out this sound. I will not be one to tell you to “change your layering”, but you can probably consider something about it
00:30:688 (30688|0,30688|3,30766|2,30844|0,30922|2,31000|3,31000|0,31078|1,31156|3,31234|1,31313|0,31313|3,31391|2,31469|0,31547|2,31625|1,31625|0,31703|2,31703|3,31781|1,31781|0,31859|3,31859|2,31939|3) - this section is generally rough,
suggestion?00:38:814 (38814|3,38853|1,38892|0,38931|2,38970|3,39009|1,39048|0,39087|2,39126|3,39165|1,39204|0,39243|2,39282|3,39321|1,39360|0,39399|2) - I’m not a fan of these vibros, maybe make them inward instead of outward will be better
00:40:688 (40688|3,40767|1,40844|3,40923|1,41000|3,41079|1,41156|3,41235|1,41313|3,41392|1,41469|3,41547|2) - I think for this you can probably use something like
this00:50:219 (50219|0,50272|1,50324|2,50376|3,50428|0,50480|1,50532|2,50584|3) - did you map this wrongly? some notes sound like ghosts
01:06:001 (66001|1,66078|2,66156|1) - ctrl h? it plays better that way
01:07:875 (67875|1,68031|1,68188|1,68344|1,68500|1,68657|1,68969|1,69125|1,69281|1,69438|1,69594|1,69750|1) - can you like avoid this it’s very hard to nail when doing the stream
01:10:609 (70609|3,70766|3,70922|3,71078|3,71234|3,71391|3,71548|3,71704|3,71860|3) - why do you like anchors so much
01:14:125 (74125|0) - move to 2 so that it’s slightly more comfortable
I’m shit at LNs…
01:43:656 (103656|0,103656|3) - why a double? I don’t hear anything strong
01:53:814 - if you wanna use 1/6 it starts here
01:58:656 (118656|2,118734|3,118813|2,118891|3,118969|2) - you can try
this, it’s better than a minitrill
02:02:250 (122250|3,122406|3,122563|3) - rough, 02:02:407 (122407|3,122485|2,122564|3,122642|2) - ctrl j
Generally 3+ note anchors aren’t comfortable to play but I’ll avoid some for my sanity’s sake and they might be “ok” to play so keep that in mind
02:11:391 (131391|3,131430|2,131469|0,131508|1,131547|3,131586|2,131625|0,131664|1,131703|3,131742|2,131781|0,131820|1,131859|3,131898|2) - yeah this was what I wanted earlier, it’s more comfortable to play after all
Oh god time for the kiai
02:14:751 - your layering is inconsistent, 02:15:375 (135375|3,135375|1,135375|2) - why a triple here but 02:17:875 (137875|2,137875|1,137953|0,137953|3) - a mini jumptrill here?
I will focus on pattern choice for this section since I’m not sure what are you doing with your layering
02:19:125 (139125|2,139281|2,139438|2,139594|2,139750|2,139906|2,140063|2) - mmmmm yeah this is cute
02:21:938 (141938|1,141938|3,141938|0,142016|2,142094|1,142172|0,142250|2,142250|3,142251|1,142328|0,142406|1,142484|2,142563|1,142563|0,142563|3) - I can come up with a more sensible
pattern for that drum sound on the red line
If you apply that then 02:22:797 (142797|2,142797|0,142797|3,143031|0,143031|1,143031|3,143266|0,143266|2,143266|3,143500|3,143500|1,143500|0,143734|0,143734|3,143734|2) - ctrl h everything
02:24:828 (144828|2,144906|3,144984|2,145063|3,145141|2) - you like one-handed trills too, sigh.
my suggestionJust to point out something importantI would like to point out that you should listen to the track at 50% for 02:25:689 - notice how your notes are a tad too early than the actual sound. I can still hear a tiny bit of sound on where the single notes are, but considering the synth is a bigger sound, that should be prioritized and not the tiny ones. This goes the same for 02:15:689 - 02:18:189 - 02:20:689 - 02:45:689 - 03:43:189 - 03:45:689 - 03:48:189 - 03:53:189 -
03:33:189 - this is the only one that I found was correct, it also makes me wonder why you made this different from all the others. Try to use this to gauge where the notes are placed
Of course they represent the single notes beside the 4 LNs in each section
If you have anymore questions about this hit me up and I’ll explain
02:27:250 (147250|0,147250|3,147250|2) - this sound doesn’t really warrant a triple unlike 02:27:406 (147406|0,147406|3,147406|2) -
02:27:719 (147719|1,147719|2,147719|0,147797|3,147875|2,147953|1,148031|0,148031|3,148031|2,148188|2,148188|0,148188|1) - you used 02:47:250 (167250|2,167250|1,167328|3,167406|0,167406|2,167406|1,167484|3,167563|2,167641|1,167719|3,167719|2,167719|0,167797|1,167875|2,167876|0,167953|3,168031|0,168031|1,168109|2,168109|3,168188|3,168188|1,168188|0) - here, so you should keep it consistent
hereIf you apply that change 02:28:396 (148396|0,148396|3,148396|1) - this too so it’s not repetitive
02:32:406 (152406|1) - double here
02:34:126 (154126|3) - triple
I won’t touch too much on the LN sections since I’m not skilled enough
Clocking in at 2 hours now…
02:39:439 - if you are able to squeeze a triple in here while keeping this relatively fine to play I would appreciate it
02:40:689 - here too
02:41:939 - ^
from 02:41:939 - to 02:43:814 - all I can say is that your notes are wrongly snapped to the sound but I’ll leave it to you to snap them because I’m kinda losing steam now
02:50:609 (170609|2) - that’s an interesting pattern, don’t really see it often but i can’t seem to catch the LN after that, you might want to shift it somewhere else where it’s not a hit-or-miss situation here
jumptrill ends 02:53:189 - here, you seem to have missed that section
02:54:048 - missing note?
02:56:234 (176234|2,176313|1,176391|2,176469|1,176547|2,176625|1,176703|2,176781|1,176859|2,176938|1,177016|2,177094|0,177172|2,177250|0,177328|2,177406|0,177484|3,177563|0,177641|3,177719|0,177797|3) - I mean, it’s ok I guess, just very hard to time well (look at Kamui)
02:57:875 (177875|0,177875|1,177928|3,177928|2,177980|1,177980|0,178032|2,178032|3,178084|1,178084|0,178136|3,178136|2,178189|0,178189|1) - it’s 1/8, not 1/6. Try using a
roll02:58:656 (178656|2) - remove
02:58:814 - you can use a
jumptrill here (remove 02:59:439 (179439|1) - too btw if you wanna use the jumptrill)
what really irks me is that you’re not that consistent in your patterning, like from 02:59:517 - to 03:09:439 - compared to 03:10:532 - to 03:16:939 - why should they be different? If I should pick one I would have to choose the second one because it makes more musical sense
03:13:188 (193188|0,193189|3,193267|2,193267|1,193345|0,193345|3,193423|2,193501|1,193501|0,193579|3,193579|2,193657|0,193657|1) - maybe you can try to compare it to 03:03:188 (183188|3,183188|2,183266|1,183266|0,183344|3,183344|2,183422|0,183422|1,183500|2,183500|3,183578|0,183579|1) - they should be similar. Although, for that kind of sound it shouldn’t warrant a jumptrill. I would use jumptrills only for consecutive percussion sounds, not for synths
03:14:125 (194125|2,194203|3,194281|2) - have a jumptrill here
03:15:689 (195689|1,195689|3,196001|0,196001|2) - you should end all of them on white lines
03:16:834 (196834|3) - if you can approximate this well and still get a good hit on the LN then you can keep it, otherwise you should reorder that 1/6 section
Remove the kiai in that entire section btw, it’s not needed
03:29:282 - why no quad? it sounds exactly the same as the ones below
My computer is getting fried so I might not be able to do playability check…
I’ll make briefer mods since I’m getting tired as hell…
04:12:720 - it really looks like you ctrl+v this section, please don’t do that, it kills creativity and makes the chart repetitive and boring
04:14:439 - can you keep your patterning consistent? it is irking me a ton
04:17:406 (257406|3,257406|0) - remove at 1
04:20:063 (260063|0,260063|2,260141|3,260141|1,260219|2,260219|0,260297|3,260297|1,260375|2,260375|0,260453|3,260453|1,260531|2,260531|0,260609|3,260609|1) - this is the hardest jumptrill pattern there is for 4K and you shouldn’t make them too long as they can go out of hand very easily. The best ones to use are [12][34] or [14][23]
04:21:548 - is that a missing note?
04:46:469 (286469|3,286547|3,286626|3) - not recommended for playability, a normal jumptrill should suffice
04:47:875 (287875|0,287875|2,287875|3,287927|1,287979|2,288031|3,288084|1,288188|3,288188|0,288188|2) - I already made a point on this, just look at the suggestions above and try to make something similar. I don’t want to make another suggestion for fear I might go crazy after this
04:49:985 - missing
04:50:220 - I prefer a
jumptrill here
04:55:375 (295375|2,295375|0,295453|3,295453|1,295531|2,295531|0,295609|1,295609|3) - again, not really recommended. Try using [14][23] here
Don’t kds me if I didn’t help at all, and if you have anymore questions feel free to hit me up