• [Easy]

1. No kiai Time?
2. Check Distance Snap
3. 00:31:145 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:32:683 (3) - remove this circle and put a slider until 00:32:876 because the end is here and it's better

• [Normal]

1. 00:28:068 (1) - it's not a beautiful slider you can fix this

• [Yamicchi's Hard]

1. 00:09:129 - add a note

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hey!

NM from #modreqs

• [Easy]

1. No kiai Time? oh, oops
2. Check Distance Snap ok
3. 00:31:145 (1) - remove NC yea, okay
4. 00:32:683 (3) - remove this circle and put a slider until 00:32:876 because the end is here and it's better no, because 1/2 sliders in easy are really tough

• [Normal]

1. 00:28:068 (1) - it's not a beautiful slider you can fix this sure

Short mod for short map xd

GOOD LUCK!

I Am Kawaii wrote:

Hey!

Normal

My idea: don't overlap too much at normal diffs! sorry, I overlap in normal difficulties because rather than easy normal has a lot more notes, meaning if I didn't overlap my difficulty would almost be specified as a hard
00:01:914 (1,2) - the overlap is a bit heavy
00:24:606 - you could add something here
00:25:376 - here and 00:26:145 - maybe too

Easy

There's nothing much to say about it, I think it's pretty good but add kiai time

baysman wrote:

Hi !

General
Maybe change preview point to 00:04:991

Sorry for such short mod.

GL with your set.

• 00:00:376 - inherited timing point should be 25% to keep consistent vol
  00:03:452 (1,2) - 2's angled pretty weirdly in comparison to the first slider, try making it a sharper curve
  00:06:529 (1,2,3) - purely aesthetic but the curve that 1 and 3 make is pretty ugly
  00:26:145 (2,3) - make this straight xd
  00:29:606 (3) - ugly slider for easy diff hel yea
  
  purely aesthetic mod i dont know what i was expecting

• tick rate 2 kind of seems weird since you didnt have it for easy tbh
  00:03:452 (1) - wao that curve is so big compared to the other sliders dam
  00:04:222 (2,1) - i mean, to be honest, you can probably get away with this, but i thought all notes in normal had to be ds'd properly and this isn't so uhhh
  00:06:529 (1,2) - follow point doesnt go into the curve perfectly and im triggered.,
  00:08:068 (1,2) - why are these two sliders different angles wh
  00:11:914 (3,4) - idk about this stack, seems really out of place with the rhythm
  00:17:106 (4,1) - this one is too, altho its a lot better suited here due to the downbeat; i'd just keep a similar pattern to 00:15:760 (1,2,3) - this though
  00:17:299 (1,1) - ok ya this needs to be ds'd tho
  00:18:837 (1,2) - more aesthetic follow point things zz
  00:24:222 (3,1) - same thing here as 00:17:299 (this might be more lenient though, not sure)
  00:24:991 (1) - why did you do a different rhythm here and then completely do something else 00:25:760 (2,3) - a second later ht
  00:27:491 (2,3) - omg pleasd this is so aesthetically ugly and im getting so trgired help
  00:29:606 (3) - curves are uneveN FUCK
  00:31:145 (4) - nc
  00:32:683 (1) - MAYBE remove nc if you do the latter suggestion but i have no idea lo.

• disable widescreen support :d
  00:03:452 (1,1,1) - i feel like these should be spaced out more than what you have currently; if you space them out more it'd be better imo and you can remove the nc's if you do (you have these spaced out more in the kiai so imean it kind of makes sense to do it here too)
  00:14:799 (2) - curves are off i think??
  00:29:606 (7) - shouldn't this be nc'd and not 00:29:799 (1) - ?
  00:29:799 (1,2,3) - no claps here??? feels empty without them
  00:33:068 (1) - your diff's the only one that has this ending which is kind of unwarranted imo, i get it's to follow the background synth but it feels really out of place as it is atm

• ok most of the curve sliders here trigger me but thats personal preference so ya
  00:18:645 (2) - why does kiai start here instead of 00:18:837 (1) - here like all the other diffs helo
  00:31:145 (1,1,1) - space these out more imo
  00:32:683 (1,2) - i wouldn't stack 1 with 00:32:299 (1) - personally, i'd like a jump here but thats just MYU OPINIOn

FailureAtOsu wrote:

hi

General

spread between easy,normal and hard,insane is ok but normal,hard is questionable, it's a 1*+ difference instead of a .6* difference, feels like a missing diff

Ez

00:00:376 (1) - more curve or maybe do an anchor point instead? looks better imo
00:01:914 (3) - ^
00:03:452 (1,2) - have 2 align with 1 like this

00:06:529 (1,2,3) - flow doesnt seem quite natural here because you're forcing the newbie to move his hand downwards when the slider end points to the right instead; try putting the circle where 3 is and ctrl+h 3 and put it where 2 is, then stack 00:09:991 (1) - on 2 afterwards for aesthetic blah blah (dont forget to fix spacing after)

00:29:606 (3) - the curve is really uneven here, i thought you were all about dat aesthetic???!?

Normal

00:00:952 (2,4) - I don't really hear what you're mapping to..? (1/1 rhythm in a Normal is ok ;P)
00:18:837 (1,2) - maybe make it so that the gap from 1 and 2 are a straight line? personal aesthetic stuff so its ok if u dont care

00:24:991 (1) - shouldnt there be a 1/2 circle after this? feels like one's missing considering the one at 00:26:145 (3) -
00:29:606 (3) - uneven curve; would be better if anchor was in the exact middle of the slider too (you can still have a blanket)

Hard

00:33:068 (1) - for consistency i'd just get rid of this slider so all diffs end at the exact same point; not required tho
really nice diff

Light Insane

00:03:452 (1) - if the anchor was in the direct middle it'd look better tbh
00:14:799 (6,7) - sorry to be that one guy but this blanket is off
00:32:683 (1,2) - geesh the hitsounds

The set is honestly OK
seal still better
also there feels like a diff is missing between normal and hard to me because of huge SR gap D: but the actualy playabilty of the map is good, what i mean is hard and normal have very simple rythym so I think it's okay
good luck

• 00:00:376 - inherited timing point should be 25% to keep consistent vol
  00:03:452 (1,2) - 2's angled pretty weirdly in comparison to the first slider, try making it a sharper curve
  00:06:529 (1,2,3) - purely aesthetic but the curve that 1 and 3 make is pretty ugly
  00:26:145 (2,3) - make this straight xd
  00:29:606 (3) - ugly slider for easy diff hel yea
  
  purely aesthetic mod i dont know what i was expecting

• tick rate 2 kind of seems weird since you didnt have it for easy tbh
  00:03:452 (1) - wao that curve is so big compared to the other sliders dam
  00:04:222 (2,1) - i mean, to be honest, you can probably get away with this, but i thought all notes in normal had to be ds'd properly and this isn't so uhhh
  00:06:529 (1,2) - follow point doesnt go into the curve perfectly and im triggered.,
  00:08:068 (1,2) - why are these two sliders different angles wh
  00:11:914 (3,4) - idk about this stack, seems really out of place with the rhythm
  00:17:106 (4,1) - this one is too, altho its a lot better suited here due to the downbeat; i'd just keep a similar pattern to 00:15:760 (1,2,3) - this though
  00:17:299 (1,1) - ok ya this needs to be ds'd tho
  00:18:837 (1,2) - more aesthetic follow point things zz
  00:24:222 (3,1) - same thing here as 00:17:299 (this might be more lenient though, not sure)
  00:24:991 (1) - why did you do a different rhythm here and then completely do something else 00:25:760 (2,3) - a second later ht
  00:27:491 (2,3) - omg pleasd this is so aesthetically ugly and im getting so trgired help
  00:29:606 (3) - curves are uneveN FUCK
  00:31:145 (4) - nc
  00:32:683 (1) - MAYBE remove nc if you do the latter suggestion but i have no idea lo.

PolkaMocha wrote:

General:

Doesn't need kiai time. The shooting stars and flashing beats don't really enhance anything. It's like sheets on a box spring, y'know?

Easy:
00:01:914 (3,4) - Poor flow. I would suggest lessening the curve of the repeat before it, but that would need some remapping. Considering it's a 30 second easy mode, remapping would not be an inconvenience.

00:09:991 (4) - x:292 y:208 would be better.

00:21:914 (1,2) - Delete (1), copy and paste (2) and then ctr+> twice, then ctrl + g and move it to where (1) was for neatness.

00:31:145 (4,5) - Repeat slider would be better here

00:32:683 (6) - NC?


Normal:

The way the sliders are shaped in correlation to what's before and after them looks rushed. Nothing really flows into one another.

00:11:145 (1) - x:132 y:300?

00:11:914 (3,4) - Normal players will play this like a half stack. Space these out to avoid confusion.

This problem also appears at:

00:17:299 (1,1)

00:24:222 (3,1) -

00:19:606 (2,3) - Why not ctrl h (2) for (3) instead for neatness?

00:25:376 (2,3) - Players will click the tail of (3) because it is closer to (2) than (4). Make what comes next more obvious.

00:28:068 (1) - Why normal hitsounds here but not on easy?

00:29:222 (2) - x:416 y:352 ?

00:31:145 (1) - x:12 y:224

00:32:299 (4) - x:384 y:220

ShogunMoon wrote:

• [Yamicchi's Hard]

1. 00:09:129 - add a note why?

GOOD LUCK!

FailureAtOsu wrote:

hi

General

spread between easy,normal and hard,insane is ok but normal,hard is questionable, it's a 1*+ difference instead of a .6* difference, feels like a missing diff

Hard

00:33:068 (1) - for consistency i'd just get rid of this slider so all diffs end at the exact same point; not required tho nahh
really nice diff

The set is honestly OK
seal still better
also there feels like a diff is missing between normal and hard to me because of huge SR gap D:
good luck

fieryrage wrote:

fuck yea
m4m from modreqs

hard

• disable widescreen support :d oh yeah forgot about it
  00:03:452 (1,1,1) - i feel like these should be spaced out more than what you have currently; if you space them out more it'd be better imo and you can remove the nc's if you do (you have these spaced out more in the kiai so imean it kind of makes sense to do it here too) kinda like the most special pattern in the map, since I want to use 0.6x DS for it because 1.2 is the DS I used mostly in the map, there's nothing about it that needs to be emphasized (using 0.85x) so I'd just keep it 0.6x and NC as well
  00:14:799 (2) - curves are off i think?? I think so, fixed a bit
  00:29:606 (7) - shouldn't this be nc'd and not 00:29:799 (1) - ? I stopped following the vocal at 7, not at 6. I NC at the part I follow the instrument
  00:29:799 (1,2,3) - no claps here??? feels empty without them for a different skin, there'll be a different hitsound. About this Whirl please notice me that you should have some custom hitsound here because the hitsound I'm using was just perfect and no need for a clap
  00:33:068 (1) - your diff's the only one that has this ending which is kind of unwarranted imo, i get it's to follow the background synth but it feels really out of place as it is atm many modders complain about this too. I'm gonna sit here and wait for the BN to tell if it's unrankable or not, until then, no change.

ok

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Yamicchi wrote:

ShogunMoon wrote:

• [Yamicchi's Hard]

1. 00:09:129 - add a note why?

GOOD LUCK!

FailureAtOsu wrote:

hi

General

spread between easy,normal and hard,insane is ok but normal,hard is questionable, it's a 1*+ difference instead of a .6* difference, feels like a missing diff

Hard

00:33:068 (1) - for consistency i'd just get rid of this slider so all diffs end at the exact same point; not required tho nahh
really nice diff

The set is honestly OK
seal still better
also there feels like a diff is missing between normal and hard to me because of huge SR gap D:
good luck

fieryrage wrote:

fuck yea
m4m from modreqs

hard

• disable widescreen support :d oh yeah forgot about it
  00:03:452 (1,1,1) - i feel like these should be spaced out more than what you have currently; if you space them out more it'd be better imo and you can remove the nc's if you do (you have these spaced out more in the kiai so imean it kind of makes sense to do it here too) kinda like the most special pattern in the map, since I want to use 0.6x DS for it because 1.2 is the DS I used mostly in the map, there's nothing about it that needs to be emphasized (using 0.85x) so I'd just keep it 0.6x and NC as well
  00:14:799 (2) - curves are off i think?? I think so, fixed a bit
  00:29:606 (7) - shouldn't this be nc'd and not 00:29:799 (1) - ? I stopped following the vocal at 7, not at 6. I NC at the part I follow the instrument
  00:29:799 (1,2,3) - no claps here??? feels empty without them for a different skin, there'll be a different hitsound. About this Whirl please notice me that you should have some custom hitsound here because the hitsound I'm using was just perfect and no need for a clap
  00:33:068 (1) - your diff's the only one that has this ending which is kind of unwarranted imo, i get it's to follow the background synth but it feels really out of place as it is atm many modders complain about this too. I'm gonna sit here and wait for the BN to tell if it's unrankable or not, until then, no change.

ok

Thanks guys :3

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Oh and Whirl, just for you information I'm 0% satisfied with the new BG. A cute song, what's the point of using such a dark and drama-a-like BG?

Hibari_Yagyu wrote:

Whirl NM Req

So, let's start :3

HC's Advanced

• 
  Put AR7, is so slow with AR6 wanted to keep good spread between normal and hard, so did 6.5

1. 00:02:299 (2,3,4) - Ctrl + H and move all pattern (00:02:299 (2,3,4) - ) to x216 - y112 dislike the overlap that occurs with (2)
2. To continue the pattern, move 00:03:452 (1) - to x248 - y344 ^
3. And move 00:04:222 (3) - to x224 - y200 ^
4. Delete this 00:06:914 (2) - and put Slider, start in 00:06:914 - and finish 00:07:106 - I follow the vocals there
5. Put circle here 00:07:876 - in x224 - y152 ^

HydroCannon13 wrote:

Hibari_Yagyu wrote:

Whirl NM Req

So, let's start :3

HC's Advanced

• 
  Put AR7, is so slow with AR6 wanted to keep good spread between normal and hard, so did 6.5

1. 00:02:299 (2,3,4) - Ctrl + H and move all pattern (00:02:299 (2,3,4) - ) to x216 - y112 dislike the overlap that occurs with (2)
2. To continue the pattern, move 00:03:452 (1) - to x248 - y344 ^
3. And move 00:04:222 (3) - to x224 - y200 ^
4. Delete this 00:06:914 (2) - and put Slider, start in 00:06:914 - and finish 00:07:106 - I follow the vocals there
5. Put circle here 00:07:876 - in x224 - y152 ^

@Whirl: you can just change the ar in my diff, no need to put the code if there is no change in placement of notes

Axon wrote:

literally the only helpful mods I could find were lit120, FailureAtOsu and fieryrage's. agreed with (mostly) everything they said.

not replying to shitty "nc?" mods because that's just stupid, and honestly just lazy.

i'll pm whirl the updated diff.

MisterDinner wrote:

00:10:376 (3,4) - make parallel it's not meant to parallel.
00:29:606 (1,2) - ^ ^

i think thats it.

Bubblun wrote:

Modding cause I want to.
Axon's Kawaii

SPOILER

00:11:914 (5) - This slider is no different than 00:10:376 (3,4) - So why does it have a shape that says "I'm SPECIAL" ?! cos y not
00:12:683 (1,5) - This overlap is very noticeable. 00:12:683 (1,2,3,4) - If you change up this pattern a bit, I'm sure you can fix it. Keep the structure, but maybe some messing around with ctrl +g and you will get it. it can hardly be considered an overlap, it's not *very noticable*.

fieryrage wrote:

fuck yea

light insane

• ok most of the curve sliders here trigger me but thats personal preference so ya ye
  00:18:645 (2) - why does kiai start here instead of 00:18:837 (1) - here like all the other diffs helo omg srry
  00:31:145 (1,1,1) - space these out more imo >:(
  00:32:683 (1,2) - i wouldn't stack 1 with 00:32:299 (1) - personally, i'd like a jump here but thats just MYU OPINIOn omg your opinion triggers me

ok ok

Yamicchi wrote:

Who changed my sliders ò 3 ó?

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Title:Sassou Toujou!Neko-san
TitleUnicode:颯爽登場！寧子さん
Artist:Kuroha Neko (CV Taneda Risa)
ArtistUnicode:种田梨沙（CV 種田梨沙）
Creator:Whirl
Version:Yamicchi's Hard
Source:極黒のブリュンヒルデ
Tags:brynhildr in the darkness Kawaii Cute Cat Neko Yamicchi Axon Yami Axo
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ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ M4M from my queue

Please toggle widescreen support off for all difficulties.

Easy

1. 00:09:991 (4) - NC should be here because the current nc you have doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. I prefer NCing every verse so about every 8 beats. Fix the rest. no thanks, it would be too intense for an easy
2. 00:18:837 (1) - Kiai should be louder because... it's a kiai lol . ok
3. 00:20:376 (3) - Curving this so it blankets 00:21:529 (4) - would make it look better and flow better. no it flows fine imo
4. 00:22:683 (2,3) - This doesn't flow too well, try curving slider (2) downwards. if other people mention it I'll change it, for now I think it looks fine
5. 00:31:145 (4) - I'd NC here since you switch to instrumentals.ok

Normal

1. 00:03:068 (3,1) - Blanket maybe? [/color]
2. 00:03:452 (1,2) - distance fix, lol oh, how did it get that messed up? Fixed.
3. 00:04:222 (2) - There's two strong sounds here, I think mapping with a circle and a slider would follow the music better. it's good as it is imo
4. 00:12:683 (1) - 1/2 repeat would follow vocals better yea, your right
5. 00:18:837 (1) - more volume on kiai pls okay
6. 00:21:914 (1,2) - I'm not sure why you suddenly choose to follow vocals here after you've followed instrumentals 00:18:837 (1,2,3) - here slow down speed, I do follow the instruments on both sounds, I just don't wan't to map the same thing twice in a row as the map becomes quite boring if I do so
7. 00:32:299 (4) - Pull this down a little for flow then adjust the next two notes.

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Good luck!

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ M4M from my queue

Insane

1. 00:08:645 (4) - ugh again lol ?
2. 00:12:491 (7) - wow I barely read this, I don't think that would be the best placement, how about stacking it on 00:14:029 (4) - no, it's supposed to be a blanket.
3. 00:15:376 (7) - clap on head? sure
4. 00:17:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are small in comparison to how high you had jumps on 00:11:337 (2,3,4,5) - and that wasn't even a strong part to emphasize gotta map that pp :')
5. 00:31:722 (1,1) - I think this is really confusing, why would you map it like this anyways? I'd just keep distance between these. it's not confusing, the overlaps fit the rhythm that i am mapping to.

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ProEzreal wrote:

Hard

1. 00:08:645 (4) - Again, not sure why you guys choose to skip the sound in the middle; it's clearly there! I know, but I'm following the vocal
2. 00:18:837 (9) - NC should be here rather than 00:18:452 (6) - here agree
3. 00:29:414 (6,2) - Try to avoid this overlap please can players see it? Cause I don't think they do, which leads to why I keep it like this

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ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ M4M from my queue

Advanced

1. 00:08:645 (3) - I don't think this is the best rhythm choice if you're following vocals, sorta skips the sound in the middle of that slider what sound? the slider maps the held vocal note lmao from what I see the existence of this sound is subjective
2. 00:23:452 (1,2) - This is pretty inconsistent to what you have 00:20:376 (1,2) - here try mapping it like that yes, fixed

Good luck!

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Axon wrote:

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ M4M from my queue

Insane

1. 00:08:645 (4) - ugh again lol ?
2. 00:12:491 (7) - wow I barely read this, I don't think that would be the best placement, how about stacking it on 00:14:029 (4) - no, it's supposed to be a blanket.
3. 00:15:376 (7) - clap on head? sure
4. 00:17:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are small in comparison to how high you had jumps on 00:11:337 (2,3,4,5) - and that wasn't even a strong part to emphasize gotta map that pp :')
5. 00:31:722 (1,1) - I think this is really confusing, why would you map it like this anyways? I'd just keep distance between these. it's not confusing, the overlaps fit the rhythm that i am mapping to.

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• [Whirl's Easy]

1. 00:08:068 (3) - because the vocal stresses on the red tick so this slider could be a reverse 3/2 . http://i.imgur.com/c6N8qAH.jpg sth like that
2. 00:11:145 (1,3) - swap NC so the NCs happen consistently as once every 2 downbeats?
   [Nano's Normal]
3. 00:10:952 - You probably should place a circle on this tick to make this part more structural because the vocal goes like 1/2s here.
4. 00:28:068 (1,2) - the slider should be on the downbeat to catch the *very-moe* vocals http://i.imgur.com/XVwA08c.jpg .
5. 00:11:529 (5) - are two consecutive 1/2 sliders allowed in normal? If yes I think you should definitely do it because the vocals is 1/2 here.
   [HC's Advanced]
6. 00:17:299 (1,2,3,4) - should this be 2 1/2 sliders because vocals?
7. 00:18:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - I assume you're following the synth (because vocals is basically blue ticks hell) then 00:19:606 (4) - this should have the same structure as this 00:18:837 (1,2,3) - . Basically: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6126951 , shape isn't great but you can improve it.
8. 00:21:914 (1,2,3,4) - ^
   [Yamicchi's Hard]
   wtf moe thế đi gd nhạc weeeb huhhhhh
9. 00:18:837 (1,2,3,4) - nếu mà đi theo synth thì tại có cấu trúc 3 nốt ở 2 nơi nên làm consistent thì bấm phê hơn :V . Hoặc thế này https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6127020 nếu thích 1/2 slider, không thì https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6127035 thế này cho nghe rõ :V .
   [Axon's Insane]
10. 00:10:376 (3,4) - seems like you're following the vocals in this measure as suggested by the 1/1 slider. If that's the case then the vocal stresses 00:10:568 - this more than 00:10:760 - this tick. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6127086 try this out.

LMT1996 wrote:

#modreqs

• [HC's Advanced]

1. 00:17:299 (1,2,3,4) - should this be 2 1/2 sliders because vocals? I tried to build up to the kiai
2. 00:18:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - I assume you're following the synth (because vocals is basically blue ticks hell) then 00:19:606 (4) - this should have the same structure as this 00:18:837 (1,2,3) - . Basically: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6126951 , shape isn't great but you can improve it. I did follow the synth for most of the kiai, so because there is a held note for (4), I mapped it as such.
3. 00:21:914 (1,2,3,4) - ^ changed this one because it wasn't consistent with the other one

gl!

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LMT1996 wrote:

[Yamicchi's Hard]
wtf moe thế đi gd nhạc weeeb huhhhhh owo~
[*]00:18:837 (1,2,3,4) - nếu mà đi theo synth thì tại có cấu trúc 3 nốt ở 2 nơi nên làm consistent thì bấm phê hơn :V . Hoặc thế này https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6127020 nếu thích 1/2 slider, không thì https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6127035 thế này cho nghe rõ :V . Lý do thì có thể hơi sida củ chuối nhưng mà tại vì Yami thích nó như thế cộng thêm sửa lại nó sẽ hơi phá cái pattern tí thì Yami kh thích :vv nếu bị phàn nàn nữa thì có thể Yami sẽ ngồi tìm cách sửa kĩ hơn vậy
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_DT3 wrote:

Wait, why 'Whirl's' Easy?